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you, chilito. You want revenge because I killed your daughter? Big deal. I killed a lot of people’s daughters, and their sons, too. That’s what we do, asshole. You get in the way and you get dead.”
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So back to Dr Greta Helsing. This guy comes from the second book ''Grave Company''
'''Who is Corvin?'''
A smug, SissyVillain vampire, Corvin is a bloodthirsty upstart vampire who desires to carve out a bloody niche. In the 90's, he was confronted Ruthven who planned to make him stop his killing spree but Corvin refused and so Ruthven ended up permantly scaring his face which took out one of his fangs. This resulted in him gaining a great hatred for him. Corvin in the present journeys to Paris where Ruthven and Greta are hanging out and begins a full scale blood carnage and killing spree, having the entire canal filled with dumped bodies. These bodies as well as the destruction to the catacombs that Corvin has unleashed has led to multiple ghost siteting which threaten the secrey of the supernatural world and the city itself.
In order to indoctirine his followers, Corvin sires them agaisnt their will and then locks them self-aware in coffins for days where they often slowly lose their minds before he forces them to join him or die. Corvin also is a [[CardCarryingVillain self-professed]] practinoner of Droit du signor, who rapes female vampires under his employ who takes his fancy. Anyway Corvin kidnaps Greta whose Ruthven's friend planning to keep her hostage and later kill her as part of a RevengeByProxy against Ruthven. In the meanwhile, Corvin boredly entertains his trphy wife girlfriend Lilith with new victims before deciding to off her and later his loyal second-in-command Griselle in a creepy scence
'''Who is Corvin?'''
A smug, SissyVillain vampire, Corvin is a bloodthirsty upstart vampire who desires to carve out a bloody niche. In the 90's, he was confronted Ruthven who planned to make him stop his killing spree but Corvin refused and so Ruthven ended up permantly scaring his face which took out one of his fangs. This resulted in him gaining a great hatred for him. Corvin in the present journeys to Paris where Ruthven and Greta are hanging out and begins a full scale blood carnage and killing spree, having the entire canal filled with dumped bodies. These bodies as well as the destruction to the catacombs that Corvin has unleashed has led to multiple ghost siteting which threaten the secrey of the supernatural world and the city itself.
In order to indoctirine his followers, Corvin sires them agaisnt their will and then locks them self-aware in coffins for days where they often slowly lose their minds before he forces them to join him or die. Corvin also is a [[CardCarryingVillain self-professed]] practinoner of Droit du signor, who rapes female vampires under his employ who takes his fancy. Anyway Corvin kidnaps Greta whose Ruthven's friend planning to keep her hostage and later kill her as part of a RevengeByProxy against Ruthven. In the meanwhile, Corvin boredly entertains his trphy wife girlfriend Lilith with new victims before deciding to off her and later his loyal second-in-command Griselle in a creepy scence
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'''Who is
A smug, SissyVillain vampire, Corvin is a bloodthirsty upstart vampire who desires to carve out a bloody niche. In
The newest member of the
Discovering her locater, he has his second in command Butler, create a distraction and then places it on a whaling ship being a huge enviornmental fan has the ship detonated with dyamiate, making sure to set it off with Hollay's superior Julius Root comes , Root escapes but it serves as a warning. Now calling RAOOT : He demands 1 ton of 24 carrot gold. So the Lep now lay seige agaisnt the fowl manner, using a time stop prisim to stop time and allows them to make more time to stop him, if things dint work out, theyll biobomb it and wipe out all life. Fae cant enter a bulding unless invted so its a stalemate. Artemis has Butler defeat their first squad sent to meet him and negotaiates with Root where he "casually" lets slip that no one can enter his
Anyway a couple of things go kinda wrong as Holly escpaes and
Now the author wrote a cute short story where Artemis helps steal a diamond for his
Now onto book 2 , ''Arctic Incident'', Artemis has recieved word from the russian mafia that they have his father and want a ransom exchange. As he prepares to leave, Holly nabs him
In order to indoctirine his followers, Corvin sires them agaisnt their will and then locks them self-aware in coffins for days where they often slowly lose their minds
Now Artemis deduces that the mafia where going to kill him when he
Now in book 3 , ''Eternity Code'', Artemis is going to sell some of his new human/fae tech to Jon Spiro as his last job before retirment. Unfornurtely Spiro turns out to be viler then expected and tries to kill him with butler taking the bullet. Artemis swears revenge and has butler taken to a cryogenics facility to keep him stable long enough, He sends a message with a bunch of fae words and insginias and catches Holly's attention who heals him and they set to work to get it back. Anyway after fending off some of spiro's assasians, Artemis comes into Spiro's building for a drop and to unlock the code on it. He tricks Spiro into saying that he can let in all his faerie friends and allows holly and root to arrive. They disable his sytems and when spiro goes to a rival to steal his tech using the eterniity code, Artemis sound sthe police alarm and gets him arrested and has all of Spiro's funds at his disposial. In a bit of conscience, he donates most of it to amnesty international (while keeping a finders fee cut which is still in the millions but like I said he like money). Anyway root orders Artemis to be mindwiped but...Artemis outsmarts him, giving mulch a medal conataining his memories and has the date of the warrant used to search for Mulch's stolen goods changed to after hsi arrest, rendering all of his convictions null and void. Mulch in lock up states that one day theyll rule....
And nothing comes of it. By the nest book, he gets his memory back and becomes a straight good guy and contiues on for the rest of the series as a GuileHero, now helping to stop various threats to the fey like Leon Abbot and Opal Koboi.
'''Magnificent?'''
Beautifully so. Artemis is charming, polite, reserved with the best quips and lines. He can think on his feet and keeps his cool when things go wrong.
He's always one step ahead and he more or less has the Lep in the first book in the palm of his hand, tricking them into bio bombing him like he planned, making them think he slipped up, gainging the book and using it to uncover the ways of the fae, helping scare off the russian mafia, and putting jon spiro down for good. All while becoming rich and getting his parents back.
'''Bastard ?'''
Now in the first 3 books, Artemis is far more ruthless then what we see later. He kidnaps Holly and uses her
So Pass.
'''Conclusion ?'''
One of the easiest keeps in
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Got a bunch of procedural and law examples planned for you from a variety of shows lined up. Including one played by the amazing Michael J. Fox. Still let us begin with one of my favourite shows.
'''Who is Hank Dempsey ?'''
A charming, affable LovableRogue and EscapeArtist, Hank played to perfection by Seamus Dever is an inmate in a prsion in the 60's. Hank was head over heels with a girl named Bonnie so stole a fairly high end pair of shoes for her and ended up in prsion. But love is beautiful and Hank has set out to always escape to be with her, basicaly pissing off the prison staff
'''Who is Hank Dempsey ?'''
A charming, affable LovableRogue and EscapeArtist, Hank played to perfection by Seamus Dever is an inmate in a prsion in the 60's. Hank was head over heels with a girl named Bonnie so stole a fairly high end pair of shoes for her and ended up in prsion. But love is beautiful and Hank has set out to always escape to be with her, basicaly pissing off the prison staff
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'''Who is
A
In order to indoctirine his followers, Corvin sires them agaisnt their will and then locks them self-aware in coffins for days where they often slowly lose their minds before he forces them to join him or die. Corvin also is a [[CardCarryingVillain self-professed]] practinoner of Droit du signor, who rapes female vampires under his employ who takes his fancy. Anyway Corvin kidnaps Greta whose Ruthven's friend planning to keep her hostage and later kill her as part of a RevengeByProxy against Ruthven. In the meanwhile, Corvin boredly entertains his trphy wife girlfriend Lilith with new victims before deciding to off
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So been awihle since we approved a power rangers cm. So heres one of the more evil of the newer power rangers villains.
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'''Who is Hank Dempsey ?'''
A charming, affable LovableRogue and EscapeArtist, Hank played to perfection by Seamus Dever is an inmate in a prsion in the
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Anyway Hades debuts stopping Hook from escaping having sent Cora to manipulate Regina into leaving so as not to foil his plans. It didnt work so he punishses her by turning her into a miller and knowing the more souls that cross over, the more power he loses has Hook create tombstones which when a name is placed on them will prevent the heroes from leaving. So putting Hook into a death trap off a slowly going down chain into the river of souls which if he touches wull turn him into a formless wraith, he lays a trap. Rumple, his ex-wife milah and emma arrive on the boat they came into the underworld and race their to save him, while emma goes to help, Hades propositions Rumple with the boat now where he wants it. Hell let him leave if he destroys the boat and kills Milah, Rumple agrees. And then Hades pulls out his ace after he does it: years ago after Rumple's son nearly died of snake venom, he went to a healer and offered him his next born kid (he was intending to never have children again to avoid actually giving him it) for an antidote. Rumple when he became dark one and was romancing Cora and planning to concieve and heir, killed the healer to get out of the contract. The healer went to the underworld....and gave the contract to Hades who know has complete control over rumple's unborn child whose being carried by his current wife Belle. This puts him now totally in his service and....he cant go for help since he blew up the boat and killed Milah (whoops).
Anyway when the heroes search for the the storybook which contains Hades weakness and origins. Hades maniupulates Hook's brother Liam into getting it for him and destroying the oages with his parts in it. The place its located has light magic so he cant enter. He uses the fact that Years ago, he offered to save him and his brother Hook if they intetionally crashed their ship and killed the crew to add their souls to his collection and threathens to tell his hrother the truth. Liam retrives the pages and gives them to him, but Hades plans to off Hook for getting in the way of his plans but Liam sacrfifing himself, allows him and the rest of the crew to pass into the afterlife and weakens Hades.
Anyway Hades needs Rumple's dfark one blood in order to create a portal to the underworld, planning to steal Zelena's baby from the heroes and return it to her to win her favour. Things go wrong and Belle and Zelena end up in the portal too with Zelena giving her baby up to the heroes as shes now scared shell hurt her. She comes to Hades who professes his love for her and explains that he got her what she always wanted : her birthday date. Which she's always wanted and he got by torturing it out of her mother in a weirdly toned gag. Shes legtimayely touched by this.
And sacrifices herself in one of the most touching moments in the series and reveres it , allowing her to be with her sisters in the afterlife and giving storybrooke one happy snow day.
Anyway when the heroes search for the the storybook which contains Hades weakness and origins. Hades maniupulates Hook's brother Liam into getting it for him and destroying the oages with his parts in it. The place its located has light magic so he cant enter. He uses the fact that Years ago, he offered to save him and his brother Hook if they intetionally crashed their ship and killed the crew to add their souls to his collection and threathens to tell his hrother the truth. Liam retrives the pages and gives them to him, but Hades plans to off Hook for getting in the way of his plans but Liam sacrfifing himself, allows him and the rest of the crew to pass into the afterlife and weakens Hades.
Anyway Hades needs Rumple's dfark one blood in order to create a portal to the underworld, planning to steal Zelena's baby from the heroes and return it to her to win her favour. Things go wrong and Belle and Zelena end up in the portal too with Zelena giving her baby up to the heroes as shes now scared shell hurt her. She comes to Hades who professes his love for her and explains that he got her what she always wanted : her birthday date. Which she's always wanted and he got by torturing it out of her mother in a weirdly toned gag. Shes legtimayely touched by this.
And sacrifices herself in one of the most touching moments in the series and reveres it , allowing her to be with her sisters in the afterlife and giving storybrooke one happy snow day.
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Anyway Hades debuts stopping Hook from escaping having sent Cora to manipulate Regina into leaving so as not to foil his plans. It didnt work so he punishses her by turning her into a miller and knowing the more souls that cross over, the more power he loses has Hook create tombstones which when a name is placed on them will prevent the heroes from leaving. So putting Hook into a death trap off a slowly going down chain into the river of souls which if he touches wull turn him into a formless wraith, he lays a trap. Rumple, his ex-wife milah and emma arrive on the boat they came into the underworld and race their to save him, while emma goes to help, Hades propositions Rumple with the boat now where he wants it. Hell let him leave if he destroys the boat and kills Milah, Rumple agrees. And then Hades pulls out his ace after he does it: years ago after Rumple's son nearly died of snake venom, he went to a healer and offered him his next born kid (he was intending to never have children again to avoid actually giving him it) for an antidote. Rumple when he became dark one and was romancing Cora and planning to concieve and heir, conceive an heir with her, killed the healer to get out of the contract. The healer went to the underworld....and gave the contract to Hades who know has complete control over rumple's unborn child whose being carried by his current wife Belle. This puts him now totally in his service and....he cant go for help since he blew up the boat and killed Milah (whoops).
Anyway when the heroes search for the the storybook which contains Hades weakness and origins. Hadesmaniupulates manipulates Hook's brother Liam into getting it for him and destroying the oages pages with his parts in it. The place its located has light magic so he cant enter. He uses the fact that Years ago, he offered to save him and his brother Hook if they intetionally intentionally crashed their ship and killed the crew to add their souls to his collection and threathens threatens to tell his hrother brother the truth. Liam retrives retrieves the pages and gives them to him, but Hades plans to off Hook for getting in the way of his plans but Liam sacrfifing sacrificing himself, allows him and the rest of the crew to pass into the afterlife and weakens Hades.
Anyway Hades needs Rumple's dfark one blood in order to create a portal to the underworld, planningto to steal Zelena's baby from the heroes and return it to her to win her favour. Things go go wrong and Belle and Zelena end up in the portal too with Zelena giving her baby up to the heroes as shes now scared shell hurt her. She comes to Hades who professes his love for her and explains that he got her what she always wanted : her birthday date. Which she's always wanted and he got by torturing it out of her mother in a weirdly toned gag. Shes legtimayely legitimately touched by this.this.
So Hades discovers while hes courting Zelena that flowers have started to grow in the underworld again, caused by the heroes bringing hope back which affects his decay abilities so sets about crushing it. Manipulating Gaston into goimg after Rumple who sorta stole his girl. He comes to Belle and makes a deal with her that he'll void the baby contract if she organizes a fight between gaston and rumple and if one of them pushes the other into the river of souls. Belle of course refuses believing theirs good in Gaston untill when she confronts him he reveals himself to be kinda a dick, she then organises the fight but prevents Rumple from killing him using the dark one dagger which can control him intending to allow Gaston to move on but when he inevitably threatens Rumple she ends up tossing Gaston in the river. Turns out as Hades planned for this to happen and reveals that since it wasnt actaully rumple who did it, their deal is forfeit and with their hopes destroyed it causes his powers to return.
And sacrifices herself in one of the most touching moments in the series and reveres it , allowing her to be with her sisters in the afterlife and giving storybrooke one happy snow day.
Anyway when the heroes search for the the storybook which contains Hades weakness and origins. Hades
Anyway Hades needs Rumple's dfark one blood in order to create a portal to the underworld, planning
So Hades discovers while hes courting Zelena that flowers have started to grow in the underworld again, caused by the heroes bringing hope back which affects his decay abilities so sets about crushing it. Manipulating Gaston into goimg after Rumple who sorta stole his girl. He comes to Belle and makes a deal with her that he'll void the baby contract if she organizes a fight between gaston and rumple and if one of them pushes the other into the river of souls. Belle of course refuses believing theirs good in Gaston untill when she confronts him he reveals himself to be kinda a dick, she then organises the fight but prevents Rumple from killing him using the dark one dagger which can control him intending to allow Gaston to move on but when he inevitably threatens Rumple she ends up tossing Gaston in the river. Turns out as Hades planned for this to happen and reveals that since it wasnt actaully rumple who did it, their deal is forfeit and with their hopes destroyed it causes his powers to return.
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Anyway after Elsa is freed and creates a snow shield around the town, Ingrid strenthens it to prevent anyone leaving. She intends to prove her her belief that the people will fear and hate anyone with powers to Elsa and Emma. So she has Robin Hood 's wife (uh kinda) hit with an ice spell which sends her into a coma in order to causes the town to start to turn on Elsa which it starts to do which she observes with a knowing smile. Anyaway she apprehends Hook and sends him into an ice trap, his death their will apparently seal Elsa's guilt to the town, anway hook is saved but Ingrid escapes for her new plan. Sending a mirage of Anna to lure Elsa in she traps her in chains which grow stronger the more the weaerer feels fear. In the meantime bargainng with the magic mirror, she tricks Regina into getting into a trap and ice monster meant to neutralise her threat , anyway Regina with Emma' s help kill it but are captured by Ingrid who takes the magic mirror intending to use the glass to cast the spell of shattered sight on the town. Anyway Elsa conquers her fear and arrives to save them just as Ingrid planned and the three send her off.
So in her next scheme Ingrid lets herself get captured by the heroes so she'll be sent to the jail their she subtly influences Elsa by revealing Anna was the one who sealed her away and later when all of Emma's allies are out of the station,s he freezes the doors and breaks Emma's confidence causing her powers to short circuit and causing Emma to retreat into the woods as she doesnt want to hurt anyone while Ingrid quietly walks away out of the hole she caused in the station. Anyway bargaining with Rumple she gains the ribbons from her childhood , the main ingredient of her main plan. Anyway Rumple later traps Ingrid in a circle as he plans to absorb Emma into the hat to give him godlike power but Ingrid is able to send a projection to warn emma which along with Elsa' help means that Emma learns to conquer her fear. And with three compatible magic users all having conquered their fear, she uses the ribbons onto elsa and Anna's hands which would be triggered by Emma doing that. She uses the power to activate the spell of shattered sight intned to cause the town to reveal its darkside and rip itself apart having gained a hatre of how non-magic users treated her as well leaving her and her new sisters have peace. But to avoid interfernce from rumple, she says he'll be able to leave with his wife and grandson and in turn he absorbs the town's fairies for his scheme who were working on an antidote to the spell benefiting her too.
Anyway Ingrid reveals that the ribbons stop Emma and Elsa from harming her as she plans to use their memory stones to feed them with happy memories of her in order to gain her sisters. Emma and elsa free shattered spell Regina who burns of the ribbons and along with a freed Anna from the ice spell disover Gerda' s last message before her death. She takes it to Ingrid which reveals that Gerda wanted to make amends and truly loved her and was planning to free her and give the people back their memories of her which had been taken. Ingrid touching the stone makes her rember and recall of her good memories with her sisters and she decides to sacrffice herself ina really heartwarming moment to revrse the spell.
-> "I am a monster, not because of my powers, but because of what I let them turn me into. I have to undo this."
So in her next scheme Ingrid lets herself get captured by the heroes so she'll be sent to the jail their she subtly influences Elsa by revealing Anna was the one who sealed her away and later when all of Emma's allies are out of the station,s he freezes the doors and breaks Emma's confidence causing her powers to short circuit and causing Emma to retreat into the woods as she doesnt want to hurt anyone while Ingrid quietly walks away out of the hole she caused in the station. Anyway bargaining with Rumple she gains the ribbons from her childhood , the main ingredient of her main plan. Anyway Rumple later traps Ingrid in a circle as he plans to absorb Emma into the hat to give him godlike power but Ingrid is able to send a projection to warn emma which along with Elsa' help means that Emma learns to conquer her fear. And with three compatible magic users all having conquered their fear, she uses the ribbons onto elsa and Anna's hands which would be triggered by Emma doing that. She uses the power to activate the spell of shattered sight intned to cause the town to reveal its darkside and rip itself apart having gained a hatre of how non-magic users treated her as well leaving her and her new sisters have peace. But to avoid interfernce from rumple, she says he'll be able to leave with his wife and grandson and in turn he absorbs the town's fairies for his scheme who were working on an antidote to the spell benefiting her too.
Anyway Ingrid reveals that the ribbons stop Emma and Elsa from harming her as she plans to use their memory stones to feed them with happy memories of her in order to gain her sisters. Emma and elsa free shattered spell Regina who burns of the ribbons and along with a freed Anna from the ice spell disover Gerda' s last message before her death. She takes it to Ingrid which reveals that Gerda wanted to make amends and truly loved her and was planning to free her and give the people back their memories of her which had been taken. Ingrid touching the stone makes her rember and recall of her good memories with her sisters and she decides to sacrffice herself ina really heartwarming moment to revrse the spell.
-> "I am a monster, not because of my powers, but because of what I let them turn me into. I have to undo this."
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So my other Series/OnceUponATime keeper. This is the BigBad of Season 5B "Underworld". Anyway after
'''Who is Hades ?'''
Hades is the the dapper, charismatic lord of the underworld and the god of death. Thousands of years ago, Hades killed his father Cronus and attempted to sieze the throne of Olympus but was defeated and cast out by his brother who caused his heart to freeze which
Anyway Hades debuts stopping Hook from escaping having sent Cora to manipulate Regina into leaving so as not to foil his plans. It didnt work so he punishses her by turning her into a
Anyway when the heroes search for the the storybook which contains Hades weakness and origins. Hades maniupulates Hook's brother Liam into getting
So in her next scheme Ingrid lets herself get captured by the heroes so she'll be sent to the jail their she subtly influences Elsa by revealing Anna was the one who sealed her away and later when all of Emma's allies are out
Anyway
Anyway Ingrid reveals that the ribbons stop Emma and Elsa from harming her as she plans to use their memory stones to feed them with happy memories of her
-> "I am
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Here's one of the most brilliant motw's I've ever seen in a police procedural.
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'''Who is Lord Arcanon ?'''
A vicious alien warlord and sadistic egomaniac (which is weird as his sentai counterpart Chaos was a calm, AffablyEvil and intelligent mb), Arcanon desires the energems to grant him universal control. Millions of years ago, Arcanon attacked the peaceful planet of Sentai 6 in search of the dark energem and encountered Heckyl. Heckyl tried to stop it falling into the wrong hands but was corrupted by it and gained a
In his quest for the energems, Arcanon hires BountyHunter Sledge to kidnap alien criminials to force them to be his fighters and recruits and later when the defender of the silver energem Xenowing defends it. Arcanon defeats him and uses the dark energem to painfully transform him into a corrupted copy called Doomwing who acts as one of his second in commands.
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So anyway they go to the drop off where his lawyer in a bunny mask says to go this pay phone to find her. When catherine refuses untill they find proof of life, lawyer dude states that hell just leave and shell die but Logan..."heroically" shoves the briefcase full of money into his hands and they then leave to go the pay phone. The pay phone takes them to the body dump. Logan
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So anyway they go to the drop off where his lawyer in a bunny mask says to go this pay phone to find her. When catherine refuses untill they find proof of life, lawyer dude states that hell just leave and shell die but Logan..."heroically" shoves the briefcase full of money into his hands hands and they then leave to go the pay phone. The pay phone takes them to the body dump. Logan
Logan knew that at long as the body was missing, people would be suspicious of him at the very least his wife who knew about the affair would be.
Now his lawyer has the money trsanfeered to another container, getting the markings on his hands instead while Logan secretly picks it up later. Logan during the autopsy puts on a very sad perforamnce of being heart broken and asks to be let in, secretly using it subtly get them to reveal everything they know about the case in a smooth move. Anyway discovering peabut butter on the shower curtain which matches the pb and j sandwhiches that Logan's wife makes for their son (not what he was hoping for per say but hey), this prompts them to check the van and discover the blood and a double check of the mistresses apartment reveals the wine glasses. They take her into custody convinced she killed her...when the uv light accidentally goes on lawyer dude. Revealing he has the markings from the money, they begin interrogating him, convinced he did it but he eventually reveals Logan was the one who set it up. They go to Logan's hotel room...and find him long gone . They then start to piece it together, even admitting the dude was suprioanlly brillaint. And unfortunately for Logan as hes leaving for Mexico, a patrolman notices its the same fancy car that he saw earlier and because they dont get that those too often, pulls him over and arrests him. He takes his defeat farly well, well in jail in his calm discssion with Catherine he states that over time lying started as a way for his deals but hes become who he is now.
Now his lawyer has the money trsanfeered to another container, getting the markings on his hands instead while Logan secretly picks it up later. Logan during the autopsy puts on a very sad perforamnce of being heart broken and asks to be let in, secretly using it subtly get them to reveal everything they know about the case in a smooth move. Anyway discovering peabut butter on the shower curtain which matches the pb and j sandwhiches that Logan's wife makes for their son (not what he was hoping for per say but hey), this prompts them to check the van and discover the blood and a double check of the mistresses apartment reveals the wine glasses. They take her into custody convinced she killed her...when the uv light accidentally goes on lawyer dude. Revealing he has the markings from the money, they begin interrogating him, convinced he did it but he eventually reveals Logan was the one who set it up. They go to Logan's hotel room...and find him long gone . They then start to piece it together, even admitting the dude was suprioanlly brillaint. And unfortunately for Logan as hes leaving for Mexico, a patrolman notices its the same fancy car that he saw earlier and because they dont get that those too often, pulls him over and arrests him. He takes his defeat farly well, well in jail in his calm discssion with Catherine he states that over time lying started as a way for his deals but hes become who he is now.
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It took awihle but here's my first once upon a time ep.
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'''Who is Roy Logan?'''
Logan is a real estate developer whose having an affair with a woman named Amanda, when she ends up telling his wife about the affair, they end up in a fight and he ends up killing her by accidentally striking her and her head hitting the marble desktop. Logan realising hes in trouble, spends a few hours thinking how to fix this and comes up with a complex plan to evade the police using his skills. First he has her body wrapped in a shower curtain and cleans the room throughly before cutting off her finger. Then he transports the body in his wifes van, allowing for DNA transfernce and adds wine glasses from her into his mistresses house to set her up as a distraction. He then carefully dumps the body and contacts his Lawyer, lying to him that he needs his help for his plan to gain a large amount of money out of his divorce and that hes set up a fake kidnapping and ransom delivery.
Anyway Roy adds blood to his hands and then walks into the bank as the last person their, he acts as shady and scared as possible and requests 1 million dollars. This causes suspicion in the tellers like he planned, he then drives recklessly, hoping to get brought in when they see the money and blood. He needs a cop of some kind for his next plan to make him look like an innocent victim. Now in the jail, the csi's Catherine and Grissom take samples from him and he taks to them, getting a read. He then contacts his lawyer and the two go for the next stage of his plan when hes let out. He leaves his sunglasses behind intetionally and Catherine goes outside to give it back to him..on cue voice call from his lawyer in a disguised voice who asks to give the phone to catherine. He reveals hes "kidnapped" Logan's mistress and is holding her hostage and will "kill" her if she doesn't get in the car and leave her weapons. In the car, Logan using his innocent act and manipulates Catherine into thinking that his mistress has been kidnapped and shows her the finger. He convinces her to help him drop it off, she has the money marked and he realises and goes along since that will allow him to frame his lawyer wholl end up touching it first
So anyway they go to the drop off where his lawyer in a
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Anyway Ingrid reveals that the ribbons stop Emma and Elsa from harming her as she plans to use their memory stones to feed them with happy memories of her in order to gain her sisters. Emma and elsa free shattered spell Regina who burns of the ribbons and along with a freed Anna from the ice spell disover Gerda' s last message before her death. She takes it to Ingrid which reveals that Gerda wanted to make amends and truly loved her and was planning to free her and give the people back their memories of her which had been taken. Ingrid touching the stone makes her rember and recall of her good memories with her sisters and she decides to sacrffice herself ina really heartwarming moment to revrse the spell.
-> "I am a monster, not because of my powers, but because of what I let them turn me into. I have to undo this."
And sacrifices herself in one of the most touching moments in the series and reveres it , allowing her to be with her sisters in the afterlife and giving storybrooke one happy snow day.
'''Magnificent ?'''
Ah yes. She's cold, polite and serene. Never raises her voice and moves through her plans with great , quiet confidence tht she'll get what she wants in her quest for her family.
She's also a great chessmaster, planning this over decades in order to gain her magical sisters. And takes some amazing moves to get their. She mananges to nearly prove to Elsa that the townsfolk will always fear her in order to shake her confidence, later gets ger to conquer her fear in order to harness the power of thr ribbons and uses the magic mirror to trick Regina into bringing it to her and disbaling her. Her gambit to turn Emma away from veryone is also brilliant using trickery to trick them into capturing her in order to psychologically maniuplate emma into going wild in order to get her to confront her fear and uses it to activate her spell. She also knows to bargain and make deals with Rumple to ensure she doesnt get unneeded interference.
She comes really close to winning and is only stopped at the end by her relasing what she did was wrong and that she needs to fix it. Even then its a sweet sendoff where she gets to rejoin her sisters in the afterlife.
'''Bastard ?'''
Okay yeah Ingrid is probably my least evil candidate from this show shes still bad. She plans to use the spell of shattered sight to have the townsfolk rip each other to pieces, manipulates Anna into going against Elsa to break them up and later freezes Arrendale for 30 years (everyone is fine btw. When the spell of shattered sight activated it drew Ingrid's magic away and everyone unfroze without issue). But her backstory is understandable, she was unfairly punished and had to live in fair, trapped concious in an urn for decades and seeing her sister hate and fear her. She only fully becomes a badguy after Anna didnt trust her so she figured history was going to repeat. Even her hatred of the townsfolk stems from the belief that they would hurt her and her new sisters so must be gotten rid off (something which judgding by what happened with Robin's wife may not be totally wrong). Its cold but considering her awful backstory is understanble.
The thing is she also does relaise in the end she was wrong and stops everything in a truly beautiful send-off and wishes the heroes well without malice before dying. She also wont twist the knife like most of the other villains do and her evil acts are controlled. All in all : Bastard but too much.
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Anyway after Elsa is freed and creates a snow shield around the town, Ingrid strenthens it to prevent anyone leaving. She intends to prove her her belief that the people will fear and hate anyone with powers to Elsa and Emma. So she has Robin Hood 's wife (uh kinda) hit with an ice spell which sends her into a coma this causes the town to start to turn on Elsa
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Anyway after Elsa is freed and creates a snow shield around the town, Ingrid strenthens it to prevent anyone leaving. She intends to prove her her belief that the people will fear and hate anyone with powers to Elsa and Emma. So she has Robin Hood 's wife (uh kinda) hit with an ice spell which sends her into a coma this in order to causes the town to start to turn on Elsa
Elsa which it starts to do which she observes with a knowing smile. Anyaway she apprehends Hook and sends him into an ice trap, his death their will apparently seal Elsa's guilt to the town, anway hook is saved but Ingrid escapes for her new plan. Sending a mirage of Anna to lure Elsa in she traps her in chains which grow stronger the more the weaerer feels fear. In the meantime bargainng with the magic mirror, she tricks Regina into getting into a trap and ice monster meant to neutralise her threat , anyway Regina with Emma' s help kill it but are captured by Ingrid who takes the magic mirror intending to use the glass to cast the spell of shattered sight on the town. Anyway Elsa conquers her fear and arrives to save them just as Ingrid planned and the three send her off.
Anyway
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'''Who is Ingrid, the Snow Queen ?'''
Ingrid is Anna and Elsa' aunt and the true heir to Arrendale. Starting off as the shy oldest sister of a trio (which also included Elsa' mother Gerda as well as her other sister Helga) she was a reculse scared of her powers so Journyed with her sisters to meet [[overarchingVillain Rumplestilkin]] and gain a way to disable them. He took from them their ribbons as an exchange and gave her gloves to stop her powers and an urn to trap her if things get too bad. Anyway all is well untill a few weeks later, Helga's boyfriend becomes uh fixated on her and accosts and tries to possibly rape her before being stopped. Helga arrives and sees through him and sides with her sister but he fights with her, Ingrid tries to use her powers to stop Him but he ends up using Helga as a human shield, killing her by freezing her. This cuases Ingrid to break down, Gerda later disovers this and despite Ingrid's protests declares her a monster for killing their sister and traps her in the urn. Anyway stuck here for several decades well concious, she harnesses her powers which along with her sister's rejection slowly turns corrupts her.
Anyway shes freed in epsiode 3 of this arc by Hans who was planning to use the urn to trap Elsa, Ingrid instead freezes and captures him and saves her. Anyway Anna returns after some stuff with Rumplestilkinwith the sorceror's hat which has the power to trap magical users (long story) and suspects something is off with Ingrid so goes to the trolls to find info on iNGRID and also learns from Anna that her and Elsa' parents had journyed to the enchanted forest to find a way to strip Elsa of her magic. Anyway after the conversation with the trolls, Ingrid has Anna kidnapped thinking she intended to use the hat to capture Elsa. Ingrid hides the hate and uses it to leverage the sorceror's apprentince into getting her a happy ending with a family. Anyway Ingrid reveals to Elsa that her sister was the one who put her in the urn as a way to show that her sisterly bond is weak. Elsa rjects that and secretly breaks out Anna intending to retrap Ingrid, Ingrid interpects them and uses the spell of shattered sight which cases somone to become the worst possible version of themselves on Anna intneding to break her relationship with Elsa so she'll now be with her. It uh doesnt work as Elsa refuses to hurt Anna and instead lets herself be sealed. Ingrid at this point decides after alot of crap that she might as well be a badguy and ends up accidentally freezing Arrendale. Anyway Elsa' urn is stoeln by Rumple after Ingrid had used a memory potion to remove her memories of her.
Anyway after this Ingrid goes to the sorceror for help. She wants a family nd a so called third magical sister. He agrees and that she'll find Elsa again if she were to go to Earth. Anyway a few years later she meets a young Emma and the two bond, she helps her stop a bully but when Ingrid pushes a bit too much she realises its too soon so leaves for Storybrooke. Now she waits as the ice cream lady pateintly. Later having Emma's memories of her taken away in order to stop her recongisg her for now.
Anyway after Elsa is freed and creates a snow shield around the town, Ingrid strenthens it to prevent anyone leaving. She intends to prove her her belief that the people will fear and hate anyone with powers to Elsa and Emma. So she has Robin Hood 's wife (uh kinda) hit with an ice spell which sends her into a coma this causes the town to start to turn on Elsa
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* "Act III: Guignol": [[StrawmanNewsMedia Georges Du Roy]] is a psyhcpathic newspaper mogul and leader of the Red Circle. Learning that he loved violence and evil during the events of Bloody Week, Du Roy helps found and cover for the members of the Red Circle helping them unleash a wave of torture, rape and murder on the city for fun. A diehard antisemite, Du Roy is also behind a smear campaign against the jewish soldier Dreyfus and incites riots against the jewish population of paris leading to innocent jews. Du Roy along with the rest of the red circle also force and kidnaps young women into their grand act where they torture them to death for fun and intned to make Kate Reed their latest victim, all while forcing the master of the theatre Guigonol to watch.
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* "Act III: Guignol": [[StrawmanNewsMedia Georges Du Roy]] is a psyhcpathic psychopathic newspaper mogul and leader of the Red Circle. Learning that he loved violence and evil during the events of Bloody Week, Du Roy helps found and cover for the members of the Red Circle helping them unleash a wave of torture, rape and murder on the city for fun. A diehard antisemite, Du Roy is also behind a smear campaign against the jewish soldier Dreyfus and incites riots against the jewish population of paris leading to innocent jews. Du Roy along with the rest of the red circle also force and kidnaps young women into their grand act where they torture them to death for fun and intned to make Kate Reed their latest victim, all while forcing the master of the theatre Guigonol to watch.
So...new UrbanFantasy example.
'''What is the Remnant ?'''
The Remnant is a sapient ball of light which is a leftover from when the universe was created. An evil, intelligent thing it desires to create chaos and feeds of the dread that results in it spreading chaos and death. Over its lifetime it boasts that its helped set fire to the library of alexander, it was the adder that stung king arthur's knight causing the fall of camelot, helped the monghols take Baghdad leading to 90 000 dead, etc, etc. Still sometimes it likes to have fun and just torment one specfic town or area, watching it collapse into chaos.
Anyway in the present its discovered a way to conquer what it views as the one thing its avoided for fear of being overpowered (the undead and monsters) and intends to add their fear to feed on and give it godly power. Taking over a church in London, it warps the minds of the priests and then converts them into its followers, asking for it to kill the "unholy" for it, corrupting their minds and leaching off their souls. The priests start a spree killing known as the rosary slayings (killing 15 people in total, other supernaturals or humans who help or work for them) and having them mutilated to death and later has an attack placed on the home of Francis Varney. Its ultimate goal is a complete end to all monsters in the city for funsies. The Remnant also orders an attack on the local community of ghouls , with the first attack killing outright babies. Anyway when Greta is attacked by one of its followers due to her being a monster doctor, shes able to fend him off through a mix of skills and the fact that this dude still has alot of his sanity left so doesn't want to kill her. She takes him home unconscious where shes sheltering the local ghoul community. The Remnant sends his minions to attack and kill them all but are beaten off.
Anyway Greta and her allies Faust, Lord Ruthven, cranswell head off to put a stop it having cured the monk dude who attacked of his Remnant induced insanity and he explains where he was inducted. They find themslves having to face
So...new UrbanFantasy example.
'''What is the Remnant ?'''
The Remnant is a sapient ball of light which is a leftover from when the universe was created. An evil, intelligent thing it desires to create chaos and feeds of the dread that results in it spreading chaos and death. Over its lifetime it boasts that its helped set fire to the library of alexander, it was the adder that stung king arthur's knight causing the fall of camelot, helped the monghols take Baghdad leading to 90 000 dead, etc, etc. Still sometimes it likes to have fun and just torment one specfic town or area, watching it collapse into chaos.
Anyway in the present its discovered a way to conquer what it views as the one thing its avoided for fear of being overpowered (the undead and monsters) and intends to add their fear to feed on and give it godly power. Taking over a church in London, it warps the minds of the priests and then converts them into its followers, asking for it to kill the "unholy" for it, corrupting their minds and leaching off their souls. The priests start a spree killing known as the rosary slayings (killing 15 people in total, other supernaturals or humans who help or work for them) and having them mutilated to death and later has an attack placed on the home of Francis Varney. Its ultimate goal is a complete end to all monsters in the city for funsies. The Remnant also orders an attack on the local community of ghouls , with the first attack killing outright babies. Anyway when Greta is attacked by one of its followers due to her being a monster doctor, shes able to fend him off through a mix of skills and the fact that this dude still has alot of his sanity left so doesn't want to kill her. She takes him home unconscious where shes sheltering the local ghoul community. The Remnant sends his minions to attack and kill them all but are beaten off.
Anyway Greta and her allies Faust, Lord Ruthven, cranswell head off to put a stop it having cured the monk dude who attacked of his Remnant induced insanity and he explains where he was inducted. They find themslves having to face
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* "Act III: Guignol": [[StrawmanNewsMedia Georges Du Roy]] is a psyhcpathic newspaper mogul and leader of the Red Circle. Learning that he loved violence and evil during the events of Bloody Week, Du Roy helps found and cover for the members of the Red Circle helping them unleash a wave of torture, rape and murder on the city for fun. A diehard antisemite, Du Roy is also behind a smear campaign against the jewish soldier Dreyfus and incites riots against the jewish population of paris leading to innocent jews. Du Roy along with the rest of the red circle also force and kidnaps young women into their grand act where they torture them to death for fun and intned to make Kate Reed their latest victim, all while forcing the master of the theatre Guigonol to watch.
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So I talked with 43110 and he came up with this much cleaner and less janky entry for Eobard. Everyone fine with switching it the messy current with this
* Eobard Thawne aka Professor Zoom, the Reverse Flash is the Arch Enemy of Barry Allen and the one who killed his mother. Duplicating Barry's powers out of obsession with him, Eobard attempted to replace him in life and when rejected by the latter's wife, spitefully killed her, later forcing the pacifistic Barry to kill Eobard himself to save his then-fiancé. Resurrected, Eobard begins using his time travel powers to commit a litany of crimes including pettily murdering his own brother and parents, as well as a rival and every single man who dated a woman he was interested in, even going back to her childhood to traumatize her for spurning him. Eobard in another of his evil deeds attempted to murder the children of Wally West in front if their mother and murders Johnny Quick. Trying to force the also resurrected Barry into becoming the villainous Black Flash, Eobard continues carelessly shifting the time stream for no other purpose than to make Barry suffer, causing untold damage and agony in doing so and torments Barry during the events of Flashpoint. A vile, selfish man who will never admit to being at fault, Eobard is Barry Allen's worst nightmare come to life.
* Eobard Thawne aka Professor Zoom, the Reverse Flash is the Arch Enemy of Barry Allen and the one who killed his mother. Duplicating Barry's powers out of obsession with him, Eobard attempted to replace him in life and when rejected by the latter's wife, spitefully killed her, later forcing the pacifistic Barry to kill Eobard himself to save his then-fiancé. Resurrected, Eobard begins using his time travel powers to commit a litany of crimes including pettily murdering his own brother and parents, as well as a rival and every single man who dated a woman he was interested in, even going back to her childhood to traumatize her for spurning him. Eobard in another of his evil deeds attempted to murder the children of Wally West in front if their mother and murders Johnny Quick. Trying to force the also resurrected Barry into becoming the villainous Black Flash, Eobard continues carelessly shifting the time stream for no other purpose than to make Barry suffer, causing untold damage and agony in doing so and torments Barry during the events of Flashpoint. A vile, selfish man who will never admit to being at fault, Eobard is Barry Allen's worst nightmare come to life.
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* Act IV ( Mark of Kane): Charles Foster Kane plans to start a war between europe and america, intending to profit off the eventual america win and increase his newspaper sales. In order to finance his operation, hell need to launder the money to the assasin and sabouters and has created a large casino game whereupon his sabouters will win these "earnings" and use the payment to start. Eric sends his angels to bust the operation.
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* Act IV ( Mark of Kane): Charles Foster Kane plans to start a war between europe and america, intending to profit off the eventual america american win and increase his newspaper sales. In order to finance his operation, hell need to launder the money to the assasin assasins and sabouters and has created a large casino game whereupon his sabouters will win these "earnings" and use the payment to start. Eric sends his angels to bust the operation.
operation upon orders from a goverment source (Mycroft Holmes I think it would have been). Anyway as the casino proves weirdly ineffective in the sense that kane (the house) keeps winning, Eric sends one of his robot minions to sabotage the electrical system all of a sudden all the cards and coins and chips start flying out at random and cause absolute chaos as the guests turn on each other (no honour among crooks) and start to loot the place. Krane is knocked on his ass up by one of Eric's angels and starts hallucinating about roses and buds. (Newman you ). Eric's robot minion also frees the cattle that are kept on this estate and they end up chasing the cowboys meant to tend them and the guests. Kane leaves with his operation in tatters and the war plans scuttled. Its revealed that the main reason that Eric decided to put Kane out of business was not primarily because of the war but because Kane was planning to buy the paris opera house and have the stones shipped to Chicago and well Eric wouldn't let that happen as he says with a smile.
* Act V Deluge: Cagilstro has flooded Paris and murdered Eric's friend the persian in an attempt to draw him out for a final curtain call. Eric sends his robot Olympia to meet with his former angels Adler and Kate to protect them and for his final scheme. Cagilstro and Assolant captures Kate and Adler intending to execute them in front of Eric having sent a spy into his organisation in order to help betray them and bring them here. Eric though reveals that he knew about said spy/traitor in advance and had Olympia programmed to disable her and free kate and adler. Then Eric pulls his ace: all the allies and favours he gained throughout the book all arrive wearing his mask (Guigonol, the vampires, etc) and overwhelm Cagilstro's coup. Cagilstro in a rage at being beaten lunges to kill Eric and one of his angels Unora but Eric shoves Unora out of the way and grabs Caglistro, sending them both into the raging flood waters to their [[NeverFoundTheBody seeming deaths]].
'''Magnificent ?'''
Naturally. Eric is a calm composed plotter always with a new plan to combat his latest obstacle. He plans for ever eventuality and ends up playing pretty much every character in the book. Cagilstro sends a traitor to his organisation; Hell disable her. Need to find out more about the red circle : send a mole to infiltrate and get close enough to shut the whole thing down. Kane's casino: turn the entire thing into a farce and make it impossible for Kane to ever try this again.
Hes sly, quiet, composed and artistic. He never loses his cool. His gambits are truly beaut and he even goes out a badass, saving one of his angels and sending his nemesis into flood waters at the (possible) cost of his life.
'''Bastard ?''
Okay Eric isnt actually a straight good guy. This agency is just to keep himself well off in monetary terms not for the greater good. He can also do some ruthless moves like hypnotising christine and Trilby as part of his plan to beat Caglistro or the whole burning a guy (an AssholeVictim but still) to death as a signal. Plus him ruining Kane wasnt becuase of the deadly war thing but because he was going to take something he cared about away from him. ''But'' hes also polite and reserved. Genunily does love Christine and even sends his regards when she gets married to someone else without hurt feelings. He loves and cares for his angels and will step in when their in danger. he earns the respects of countless characters to the point they end up helping him in his final dance. He genunily cares for Adler and knew shed be miserable with her husband so lied about something happening with him as he knew it would be the only way for her to move on. Hes a more a neutral character but one with a ton of class and style mixed with protectivness and ruthlessness .
'''Conclusion?'''
Solid keep imo.
* Act V Deluge: Cagilstro has flooded Paris and murdered Eric's friend the persian in an attempt to draw him out for a final curtain call. Eric sends his robot Olympia to meet with his former angels Adler and Kate to protect them and for his final scheme. Cagilstro and Assolant captures Kate and Adler intending to execute them in front of Eric having sent a spy into his organisation in order to help betray them and bring them here. Eric though reveals that he knew about said spy/traitor in advance and had Olympia programmed to disable her and free kate and adler. Then Eric pulls his ace: all the allies and favours he gained throughout the book all arrive wearing his mask (Guigonol, the vampires, etc) and overwhelm Cagilstro's coup. Cagilstro in a rage at being beaten lunges to kill Eric and one of his angels Unora but Eric shoves Unora out of the way and grabs Caglistro, sending them both into the raging flood waters to their [[NeverFoundTheBody seeming deaths]].
'''Magnificent ?'''
Naturally. Eric is a calm composed plotter always with a new plan to combat his latest obstacle. He plans for ever eventuality and ends up playing pretty much every character in the book. Cagilstro sends a traitor to his organisation; Hell disable her. Need to find out more about the red circle : send a mole to infiltrate and get close enough to shut the whole thing down. Kane's casino: turn the entire thing into a farce and make it impossible for Kane to ever try this again.
Hes sly, quiet, composed and artistic. He never loses his cool. His gambits are truly beaut and he even goes out a badass, saving one of his angels and sending his nemesis into flood waters at the (possible) cost of his life.
'''Bastard ?''
Okay Eric isnt actually a straight good guy. This agency is just to keep himself well off in monetary terms not for the greater good. He can also do some ruthless moves like hypnotising christine and Trilby as part of his plan to beat Caglistro or the whole burning a guy (an AssholeVictim but still) to death as a signal. Plus him ruining Kane wasnt becuase of the deadly war thing but because he was going to take something he cared about away from him. ''But'' hes also polite and reserved. Genunily does love Christine and even sends his regards when she gets married to someone else without hurt feelings. He loves and cares for his angels and will step in when their in danger. he earns the respects of countless characters to the point they end up helping him in his final dance. He genunily cares for Adler and knew shed be miserable with her husband so lied about something happening with him as he knew it would be the only way for her to move on. Hes a more a neutral character but one with a ton of class and style mixed with protectivness and ruthlessness .
'''Conclusion?'''
Solid keep imo.
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The DragonInChief to Singhain and are VillainProtagonist everyone. A smiling, jovial gangster with an odd love for cartoons, Don has helped his boss Singhain rise up to be the top drug lord of Asia but he wants more. He wants to be the king, in the meantime the police have started a manhunt to catch him to take down his and singhain's empire. Anyway when Don discovers one of his closest men, Ramesh are going to betray him to the police, he simply charms the dude on the way out into taking his hand, before poisoning him. Anyway Ramesh's fiance Kamini desire revenge and teams up with Inspector de silvia, she seduces Don into coming into her hotel room where she takes the bullets out his guns and reveals the police are comming. So Don tries to [[CombatPragmatist shoot her]], only for it to not work...and an idea comes up. As he says to her: ''She knows the gun is empty. He knows the gun is empty. "They dont know the gun is empty''. Anyway he gags her mouth with a cloth and uses her as a hostage with the empty gun in order to escape before killing her on the way out to dispose of lose ends.
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So heres the first mb keeper (but not the last by a long shot) for Creator/KimNewman.
'''Who is the phantom of the opera?'''
My man Eric himself. TheDragonInChief to Singhain and are VillainProtagonist everyone. A smiling, jovial gangster with an odd love Phantom is here the mask wearing head of the opera detective agency (an agency basically designed for cartoons, Don has helped the wealthy or other more morally ambiguous associates of Eric's allowing eric to profit from). A cold, calm chessmaster, eric sends his boss Singhain rise angels on missions all leading up to be the top drug lord of Asia but he wants more. He wants to be the king, in the meantime the police have started a manhunt to catch him to take down his and singhain's empire. big scheme. Anyway:
* Act I (Marriage Club): Anywaywhen Don he discovers Caglistro is using robotic duplicates of young women to seduce wealthy men and then replace them with her dolls in her bid for world domination. Eric hypnotizes two of his angels Trilby and Christine so that they'll react to a musical note when the time is right. Anyway Caglistro catches the angels and is about to overwhelm them when Eric arrives and uses the signal to hypnotise Trilby and Christine into becoming fighting machines (fighting off the aches and bruise so they can decimate Caglistro's machines) meanwhile Eric creates an even greater orchestra, sending the next signal. Christine and TRilby uses their voices to send psionic pulse which busts the heads of the dolls and makes Caglistro's eyes bleed, forcing her out and waking up all the prisoners who've been drugged. He destroys the ship their own but not before getting everyone offboard to safety thanks to Eric's second-in-command The Persian (uh mostly. Their were 3 deaths but their apparently guys we wont miss).
* Act II (Les Vampire): Doesnt really do much but he helps the Grand Vampire clear his name in return for a favor that will be very helpful later.
* Interlude: Irene is uh in a slump. Shes uh not taken to married life well and has become obsessed with the idea that her husband must have something wrong. She goes to eric, her mentor for advice. He senses due to his ability to read people how determined she is that something must be wrong and how its started to eat away at her and calmly lies to her that yes something is wrong. Prompting her divorce and entering a life of crime of her own.
* Act III ( Guigonol): Anyway investigating a weird rash of murders that have hit the streets of Paris, Eric gets word from his friend Guigonol that hes in danger and concots a plan to help him. He has one of hisclosest men, Ramesh are going to betray him to angels Clara infiltrate the police, he simply charms the dude on the way out into taking circle and try to become a member of theirs. It works though she also ends up having to kidnap another of his hand, before poisoning him. Anyway Ramesh's fiance Kamini desire revenge and teams up angels, Kate to go along with Inspector de silvia, she seduces Don into coming into her hotel room where she takes the bullets out his guns and reveals the police are comming. So Don tries to [[CombatPragmatist shoot her]], only for it to not work...and an idea comes up. As he says to her: ''She knows the gun is empty. He knows the gun is empty. "They dont know the gun is empty''. Anyway he gags her mouth it. Now with a cloth all the red circle members together, they strike. Eric disables all the snipers that are positioned above the theatre to kill any escapees and uses her as carefully puts a hostage with noose around the empty gun in neck of one, the sultan and setting him on fire. This distraction is enough for Clara to free Kate and Guginol who proceed to bucther the red circle for their [[PayEvilUntoEvil crimes]]. The day is saved and Guigonol adds that hell help Eric when the time is right.
* Act IV ( Mark of Kane): Charles Foster Kane plans to start a war between europe and america, intending to profit off the eventual america win and increase his newspaper sales. In order toescape before killing her on finance his operation, hell need to launder the way out money to dispose of lose ends.
the assasin and sabouters and has created a large casino game whereupon his sabouters will win these "earnings" and use the payment to start. Eric sends his angels to bust the operation.
'''Who is the phantom of the opera?'''
My man Eric himself. The
* Act I (Marriage Club): Anyway
* Act II (Les Vampire): Doesnt really do much but he helps the Grand Vampire clear his name in return for a favor that will be very helpful later.
* Interlude: Irene is uh in a slump. Shes uh not taken to married life well and has become obsessed with the idea that her husband must have something wrong. She goes to eric, her mentor for advice. He senses due to his ability to read people how determined she is that something must be wrong and how its started to eat away at her and calmly lies to her that yes something is wrong. Prompting her divorce and entering a life of crime of her own.
* Act III ( Guigonol): Anyway investigating a weird rash of murders that have hit the streets of Paris, Eric gets word from his friend Guigonol that hes in danger and concots a plan to help him. He has one of his
* Act IV ( Mark of Kane): Charles Foster Kane plans to start a war between europe and america, intending to profit off the eventual america win and increase his newspaper sales. In order to
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Anyway onto the next film. Its been five years and Don has gotten tired of this business. He wants to retire and he wants to retire a free man. So when a European gangster named Jimmy Coogan starts to put a hit on him, he formulates a plan for revenge.
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Anyway onto the next film. Its been five years and Don has gotten tired of this business. He wants to retire and he wants to retire a free man. So when a European gangster named Jimmy Coogan starts to put a hit on him, he formulates a plan for revenge.
revenge and a way to get rich and free. So Don hands himself over to Roma and interpol, knowing he'll be transferred to a maximum security prison which houses Vardhaan. Vardhaan tries to kill him but Don beats him and states he has a way to free them both and make them very rich men. So Don smuggles a poison which causes diarhea into the prison, hidden in the food supplies that are sent in with Vardhaan intercepting it as he works in kitchen. He then gets his lawyer during a visit to have a water tight package hidden in the prison toilet and Vardhann gets Don a janitor job so he can retrieve it. They poison the food supply with the diarhea stuff and cause the prsioners to become all sick. Hospital and paramedics rush in and open the cells and we find out whats in the packages (''paramedic uniforms''), after the cells are opened and a brief fight. Both of them walk out of the prison during the chaos with no one the wiser.
Anyway whell their chilling in Don's club in Zurich which they escaped to with Don's new second-in-command /Gangster's moll Ayesha. Don reveals why he broke out Vardhaan. Vardhaan and Singhain where both given two separte keys to a security box in the DBZ bank. Don already has Singhain's but needed Vardhaan's. Basically years prior...the current head of the DBZ bank made a deal with Singhain through his second-in-command [[SmugSnake Diwan]] to assassinate the man who would have actually gotten the job. This safe contains tapes proving the meeting...Don plans to blackmail the DBZ head into getting him into the bank. Their he'll steal the printing plates and use it to print billions in euros, making a rich, rich man.
Anyway the gang approaches Diwan who
Anyway whell their chilling in Don's club in Zurich which they escaped to with Don's new second-in-command /Gangster's moll Ayesha. Don reveals why he broke out Vardhaan. Vardhaan and Singhain where both given two separte keys to a security box in the DBZ bank. Don already has Singhain's but needed Vardhaan's. Basically years prior...the current head of the DBZ bank made a deal with Singhain through his second-in-command [[SmugSnake Diwan]] to assassinate the man who would have actually gotten the job. This safe contains tapes proving the meeting...Don plans to blackmail the DBZ head into getting him into the bank. Their he'll steal the printing plates and use it to print billions in euros, making a rich, rich man.
Anyway the gang approaches Diwan who
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The DragonInChief to Singhain and are VillainProtagonist everyone. A smiling, jovial and rising gangster and drug lord, Don has helped his boss Singhain rise up to be the top drug lord of Asia but he wants more. He wants to be the king, in the meantime the police have started a manhunt to catch him to take down his and singhain's empire. Anyway when Don discovers one of his closest men, Ramesh are going to betray him to the police, he simply charms the dude on the way out into taking his hand, before poisoning him. Anyway Ramesh's fiance Kamini desire revenge and teams up with Inspector de silvia, she seduces Don into coming into her hotel room where she takes the bullets out his guns and reveals the police are comming. So Don tries to [[CombatPragmatist shoot her]], only for it to not work...and an idea comes up. As he says to her: ''She knows the gun is empty. He knows the gun is empty. "They dont know the gun is empty''. Anyway he gags her mouth with a cloth and uses her as a hostage with the empty gun in order to escape before killing her on the way out to dispose of lose ends.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation.
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The DragonInChief to Singhain and are VillainProtagonist everyone. A smiling, jovial and rising jovial gangster and drug lord, with an odd love for cartoons, Don has helped his boss Singhain rise up to be the top drug lord of Asia but he wants more. He wants to be the king, in the meantime the police have started a manhunt to catch him to take down his and singhain's empire. Anyway when Don discovers one of his closest men, Ramesh are going to betray him to the police, he simply charms the dude on the way out into taking his hand, before poisoning him. Anyway Ramesh's fiance Kamini desire revenge and teams up with Inspector de silvia, she seduces Don into coming into her hotel room where she takes the bullets out his guns and reveals the police are comming. So Don tries to [[CombatPragmatist shoot her]], only for it to not work...and an idea comes up. As he says to her: ''She knows the gun is empty. He knows the gun is empty. "They dont know the gun is empty''. Anyway he gags her mouth with a cloth and uses her as a hostage with the empty gun in order to escape before killing her on the way out to dispose of lose ends.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation. So De Silvia finally gets Don into an ambush with Don badly hurt and captured. De Silvia intends to replace him with a doppleganger in order to discover Don and Singhain's crime business details by sending the doppleganger to retrieve the info. So in the original film this is what happened..the remake which were now discussing has something different (Okay so this is really late twist in the film. Anyway Don wakes up in the hospital bed and hears their plan. He carefully waits till his doppleganger has been given all of his scars so their identical..and then switches place with him and kills him in order to fake "Don"s death. Anyway he plays along and recives the disc with all of Singhain's crime info and even starts to fall in love with Roma and vice versa in his new identity. De Silvia though puts a wrench in the plans by revealing himself to be [[EvilAllAlong Vardhaan]], kills Singhain which forces Don and Roma to go on the run. Anyway Vardhaan later loses Singhain's disc to an old enemy of his Jasjirt whose wife he murdered by burying her alive, Vardhaan kidnaps his young son and threathens to murder him unless he gets the disc (though he reveals hes going to kill them anyway). Jasjirt escapes with said Son and meets don and roma who forumlate a plan to take out Vardhaan for good. They lure him into an area for the switch between the disc and some money with the police viewing the deal and Don besting Vardhaan in a fight. Anyway Roma confesses her love for Don where on his way to the ambulance he gives her a clue to his real identity. He swapped the disc with Singhain's files with an empty one which was given to the police while he kept the original and now one of his loyal beau's picks him up. Leaving him a free man and the new king of Asia's drug trade.
Anyway onto the next film. Its been five years and Don has gotten tired of this business. He wants to retire and he wants to retire a free man. So when a European gangster named Jimmy Coogan starts to put a hit on him, he formulates a plan for revenge.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation. So De Silvia finally gets Don into an ambush with Don badly hurt and captured. De Silvia intends to replace him with a doppleganger in order to discover Don and Singhain's crime business details by sending the doppleganger to retrieve the info. So in the original film this is what happened..the remake which were now discussing has something different (Okay so this is really late twist in the film. Anyway Don wakes up in the hospital bed and hears their plan. He carefully waits till his doppleganger has been given all of his scars so their identical..and then switches place with him and kills him in order to fake "Don"s death. Anyway he plays along and recives the disc with all of Singhain's crime info and even starts to fall in love with Roma and vice versa in his new identity. De Silvia though puts a wrench in the plans by revealing himself to be [[EvilAllAlong Vardhaan]], kills Singhain which forces Don and Roma to go on the run. Anyway Vardhaan later loses Singhain's disc to an old enemy of his Jasjirt whose wife he murdered by burying her alive, Vardhaan kidnaps his young son and threathens to murder him unless he gets the disc (though he reveals hes going to kill them anyway). Jasjirt escapes with said Son and meets don and roma who forumlate a plan to take out Vardhaan for good. They lure him into an area for the switch between the disc and some money with the police viewing the deal and Don besting Vardhaan in a fight. Anyway Roma confesses her love for Don where on his way to the ambulance he gives her a clue to his real identity. He swapped the disc with Singhain's files with an empty one which was given to the police while he kept the original and now one of his loyal beau's picks him up. Leaving him a free man and the new king of Asia's drug trade.
Anyway onto the next film. Its been five years and Don has gotten tired of this business. He wants to retire and he wants to retire a free man. So when a European gangster named Jimmy Coogan starts to put a hit on him, he formulates a plan for revenge.
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The DragonInChief to Singhain and are VillainProtagonist everyone. A smiling, jovial and rising gangster and drug lord, Don has helped his boss Singhain rise up to be the top drug lord of Asia but he wants more. He wants to be the king, in the meantime the police have started a manhunt to catch him to take down his and singhain's empire. Anyway when Don discovers one of his closest men, Ramesh are going to betray him to the police, he simply charms the dude on the way out into taking his hand, before poisoning him. Anyway Ramesh's fiance Kamini desire revenge and teams up with Inspector de silvia, she seduces Don into coming into her hotel room where she takes the bullets out his guns and reveals the police are comming. So Don tries to [[CombatPragmatist shoot her]], only for it to not work...and an idea comes up. As he says to her: ''She knows the gun is empty. He knows the gun is empty. "They dont know the gun is empty''. Anyway he gags her mouth with a cloth and uses her as a hostage with the empty gun in order to escape before killing her on the way out to dispose of lose ends.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation.
Anyway new police Agent Roma (whose the sister to Ramesh) now desires revenge on Don for the two killings, she enters his organisation and impresses him that he has her fully join said organisation.
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'''Who is Victor Vale?'''
Designed as a loose mix per WordOfGod of Doctor Doom and Dexter, Vale is an aspiring university student who desires to become a doctor to assert what he wants : control over his life. Vale is weird....Vale was born with the inability to process emphaty correctly, he can understand it but feeling it is difficult. Anyway during College, Vale becomes friends with Eric "Ever" Cardale, an aspiring student and his total opposite, sensing a kinship with him. The two become close friends and along with their friend Angie start to experiment, discovering EO'S, super-powered beings created when a person experiences a literal death and are revived. Eric eventually experiments with himself and gains healing abilities, Victor becomes jealous of his friend and becomes determined to gain powers of his own, he persuades his friend Angie to help him...only for things to go wrong, leading him to pain powers which lead to her accidental death, Eric finding out by accident calls the cops on him. Victor since as I said before he cant process emphtaty knows he should feel bad for angie dying but he simply isnt able to, and this leads to Eric and him fighting and Victor shot near fatally. Victor is later apprehened by a cop named stell who deals in EO's who covers for Eric while Eric makes it much worse for Victor by lying that he was stealing his work.
Anyway while in prison, Victor desires revenge. For five years in solitary, he calmly meditates and makes sure the gaurds think hes fine using patience and calmness to transfer him to general lock up. Their he befriends a Hacker named Mitch whose life he saves and begins to experiment on the other prisoners to discover the extent of his powers. After five years has passed and hes perfected it, he and Mitch use their skills to escape, on the way out they discover a girl named Sydney whose sister Serena and her sister's boyfriend (whose Eric) had tried to kill her for being an EO with the ability to raise the dead.
Victor discovers Eric [[EvilVsEvil has become a religious serial killer in the ten years since hes been in prison who hunts EO's viewing them as imperfections from God]] and disovers hes made himself a VillainWithGoodPublicity as the city's hero to cover it. Victor begins to forumale a plan as he becomes close to Sydney who [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes he views as his adoptive daughter]]. Anyway Victor captures a cop whose one of Eric and Stell's goons and after interogating and torturing him, disovers that Serena is an EO with brainwashing powers which she uses to have the police and public worship Eric and that its unbreakable. So he simply shoots him in the head calmly and gets to work. 1st he finds files on possible EO's before fiding one that will work nicely, then he sends a message to Eric that they have a fight at midnight. In the meantime, Victor appraoches said EO (Dominic) with the ability to teleport and hide in shadows, their he charms him and offers to use his powers to take the pain he feels away if he just helps him. So Mitch is sent against Sirena to lure into a trap, they fight and she eventually uses her powers to make him try and kill himself....only for it not work.
Mitch should know; he had checked it three times to make sure. Now he watched the surprise spread across Serena’s face, watched it turn to confusion, and begin to shift into something harder, but it never made it there, because that’s when the darkness parted. The shadows behind Serena Clarke stirred and drew apart, and two men stepped into being out of nothing. Dominic stood, holding a red gas canister while Victor took a single stride up behind Serena, brought a knife to her throat, and drew it cleanly across.
There was a blossom of red, and her lips parted, but he’d cut deep, and no sound made it out.
“[[WickedCultured And Ulysses stopped up his ears against the siren’s song,]]” recited Victor, pulling the plugs from his own ears as Serena collapsed to the dirt lot, “[[BondOneLiner for it was death.]]”
“Jesus,” said Dominic, looking away. “She was just a girl.”
Victor looked down at her body. Blood was pooling beneath Serena’s face, glistening and dark. “[[VillainRespect Don’t be insulting]],” he said. “[[WorthyOpponent She was the most powerful woman in the city. Aside from Sydney, of course]].”
“About Sydney…,” said Mitch, looking down at the dead girl. From this angle she seemed smaller, and with her face turned like that, her hair caught in the collar of her coat, the resemblance was disturbing.
“What are we going to do about this?”
Dominic set the plastic gas tank on the dirt beside the body.
“Burn the body,” said Victor, closing his knife. “I don’t want Sydney seeing it. And I certainly don’t want her getting her hands on it. The last thing we need is Serena coming back to life.”
Mitch had just taken up the gas canister when a gun fired within the building, lighting up the bones of the high-rise like a camera flash.
Victor tricks eli into a fight nd it seems like Victor has Ben outgambbited as eli's healing factor means he doesn't have a scratch....while Victor is in pieces and tricks eli into killing him right in front of the police who...are no longer brainwashed and just see a totally fine person kill a person they butchered. Eli's apartment has the rest of the evidence of his murders....so he's arrested and has his entire life ruined. Victor didn't just want to kill eli. He wanted to make him suffer and see everything built come falling down. And Victor uses Sydney to resurrect him a few days later. End of Book one.
Now onto Vengeful, Anyway stuff starts to go a bit wrong. Victor has sent Dominic to the EON corporation which is charge of studying and containing EO's as a way to keep tabs on them and Eli whose a prisoner in their cells. Victor's resurrection has caused his powers to weirdly start to short circuit, leading to him seziures and dying briefly over and over again. Victor is determined that he will not go out like this and begins to experiment with various drugs and concoctions, robbing and killing douche drug dealers to gt it. He eventually realises that he needs the this was caused by an EO, so can only be fixed by an EO. He begins to hunt down EO's to test their abilities and if it doesnt work , calmly kills them for two reasons : 1) If he could find them then, then EON will too and his secret will be out 2) The stuff Eon pull on EO's is bad enough that he views a headshot as a mercy when they do get out. Though after his latest kill, he begins to feel genuine worries and doubts about the fact he's slolwy morphing to be as bad as eli.
Anyway he eventually comes to a doctor named Dumont. Victor realises that hes not an EO after all using his intelligence and knowledge of EO's. The doctor reveals EON has kidnapped his family and are using them as hostaes to draw him out, Victor escapes with Dumont (Dumont is a bit surprised that Victor didnt kill him. As Victor says. Their was no ''need'' to do it. He only kills people if he deems it neccessary). So Dumont shows him how to get out but reveals they'll hurt his family if they find out he helped him...so Victor has him "kidnapped" and leaves him tied to the wheel parked somewhere so they wont know a thing in a PetTheDog moment.
Anyway Victor is captured by Stell who reveals theyve released Eli to hunt a new SerialKiller EO named Marcella with the power to rot stuff. Anyway Dominic breaks him out and Victor decides to go after Eli. Victor knows he'll escape and Eli is his responsibility, he created him as a badguy so its his responibilty to put him down because of the sheer damage it would cause. Anyway June, a shapeshifter second-in-command of Marcella warns Victor that Marcella intends to kill Sydney. Anyway Eli engages Marcella while Victor ends up fighting her other co-dragon and force field user Johnathan. Victor knows that if he kills Johnthan it means Marcella is finished but since she threathend Sydney well.. He overloads Johnthan and Eli tricks Marcella into her own defeat.
Anyway Eli is kidapppned by an asshole mad sceintist named Hafferty, who reveals hes created a serum which cures eo abilties for a temporary period, ke kidnaps Victor and uses it on him which also cures his sezires. Eli wakes up and kills Hafferty, and duels Victor. Victor doesnt stand a chance in a fight like this since without their powers : Eli is a strong 22 year old college quarterback build while Victor is thanks to the mutiple dyings a sickly 37 year old. Though he holds his own and before Eli is going to finish him off, Sydneny kills him, saving Victor.
Victor says goodbeye as he know needs to go on thr run for now and wants to keep her and Mitch safe. He'll experiment with the forumla to try and replicate it and cure himself but before that he has Stell and leaves a Catch Me If You Can note to the Eon corportaion. And thats how we end for now. The author has said a continuition is up in the air. In essence, who knows?
'''Magnificent ?'''
Naturally. Victor is sauve, polite and just cool. Dude dresses in cool black leather outfits and owns. He has this natural swagger to him desoite his coldness and can be quite the snarker. He's very polite and reserved, rarely raising his voice, doesnt indulge in sadism or needless violence, viewing it as wasteful.
And as a planner. Victor is great. He pulls a ten year long plan to escape using patience and carful planning. Upon disovering Eli's hobbies hes able to dtermine how to totally destroy everything hes built. He's even prepared to die for his goals as hes that much of a determinater. The sequel has more issues pop up but Victor still goes through them like a champ, moving past his pain to find a solution even pulling some great moves of brilliance like figuring out how to beat Johnathan and saving Dumont.
While he comes close to losing in the end its becuase hes outmuscled rather then outwitted and even then it was after a stressful fight and without his powers. So Im willing to give him some leeway their especially as he bounces back later to declare outright
'''Bastard ? Too much?'''
Designed as a loose mix per WordOfGod of Doctor Doom and Dexter, Vale is an aspiring university student who desires to become a doctor to assert what he wants : control over his life. Vale is weird....Vale was born with the inability to process emphaty correctly, he can understand it but feeling it is difficult. Anyway during College, Vale becomes friends with Eric "Ever" Cardale, an aspiring student and his total opposite, sensing a kinship with him. The two become close friends and along with their friend Angie start to experiment, discovering EO'S, super-powered beings created when a person experiences a literal death and are revived. Eric eventually experiments with himself and gains healing abilities, Victor becomes jealous of his friend and becomes determined to gain powers of his own, he persuades his friend Angie to help him...only for things to go wrong, leading him to pain powers which lead to her accidental death, Eric finding out by accident calls the cops on him. Victor since as I said before he cant process emphtaty knows he should feel bad for angie dying but he simply isnt able to, and this leads to Eric and him fighting and Victor shot near fatally. Victor is later apprehened by a cop named stell who deals in EO's who covers for Eric while Eric makes it much worse for Victor by lying that he was stealing his work.
Anyway while in prison, Victor desires revenge. For five years in solitary, he calmly meditates and makes sure the gaurds think hes fine using patience and calmness to transfer him to general lock up. Their he befriends a Hacker named Mitch whose life he saves and begins to experiment on the other prisoners to discover the extent of his powers. After five years has passed and hes perfected it, he and Mitch use their skills to escape, on the way out they discover a girl named Sydney whose sister Serena and her sister's boyfriend (whose Eric) had tried to kill her for being an EO with the ability to raise the dead.
Victor discovers Eric [[EvilVsEvil has become a religious serial killer in the ten years since hes been in prison who hunts EO's viewing them as imperfections from God]] and disovers hes made himself a VillainWithGoodPublicity as the city's hero to cover it. Victor begins to forumale a plan as he becomes close to Sydney who [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes he views as his adoptive daughter]]. Anyway Victor captures a cop whose one of Eric and Stell's goons and after interogating and torturing him, disovers that Serena is an EO with brainwashing powers which she uses to have the police and public worship Eric and that its unbreakable. So he simply shoots him in the head calmly and gets to work. 1st he finds files on possible EO's before fiding one that will work nicely, then he sends a message to Eric that they have a fight at midnight. In the meantime, Victor appraoches said EO (Dominic) with the ability to teleport and hide in shadows, their he charms him and offers to use his powers to take the pain he feels away if he just helps him. So Mitch is sent against Sirena to lure into a trap, they fight and she eventually uses her powers to make him try and kill himself....only for it not work.
Mitch should know; he had checked it three times to make sure. Now he watched the surprise spread across Serena’s face, watched it turn to confusion, and begin to shift into something harder, but it never made it there, because that’s when the darkness parted. The shadows behind Serena Clarke stirred and drew apart, and two men stepped into being out of nothing. Dominic stood, holding a red gas canister while Victor took a single stride up behind Serena, brought a knife to her throat, and drew it cleanly across.
There was a blossom of red, and her lips parted, but he’d cut deep, and no sound made it out.
“[[WickedCultured And Ulysses stopped up his ears against the siren’s song,]]” recited Victor, pulling the plugs from his own ears as Serena collapsed to the dirt lot, “[[BondOneLiner for it was death.]]”
“Jesus,” said Dominic, looking away. “She was just a girl.”
Victor looked down at her body. Blood was pooling beneath Serena’s face, glistening and dark. “[[VillainRespect Don’t be insulting]],” he said. “[[WorthyOpponent She was the most powerful woman in the city. Aside from Sydney, of course]].”
“About Sydney…,” said Mitch, looking down at the dead girl. From this angle she seemed smaller, and with her face turned like that, her hair caught in the collar of her coat, the resemblance was disturbing.
“What are we going to do about this?”
Dominic set the plastic gas tank on the dirt beside the body.
“Burn the body,” said Victor, closing his knife. “I don’t want Sydney seeing it. And I certainly don’t want her getting her hands on it. The last thing we need is Serena coming back to life.”
Mitch had just taken up the gas canister when a gun fired within the building, lighting up the bones of the high-rise like a camera flash.
Victor tricks eli into a fight nd it seems like Victor has Ben outgambbited as eli's healing factor means he doesn't have a scratch....while Victor is in pieces and tricks eli into killing him right in front of the police who...are no longer brainwashed and just see a totally fine person kill a person they butchered. Eli's apartment has the rest of the evidence of his murders....so he's arrested and has his entire life ruined. Victor didn't just want to kill eli. He wanted to make him suffer and see everything built come falling down. And Victor uses Sydney to resurrect him a few days later. End of Book one.
Now onto Vengeful, Anyway stuff starts to go a bit wrong. Victor has sent Dominic to the EON corporation which is charge of studying and containing EO's as a way to keep tabs on them and Eli whose a prisoner in their cells. Victor's resurrection has caused his powers to weirdly start to short circuit, leading to him seziures and dying briefly over and over again. Victor is determined that he will not go out like this and begins to experiment with various drugs and concoctions, robbing and killing douche drug dealers to gt it. He eventually realises that he needs the this was caused by an EO, so can only be fixed by an EO. He begins to hunt down EO's to test their abilities and if it doesnt work , calmly kills them for two reasons : 1) If he could find them then, then EON will too and his secret will be out 2) The stuff Eon pull on EO's is bad enough that he views a headshot as a mercy when they do get out. Though after his latest kill, he begins to feel genuine worries and doubts about the fact he's slolwy morphing to be as bad as eli.
Anyway he eventually comes to a doctor named Dumont. Victor realises that hes not an EO after all using his intelligence and knowledge of EO's. The doctor reveals EON has kidnapped his family and are using them as hostaes to draw him out, Victor escapes with Dumont (Dumont is a bit surprised that Victor didnt kill him. As Victor says. Their was no ''need'' to do it. He only kills people if he deems it neccessary). So Dumont shows him how to get out but reveals they'll hurt his family if they find out he helped him...so Victor has him "kidnapped" and leaves him tied to the wheel parked somewhere so they wont know a thing in a PetTheDog moment.
Anyway Victor is captured by Stell who reveals theyve released Eli to hunt a new SerialKiller EO named Marcella with the power to rot stuff. Anyway Dominic breaks him out and Victor decides to go after Eli. Victor knows he'll escape and Eli is his responsibility, he created him as a badguy so its his responibilty to put him down because of the sheer damage it would cause. Anyway June, a shapeshifter second-in-command of Marcella warns Victor that Marcella intends to kill Sydney. Anyway Eli engages Marcella while Victor ends up fighting her other co-dragon and force field user Johnathan. Victor knows that if he kills Johnthan it means Marcella is finished but since she threathend Sydney well.. He overloads Johnthan and Eli tricks Marcella into her own defeat.
Anyway Eli is kidapppned by an asshole mad sceintist named Hafferty, who reveals hes created a serum which cures eo abilties for a temporary period, ke kidnaps Victor and uses it on him which also cures his sezires. Eli wakes up and kills Hafferty, and duels Victor. Victor doesnt stand a chance in a fight like this since without their powers : Eli is a strong 22 year old college quarterback build while Victor is thanks to the mutiple dyings a sickly 37 year old. Though he holds his own and before Eli is going to finish him off, Sydneny kills him, saving Victor.
Victor says goodbeye as he know needs to go on thr run for now and wants to keep her and Mitch safe. He'll experiment with the forumla to try and replicate it and cure himself but before that he has Stell and leaves a Catch Me If You Can note to the Eon corportaion. And thats how we end for now. The author has said a continuition is up in the air. In essence, who knows?
'''Magnificent ?'''
Naturally. Victor is sauve, polite and just cool. Dude dresses in cool black leather outfits and owns. He has this natural swagger to him desoite his coldness and can be quite the snarker. He's very polite and reserved, rarely raising his voice, doesnt indulge in sadism or needless violence, viewing it as wasteful.
And as a planner. Victor is great. He pulls a ten year long plan to escape using patience and carful planning. Upon disovering Eli's hobbies hes able to dtermine how to totally destroy everything hes built. He's even prepared to die for his goals as hes that much of a determinater. The sequel has more issues pop up but Victor still goes through them like a champ, moving past his pain to find a solution even pulling some great moves of brilliance like figuring out how to beat Johnathan and saving Dumont.
While he comes close to losing in the end its becuase hes outmuscled rather then outwitted and even then it was after a stressful fight and without his powers. So Im willing to give him some leeway their especially as he bounces back later to declare outright
'''Bastard ? Too much?'''
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“So here I am,” she said. “Giving you the last thing I have of value
and begging you to spare my daughter. Take me. Take my body. Use
me until you throw me away, but leave Korey alone. Please. Please.”
“You think you can bargain with me?” he asked. “This is some
kind of sad seduction, trading your body for your daughter’s?”
She nodded, meek and small.
“Yes.”
She sat, a long runnel of snot dangling from her nose, dripping
onto her dress. And finally, James Harris said:
“Come.”
She pushed herself up, and walked to him on shaky legs.
“Kneel,” he said, pointing to the floor.
Patricia lowered herself onto the floor at his feet. He leaned
forward and took her jaw in one big hand.
“Three years ago you tried to make a fool of me,” he said. “You
don’t get any more dignity. We’re going to finally be honest with ach other. First, I’m going to replace Carter in your life. Is that
what you want?”
She nodded, then realized he needed more. “Yes,” she whispered.
“Your son loves me already,” he said. “And your daughter belongs
to me. I’ll take you now, but she’s next. Will you do that? Will you
give me your body to buy her another year?”
“Yes,” Patricia said.
“One day it will be Blue’s turn,” he said. “But for now, I’m the
family friend who helps put your life back together after your
husband dies. Everyone will think that we just naturally felt a
powerful attraction, but you’ll know the truth: you gave up your
pathetic, miserable, broken failure of a life to accept your place at
my feet. I’m not some doctor, or lawyer, or rich mommy’s boy trying
to impress you. I am singular in this world. I am what you people
make legends from. And now I’ve turned my attention on you.
When I’m done, I’ll adopt your children and make them mine. But
you’ve bought them one more year of freedom. Do you
understand?”
and begging you to spare my daughter. Take me. Take my body. Use
me until you throw me away, but leave Korey alone. Please. Please.”
“You think you can bargain with me?” he asked. “This is some
kind of sad seduction, trading your body for your daughter’s?”
She nodded, meek and small.
“Yes.”
She sat, a long runnel of snot dangling from her nose, dripping
onto her dress. And finally, James Harris said:
“Come.”
She pushed herself up, and walked to him on shaky legs.
“Kneel,” he said, pointing to the floor.
Patricia lowered herself onto the floor at his feet. He leaned
forward and took her jaw in one big hand.
“Three years ago you tried to make a fool of me,” he said. “You
don’t get any more dignity. We’re going to finally be honest with ach other. First, I’m going to replace Carter in your life. Is that
what you want?”
She nodded, then realized he needed more. “Yes,” she whispered.
“Your son loves me already,” he said. “And your daughter belongs
to me. I’ll take you now, but she’s next. Will you do that? Will you
give me your body to buy her another year?”
“Yes,” Patricia said.
“One day it will be Blue’s turn,” he said. “But for now, I’m the
family friend who helps put your life back together after your
husband dies. Everyone will think that we just naturally felt a
powerful attraction, but you’ll know the truth: you gave up your
pathetic, miserable, broken failure of a life to accept your place at
my feet. I’m not some doctor, or lawyer, or rich mommy’s boy trying
to impress you. I am singular in this world. I am what you people
make legends from. And now I’ve turned my attention on you.
When I’m done, I’ll adopt your children and make them mine. But
you’ve bought them one more year of freedom. Do you
understand?”
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Anyway Scraggs got us started with the first example from A secret guide to fighting elder gods. Here's the second. This example comes from the story "Away Game" by Creator/SeananMcGuire
'''Who is Coach Harrison ?'''
Harrison is a leading member of a cult which worships Shub-Niggurath. The cult masquerades as a school called Morton High with has a football team called the black goats. Anyway Harrison weasels her way into a rival school with a cheer leading team known as the pumpkins. Convincing them to follow her to Morton, theri she intends to have the entire gang of teengers consisting of the cheer squad and football team sacrified to her boss.
'''Who is Coach Harrison ?'''
Harrison is a leading member of a cult which worships Shub-Niggurath. The cult masquerades as a school called Morton High with has a football team called the black goats. Anyway Harrison weasels her way into a rival school with a cheer leading team known as the pumpkins. Convincing them to follow her to Morton, theri she intends to have the entire gang of teengers consisting of the cheer squad and football team sacrified to her boss.
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So this is a new Holmes ones. I had two cases that didn't pan out due to mitigating stuff . A shame since one of them was a really unique case of AdaptationalVillainy.
AnywayScraggs got us started I dealt with the first example further asscociates of Sherlock holmes. Which are short stories told from A secret guide to fighting elder gods. Here's the second. This example comes from perspective of various characters in the holmes Canon. However that book is a sequel. So let's discuss the original.
From the associates of Sherlock holmes. And the story"Away Game" by Creator/SeananMcGuire
"Peeler" by
Nick Kyme
'''Who isCoach Harrison The peeler ?'''
Harrison A SerialKiller who rivals Jack the ripper himself in Infamy. His handiwork is first discovered by Lestrade who comes across a leading member body of a cult which worships Shub-Niggurath. The cult masquerades as a school called Morton High with man named Jeremiah Goose whose been killed and literally has had face peeled off by his attacker. Another murder takes place and a football team called witness , terrified out of her mind , says the black goats. Anyway Harrison weasels her way into victim was a rival school with a cheer leading team known as the pumpkins. Convincing them to follow her to Morton, theri she intends to have the entire gang of teengers consisting of the cheer squad and football team sacrified to her boss.
peeler (policeman). Soon four victims are dead.
Anyway
From the associates of Sherlock holmes. And the story
Nick Kyme
'''Who is
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Now as promised. Selina Kyle from the ya book Literature/CatwomanSoulstealer
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'''Who is Coach Harrison ?'''
Harrison is a leading member of a cult which worships Shub-Niggurath. The cult masquerades as a school called Morton High with has a football team called the black goats. Anyway Harrison weasels her way into a rival school with a cheer leading team known as the pumpkins. Convincing them to follow her to Morton, theri she intends to have the entire gang of teengers consisting of the cheer squad and football team sacrified to her boss.
Anyway a group of cheerleaders
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Now. From one I'm looking forward to.
'''Who is Dr Hieronymus Mabuse/ Dr Johann Faustus ?'''
Mabuse is envisioned here as Faustus of Christopher Marlow fame. After being dragged to hell, he made convinced devil that if he were to release him, he would use his intelligence and would act his emissary. Like how Jesus was to God, he would be to the devil and outlined his plan to him. Faust was rendered immortal and set to work.
Now centuries have passed, and Faustus under the alias of Mabuse has befriended Holmes acting as his Watson. Mabuse wants to being down Moroiarty in order to consolidate his empire. So figured the best way was to befriend Holmes and act as his friend, manipulating him into helping dismantle Moriarty's empire.
'''Who is Dr Hieronymus Mabuse/ Dr Johann Faustus ?'''
Mabuse is envisioned here as Faustus of Christopher Marlow fame. After being dragged to hell, he made convinced devil that if he were to release him, he would use his intelligence and would act his emissary. Like how Jesus was to God, he would be to the devil and outlined his plan to him. Faust was rendered immortal and set to work.
Now centuries have passed, and Faustus under the alias of Mabuse has befriended Holmes acting as his Watson. Mabuse wants to being down Moroiarty in order to consolidate his empire. So figured the best way was to befriend Holmes and act as his friend, manipulating him into helping dismantle Moriarty's empire.
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Anyway next appearnce, season 4's finale "One of Us", Riaz has one of his men booby trap a crime scence with a grenade, blowing up minor recurring character Officer Jessup in order to spite Caine who hes gained a rivalry with. Caine confronts Riaz on the phone with Riaz revealing he intends to rain fireball over Miami and taunts him to stop him. Riaz has gotten a rocket launcher from an arms dealer and now plans to blow up a commercial plane, killing what would be hundreds. Delko and Caine stop him by shooting him in the knee as hes on the floor, he tells Caine that if he doesnt kill him right now, he'll dedicate himself to hurting him even more. Caine shows him mercy and hands him over to the police. Where Riaz turns states defendant and gives them information on other terrorist organisations, in return for them letting him go back to Brazil. Delko and Caine follow.
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Anyway next appearnce, season 4's finale "One of Us", Riaz has one of his men booby trap a crime scence with a grenade, blowing up minor recurring character Officer Jessup in order to spite Caine who hes gained a rivalry with. Caine confronts Riaz on the phone with Riaz revealing he intends to rain fireball over Miami and taunts him to stop him. Riaz has gotten a rocket launcher from an arms dealer and now plans to blow up a commercial plane, killing what would be hundreds. Delko and Caine stop him by shooting him in the knee as hes on the floor, he tells Caine that if he doesnt doesn't kill him right now, he'll dedicate himself to hurting him even more. Caine shows him mercy and hands him over to the police. Where Riaz turns states defendant and gives them information on other terrorist organisations, in return for them letting him go back to Brazil. Delko and Caine follow. \n\n\n\n
In Season 5's premiere "Rio", Riaz flaunts his newfound freedom into Caine's face. Riaz has taken Caine's brother Raymond and his nephew Raymond Jr. and added them to his cartel in the favelos. Riaz is forcing teenage boys and having them ingest heroine pellets in order to smuggle it into the us. A few have died as a result, not that he cares. Anyway now that Caine is in Rio, he hits his grand spiteful revenge against Caine (He did say he'd make him suffer if he didn't kill him then...). He forces Raymond Jr. into being one of his mules by threatening his father...only to then beat him to death anyway and not inform the boy. Hanging his father's life over the boy when hes already dead. Caine and Delko chase him to find Ray Jr. and eventually duel Riaz in a knife fight where Caine kills him, ending him for good.
'''FreudianExcuse ?'''
That's a no.
'''Mitigating factors?'''
Nah he doesnt care about his men. He only broke out Rafeal since he needed him for the big shipment and when hes recaptured doesnt even react. The two have a purely business relationship and barely interact. When his men are killed or arrested, dude doesnt even care.
He's a stone-cold spiteful sociopath.
'''Heinous standard?''
One of the verse' all time worst. Mala Noche as awhole are pretty vile but off them, Riaz is the worst by a long mile. Attempted mass murderer of hundreds, uses teenage boys as his drug mules even if they die as well as the pure spiteful personal villany he unleashes. Killing Caine's wife out of spite, rigging a crime scence just so one of of his men die, turning caine's brother and nephew into his patsys and then beating caine's brother to death and using that to manipulate his nephew. All while hes already dead. He's one of the most personal villains in the entire franchise.
In Season 5's premiere "Rio", Riaz flaunts his newfound freedom into Caine's face. Riaz has taken Caine's brother Raymond and his nephew Raymond Jr. and added them to his cartel in the favelos. Riaz is forcing teenage boys and having them ingest heroine pellets in order to smuggle it into the us. A few have died as a result, not that he cares. Anyway now that Caine is in Rio, he hits his grand spiteful revenge against Caine (He did say he'd make him suffer if he didn't kill him then...). He forces Raymond Jr. into being one of his mules by threatening his father...only to then beat him to death anyway and not inform the boy. Hanging his father's life over the boy when hes already dead. Caine and Delko chase him to find Ray Jr. and eventually duel Riaz in a knife fight where Caine kills him, ending him for good.
'''FreudianExcuse ?'''
That's a no.
'''Mitigating factors?'''
Nah he doesnt care about his men. He only broke out Rafeal since he needed him for the big shipment and when hes recaptured doesnt even react. The two have a purely business relationship and barely interact. When his men are killed or arrested, dude doesnt even care.
He's a stone-cold spiteful sociopath.
'''Heinous standard?''
One of the verse' all time worst. Mala Noche as awhole are pretty vile but off them, Riaz is the worst by a long mile. Attempted mass murderer of hundreds, uses teenage boys as his drug mules even if they die as well as the pure spiteful personal villany he unleashes. Killing Caine's wife out of spite, rigging a crime scence just so one of of his men die, turning caine's brother and nephew into his patsys and then beating caine's brother to death and using that to manipulate his nephew. All while hes already dead. He's one of the most personal villains in the entire franchise.
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'''Who is Goodman Grey?'''
Grey is a Scion (Half-human Hybrid) who is half human human / half skinwalker. A sauve, relaxed and dapper gentleman, he works as a mercenary, hit-man and SerialKillerKiller as head of the organization Monsters LLC. A self-proclaimed "professional monster".
Anyway Harry's ArchEnemy Nicodemus Acherlone has made a deal with Queen Mab (more will come on that on a later date and a different ep) to team up in order to rob the underworld Vault (or so he thinks. In reality shes backstabbing him as punishment for the grievous things he did to her and Macrone a few books back). So they assemble a team with Dresden picking members (choosing his friends Michael and Anna Valmont) and Nick picking his: Nick gets Grey. Introduced a calm, dapper gentleman who wears his confidence on his sleeves, Grey is able to trade quips with even Harry himself.
Anyway they set off to prepare for the heist, they need funds so plan to impersonate Harvey Morrison, a finfical adviser in Chicago to gain access to the vault of gentleman Macrone which leads to the underworld vaultccvlb . Grey was planning to simply kill him and then use his DNA to shapeshift into him for the heist but Harry insisted they didnt kill anyone. Grey agrees to it becuase as he says he has no problem with killing for professional reasons but no need to do it when ding it would be stupid. So him, Harry and Nick's daughter/lover head off to instead kidnap him. Anyway they run into Nick's ex-wife and psychopath Tessa (she's the actual mastermind behind the Cambodian and Rwandan genocide btw...) who Grey distracts by shapeshifting into Nick while Harry saves Harvey. Tessa sends her ghouls after them and just when it seems harry and harvey are surrounded, grey in an act of quick thinking, switches with Harvey in the fog so that the ghouls go for Harry first rather then what seems like a whimpering Harvey...only for said Harvey to reveal himself as Grey and rip them to pieces. Grey had knocked out Harvey and dumped him in the back, unfortunately Tessa killed him but Grey just shrugs it off. So they change the tactis, one of the advantages of not killing Harvey was so no one realizes hes gone missing and alert people to the heist. So grey instead volunteers to impersonate him for the weekend as he tells Harry, hes just that good.
Anyway they enter the vault with Grey using his disguise to allow them into the underworld vault, Nick has Grey take and his goon genoshka take them hostage while he kills his daughter dierdie, needing her resultant ghost in order to cross the next barrier into the underworld. Harry is able to get Nick to break his pact with Mab by playing to his emotions after he killed his only child now and causes him to freak out and order them dead. Their Nick sends Grey to dispose of valmont, a friend of Harry outside and he returns with an apparent bloody backpack of hers, which shows shes now supposedly dead. And just at the right moment, Grey and Harry pull their deal. They'd secretly teamed up and planned to defeat nick after his inevitable backstab, having been secrelty communicating with each other this entire time having been planted to fool Nick into thinking who he was hiring would help him rather then Harry. Grey had taken valmont to safety, with help from Grey their able to defeat Nick and his goons, Nick realizes though that Harry is a father himself due to the emotion he gave through that breaking speech and heads off to Michael's house to murder her and Michael's family who shes staying with.
All of them race to save them and fend off and defeat Nick and Tessa who are sent on the run where they'll come back in book 20. Grey poltiely asks for money in order to pay his rent as well as a boon (one dollar) and heads off to his business.
Now we learn more about Grey in the short story, "Monsters". Grey is a SerialKillerKiller in the style of Dexter, having decided that since he was born a skinwalker monster and having been abused as a child by his father, he would prey on other monsters. Grey for a price of a dollar, hunts down and kills various murderers, scoundrels and other. Having founded Monsters LLC, he along with his secretary Viti now rain hell down on criminials. Anyway Macrone has had issues, his latest business venture has gone bad as his clients have broken his one rule (never hurt a child) and are trafficking children in Chicago. He needs to have the ones in Chicago eliminated but didn't want to go to Harry since he knew harry's lack of subtlety would blow things up, so goes to Grey. Grey has viti shut down the lights for the brothel and then shape shift into somone the guard knows before crushing the dudes skull when he lets him in. He then rescues two of the kids and takes out more of the gaurds but one goes to where the main kids are and through the moniter threatens to burn them alive if he doesnt leave. Grey preys on his emotions by egging him on to increase his voice to figure out where he is, before finding and ripping him to pieces and saves the children. Though he decides to uh make it more complete by going to the moniter containg the client files for this brothel. Grey tracks down every client of the brothel and kills them before heading off to Macrone. Ooh this to good. Ill show it to you :
There were six pictures: Three high powered attorneys,
one corporate executive, a city councilman and a notorious
religious-political activist. Each picture was identical: a
look-down at a dead body with small, neat bullet holes in the
temples. On the chest of each body was a computer printed
photograph of the deceased, engaged in acts of brutality with
one of the children.
Marcone studied the pictures for a long moment. His
expression never changed. Then he picked up the phone
again.
“Where did you get the pictures?”
“Surveillance feed at the brothel,
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'''Who is
Grey
The man with the greatest claim to being Horatio Caine's ArchEnemy, Riaz is
Before his first appearnce, Riaz under an alias befriended Caine's wife Marisol (whose also Eric delko's sister) during her cancer treatments. Using her to sell his supply to the sick patients for profit as well as gaining information about the police.
Debuting in season 4's penultimate episode "Rampage", Riaz appears to turn states evidence against a Mala Noche member who was captured in a previous episode named Rafeal. Instead when Riaz is given the empty gun , he tosses it to a waiting noche member with bullets who shoots up the courtroom while he and rafeal escape. Riaz needed him for his latest job, intending a very large shipment of heroin into the usa. Anyway
Anyway next appearnce, season 4's finale "One of Us", Riaz has one of his men booby trap a
Anyway they set off to prepare for the heist, they need funds so plan to impersonate Harvey Morrison,
Anyway they enter the vault with Grey using his disguise to allow them into the underworld vault, Nick has Grey take and his goon genoshka take them hostage while he kills his daughter dierdie, needing her resultant ghost in order to cross the next barrier into the underworld. Harry is able to get Nick to break his pact with Mab by playing to his emotions after he killed his only child now and causes him to freak out and order them dead. Their Nick sends Grey to dispose of valmont, a friend of Harry outside and he returns with an apparent bloody backpack of hers, which shows shes now supposedly dead. And just at the right moment, Grey and Harry pull their deal. They'd secretly teamed up and planned to defeat nick after his inevitable backstab, having been secrelty communicating with each other this entire time having been planted to fool Nick into thinking who he was hiring would help him rather then Harry. Grey had taken valmont to safety, with help from Grey their able to defeat Nick and his goons, Nick realizes though that Harry is a father himself due to the emotion he gave through that breaking speech and heads off to Michael's house to murder her and Michael's family who shes staying with.
All of them race to save them and fend off and defeat Nick and Tessa who are sent on the run where they'll come back in book 20. Grey poltiely asks for money in order to pay his rent as well as a boon (one dollar) and heads off to his business.
Now we learn more about Grey in the short story, "Monsters". Grey is a SerialKillerKiller in the style of Dexter, having decided that since he was born a skinwalker monster and having been abused as a child by his father, he would prey on other monsters. Grey for a price of a dollar, hunts down and kills various murderers, scoundrels and other. Having founded Monsters LLC, he along with his secretary Viti now rain hell down on criminials. Anyway Macrone has had issues, his latest business venture has gone bad as his clients have broken his one rule (never hurt a child) and are trafficking children in Chicago. He needs to have the ones in Chicago eliminated but didn't want to go to Harry since he knew harry's lack of subtlety would blow things up, so goes to Grey. Grey has viti shut down the lights for the brothel and then shape shift into somone the guard knows before crushing the dudes skull when he lets him in. He then rescues two of the kids and takes out more of the gaurds but one goes to where the main kids are and through the moniter threatens to burn them alive
”
“I killed every
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to
“You did it to
There were six pictures: Three high powered attorneys,
one corporate executive, a city councilman and a notorious
religious-political activist. Each picture was identical: a
look-down at a dead body with small, neat bullet holes in
” I said. “I did that because the
photograph of the deceased, engaged in acts of brutality with
one of the children.
Marcone studied the pictures for a long moment. His
expression never changed. Then he picked up the phone
again.
“Where did you get the pictures?”
“Surveillance feed at the brothel,
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
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“Those people were assets.”
“Those people were a market base waiting for a
supplier,
” I said. “As long as they were around, you’d have
this problem again and again.”
Marcone’s face was stony. After a few beats he said,
“This
could be considered an attack upon my interests, Mr. Grey.”
I peered at him for a second, and then I chuckled. “Hah.
You didn’t know they were pedophiles, did you? Or they
wouldn’t have been working for you in the first place.”
“Yet they were mine. Their loss represents considerable effort that must be reinvested.
"I suggest you look at this as. Half-glass full", I replied, "You didn't lose anthing but liabilities. Your rivals had already compromised them with the photographs, Prpbblay what they had in mind all along. I just saved you years of
headaches and information leaks.”
“You are playing with fire, Mr. Grey.”
“Nobody should do that,
” I said. “That omelet looks
tasty. But grapefruit juice?”
Marcone’s face went blank. His eyes swept up and down
the street.
“See you around, Baron,
” I drawled.
”
“I killed every member of my graduating class,
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
” I said.
“Those people were a market base waiting for a
supplier,
” I said. “As long as they were around, you’d have
this problem again and again.”
Marcone’s face was stony. After a few beats he said,
“This
could be considered an attack upon my interests, Mr. Grey.”
I peered at him for a second, and then I chuckled. “Hah.
You didn’t know they were pedophiles, did you? Or they
wouldn’t have been working for you in the first place.”
“Yet they were mine. Their loss represents considerable effort that must be reinvested.
"I suggest you look at this as. Half-glass full", I replied, "You didn't lose anthing but liabilities. Your rivals had already compromised them with the photographs, Prpbblay what they had in mind all along. I just saved you years of
headaches and information leaks.”
“You are playing with fire, Mr. Grey.”
“Nobody should do that,
” I said. “That omelet looks
tasty. But grapefruit juice?”
Marcone’s face went blank. His eyes swept up and down
the street.
“See you around, Baron,
” I drawled.
”
“I killed every member of my graduating class,
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
” I said.
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”
“I killed every member of my graduating class,
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
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one corporate executive, a city councilman and a notorious
religious-political activist. Each picture was identical: a
look-down at a dead body with small, neat bullet holes in the
temples. On the chest of
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched
photograph of the deceased, engaged in acts of brutality with
one of the children.
Marcone studied the pictures for a long moment. His
expression never changed. Then he picked up the phone
again.
“Where did you
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
“Surveillance feed at the brothel,
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“Those people were assets.”
“Those people were a market base waiting for a
supplier,
” I said. “As long as they were around, you’d have
this problem again and again.”
Marcone’s face was stony. After a few beats he said,
“This
could be considered an attack upon my interests, Mr. Grey.”
I peered at him for a second, and then I chuckled. “Hah.
You didn’t know they were pedophiles, did you? Or they
wouldn’t have been working for you in the first place.”
“Yet they were mine. Their loss represents considerable effort that must be reinvested.
"I suggest you look at this as. Half-glass full", I replied, "You didn't lose anthing but liabilities. Your rivals had already compromised them with the photographs, Prpbblay what they had in mind all along. I just saved you years of
headaches and information leaks.”
“You are playing with fire, Mr. Grey.”
“Nobody should do that,
” I said. “That omelet looks
tasty. But grapefruit juice?”
Marcone’s face went blank. His eyes swept up and down
the street.
“See you around, Baron,
” I drawled.
”
“I killed every member of my graduating class,
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
” I said.
“Those people were a market base waiting for a
supplier,
” I said. “As long as they were around, you’d have
this problem again and again.”
Marcone’s face was stony. After a few beats he said,
“This
could be considered an attack upon my interests, Mr. Grey.”
I peered at him for a second, and then I chuckled. “Hah.
You didn’t know they were pedophiles, did you? Or they
wouldn’t have been working for you in the first place.”
“Yet they were mine. Their loss represents considerable effort that must be reinvested.
"I suggest you look at this as. Half-glass full", I replied, "You didn't lose anthing but liabilities. Your rivals had already compromised them with the photographs, Prpbblay what they had in mind all along. I just saved you years of
headaches and information leaks.”
“You are playing with fire, Mr. Grey.”
“Nobody should do that,
” I said. “That omelet looks
tasty. But grapefruit juice?”
Marcone’s face went blank. His eyes swept up and down
the street.
“See you around, Baron,
” I drawled.
”
“I killed every member of my graduating class,
” Viti said
absently, tapping away. “I once watched you torture a man
to death.”
“You did it to survive,
” I said. “I did that because the
bastard had earned it. What’s your point?”
“Are we not bad guys?”
“We are not bad guys,
” I said.
