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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some ''[[AlienLunch gagh]]'' in the Klingon Bird of Prey. One can only hope [[NauseaFuel it was well-preserved...]]
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some ''[[AlienLunch ''[[WeirdWorldWeirdFood gagh]]'' in the Klingon Bird of Prey. One can only hope [[NauseaFuel it was well-preserved...]]
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* HyperspeedEscape: The ''Protostar'' jumps to warp to escape the Diviner. {{Subverted}} when the Diviner pulls a HyperspeedAmbush to catch up -- and then DoubleSubverted UpToEleven when the ''Protostar'' jumps to [[LudicrousSpeed protowarp]] and escapes.
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* HyperspeedEscape: The ''Protostar'' jumps to warp to escape the Diviner. {{Subverted}} when the Diviner pulls a HyperspeedAmbush to catch up -- and then DoubleSubverted UpToEleven up to eleven when the ''Protostar'' jumps to [[LudicrousSpeed protowarp]] and escapes.
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* ManBitesMan: It's a ManEatingPlant but it is sentient, so the Diviner biting it in order to escape it's grip counts
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* ManBitesMan: It's a ManEatingPlant but it is sentient, so the Diviner biting it in order to escape it's its grip countscounts.
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The crew make their way back to the ''Protostar'', but the planet won't let them go without a fight.
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The crew make their way back struggle to reach the ''Protostar'', but the planet their pursuer won't let them go without a fight.
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* ManBitesMan: It's a ManEatingPlant but it is sentient, so the Diviner biting it in order to escape it's grip counts
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* DeathWorld: Jankom decides that "Murder Planet" is an appropriate name for this world. Dal ends up agreeing.
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* AccidentalHero: Done twice by the vines.
** First time, they snatch Drednok [[VillainousRescue just as he is about to shoot Dal]].
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
** First time, they snatch Drednok [[VillainousRescue just as he is about to shoot Dal]].
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
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* VillainousRescue: Drednok comes within moments of blasting Dal, but the vines grab him just before he can fire.
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* VillainousRescue: Done twice by the vines.
** First time, they snatch Drednokcomes within moments of blasting Dal, but the vines grab him just before as he can fire.is about to shoot Dal.
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
** First time, they snatch Drednok
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
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* AmbiguousSyntax: When the ''Protostar'' escapes with Gwyn on board, the Diviner laments "She's gone." Does "she" refer to Gwyn or the ''Protostar''? (Especially as the Diviner had minutes earlier chosen the ship over his own daughter.)
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* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: When Gwyn calls for help from the Diviner, she calls him "Father" instead of "Our Diviner". Not that doing so gets him to rescue her.
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* GunsAkimbo: Dal wields two phasers against the vine monster (after taking one from Zero, whose aim is less than reliable).
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Dal, when the planet destroys their vehicle to make it harder for them to reach the ''Protostar''.
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* ChekhovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.
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* ChekhovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.''Protostar'', only to realize too late it's just a large vine construct.
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* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather. Zero points out that they could ask the planet its name, only to get shut down when they learn it's not interested in communicating beyond eating everyone.
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* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather. Zero points out that they could ask the planet its name, name and tries to contact it through telepathy, only to get shut down when they learn it's not interested in communicating beyond eating everyone.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Hologram Janeway asks herself what the real Janeway would do, and decides to clean the vines off of the ship.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Hologram Janeway asks herself what the real Janeway would do, and given her limited options, then decides to deploy the ship's hull cleaning droids to clean the vines off of the ship.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some ''[[AlienLunch gagh]]'' in the Klingon Bird of Prey. One can only hope [[NauseaFuel it was well-preserved]] ...
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some ''[[AlienLunch gagh]]'' in the Klingon Bird of Prey. One can only hope [[NauseaFuel it was well-preserved]] ...well-preserved...]]
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* AccidentalHeroism: Done twice by the vines.
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* AccidentalHeroism: AccidentalHero: Done twice by the vines.
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* BaitAndSwitch: It seems as if the Diviner is about to board the ''Protostar'' and Janeway opens the ramp for the incoming lifeforms. It's actually Dal who's reached the ship, while the Diviner has been tricked by the vines.
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* AccidentalHeroism: Done twice by the vines.
** First time, they snatch Drednok [[VillainousRescue just as he is about to shoot Dal]].
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
* BaitAndSwitch: It seems as if the Diviner is about to board the ''Protostar''and when Janeway opens the ramp for the incoming lifeforms. It's actually Dal who's reached the ship, while the Diviner has been tricked by the vines.
** First time, they snatch Drednok [[VillainousRescue just as he is about to shoot Dal]].
** Second time, they trick the Diviner with an illusion of the ''Protostar'' in an effort to trap him, thus enabling the kids to escape with the real ''Protostar''.
* BaitAndSwitch: It seems as if the Diviner is about to board the ''Protostar''
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* {{Malaproper}} Gwyn refers to a group of stars as a "constipation".
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* {{Malaproper}} {{Malaproper}}: Gwyn refers to a group of stars as a "constipation"."[[ToiletHumor constipation]]".
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some gagh in the Klingon Bird of Prey.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some gagh ''[[AlienLunch gagh]]'' in the Klingon Bird of Prey.Prey. One can only hope [[NauseaFuel it was well-preserved]] ...
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* TheWorfEffect: By implication. The crew finds the shipwreck of a Klingon Bird of Prey. Gwyn notes that if Klingon warriors failed to escape, it doesn't speak well of their odds.
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* TheWorfEffect: TheWorfEffect:
** By implication. The crew finds the shipwreck of a KlingonBird of Prey.Bird-of-Prey. Gwyn notes that if Klingon warriors failed to escape, it doesn't speak well of their odds.
** By implication. The crew finds the shipwreck of a Klingon
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* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather.
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* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather. Zero points out that they could ask the planet its name, only to get shut down when they learn it's not interested in communicating beyond eating everyone.
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** Later, Dreadnock appears only to quickly be overwhelmed by the vines. He is able to fight his way free, but not quickly enough to prevent the kids' escape.
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** Later, Dreadnock Drednock appears only to quickly be overwhelmed by the vines. He is able to fight his way free, but not quickly enough to prevent the kids' escape.
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* EvilVsEvil: The vines treat Drednok and the Diviner no differently than the crew.
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* TheWorfEffect: By implication. The crew finds the shipwreck of a Klingon Bird of Prey. Gwyn notes that if Klingon warriors failed to escape, it doesn't speak well of their odds.
** Later, Dreadnock appears only to quickly be overwhelmed by the vines. He is able to fight his way free, but not quickly enough to prevent the kids' escape.
** Later, Dreadnock appears only to quickly be overwhelmed by the vines. He is able to fight his way free, but not quickly enough to prevent the kids' escape.
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* IWillOnlySlowYouDown: Gwyn says this several times because she has a compound fracture in her left leg, compromising her ability to walk.
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* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Gwyn is almost completely engulfed by the vines when the ''Protostar'' shows up and Dal rappels down to rescue her.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Hologram Janeway asks herself what the real Janeway would do, and decides to clean the vines off of the ship.
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* CheckovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.
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* CheckovsGun: ChekhovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.
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* CaptainsLog: Dal does a supplemental log after he and Gwyn figure out
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* CaptainsLog: Dal does a supplemental log after he and Gwyn figure outout how to find the ship.
* CheckovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.
* CheckovsGun: The vines’ mind reading and shapeshifting come back into play when the Diviner thinks he’s found the ''Protostar''. He hasn’t.
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* HyperspeedEscape: The ''Protostar'' jumps to warp to escape the Diviner. {{Subverted}} when the Diviner pulls a HyperspeedAmbush to catch up -- and then DoubleSubverted UpToEleven when the ''Protostar'' jumps to [[LudicrousSpeed protowarp]] and escapes.
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* BrokenPedestal: The Diviner ditching his daughter for the ''Protostar'' ends any respect she had for him. Coupled with the crew saving her when they didn't have to, she pulls a HeelFaceTurn and helps them escape.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Gwyn completes hers here, after the Diviner leaves her for dead to save the ''Protostar''.
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The crew make their way back to the ''Protostar'', but the planet won't let them go without a fight.
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!!Tropes:
* BaitAndSwitch: It seems as if the Diviner is about to board the ''Protostar'' and Janeway opens the ramp for the incoming lifeforms. It's actually Dal who's reached the ship, while the Diviner has been tricked by the vines.
* CaptainsLog: Dal does a supplemental log after he and Gwyn figure out
* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some gagh in the Klingon Bird of Prey.
* FriendOrIdolDecision: The Diviner beams down to the ''Protostar'', only to find it and Gwyn being entangled by the vines. Despite her pleading, he prioritizes the ship over her.
* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather.
* GoThroughMe: Gwyn tries to defend the crew from Drednok this way. Drednok simply shoots her metal leg brace to disable her and takes aim at the crew.
* HostileWeather: After escaping the forest fire Gwyn unintentionally starts, acid rain begins falling, which is how the vines break down food they capture.
* HyperspeedAmbush: The Diviner's ship manages to lock onto the ''Protostar's'' warp signature and follow it into warp, easily catching up.
* ImmuneToBullets: The larger constructs made by the vines are immune to phasers.
* KillItWithFire: Gwyn gets the idea to burn the vines when phasers don't work. Unfortunately, fire spreads, so the threat of being burned alive soon follows.
* LudicrousSpeed: When the ship goes to protowarp, it vanishes from the Diviner's sensors in an instant.
* {{Malaproper}} Gwyn refers to a group of stars as a "constipation".
* MegaMawManeuver: The Diviner attempts this with the ''Protostar'', attempting to draw it into his much larger ship with a tractor beam. Gwyn triggers the protowarp to break free.
* MythologyGag: The Diviner's ship catches up to the ''Protostar'' while in warp, with the warp tunnel effect and the visuals matching that of the ''Vengeance'' catching the ''Enterprise'' in ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''.
* TheReveal: The ''Protostar's'' third reactor is a "gravimetric protostar containment"; in other words, an actual protostar compressed into a reactor. When activated, it allows the ''Protostar'' to move much faster than standard warp speeds.
* ShoutOut: The crew hiding from Drednok is framed in the same manner as the Hobbits hiding from the Nazgul in ''Film/TheLordOfTheRingsTheFellowshipOfTheRing''.
* VillainousRescue: Drednok comes within moments of blasting Dal, but the vines grab him just before he can fire.
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!!Tropes:
* BaitAndSwitch: It seems as if the Diviner is about to board the ''Protostar'' and Janeway opens the ramp for the incoming lifeforms. It's actually Dal who's reached the ship, while the Diviner has been tricked by the vines.
* CaptainsLog: Dal does a supplemental log after he and Gwyn figure out
* FreezeFrameBonus: A brief shot of Dal's food bowl suggests Jankom managed to find some gagh in the Klingon Bird of Prey.
* FriendOrIdolDecision: The Diviner beams down to the ''Protostar'', only to find it and Gwyn being entangled by the vines. Despite her pleading, he prioritizes the ship over her.
* GeniusLoci: The vines not only cover the surface, they can rearrange the topography and control the weather.
* GoThroughMe: Gwyn tries to defend the crew from Drednok this way. Drednok simply shoots her metal leg brace to disable her and takes aim at the crew.
* HostileWeather: After escaping the forest fire Gwyn unintentionally starts, acid rain begins falling, which is how the vines break down food they capture.
* HyperspeedAmbush: The Diviner's ship manages to lock onto the ''Protostar's'' warp signature and follow it into warp, easily catching up.
* ImmuneToBullets: The larger constructs made by the vines are immune to phasers.
* KillItWithFire: Gwyn gets the idea to burn the vines when phasers don't work. Unfortunately, fire spreads, so the threat of being burned alive soon follows.
* LudicrousSpeed: When the ship goes to protowarp, it vanishes from the Diviner's sensors in an instant.
* {{Malaproper}} Gwyn refers to a group of stars as a "constipation".
* MegaMawManeuver: The Diviner attempts this with the ''Protostar'', attempting to draw it into his much larger ship with a tractor beam. Gwyn triggers the protowarp to break free.
* MythologyGag: The Diviner's ship catches up to the ''Protostar'' while in warp, with the warp tunnel effect and the visuals matching that of the ''Vengeance'' catching the ''Enterprise'' in ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''.
* TheReveal: The ''Protostar's'' third reactor is a "gravimetric protostar containment"; in other words, an actual protostar compressed into a reactor. When activated, it allows the ''Protostar'' to move much faster than standard warp speeds.
* ShoutOut: The crew hiding from Drednok is framed in the same manner as the Hobbits hiding from the Nazgul in ''Film/TheLordOfTheRingsTheFellowshipOfTheRing''.
* VillainousRescue: Drednok comes within moments of blasting Dal, but the vines grab him just before he can fire.
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