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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers... whoops!
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers...whoops!whoops!
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** Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers...
** MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds
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* '''Straight''': Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open [[MacGuffinDeliveryService gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade,]] meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his'' control.
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** Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open [[MacGuffinDeliveryService gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade,]] meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his''control.control.
** CreateYourOwnVillain
** Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open [[MacGuffinDeliveryService gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade,]] meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his''
** CreateYourOwnVillain
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** Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move on.
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get things done, potentially compounding his already huge guilt.
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get things done, potentially compounding his already huge guilt.
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** Albert has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. [[DespairEventHorizon It severely shakes his faith in himself himself]] and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move on.
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, [[BrokenPedestal his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get thingsdone, done]], potentially compounding his already huge guilt.
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, [[BrokenPedestal his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get things
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* '''Defied''': "No way am I going for this Dragon Breaker Blade and letting Evulz get it!"
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** "No way am I going for this Dragon Breaker Blade and letting Evulz getit!"it!"
** The heroes destroy the Dragon Breaker Blade immediately.
** "No way am I going for this Dragon Breaker Blade and letting Evulz get
** The heroes destroy the Dragon Breaker Blade immediately.
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** Even if Albert didn't go after the Dragon Breaker, Evulz would have gotten it himself anyway.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move on.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can moveon.on.
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get things done, potentially compounding his already huge guilt.
** Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move
** Once they find out about Albert's big screw-up, his allies and the citizenry start to lose faith in him and his ability as the Hero to get things done, potentially compounding his already huge guilt.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The Dargon Breaker Blade is stolen... but it turns out to be fake... but then the ruins collapse letting loose all manner of monsters... but when Albert kills TheStarscream, it turns out [[MagnificentBastard he had a]] [[TakingYouWithMe dead man's switch-equipped]] FantasticNuke hidden under Emperor Evulz's lair.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The Dargon Dragon Breaker Blade is stolen... but it turns out to be fake... but then the ruins collapse letting loose all manner of monsters... but when Albert kills TheStarscream, it turns out [[MagnificentBastard he had a]] [[TakingYouWithMe dead man's switch-equipped]] FantasticNuke hidden under Emperor Evulz's lair.
* '''Implied''': When Albert tries to take the Dragon Sword from Evulz, everyone seems suspicious he might "screw it up again".
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** When Evulz tries to make his escape, [[BlackMagicianGirl Faye]] says she's not having it and teleports the sword back to them. Probably should've thought of that, huh, Evulz?
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** Evulz kidnaps her and renders her defenseless when she reveals this.
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* '''Straight''': Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade, meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his'' control.
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* '''Straight''': Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open [[MacGuffinDeliveryService gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade, blade,]] meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his'' control.
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* '''Downplayed''': Removing the sword releases some chaotic spirits that begin to wreak minor havoc in a nearby village. This results in an optional sidequest to destroy the spirits you accidentally released.
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* '''Downplayed''': Removing the sword [[SealedEvilInACan releases some chaotic spirits spirits]] that begin to wreak minor havoc in a nearby village. This results in an optional sidequest to destroy the spirits you accidentally released.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Sword is stolen... but it turns out to be fake... but then the ruins collapse letting loose all manner of monsters... but when Albert kills TheStarscream, it turns out [[MagnificentBastard he had a]] [[TakingYouWithMe dead man's switch-equipped]] FantasticNuke hidden under Emperor Evulz's lair.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Sword The Dargon Breaker Blade is stolen... but it turns out to be fake... but then the ruins collapse letting loose all manner of monsters... but when Albert kills TheStarscream, it turns out [[MagnificentBastard he had a]] [[TakingYouWithMe dead man's switch-equipped]] FantasticNuke hidden under Emperor Evulz's lair.
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** At first, all hope seems lost...but then, [[MysteriousWaif Alice]] is revealed to carry the Blood of the Stars, which gives her access to a powerful spell that can OneHitKill all of Evulz's draconic beasts.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. Whoops.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. Whoops.powers... whoops!
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* '''Exploited''': Asterwards, Bob convinced the king that he is a better hero than Albert.
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* '''Exploited''': Asterwards, Afterwards, Bob convinced the king that he is a better hero than Albert.
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* '''Inverted''': NiceJobFixingItVillain'''Inverted''':
** NiceJobFixingItVillain
** YouDidTheRightThing
** NiceJobFixingItVillain
** YouDidTheRightThing
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** Albert mocked Emperor Evulz while waving a ring that neutralize the curse in laughter. Evulz takes the ring and equips it.
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** Albert mocked mocks Emperor Evulz while waving a ring that neutralize neutralizes the curse in laughter. Evulz takes the ring and equips it.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. [[{{Understatement}} Whoops.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. [[{{Understatement}} Whoops.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. [[Understatement Whoops.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. [[Understatement [[{{Understatement}} Whoops.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. Whoops.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Removing the sword made the ruins they were hidden inside collapse; the displaced monsters attacked the nearby villages and now roam the countryside slaughtering innocents. Meanwhile, Emperor Evulz has his forces seize the sword and uses his dark magics to twist the blade so that it now ''enhances'' his powers. [[Understatement Whoops.]]
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* '''Defied''': "No way am I going for this Dragon Breaker Blade and let Evulz get it!"
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* '''Defied''': "No way am I going for this Dragon Breaker Blade and let letting Evulz get it!"
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* '''Double Subverted''': [[TheChessmaster Emperor Evulz expected it]], and had already [[OutGambitted calculated it is more beneficial to him]] to lull Albert into a false sense of security, have him [[UnwittingPawn use it to weed out]] [[TheStarscream more rebellious elements of his army]], then grab it afterwards.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** [[TheChessmaster Emperor Evulz expected it]], and had already [[OutGambitted calculated it is more beneficial to him]] to lull Albert into a false sense of security, have him [[UnwittingPawn use it to weed out]] [[TheStarscream more rebellious elements of his army]], then grab it afterwards.
** [[TheChessmaster Emperor Evulz expected it]], and had already [[OutGambitted calculated it is more beneficial to him]] to lull Albert into a false sense of security, have him [[UnwittingPawn use it to weed out]] [[TheStarscream more rebellious elements of his army]], then grab it afterwards.
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** The sword was cursed and backfired on Emperor Evulz just as he started to use it.
** The party killed that minion in the process of taking the sword before the EldritchAbomination even appeared.
** Albert mocked Emperor Evulz while waving a ring that neutralize the curse in laughter. Evulz takes the ring and equips it.
** Albert mocked Emperor Evulz while waving a ring that neutralize the curse in laughter. Evulz takes the ring and equips it.
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* '''Averted''': Albert fights off Evulz's minions, thus keeping the sword.
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* '''Averted''': Albert fights off Evulz's minions, thus keeping minions using the sword.sword. It was still in his hands.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Asterwards, Bob convinced the king that he is a better hero than Albert.
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* '''Subverted''': Emperor Evulz's minions steal the sword, but it turns out Albert [[BatmanGambit has prepared a fake double and let them steal the fake]], giving him at least a week until Evulz sees through the ruse, while having the original safe in his sheath.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Emperor Evulz's minions steal the sword, but it turns out Albert [[BatmanGambit has prepared a fake double and let them steal the fake]], giving him at least a week until Evulz sees through the ruse, while having the original safe in his sheath.
** Emperor Evulz's minions steal the sword, but it turns out Albert [[BatmanGambit has prepared a fake double and let them steal the fake]], giving him at least a week until Evulz sees through the ruse, while having the original safe in his sheath.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move on.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, this also makes him more determined to defeat the Emperor once and for all.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, this also makes him more determined to defeat the Emperor once and for all.
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* '''Enforced''': ExecutiveMeddling ordered this thrown in as DiabolusExMachina, to make the game "serious".
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** ExecutiveMeddling ordered this thrown in as DiabolusExMachina, to make the game "serious".
** ExecutiveMeddling ordered this thrown in as DiabolusExMachina, to make the game "serious".
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* '''Played For Laughs:''' The quest for the sword is played out in Monty Python-esque style with heroes bickering about how it's going to be stolen, while Emperor Evulz is comically inept and has to rely on even dumber heroes to further his schemes.
* '''Played For Drama:''' In trying to stop Emperor Evulz, Albert accidentally helps bring about the sort of destruction he was trying to ''prevent''.
* '''Played For Drama:''' In trying to stop Emperor Evulz, Albert accidentally helps bring about the sort of destruction he was trying to ''prevent''.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Albert has a massive HeroicBSOD upon learning that all their efforts just made the situation worse. It severely shakes his faith in himself and their chances of defeating the Emperor, and he has to rebuild his confidence before they can move on.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, this also makes him more determined to defeat the Emperor once and for all.
* '''Played ForLaughs:''' Laughs''': The quest for the sword is played out in Monty Python-esque style with heroes bickering about how it's going to be stolen, while Emperor Evulz is comically inept and has to rely on even dumber heroes to further his schemes.
* '''Played ForDrama:''' Drama''': In trying to stop Emperor Evulz, Albert accidentally helps bring about the sort of destruction he was trying to ''prevent''.
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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'''Basic Trope''': TheHero fulfills a goal, only to learn it has unintended consequences that [[ItGotWorse make things worse]] in some fashion.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheHero fulfills a goal, only to learn it has unintended consequences that [[ItGotWorse [[FromBadToWorse make things worse]] in some fashion.
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** Alternately, letting Emperor Evulz steal the sword is a very bad thing, since Albert and his companions have no way of slaying Emperor Evulz's hordes. However, one of Emperor Evulz's minions is destined to destroy the EldritchAbomination that plans to devour the world. If Albert and his party had destroyed Emperor Evulz's minions before the EldritchAbomination could be stopped, they would have left the world utterly defenseless against the EldritchAbomination. Albert and his companions still have to get the sword back, since Emperor Evulz still has every intention of conquering the world, but at least now their world won't be a demonic god's supper.
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* '''Downplayed''': Removing the sword releases some chaotic spirits that begin to wreak minor havoc in a nearby village. This results in an optional sidequest to destroy the spirits you accidentally released.
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* '''Straight''': Our hero [[TheHero Albert]] and his {{Nakama}} companions find the [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement Dragon Breaker Blade]], a legendary sword said to be capable of slaying the draconic beasts controlled by [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]]. However, finding the sword and bringing it out into the open gives Emperor Evulz a chance to steal the blade, meaning that one of the biggest threats to his power is now safely under ''his'' control.
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* '''Double Subverted''': [[TheChessmaster Emperor Evulz expected it]], and had already [[OutGambitted calculated it is more beneficial to him]] to lull Albert into a false sense of security, have him [[XanatosSucker use it to weed out]] [[TheStarscream more rebellious elements of his army]], then grab it afterwards.
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* '''Double Subverted''': [[TheChessmaster Emperor Evulz expected it]], and had already [[OutGambitted calculated it is more beneficial to him]] to lull Albert into a false sense of security, have him [[XanatosSucker [[UnwittingPawn use it to weed out]] [[TheStarscream more rebellious elements of his army]], then grab it afterwards.
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** Having the hero responsible for the EldritchAbomination's appearance provides him with a good and believable motivation to risk life against such a mighty foe.