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* {{Jossed}}: the final boss is [[spoiler:an evil clone of Miss Tairee]].
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*** [[spoiler:{{Jossed}}.]]
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* Some rival ten-dimensional being, or some even more powerful entity, incapacitates the Writer. Then they take over the City, or alternatively, the City becomes unstable on its own without a Writer taking care of it. Either way, this means the last few days will be a lot more dangerous for the characters. The PC's must now join their forces to help bring back the Writer, who is after all the lesser evil. (Ben isn't going to like it.)
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* Some rival ten-dimensional being, or some even more powerful entity, incapacitates the Writer. Then they take over the City, or alternatively, the City becomes unstable on its own without a Writer taking care of it. Either way, this means the last few days will be a lot more dangerous for the characters. The PC's must now join their forces to help bring back the Writer, who is after all the lesser evil. (Ben isn't going to like it.))
** Mostly {{Jossed}}, although the final conflict does feature [[spoiler:a villain locking the Writer out of his own City]].
** Mostly {{Jossed}}, although the final conflict does feature [[spoiler:a villain locking the Writer out of his own City]].
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-->''I expect there to be ''some'' mild disappointment. Mainly that the final boss will ''not'' be the Writer.''
-->--'''Firock Finion''' (on Discord)
-->--'''Firock Finion''' (on Discord)
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* Firock Finion secretly has this exact same roleplay going on in a different site. The [=NPCs=] in this RP, like Silanea and Sir Redring, are player characters over on the other site, while the player characters here are that roleplay's [=NPCs.=]
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* Firock Finion secretly has this exact same roleplay going on in a different site. The [=NPCs=] in this RP, like Silanea and Sir Redring, are player characters over on the other site, while the player characters here are that roleplay's [=NPCs.=]=]
[[WMG:The Writer is going to get deposed.]]
* Some rival ten-dimensional being, or some even more powerful entity, incapacitates the Writer. Then they take over the City, or alternatively, the City becomes unstable on its own without a Writer taking care of it. Either way, this means the last few days will be a lot more dangerous for the characters. The PC's must now join their forces to help bring back the Writer, who is after all the lesser evil. (Ben isn't going to like it.)
[[WMG:The Writer is going to get deposed.]]
* Some rival ten-dimensional being, or some even more powerful entity, incapacitates the Writer. Then they take over the City, or alternatively, the City becomes unstable on its own without a Writer taking care of it. Either way, this means the last few days will be a lot more dangerous for the characters. The PC's must now join their forces to help bring back the Writer, who is after all the lesser evil. (Ben isn't going to like it.)
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* She fell on hard times after the show got cancelled. She has a soft spot for kids. fill in more later kthx
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* She fell on hard times after the show got cancelled. She has a soft spot for kids. fill in more later kthx\n
** {{Jossed}}; she's from the ''Starcraft'' universe.
** {{Jossed}}; she's from the ''Starcraft'' universe.
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* The GM, FirockFinion. Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
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* The GM, FirockFinion.Firock Finion. Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
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[[WMG:The game mod is a double agent.]]
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[[WMG:The game mod GM is a double agent.]]
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* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].)
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* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} [[Website/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].)
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*** [[spoiler:{{Jossed}}. Miss Tairee can leave any time she wants.]]
*** [[spoiler:{{Jossed}}.]]
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** [[spoiler:{{Jossed}}. "Miss Tairee" isn't her real name.]]
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Firock, you are wonderful and I deeply apologize for ruining everything
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* [[RunningGag The yeti,]] because his canon-altering powers could easily extend to other universes.
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* And he wasn't nice about it.
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* And he wasn't nice about it.it.
[[WMG:The yeti was secretly Old Feather Beak in disguise.]]
* He was only scoping out the place on day 3, but a few days later, he decided to reveal himself and start putting his master plan into action.
[[WMG:The game mod is a double agent.]]
* Firock Finion secretly has this exact same roleplay going on in a different site. The [=NPCs=] in this RP, like Silanea and Sir Redring, are player characters over on the other site, while the player characters here are that roleplay's [=NPCs.=]
[[WMG:The yeti was secretly Old Feather Beak in disguise.]]
* He was only scoping out the place on day 3, but a few days later, he decided to reveal himself and start putting his master plan into action.
[[WMG:The game mod is a double agent.]]
* Firock Finion secretly has this exact same roleplay going on in a different site. The [=NPCs=] in this RP, like Silanea and Sir Redring, are player characters over on the other site, while the player characters here are that roleplay's [=NPCs.=]
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* The [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 God-Emperor of Man]].
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[[WMG:The Author is the GM, FirockFinion.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
[[WMG:The Author is ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}.]]
* Breaks the fourth wall, has a twisted sense of humor.
[[WMG:The Author is some kind of god and Miss Tairee was turned into an angel or herald.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be omniscient.
[[WMG:The Author is a demon or The Devil, and Miss Tairee is trapped in a DealWithTheDevil.]]
* When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author, which trapped her into servitude.
* The Author doesn't ''need'' a secretary, but has one because he wants to; he does what he does in the city because [[ItAmusedMe he thought it was funny]].
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
[[WMG:The Author is ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}.]]
* Breaks the fourth wall, has a twisted sense of humor.
[[WMG:The Author is some kind of god and Miss Tairee was turned into an angel or herald.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be omniscient.
[[WMG:The Author is a demon or The Devil, and Miss Tairee is trapped in a DealWithTheDevil.]]
* When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author, which trapped her into servitude.
* The Author doesn't ''need'' a secretary, but has one because he wants to; he does what he does in the city because [[ItAmusedMe he thought it was funny]].
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[[WMG:The Author is the GM, FirockFinion.is...]]
* The GM, FirockFinion. Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of theRP.
[[WMG:The Author is ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}.]]
RP.
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[[WMG:The Author is some kind ofhumor.
* A god and Miss Tairee was turned into an angel orherald.]]
*herald. The Author is repeatedly stated to be omniscient.
[[WMG:The Author is aomniscient.
* A demon or The Devil, and Miss Tairee is trapped in aDealWithTheDevil.]]
*DealWithTheDevil.
** When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author,which who trapped her into servitude.
* ** The Author doesn't ''need'' a secretary, but has one because he wants to; he does what he does in the city because [[ItAmusedMe he thought it was funny]].
* A [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer.]] Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
* One of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.
** Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
* The GM, FirockFinion. Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the
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** When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author,
* A [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer.]] Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
* One of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.
** Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
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[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
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* And he wasn't nice about it.
[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].it.
[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
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* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.abilities.
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
[[WMG:The Author is one of the Dark Powers of TabletopGame/{{Ravenloft}}, and the City is one of the Domains of the Demiplane of Dread.]]
* Miss Tairee is a Darklord, the City is her Domain. The City grabs people from other universes and it is almost impossible to escape. The Author is searching for inspiration and will frequently alter things if [[ItAmusedMe it amuses him]].
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* One of the "inactive" characters (e.g. Bill Cipher), or even [[ClimacticBattleResurrection all of them at once]].
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* One of the The "inactive" characters (e.g. Bill Cipher), or even characters. [[ClimacticBattleResurrection all All of them at once]].
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* Hence why Miss Tairee can control reality via a computer and computer code.
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* Hence why Miss Tairee can control reality via a computer and computer code.code.
* The City is a computer simulation in a library, Miss Tairee is the main librarian's avatar; the main librarian is the Author.
[[WMG:Miss Tairee is a retired [[WesternAnimation/TheMagicSchoolBus Ms. Frizzle]].]]
* She fell on hard times after the show got cancelled. She has a soft spot for kids. fill in more later kthx
[[WMG:The Author is the GM, FirockFinion.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
[[WMG:The Author is ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}.]]
* Breaks the fourth wall, has a twisted sense of humor.
[[WMG:The Author is some kind of god and Miss Tairee was turned into an angel or herald.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be omniscient.
[[WMG:The Author is a demon or The Devil, and Miss Tairee is trapped in a DealWithTheDevil.]]
* When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author, which trapped her into servitude.
* The Author doesn't ''need'' a secretary, but has one because he wants to; he does what he does in the city because [[ItAmusedMe he thought it was funny]].
[[WMG:The Author picked Miss Tairee solely for her name.]]
* And he wasn't nice about it.
[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
* The City is a computer simulation in a library, Miss Tairee is the main librarian's avatar; the main librarian is the Author.
[[WMG:Miss Tairee is a retired [[WesternAnimation/TheMagicSchoolBus Ms. Frizzle]].]]
* She fell on hard times after the show got cancelled. She has a soft spot for kids. fill in more later kthx
[[WMG:The Author is the GM, FirockFinion.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be male and omniscient within the confines of the RP.
[[WMG:The Author is ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}.]]
* Breaks the fourth wall, has a twisted sense of humor.
[[WMG:The Author is some kind of god and Miss Tairee was turned into an angel or herald.]]
* The Author is repeatedly stated to be omniscient.
[[WMG:The Author is a demon or The Devil, and Miss Tairee is trapped in a DealWithTheDevil.]]
* When she [[spoiler:couldn't find a husband]], she made a deal with the Author, which trapped her into servitude.
* The Author doesn't ''need'' a secretary, but has one because he wants to; he does what he does in the city because [[ItAmusedMe he thought it was funny]].
[[WMG:The Author picked Miss Tairee solely for her name.]]
* And he wasn't nice about it.
[[WMG:The Author is a [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mind flayer]].]]
* Miss Tairee says that the Author could "take a piece of [Garrett's] brain whenever he feels like it"; mind flayers eat brains and have powerful psionic abilities.
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*The library.
*Or the city itself.
*Or the city itself.
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* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].)
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* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].))
[[WMG:The City is actually a computer simulation.]]
* Hence why Miss Tairee can control reality via a computer and computer code.
[[WMG:The City is actually a computer simulation.]]
* Hence why Miss Tairee can control reality via a computer and computer code.
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[[WMG:The final boss of the RP, if not The Boss himself, will be...]]
-->''I have had vivid imaginations about you guys getting very upset when you find out what the final boss is.''
-->--'''Firock Finion'''
* Miss Tairee (though that's probably too obvious).
* JustForFun/TropeTan.
* A ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' deity (or some other extremely powerful entity from that universe).
* One of the "inactive" characters (e.g. Bill Cipher), or even [[ClimacticBattleResurrection all of them at once]].
* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].)
-->''I have had vivid imaginations about you guys getting very upset when you find out what the final boss is.''
-->--'''Firock Finion'''
* Miss Tairee (though that's probably too obvious).
* JustForFun/TropeTan.
* A ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' deity (or some other extremely powerful entity from that universe).
* One of the "inactive" characters (e.g. Bill Cipher), or even [[ClimacticBattleResurrection all of them at once]].
* Firock's AuthorAvatar. (Which would literally look like his current forum avatar, a [[Franchise/{{Neopets}} Slorg]] in [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina glasses]].)
