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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonCute Rats.]] Come in large hordes that can keep up with shadow clones, pack a nasty bite, and overwhelmingly misunderstood and disliked. Hopefully introduced in a [[NotSoDifferent bonding chapter.]]
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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonCute [[YouDirtyRat Rats.]] Come in large hordes that can keep up with shadow clones, pack a nasty bite, and [[WhatMeasureIsANonCute overwhelmingly misunderstood and disliked. disliked.]] Hopefully introduced in a [[NotSoDifferent bonding chapter.]]
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* Also, he's one of the few shinobi with the skills to restrain the Nine-Tales and considering [[spoiler: Naruto was briefly taken over by it after learning Itachi killed Kurenai]]....
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** That reason would be that Danzou didn't even ''exist'' in canon until after the timeskip.
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* A better reason would be "because someone has to be and there aren't many suitable canon characters left".
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* [[RuleOfThree Fennec fox.]]
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* [[RuleOfThree Fennec Fennec]] [[RunningGag fox.]]
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** More likely Part II won't happen the way it did in canon ''at all'' because the series is about to go completely OffTheRails.
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[[WMG: In this timeline, Hiashi is a member of ROOT.]]
Remember what Jiraiya says about the members of 'Danzo's little cult'? ''"[Danzo] says that the perfect ninja has no emotions, but people that practice that nindo never seem to last. They either completely lose their personality, or they crack like Itachi did."'' Doesn't that description almost exactly match what the hell is wrong with Hiashi? His idea of 'proper behavior' is total emotionlessness, and buried underneath that seems to be nothing but roiling hatred and spite.
Remember what Jiraiya says about the members of 'Danzo's little cult'? ''"[Danzo] says that the perfect ninja has no emotions, but people that practice that nindo never seem to last. They either completely lose their personality, or they crack like Itachi did."'' Doesn't that description almost exactly match what the hell is wrong with Hiashi? His idea of 'proper behavior' is total emotionlessness, and buried underneath that seems to be nothing but roiling hatred and spite.
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For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.
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For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga Hyuuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.
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He's just as close and understanding as Kurenai [[spoiler:was]]; perhaps his promotion to jonin will be expedited by the Hokage.
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He's just as close and understanding as Kurenai [[spoiler:was]]; perhaps his promotion to jonin will be expedited by the Hokage.
Hokage, in an effort to keep their team's dynamic going the way it was.
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[[WMG: The role of [[spoiler:Team 8's new jonin-sensei]] will be bestowed upon [[spoiler:Iruka]].]]
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[[WMG: The role of Iruka will be [[spoiler:Team 8's new jonin-sensei]] will be bestowed upon [[spoiler:Iruka]].]]jonin-sensei]]]]
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He's just as close and understanding as Kurenai [[spoiler:was]]; perhaps his promotion to jonin will be expedited by the Hokage.
He's just as close and understanding as Kurenai [[spoiler:was]]; perhaps his promotion to jonin will be expedited by the Hokage.
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[[WMG: Shino has a PrecociousCrush on Kurenai.]]
I don't doubt that [[NotSoStoic he'd react violently]] to Naruto or Hinata [[spoiler:being killed]] as well but the way he behaves in [[spoiler:the morgue]] is a thing of beauty.
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[[WMG: Hinata [[spoiler:convincing Naruto to spare Neji's life]] is a ShoutOut to canon!Naruto's friendship with Sasuke.]]
Hinata cares about [[spoiler:[[{{Jerkass}} Neji]]]], even if any sane person would wonder why [[spoiler:beyond blood relation]]. Naruto even mentions to the jerkass that she never stopped making excuses for [[spoiler:his]] behavior the entire time she spoke with him even when, really, it was inexcusable. Admittedly there's reasonable doubt about this but it seems suspect to me.
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* The death of her team caused Kurenai to become more introverted and stymied any chances of a relationship developing, sadly
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* If only.
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[[WMG: Hiashi's systematic abuse of Hinata is spurred by more than him just being an asshole..]]
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[[WMG: Hiashi's systematic abuse of Hinata is spurred by more than him just being an asshole..asshole.]]
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[[WMG: Hiashi's systematic abuse of Hinata is spurred by more than him just being an asshole..]]
Whatever else can be said about Hiashi, he's not stupid. If he is indeed involved in this conspiracy among the Konoha elite, he probably has some plan for her that requires her to be emotionally and psychologically broken.
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* Fennec fox. [[http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2082/1577506262_03177b0e0f.jpg Because cute]].
* Fennec fox. [[http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2082/1577506262_03177b0e0f.jpg Because cute]].
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* Fennec fox. Look, they're cute, okay? And it'd remind her of Naruto.
* Fennec fox. Look, they're cute, okay? And it'd remind her of Naruto.
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* [[RuleOfThree Fennec fox.]]
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In chapter 17, when Naruto uses his Chakra Pulse, the author takes time to note that under Jiraiya's tutelage, Naruto had been performing "elaborate chakra control exercises." When I think about chakra control exercises and Jiraiya in the same sentence, I think Balloon Training, the precursor to the Rasengan. Plus, Naruto's already learned water walking and tree climbing, so what else is there to do?
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In chapter 17, when Naruto uses his Chakra Pulse, the author takes time to note that under Jiraiya's tutelage, Naruto had been performing "elaborate chakra control exercises." When I think about chakra control exercises and Jiraiya in the same sentence, I think Balloon Training, the precursor to the Rasengan. Plus, Naruto's already learned water walking and tree climbing, so what else is there to do?do?
[[WMG: Guessing on how Part II will play out as a result of the ForWantOfANail event:]]
* The Hidan and Kakuzu arc will play out completely differently because of [[spoiler:Kurenai's death]]
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[[WMG: Guessing on how Part II will play out as a result of the ForWantOfANail event:]]
* The Hidan and Kakuzu arc will play out completely differently because of [[spoiler:Kurenai's death]]
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For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.
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For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.people.
[[WMG: Naruto is already on his way to learning the Rasengan.]]
In chapter 17, when Naruto uses his Chakra Pulse, the author takes time to note that under Jiraiya's tutelage, Naruto had been performing "elaborate chakra control exercises." When I think about chakra control exercises and Jiraiya in the same sentence, I think Balloon Training, the precursor to the Rasengan. Plus, Naruto's already learned water walking and tree climbing, so what else is there to do?
[[WMG: Naruto is already on his way to learning the Rasengan.]]
In chapter 17, when Naruto uses his Chakra Pulse, the author takes time to note that under Jiraiya's tutelage, Naruto had been performing "elaborate chakra control exercises." When I think about chakra control exercises and Jiraiya in the same sentence, I think Balloon Training, the precursor to the Rasengan. Plus, Naruto's already learned water walking and tree climbing, so what else is there to do?
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* A giant Hercules beetle. Those things are awesome.
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* A giant Hercules beetle. Those things are awesome.awesome.
[[WMG: Hinata creates [[BeehiveBarrier "Protection of the Eight Trigrams,]] [[BarrierWarrior Sixty-Four Palms"]] while training with Tsunade.]]
For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.
[[WMG: Hinata creates [[BeehiveBarrier "Protection of the Eight Trigrams,]] [[BarrierWarrior Sixty-Four Palms"]] while training with Tsunade.]]
For one, that technique's amazing and should really see more use. Two, [[AwesomeYetPractical precise chakra control]] is necessary for using it, along with flexibility and [[CombatMedic Tsunade]] has the former in spades. Third, one of Hinata's goals is to try and create a Hyuga technique of her own, like one of her ancestors, who was really good at reading people.
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Shino's already TheBeastmaster, so a summon would be pretty redundant. If he had to have one, giant stag beetles would be great. Flying!
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Shino's already TheBeastmaster, so a summon would be pretty redundant. If he had to have one, giant stag beetles would be great. Flying!Flying!
*A giant Hercules beetle. Those things are awesome.
*A giant Hercules beetle. Those things are awesome.
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*Bonus: she'll show Hinata how to smash through walls with her little finger.
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[[WMG: Yamato will be [[spoiler:Team 8's new jonin-sensei]].]]
Because why not?
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[[WMG: Yamato will be [[spoiler:Team 8's new jonin-sensei]].]]
jonin-sensei]]]]
Because whynot?not?
[[WMG:What will the team's summons be?]]
Naruto's will be...
*Nothing. He'll continue to hone his own skills.
*Fennec fox. [[http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2082/1577506262_03177b0e0f.jpg Because cute]].
*[[EverythingsWorseWithBears Bear]]. As a close-in combat specialist, it's ideal. Plus, the idea of Naruto riding a bear into battle is cool.
*Squirrels. Forest-capable, hyperactive... it worked for Squirrel Girl.
Hinata's will be...
*[[http://www.viridiandreams.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=19027&sid=3eebdeea283bbc8055732860cae494c3#p19027 Crows]]. Specifically, [[http://www.viridiandreams.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=20982#p20982 Mobster crows]].
*Fennec fox. Look, they're cute, okay? And it'd remind her of Naruto.
*Otter.
*Tanuki.
Shino's already TheBeastmaster, so a summon would be pretty redundant. If he had to have one, giant stag beetles would be great. Flying!
Because why
[[WMG:What will the team's summons be?]]
Naruto's will be...
*Nothing. He'll continue to hone his own skills.
*Fennec fox. [[http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2082/1577506262_03177b0e0f.jpg Because cute]].
*[[EverythingsWorseWithBears Bear]]. As a close-in combat specialist, it's ideal. Plus, the idea of Naruto riding a bear into battle is cool.
*Squirrels. Forest-capable, hyperactive... it worked for Squirrel Girl.
Hinata's will be...
*[[http://www.viridiandreams.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=19027&sid=3eebdeea283bbc8055732860cae494c3#p19027 Crows]]. Specifically, [[http://www.viridiandreams.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=20982#p20982 Mobster crows]].
*Fennec fox. Look, they're cute, okay? And it'd remind her of Naruto.
*Otter.
*Tanuki.
Shino's already TheBeastmaster, so a summon would be pretty redundant. If he had to have one, giant stag beetles would be great. Flying!
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...Naruto's a fan-comic of Team 8.
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...Naruto's a fan-comic of Team 8.8.
* [[FunnyMoment Good one.]]
[[WMG: Yamato will be Team 8's new jonin-sensei.]]
Because why not?
* [[FunnyMoment Good one.]]
[[WMG: Yamato will be Team 8's new jonin-sensei.]]
Because why not?
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Hinata is already going to be Tsunade's servant for six months. I'm sure in that time Tsunade will get to know the girl, and will offer to train her so that "You're not some failure, and I'll prove it by shoving it in your JerkAss father's face!"
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Hinata is already going to be Tsunade's servant for six months. I'm sure in that time Tsunade will get to know the girl, and will offer to train her so that "You're not some failure, and I'll prove it by shoving it in your JerkAss father's face!"face!"
[[WMG: Team 8 is not a fanfic of Naruto...]]
...Naruto's a fan-comic of Team 8.
[[WMG: Team 8 is not a fanfic of Naruto...]]
...Naruto's a fan-comic of Team 8.
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Because...he threatened to kick the ass of the head of Konoha's ''most important clan'' because he would've [[spoiler: disrupted her funeral.]] Considering that he loved her in canon...
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Because...he threatened to kick the ass of the head of Konoha's ''most important clan'' because he would've [[spoiler: disrupted her funeral.]] Considering that he loved her in canon...canon...
[[WMG: Hinata will receive training from Tsunade.]]
Hinata is already going to be Tsunade's servant for six months. I'm sure in that time Tsunade will get to know the girl, and will offer to train her so that "You're not some failure, and I'll prove it by shoving it in your JerkAss father's face!"
[[WMG: Hinata will receive training from Tsunade.]]
Hinata is already going to be Tsunade's servant for six months. I'm sure in that time Tsunade will get to know the girl, and will offer to train her so that "You're not some failure, and I'll prove it by shoving it in your JerkAss father's face!"
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* ''Danzou.'' He's been mentioned a lot when he wasn't in canon. There must be a reason for this.
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* ''Danzou.'' He's been mentioned a lot when he wasn't in canon. There must be a reason for this.this.
[[WMG: Asuma is a little in love with Kurenai.]]
Because...he threatened to kick the ass of the head of Konoha's ''most important clan'' because he would've [[spoiler: disrupted her funeral.]] Considering that he loved her in canon...
[[WMG: Asuma is a little in love with Kurenai.]]
Because...he threatened to kick the ass of the head of Konoha's ''most important clan'' because he would've [[spoiler: disrupted her funeral.]] Considering that he loved her in canon...
