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* {{Jossed}}, at least if you accept ''Quest for the Spark'' as canon -- Boneville is still there and the Bone cousins (and Bartleby) have become minor celebrities, even if not everyone believes their story of the Valley.
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* {{Jossed}}, at least if you accept ''Quest for the Spark'' and ''Tall Tales'' as canon -- Boneville is still there and the Bone cousins (and Bartleby) have become minor celebrities, even if not everyone believes their story of the Valley.
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* Again, ''Quest for the Spark'' seems to have {{Jossed}} this, but of course that story isn't over yet and you never know what might happen in the future...
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* Again, ''Quest for the Spark'' seems and ''Tall Tales'' seem to have {{Jossed}} this, but of course that story isn't over yet and you never know what might happen in the future...
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** Jossed. They ''do'' end up getting along reasonably well, and at the end of the story they part with the heroes on friendly terms.... but they keep the names. (They seem to like those names, though, so it's okay.)
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{{WMG: The Bones/Fone Bone eventually returns to the Valley and ends up with Thorn.]]
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Ted knows all the valley's secrets and is friends with the Great Red Dragon, Rose, and Lucius. He always seems to be able to show up at the right place at the right time, and apparently has some magical abilities since he helped Thorn cast a protective spell while her and the Bones were hiding away. Given that he is an insect, and there is another major, powerful godlike entity who is represented as an insect, it's difficult to deny there may be more going on.
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Ted knows all the valley's secrets and is friends with the Great Red Dragon, Rose, and Lucius. He always seems to be able to show up at the right place at the right time, and apparently has some magical abilities since he helped Thorn cast a protective spell while her and the Bones were hiding away. Given that he is an insect, and there is another major, powerful godlike entity who is represented as an insect, it's difficult to deny there may be more going on.on.
{{WMG: The Bones/Fone Bone eventually returns to the Valley and ends up with Thorn.]]
Yes, I say this (partly) because I like the ship. But also because it would make for a fuller circle to Fone Bone's character arc. And give a happier final ending.
Fone Bone and Thorn's final goodbye is short and bittersweet, and its sad that the pair is separated after everything they've gone through. But while Fone has had his feelings for Thorn be pretty clear for the viewer since the beginning.....just what or how she feels for him in return is left ambiguous. Did she eventually come to feel romantic feelings for him? Just platonic? Somewhere in between? Who knows......
It's because of this, and Fone Bone's greater attachment to his cousin's, that makes the ending of the comic work the way it is....not as a Goodbye Forever but as a Goodbye and See You Again Someday kind of ending. Hell, the ending reflecting the beginning with the Bones' having the same type of argument gives a very "Here we go again" sort of feeling already.
Anyway, in a few years time when Fone is older. More willing/ ready to forge his own path he will find his way back to the Valley once more. Probably just in time to help with some other crisis. And when he meets Thorn again she would, most likely, be old enough/ more direct with how she feels for him. And THEN his deciding to stay in the Valley with her would definitely be a good definite ending. Because they both are ready for it.
{{WMG: The Bones/Fone Bone eventually returns to the Valley and ends up with Thorn.]]
Yes, I say this (partly) because I like the ship. But also because it would make for a fuller circle to Fone Bone's character arc. And give a happier final ending.
Fone Bone and Thorn's final goodbye is short and bittersweet, and its sad that the pair is separated after everything they've gone through. But while Fone has had his feelings for Thorn be pretty clear for the viewer since the beginning.....just what or how she feels for him in return is left ambiguous. Did she eventually come to feel romantic feelings for him? Just platonic? Somewhere in between? Who knows......
It's because of this, and Fone Bone's greater attachment to his cousin's, that makes the ending of the comic work the way it is....not as a Goodbye Forever but as a Goodbye and See You Again Someday kind of ending. Hell, the ending reflecting the beginning with the Bones' having the same type of argument gives a very "Here we go again" sort of feeling already.
Anyway, in a few years time when Fone is older. More willing/ ready to forge his own path he will find his way back to the Valley once more. Probably just in time to help with some other crisis. And when he meets Thorn again she would, most likely, be old enough/ more direct with how she feels for him. And THEN his deciding to stay in the Valley with her would definitely be a good definite ending. Because they both are ready for it.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't receive any comeuppance whatsoever. Kingdok may have been content with just regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't receive any comeuppance whatsoever. Kingdok may have been content with just regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't received any comeuppance whatsoever. Kingdok may have been content with just regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't received receive any comeuppance whatsoever. Kingdok may have been content with just regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't get any comeuppance. Kingdok may have been content with regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating he received previously.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't get received any comeuppance. comeuppance whatsoever. Kingdok may have been content with just regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating he received previously.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't receive any comeuppance. Kingdok may have been content with regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating he received previously.
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't receive get any comeuppance. Kingdok may have been content with regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating he received previously.
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[[spoiler:Last time we see the lion, he is slumped to the ground, completely motionless, except for the look he gives to Fone Bone, Thorn and Bartleby. When Kingdok reappears after this scene, he can speak again]]. He probably attacked Rock Jaw, heavily wounded him, regained his tongue and, somehow, fixed it.]]
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[[spoiler:Last time we see the lion, he is slumped to the ground, completely motionless, except for the look he gives to Fone Bone, Thorn and Bartleby. When Kingdok reappears after this scene, he can speak again]]. He probably attacked Rock Jaw, heavily wounded him, regained his tongue and, somehow, fixed it.]]
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*** Just because he isn't dead, it doesn't necessarily mean he didn't receive any comeuppance. Kingdok may have been content with regaining his tongue and giving back some of the beating he received previously.
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[[spoiler:Last time we see the lion, he is slumped to the ground, completely motionless, except for the look he gives to Fone Bone, Thorn and Bartleby. When Kingdok reappears after this scene, he can speak again]]. He probably attacked Rock Jaw, heavily wounded him, regained his tongue and, somehow, fixed it.
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[[spoiler:Last time we see the lion, he is slumped to the ground, completely motionless, except for the look he gives to Fone Bone, Thorn and Bartleby. When Kingdok reappears after this scene, he can speak again]]. He probably attacked Rock Jaw, heavily wounded him, regained his tongue and, somehow, fixed it.
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** {{Jossed}} by ''Quest for the Spark'' Rock Jaw appears, none the worse for wear, in the third volume.
** {{Jossed}} by ''Quest for the Spark'' Rock Jaw appears, none the worse for wear, in the third volume.
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They're the only domesticated animals shown to talk. It's possible they were human servants that Rose remembers as loyal dogs to soften what she had to do to Euclid. Her comment on how obedient they are when offered deer haunches was actually a comment on how fast they could get a campfire started when promised steak. They were loyal friends to the princess. When Briar suggested that Rose kill Euclid, he knelt and whispered words of forgiveness, rather than let Rose kill her sister. Cleo understood why she did it, but Rose let her go with a good letter of recommendation because the guilt made her unable to even look upon her mournful maidservant.
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They're the only domesticated animals shown to talk. It's possible they were human servants that Rose remembers as loyal dogs to soften what she had to do to Euclid. Her comment on how obedient they are when offered deer haunches was actually a comment on how fast they could get a campfire started when promised steak. They were loyal friends to the princess. When Briar suggested that Rose kill Euclid, he knelt and whispered words of forgiveness, rather than let Rose kill her sister. Cleo understood why she did it, but Rose let her go with a good letter of recommendation because the guilt made her unable to even look upon her mournful maidservant.maidservant.
[[WMG: Ted the Bug is actually the incarnation of another deity which is a BigGood counterpart to the Locust.]]
Ted knows all the valley's secrets and is friends with the Great Red Dragon, Rose, and Lucius. He always seems to be able to show up at the right place at the right time, and apparently has some magical abilities since he helped Thorn cast a protective spell while her and the Bones were hiding away. Given that he is an insect, and there is another major, powerful godlike entity who is represented as an insect, it's difficult to deny there may be more going on.
[[WMG: Ted the Bug is actually the incarnation of another deity which is a BigGood counterpart to the Locust.]]
Ted knows all the valley's secrets and is friends with the Great Red Dragon, Rose, and Lucius. He always seems to be able to show up at the right place at the right time, and apparently has some magical abilities since he helped Thorn cast a protective spell while her and the Bones were hiding away. Given that he is an insect, and there is another major, powerful godlike entity who is represented as an insect, it's difficult to deny there may be more going on.
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Both series have a heavy focus on dreams, and both utilize the idea that dreams can be entered into and manipulated by outside forces. The Veni-Yan monks, and Thorn herself, have access to the Dreaming; perhaps they're all descended from a dream vortex like Unity.
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Both series have a heavy focus on dreams, and both utilize the idea that dreams can be entered into and manipulated by outside forces. The Veni-Yan monks, and Thorn herself, have access to the Dreaming; perhaps they're all descended from a dream vortex like Unity.Unity.
[[WMG: Cleo and Euclid were human servants of Rose Harvestar.]]
They're the only domesticated animals shown to talk. It's possible they were human servants that Rose remembers as loyal dogs to soften what she had to do to Euclid. Her comment on how obedient they are when offered deer haunches was actually a comment on how fast they could get a campfire started when promised steak. They were loyal friends to the princess. When Briar suggested that Rose kill Euclid, he knelt and whispered words of forgiveness, rather than let Rose kill her sister. Cleo understood why she did it, but Rose let her go with a good letter of recommendation because the guilt made her unable to even look upon her mournful maidservant.
[[WMG: Cleo and Euclid were human servants of Rose Harvestar.]]
They're the only domesticated animals shown to talk. It's possible they were human servants that Rose remembers as loyal dogs to soften what she had to do to Euclid. Her comment on how obedient they are when offered deer haunches was actually a comment on how fast they could get a campfire started when promised steak. They were loyal friends to the princess. When Briar suggested that Rose kill Euclid, he knelt and whispered words of forgiveness, rather than let Rose kill her sister. Cleo understood why she did it, but Rose let her go with a good letter of recommendation because the guilt made her unable to even look upon her mournful maidservant.
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[[WMG: The Rat Creatures' tail-removing tradition is an [[FreudWasRight allusion.]]]]
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[[WMG: The Rat Creatures' tail-removing tradition is an [[FreudWasRight allusion.]]]]]]
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[[WMG: Thorn is a [[{{Superman}} Kryptonian]].]]
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[[WMG: Thorn is a [[{{Superman}} Kryptonian]].[[Franchise/{{Superman}} Krypto]][[Comicbook/{{Supergirl}} nian]].]]
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Both series have a heavy focus on dreams, and both utilize the idea that dreams can be entered into and manipulated by outside forces. The Veni-Yan monks, and Thorn herself, have access to the Dreaming; perhaps they're all descended from a dream vortex like Unity.
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[[WMG: [[SoulEater Excalibur]] is a Bone.]]
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[[WMG: [[SoulEater [[Manga/SoulEater Excalibur]] is a Bone.]]
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[[WMG: Big Johnson Bone is all his three descendants in one.]]
He has Fone's generosity, Phoney's vanity and Smiley's joviality.
He has Fone's generosity, Phoney's vanity and Smiley's joviality.
