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* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain is spying on her secret activities, and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of the crow's death.
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* '''Inverted''':
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* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain BigBad is spying on her secret activities, and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of the crow's death.
*'''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams, "I can see you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out, he jumps out of the crow's mind and the abruptness of it gives him a headache.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams, "I can see you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out, he jumps out of the crow's mind and the abruptness of so abruptly it gives him a headache.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her, and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to the glee of Evulz, who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and is now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to can sense that Evulz is spying on her, and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to the glee of Evulz, who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and is now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear a loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''Played For Drama''':
* '''Played For Drama''':
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* '''Played For for Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear a loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''PlayedFor for Drama''':
* '''Played
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** The story is seen by the eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has a DownerEnding.
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** The story is seen by the eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession whose body Evulz has taken over]] by Evulz.over]]. It has a DownerEnding.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow and screams "I can see you!", killing the crow with a well-placed stone throw and giving Evulz a headache.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow and screams screams, "I can see you!", killing the crow with a well-placed stone throw and giving Evulz a headache.
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* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain is spying on her secret activities and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of crow's death.
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* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain is spying on her secret activities activities, and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of the crow's death.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but after a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams "I can see you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams "I can see you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the a stone at the crow, but after a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks the dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that the CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alicescreams screams, "I can see you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out out, he jumps out of the crow's mind and the abruptness of it gives him a headache.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks the dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that the CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice
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** Alice lets Evulz spy on her, as this way, he's not spying on TheChosenOne, Claire - basically, she's the distraction.
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** Alice lets Evulz spy on her, as this way, he's not spying on TheChosenOne, Claire - basically, Claire—basically, she's the distraction.
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* '''Conversed''': "I must say, I was just as surprised as Evulz when Alice killed that crow - only thankfully, I didn't get a headache."
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead and saying "fetch me another crow".
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead and saying "fetch me another crow".
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
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* '''Conversed''': "I must say, I was just as surprised as Evulz when Alice killed that crow - only crow—only thankfully, I didn't get a headache."
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead andsaying "fetch saying, "Fetch me another crow".
crow."
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying onher her, and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to the glee of Evulz, who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and is now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove to the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear a loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead and
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove to the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear a loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
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** Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may be watching.
** The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
** The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
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** Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and else—and from where - may where—may be watching.
** The story is seen by the eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has a DownerEnding.
** The story is seen by the eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has a DownerEnding.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow screams "I can see you!". She kills the crow with a well-placed stone throw, giving Evulz a headache and [[OhCrap quite a scare]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow and screams "I can see you!". She kills you!", killing the crow with a well-placed stone throw, throw and giving Evulz a headache and [[OhCrap quite a scare]].headache.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice acknowledges that Evulz is spying on her, giving him quite a scare.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice acknowledges that Evulz is spying on her, giving him [[OhCrap quite a scare.scare]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow screams "I can see you!". She kills the crow with a well-placed stone throw, giving Evulz a headache and [[OhCrap quite the scare]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow screams "I can see you!". She kills the crow with a well-placed stone throw, giving Evulz a headache and [[OhCrap quite the a scare]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice screams "I can see you!" and throws a stone, killing the crow and giving Evulz a headache.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice suddenly turns to look directly at the crow screams "I can see you!" and throws a stone, killing you!". She kills the crow and with a well-placed stone throw, giving Evulz a headache.headache and [[OhCrap quite the scare]].
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may be watching.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may bewatching.watching.
** The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
** Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may be
** The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who'son his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who'son who's on his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams I can see you and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams I "I can see you you" and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice TheDragon ''heals'' Evulz through his crow.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but aftre a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but aftre a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice TheDragon ''heals'' Evulz through his crow.
** Evulz hurts Alice through his crow.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, butaftre after a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
** Alice TheDragon ''heals'' Evulz through his crow.
** Evulz hurts Alice through his crow.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but
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'''Basic Trope''': Acting against a person spying on you by supernatural means.
* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice screams "I can see you!" and throws a stone, killing the crow and giving Evulz a headache.
* '''Exaggerated''': Killing the crow kills Evulz as well.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice acknowledges that Evulz is spying on her, giving him quite a scare.
* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain is spying on her secret activities and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of crow's death.
* '''Inverted''': Alice TheDragon ''heals'' Evulz through his crow.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but aftre a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams I can see you and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
* '''Averted''': Evulz has no supernatural means of spying on Alice.
* '''Enforced''': "You want Evulz to have SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands, but then Alice won't be able to do anything! How about this: she takes down his crow and we make up something about the headache preventing him from spying on her during the crucial part."
* '''Lampshaded''': "Ouch, Alice. That must've hurt." "Serves him right for peeping on us!"
* '''Invoked''': Alice spends all night on meditation to find out which of the animals surrounding her is Evulz's spy.
* '''Exploited''': Alice uses Evulz's headache to retrieve a crucial PlotCoupon without his knowledge.
* '''Defied''':
** Evulz observes Alice closely and backs off when he thinks she noticed him.
** Alice lets Evulz spy on her, as this way, he's not spying on TheChosenOne, Claire - basically, she's the distraction.
* '''Discussed''': "This bird looks creepy. What if it's Evulz's spy?" "Then we'll just shoot it. That should give him a pause."
* '''Conversed''': "I must say, I was just as surprised as Evulz when Alice killed that crow - only thankfully, I didn't get a headache."
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead and saying "fetch me another crow".
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who'son his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''Played For Drama''': Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may be watching.
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You! Stop peeping or I'll give you a PokeInTheThirdEye!
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz is using [[AnimalEyeSpy crows]] to spy on Alice, up until Alice screams "I can see you!" and throws a stone, killing the crow and giving Evulz a headache.
* '''Exaggerated''': Killing the crow kills Evulz as well.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice acknowledges that Evulz is spying on her, giving him quite a scare.
* '''Justified''': Alice has telepathy and senses Evulz' mind in the crow. She's not happy that the villain is spying on her secret activities and Evulz' headache results from the psychic backlash of crow's death.
* '''Inverted''': Alice TheDragon ''heals'' Evulz through his crow.
* '''Subverted''': Alice throws the stone at the crow, but aftre a second, a nearby dove starts mocking her in Evulz' voice that she's just killed an innocent animal.
* '''Double Subverted''': Alice promptly breaks dove's neck.
* '''Parodied''': Alice is confident that CIA is spying on her by pizza, so she violently attacks everyone she sees with one.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Evulz is spying on Alice by his crow when Alice screams I can see you and throws a stone. The stone, however, hits a nearby dove, but Evulz is so freaked out he jumps out of crow's mind and abruptness of it gives him a headache.
* '''Averted''': Evulz has no supernatural means of spying on Alice.
* '''Enforced''': "You want Evulz to have SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands, but then Alice won't be able to do anything! How about this: she takes down his crow and we make up something about the headache preventing him from spying on her during the crucial part."
* '''Lampshaded''': "Ouch, Alice. That must've hurt." "Serves him right for peeping on us!"
* '''Invoked''': Alice spends all night on meditation to find out which of the animals surrounding her is Evulz's spy.
* '''Exploited''': Alice uses Evulz's headache to retrieve a crucial PlotCoupon without his knowledge.
* '''Defied''':
** Evulz observes Alice closely and backs off when he thinks she noticed him.
** Alice lets Evulz spy on her, as this way, he's not spying on TheChosenOne, Claire - basically, she's the distraction.
* '''Discussed''': "This bird looks creepy. What if it's Evulz's spy?" "Then we'll just shoot it. That should give him a pause."
* '''Conversed''': "I must say, I was just as surprised as Evulz when Alice killed that crow - only thankfully, I didn't get a headache."
* '''Implied''': TheDragon sees Evulz walking out of his tower, rubbing his forehead and saying "fetch me another crow".
* '''Deconstructed''': Only Alice is able to sense that Evulz is spying on her and soon her friends tell her to stop with her unexplained cruelty to animals, to glee of Evulz, who'son his third pack of ibuprofen and now happy to spy on Alice without distraction.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice finally manages to prove the others that Evulz is spying on them by crows. Evulz goes to fetch another crow and another pack of headache pills.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The story is seen by eyes of a bird whose body has been [[DemonicPossession taken over]] by Evulz. It has DownerEnding.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Evulz' minions sit under his tower when suddenly they hear loud "Ouch!" and then "Not again! Someone bring me another crow!" They turn to one of them, whose arms and hands are full of bird bite marks.
* '''Played For Drama''': Having taken down an AnimalEyeSpy, Alice starts getting paranoid as to who else - and from where - may be watching.
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You! Stop peeping or I'll give you a PokeInTheThirdEye!
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