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** In ''Into the Wild'', Dawncloud is an older [=ShadowClan=] queen who helps rebel against Brokenstar, and is an old friend of Yellowfang, and has lost two of her kits due to Brokenstar's actions against [=WindClan=]. In this book, she's still an apprentice named Dawnpaw when Yellowfang is exiled, too young to have kits (especially due to being apprenticed early), and doesn't side with Yellowfang when she is accused of murdering Brightflower's kits.
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* Hypocrite: After Foxheart's death, Raggedstar makes Cloudpelt the new deputy, despite Brokentail's anger. When his son confronts him, he claims he cannot show favoritism and that Brokentail hasn't had an apprentice yet. While the latter is true, Cloudpelt was Raggedstar's own apprentice, and he also promises Brokentail, despite the above points, that if anything happens to Cloudpelt he'd be deputy next.
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: After Foxheart's death, Raggedstar makes Cloudpelt the new deputy, despite Brokentail's anger. When his son confronts him, he claims he cannot show favoritism and that Brokentail hasn't had an apprentice yet. While the latter is true, Cloudpelt was Raggedstar's own apprentice, and he also promises Brokentail, despite the above points, that if anything happens to Cloudpelt he'd be deputy next.
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* Hypocrite: After Foxheart's death, Raggedstar makes Cloudpelt the new deputy, despite Brokentail's anger. When his son confronts him, he claims he cannot show favoritism and that Brokentail hasn't had an apprentice yet. While the latter is true, Cloudpelt was Raggedstar's own apprentice, and he also promises Brokentail, despite the above points, that if anything happens to Cloudpelt he'd be deputy next.
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* NamedAfterTheInjury: Everyone assumes that Brokenkit got his name from the broken bend in his tail. (In reality, Yellowfang chose it for the feelings she had while giving him up.)
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* OffingTheOffspring: Hinted at by Sagewhisker as an option ("if the kits... are going to live...") when they're discussing the fact that Yellowfang is pregnant. Yellowfang is horrified at the thought of killing her own kits.
* OriginsEpisode: This book serves asYellowfang's.Yellowfang's, and Brokenstar's to an extent.
* OriginsEpisode: This book serves as
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: When Sagewhisker points out to Yellowfang that she's feeling other cats' pain, Yellowfang's reaction is to protest that she doesn't want to be different, she just wants to be a warrior.
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* MixedAncestry: Raggedpelt and Scorchwind are half-[=ShadowClan=] and half-kittypet; their mother Featherstorm is a [=ShadowClan=] warrior while their father Hal is a kittypet.
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* UnfortunateNames: Foxheart (ItMakesSenseInContext for it to be unfortunate, as "fox-heart" is a feline term meaning treacherous and cowardly), Runningnose (for his cold that he cannot cure).
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* UnfortunateNames: Foxheart (ItMakesSenseInContext for it to be unfortunate, as "fox-heart" Foxheart--"fox-heart" is a feline term meaning treacherous and cowardly), cowardly, and Runningnose (for his cold that he cannot cure).
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* DeathOfAChild: Mosspaw, Volepaw, and Badgerpaw die at the age of three moons because they were too young to fight. Mintkit and Marigoldkit, only a quarter moon old, are also found ded, their deaths blamed on Yellowfang.
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* DeathOfAChild: Mosspaw, Volepaw, and Badgerpaw die at the age of three moons because they were too young to fight. Mintkit and Marigoldkit, only a quarter moon old, are also found ded, dead, their deaths blamed on Yellowfang.
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* DoctorsOrders: How Yellowfang gets Raggedpelt to accept treatment at one point. "I'm a medicine cat now. You have to listen to me, nad you ''will'' have a drink."
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* DoctorsOrders: How Yellowfang gets Raggedpelt to accept treatment at one point. "I'm a medicine cat now. You have to listen to me, nad and you ''will'' have a drink."
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* ADogNamedCat: One of the Twolegplace cats is named Jay.
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* FamousLastWords: Cedarstar: "My last life! [=StarClan=] is calling me. Raggedpelt, lead my Clan well."
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* DiesWideOpen: Raggedstar, Mosspaw, and Badgerpaw all die with their eyes open.
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* DiesWideOpen: Cedarstar, Raggedstar, Mosspaw, and Badgerpaw all die with their eyes open.
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* ScaryStingingSwarm: Nightpelt remembers a time when he was an apprentice out with Flintpaw and Clawpaw: Flintpaw accidentally ran into a wasp nest, resulting in the three of them getting badly stung.
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** A [=WindClan=] patrol including Talltail and Shrewpaw attacks [=ShadowClan=]'s patrol while Yellowfang is a young warrior. In ''Tallstar's Revenge'', Talltail and Shrewclaw became warriors at the same time. Also,in ''Yellowfang's Secret'', Barkpaw of [=WindClan=] doesn't become an apprentice until after Yellowfang's son Brokenpaw is an apprentice, but in ''Talltsar's Revenge'' Barkface is Shrewclaw's littermate and older than Yellowfang.
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** A [=WindClan=] patrol including Talltail and Shrewpaw attacks [=ShadowClan=]'s patrol while Yellowfang is a young warrior. In ''Tallstar's Revenge'', Talltail and Shrewclaw became warriors at the same time. Also,in ''Yellowfang's Secret'', Barkpaw of [=WindClan=] doesn't become an apprentice until after Yellowfang's son Brokenpaw is an apprentice, but in ''Talltsar's ''Tallstar's Revenge'' Barkface is Shrewclaw's littermate and older than Yellowfang.
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** In ''Bluestar's Prophecy'', when Brokenpaw got into a fight at the Gathering, the other two apprentices were from [=RiverClan=]. In this book, they're from [=WindClan=].
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* BadDreams: Yellowfang has frequent nightmares about blood and death, especially once Brokenstar becomes leader.
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* WrongLineOfWork: Yellowfang became a warrior at first, but when her ability to feel others' pain constantly hindered her in battle, it became clear that it would be difficult for her to be a warrior, but her ability would be very useful for a potential medicine cat.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: "Ambition" is generally used with negative connotations in this book; it's used to describe Lizardstripe and Foxheart, who are both antagonistic to Yellowfang. Later Yellowfang thinks that Brokentail is ambitious after he tells her to let Cloudpelt die so that he can become deputy, and tries to tell herself that he didn't mean for Cloudpelt to be injured and that ambition is a good thing in a warrior, but by the end of the book swears vengeance for the cats Brokentail destroyed with his ambition.
* AttackTheTail: During her fight with Firepaw, Yellowfang sinks her teeth into his tail.
* BadDreams: Yellowfang has frequent nightmares about blood and death, especially once Brokenstar becomes leader.
** One of Featherstorm's kits changes from Molekit on the page he was introduced, to Mosskit later in the book.
** Stonetooth gives Brokenstar one of his nine lives... and then dies a few moons ''afterward''.
** Stonetooth gives Brokenstar one of his nine lives... and then dies a few moons ''afterward''.
* DeathOfAChild: Mosspaw, Volepaw, and Badgerpaw die at the age of three moons because they were too young to fight. Mintkit and Marigoldkit, only a quarter moon old, are also found ded, their deaths blamed on Yellowfang.
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* DoctorsOrders: How Yellowfang gets Raggedpelt to accept treatment at one poing. "I'm a medicine cat now. You have to listen to me, nad you ''will'' have a drink."
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* DiesWideOpen: Raggedstar, Mosspaw, and Badgerpaw all die with their eyes open.
* DoctorsOrders: How Yellowfang gets Raggedpelt to accept treatment at onepoing.point. "I'm a medicine cat now. You have to listen to me, nad you ''will'' have a drink."
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* GrayRainOfDepression: When Brightflower's kits are found dead, the sky is gray and looking rainy, and then once Yellowfang is exiled and collapses exhausted outside [=ShadowClan=]'s territory it actually does begin to rain.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Raggedpelt blames himself when they lose the battle against the rats, because it was his idea.
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* ItsAllMyFault: ItsAllMyFault:
** Raggedpelt blames himself when they lose the battle against the rats, because it was hisidea.idea.
** Yellowfang feels guilt for not being able to save Mintkit and Marigoldkit.
** Raggedpelt blames himself when they lose the battle against the rats, because it was his
** Yellowfang feels guilt for not being able to save Mintkit and Marigoldkit.
* KilledOffForReal: When Brokentail reports that [=WindClan=] killed Raggedstar, Yellowfang thinks at first that perhaps he'd mistaken losing a life for true death, but then she realizes that Raggedstar's wounds were bad enough to make him lose all of his lives at once.
* MeaningfulName: Badgerkit is named for the way his face is striped like a badger's.
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* NotHisBlood: After the battle with the rats, Yellowfang notices that Brokentail's covered in blood, but determines that it all belonged to the rats.
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** After the battle with the rats, Yellowfang notices that Brokentail's covered in blood, but determines that it all belonged to therats.rats.
** Yellowfang, upon finding her tiny siblings' bodies, curls around them and licks them, hoping that they'll live. When they return to camp, Runningnose thinks Yellowfang is hurt until she explains that it's the kits' blood.
** After the battle with the rats, Yellowfang notices that Brokentail's covered in blood, but determines that it all belonged to the
** Yellowfang, upon finding her tiny siblings' bodies, curls around them and licks them, hoping that they'll live. When they return to camp, Runningnose thinks Yellowfang is hurt until she explains that it's the kits' blood.
* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Yellowfang challenges [=StarClan=] for allowing Brokenstar to become leader and lead the Clan into ruin; she eventually refuses to even go to the Moonstone at the half moon.
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** How the rats killFoxheart.Foxheart.
** This is also how the next deputy Cloudpelt dies, in a border skirmish with [=WindClan=].
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** This is also how the next deputy Cloudpelt dies, in a border skirmish with [=WindClan=].
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* StoppedCaring: After her exile, Yellowfang doesn't care whether she lives or dies.
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* WarHawk: Raggedstar eventually realizes that Brokentail wants to do nothing but lead [=ShadowClan=] into battle.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Yellowfang thinks this of her daughter, who died as a kit, when she gives Brokenstar one of his nine lives.
* YouCantFightFate: Silverflame tells Yellowfang that knowing something is going to happen doesn't mean they have the power to change it.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Yellowfang thinks this of her daughter, who died as a kit, when she gives Brokenstar one of his nine lives.
* YouCantFightFate: Silverflame tells Yellowfang that knowing something is going to happen doesn't mean they have the power to change it.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: At Brokentail's warrior ceremony, Archeye mutters "What's next? Kit warriors?" Guess what happens when Brokentail becomes leader.
