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But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].\\
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But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen [[Roleplay/TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].\\
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Will I be remembered only for my sins?"\\
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Kim: "Forgive me, Father, for in the name of God, I repent.\\
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I am sorry that I turned my back on you, oh Lord. \\
I am sorry that I forsook you. \\
I am sorry I have followed a path away from your light. \\
I am sorry I have been impure.\\
Whatever my earthly fate may be, I confess my sins, I bare my regrets, and I ask God's forgiveness. \\
And if I am to die, my soul may go on. \\
Will I be remembered only for my sins?"\\
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I am sorry that I turned my back on you, oh Lord. \\
I am sorry that I forsook you. \\
I am sorry I have followed a path away from your light. \\
I am sorry I have been impure.\\
Whatever my earthly fate may be, I confess my sins, I bare my regrets, and I ask God's forgiveness. \\
And if I am to die, my soul may go on. \\
Will I be remembered only for my sins?"\\
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[[Spoiler:Padre]]: "No...\\
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Out there, there are rules. There are laws. There are morals. People fear God.\\
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Out there, there are rules. There are laws. There are morals. People fear God.\\
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But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].\\ \\
But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].
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"'''I' do! [in response to Nan]\\
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Everyone has a theory on this place. Everyone wants to KNOW. They want to know too much. That won't do them any good.\\
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Pablo thinks this place is like a mystery, like a dream.\\
Kim says this place is hell.\\
But I knows\\
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This place is freedom.\\
Out there, there are rules. There are laws. There are morals. People fear God.\\
But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].\\
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Kim and the others think they know so much about the world. But not this place. Maybe you think you know, too, but you're wrong. You have to forget that and just go with it.\\
Forget about everything you may never be able to know. Forget about if anything you do is anything good, or anything bad. Forget about if what you're doing is what you "should".\\
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This place is the ultimate freedom.\\
So, why would anyone... want to leave?''"
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"'''I' do! [in response to Nan]\\
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Everyone has a theory on this place. Everyone wants to KNOW. They want to know too much. That won't do them any good.\\
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Pablo thinks this place is like a mystery, like a dream.\\
Kim says this place is hell.\\
But I knows\\
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This place is freedom.\\
Out there, there are rules. There are laws. There are morals. People fear God.\\
But in here, there is no right and wrong. And there is no God. There is only us. There is only what we do and what we feel. This is the absolute. This is freedom. [[TheMetalGlen This is a world, at long last, of man's design]].\\
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Kim and the others think they know so much about the world. But not this place. Maybe you think you know, too, but you're wrong. You have to forget that and just go with it.\\
Forget about everything you may never be able to know. Forget about if anything you do is anything good, or anything bad. Forget about if what you're doing is what you "should".\\
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This place is the ultimate freedom.\\
So, why would anyone... want to leave?''"
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->"''If you see the Beast, just run. Just run, and don't stop.''"
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->"''I was so worried about you after you disappeared earlier, I'm so glad to see that you're okay. This place isn't safe!''"
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->"''Maybe he's already dead. Maybe we all are, and this is {{hell}}. Or {{heaven}}.\\
At this point, would we even know the difference?''"
-->--'''Kim''' (paraphrased)
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->"''I've been going to the janitor's closet and to the kitchen to get food and water when needed. Somehow, they haven't run out yet. I stay in the light and don't let my guard down. That's how I'm still alive -- because I'm not about to die here, in this place. Not without even knowing what it is.''"
-->--Anderson (paraphrased)
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