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** Supposedly you agree to escort the child, then you arrive at the forking road. The child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this choice will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
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** Supposedly you agree to escort the child, then you arrive at a fork in the forking road. The child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this choice will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
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-->-- [[https://youtube.com/watch?v=0ERpN4Bjh0Q This video]]
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-->-- [[https://youtube.com/watch?v=0ERpN4Bjh0Q This video]]
'''[=The Game’s Tagline=]'''
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Mysterious Forum and the Seven Rumors is a linear visual novel and chat story for Android and iOs developed by Creator/{{Entabridge}}. The game is [[EpisodicGame divided into seven main chapters]] and [[SecretLevel one bonus]], with MultipleEndings depending on your choices.
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Mysterious Forum and the Seven Rumors is a linear visual novel and chat story for Android and iOs developed by Creator/{{Entabridge}}.[[https://twitter.com/entabridge Entabridge]]. The game is [[EpisodicGame divided into seven main chapters]] and [[SecretLevel one bonus]], with MultipleEndings depending on your choices.
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** When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill you]].
** When you and the said child approach the forking road, the child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
* TheDreaded: Anyone who receives the text message from "the girl in the photo" fears her. The rumour from Chapter One is that anyone who looks into her eyes will die.
** When you and the said child approach the forking road, the child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
* TheDreaded: Anyone who receives the text message from "the girl in the photo" fears her. The rumour from Chapter One is that anyone who looks into her eyes will die.
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** When In a horror setting, when a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then you. Then when you are at the most vulnerable situation situation, she will kill you]].
**When Supposedly you and agree to escort the said child approach child, then you arrive at the forking road, the road. The child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this choice will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
*TheDreaded: TheDreaded:
** "The girl in the photo" from the First chapter. Anyone who receives the text message from "the girl in the photo" fears her. The rumourfrom Chapter One is that anyone who looks into her eyes will die.die, whether they're looking at her directly or through picture file in the cellphone. Thankfully, Akane manages to appease her, and the death curse disappears.
** The stray ghost Hitahita from the Fifth chapter also counts. Bonus point for being one of a few harmful spirits that the Newspaper club cannot properly appease.
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** "The girl in the photo" from the First chapter. Anyone who receives the text message from "the girl in the photo" fears her. The rumour
** The stray ghost Hitahita from the Fifth chapter also counts. Bonus point for being one of a few harmful spirits that the Newspaper club cannot properly appease.
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* BreatherEpisode: The Third chapter.
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* BreatherEpisode: The Third chapter.chapter, which does not have a bad ending.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Out of all the protagonists, Shino is the only one who doesn't die in any of the bad endings. The Third chapter where she acts as the sole investigator (Akane is injured while Yuuki has an appointment) also does not have a bad ending. [[spoiler:Turns out it's because she's DeadAllAlong]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Out of all the protagonists, Shino is the only one who doesn't die in any of the bad endings. The Third chapter where she acts as the sole investigator (Akane is injured while Yuuki (Yuuki has an appointment) appointment and Akane is injured, so neither of them can accompany Shino) also does not have a bad ending. [[spoiler:Turns out it's because she's DeadAllAlong]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Out of all the protagonists, Shino is the only one who doesn't die in any of the bad endings. [[spoiler:Turns out it's because she's DeadAllAlong]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Out of all the protagonists, Shino is the only one who doesn't die in any of the bad endings. The Third chapter where she acts as the sole investigator (Akane is injured while Yuuki has an appointment) also does not have a bad ending. [[spoiler:Turns out it's because she's DeadAllAlong]].
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* DeathByGenreSavvy: When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill you]].
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* DeathByGenreSavvy: The Fifth chapter has some of these:
** When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will killyou]].you]].
** When you and the said child approach the forking road, the child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
** When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill
** When you and the said child approach the forking road, the child tells you to turn right, while you are certain than you can reach the destination quicker if you turn left. Normally, you would try to follow what the child wants so she doesn't sulk, [[spoiler:but this will lead to a bad end. The correct thing is to trust your judgement and turn left]].
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* GrotesqueCute: Hitahita, the stray ghost child from the Fifth chapter. She's a CheerfulChild who will not hesitate to kill you if you anger her or give her yhr chance to. If you manage to humor her for long enough, she will like you enough to play with you. [[CuteAndPsycho Forever]].
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* GrotesqueCute: Hitahita, the stray ghost child from the Fifth chapter. She's a CheerfulChild who will not hesitate to kill you if you anger her or give her yhr chance to. chance. If you manage to humor her for long enough, her, she will like you enough to play with you. [[CuteAndPsycho Forever]].
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* DeathByGenreSavvy: When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:No. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill you]].
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* DeathByGenreSavvy: When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:No.[[spoiler:Not in this VN. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill you]].
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* DeathByGenreSavvy: When a suspicious-looking lone child approaching you and asking you to escort her somewhere, the smartest thing to do would be ignoring her, right? [[spoiler:No. It would make the child (who happened to be a ghost) angry at you and kept following you, then when you are at the most vulnerable situation she will kill you]].
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* GrotesqueCute: Hitahita, the stray ghost child from the Fifth chapter. She's a CheerfulChild who wants to play with you. [[CuteAndPsycho Forever]].
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* GrotesqueCute: Hitahita, the stray ghost child from the Fifth chapter. She's a CheerfulChild who wants will not hesitate to kill you if you anger her or give her yhr chance to. If you manage to humor her for long enough, she will like you enough to play with you. [[CuteAndPsycho Forever]].
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Meganekko is no longer a trope. It's a Fanspeak term. Moving wicks to Bespectacled Cutie when appropriate.
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* {{Meganekko}}: Shino.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Averted with Akane and Shino, both of whom have fairly standard hair colors. But then their clubmate Yuuki has red hair.
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