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* '''[[IncrediblyLamePun Straight]]''': The sex scene between AliceAndBob is described as, "He put his hard sex in her soft sex and they had sex," and that's it.
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* '''[[IncrediblyLamePun '''[[AccidentalPun Straight]]''': The sex scene between AliceAndBob is described as, "He put his hard sex in her soft sex sex, and they had sex," and that's it.
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** Alice and Bob are ''literally'' shown assembling an IKEA product, and have [[AccidentalInnuendo orgasmic reactions]].
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** Alice and Bob are ''literally'' shown assembling an IKEA product, product and have [[AccidentalInnuendo orgasmic reactions]].
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** Bob and Alice actually act as if they're assembling furniture. They display no pleasure, and are reading instructions from a manual.
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** Bob and Alice actually act as if they're assembling furniture. They display no pleasure, pleasure and are reading instructions from a manual.
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** The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].
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** The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, scene but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].
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* '''Justified''': Sex ed.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Sexed.ed.
** [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil Even at a rape trial]], the [[FramingDevice testimonies]] are expected to be somewhat impartial.
** Sex
** [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil Even at a rape trial]], the [[FramingDevice testimonies]] are expected to be somewhat impartial.
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'''Basic Trope''': Dull erotica.
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'''Basic Trope''': Dull erotica.sex.
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** The writer uses this to [[ShowDontTell show]] that TheHero is not distracted by sex.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???
[[Fanfic/MyImmortal "Then he put his thingy in my you-know-what and we did it for the first time."]]
* '''Conversed''':???"Why did they even bother to add a sex scene if it was just going to be described so blandly?"
* '''Conversed''':
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* '''Averted''': The sex scene is described reasonably and in detail.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** The sex scene is described reasonably and indetail.detail.
** Alice and Bob do not have sex.
** The sex scene is described reasonably and in
** Alice and Bob do not have sex.
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** Bob and Alice actually act as if they're assembling furniture. They display no pleasure, and are reading instructions from a manual.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Once Charlie discovers how bland Alice and Bob's sex life is, he introduces them to kinky sex to score a threesome.
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Out-of-universe justification isn\'t justified; it\'s enforced.
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* '''Justified''': The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].
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* '''Justified''': The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].Sex ed.
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* '''Enforced''': "We're running out of ways to appeal to the LowestCommonDenominator. Let's put in a sex scene and describe it as, 'They had sex'."
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].
** "We're running out of ways to appeal to the LowestCommonDenominator. Let's put in a sex scene and describe it as, 'They had sex'."
** The writers didn't want to include a sex scene, but got [[ExecutiveMeddling overruled]].
** "We're running out of ways to appeal to the LowestCommonDenominator. Let's put in a sex scene and describe it as, 'They had sex'."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "What's with all the erotica which is written as 'They had sex'?"
** "You know, I bet that felt a lot better then it could be described."
** "You know, I bet that felt a lot better then it could be described."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "What's with all the erotica which is written as 'They had sex'?"
** "You know, I bet that felt a lot betterthen than it could be described."
** "What's with all the erotica which is written as 'They had sex'?"
** "You know, I bet that felt a lot better
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** "You know, I bet that felt a lot better then it could be described."
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that [[ThePeepingTom Charlie]] thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep just because of how boring the narration is.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that [[ThePeepingTom Charlie]] thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep just because of how boring the narration is.of the scene is just that boring and then he falls asleep.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that [[PeepingTom Charlie]] thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep just because of how boring the narration is.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that [[PeepingTom [[ThePeepingTom Charlie]] thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep just because of how boring the narration is.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that Charlie thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that Charlie [[PeepingTom Charlie]] thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep.asleep just because of how boring the narration is.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that Charlie the PeepingTom thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring that Charlie the PeepingTom thinks they're assembling IKEA furniture and falls asleep.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring or described in such way that Charlie thinks they're assembling an IKEA product.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring or described in such way that Charlie the PeepingTom thinks they're assembling an IKEA product.furniture and falls asleep.
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** Bob and Alice's sex life is so boring or described in such way that Charlie thinks they're assembling an IKEA product.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???The sex scene goes along the lines "He looked at her passionately, she looked at him the same, and they started to make love" before skipping to a relevant point.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': The dry description of the sex scene is actually what's going on in Alice's mind. She finds the act so dull and emotionally uninvolving that it amounts to nothing more than the physical action of "in, out, repeat."
* '''Reconstructed''': The dryness of the scene is an alien and/or robot describing to Alice what it thinks sex is like for humans. Then Alice talks to the alien so that it can understand the importance and emotional impact of sex to humans, and the alien learns more about humanity in a touching moment.
* '''Reconstructed''': The dryness of the scene is an alien and/or robot describing to Alice what it thinks sex is like for humans. Then Alice talks to the alien so that it can understand the importance and emotional impact of sex to humans, and the alien learns more about humanity in a touching moment.
* '''Deconstructed''': The dry description of the sex scene is actually what's going on in Alice's mind. She finds the act so dull and emotionally uninvolving that it amounts to nothing more than the physical action of "in, out, repeat."
* '''Reconstructed''': The dryness of the scene is an alien and/or robot describing to Alice what it thinks sex is like for humans. Then Alice talks to the alien so that it can understand the importance and emotional impact of sex to humans, and the alien learns more about humanity in a touching moment.
* '''Reconstructed''': The dryness of the scene is an alien and/or robot describing to Alice what it thinks sex is like for humans. Then Alice talks to the alien so that it can understand the importance and emotional impact of sex to humans, and the alien learns more about humanity in a touching moment.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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** They have blandly described sex in an actual IKEA store.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice and Bob are ''literally'' shown assembling an IKEA product, and have [[AccidentalInnuendo orgasmic reactions]].
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alice and Bob are ''literally'' shown assembling an IKEA product, and have [[AccidentalInnuendo orgasmic reactions]].
** Alice and Bob are ''literally'' shown assembling an IKEA product, and have [[AccidentalInnuendo orgasmic reactions]].
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** The blandness is taken to ridiculous extremes and their dirty talk becomes BeigeProse, 'move your body against me faster' and 'I am feeling highly aroused'.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
The dryness of the scene is an alien and/or robot describing to Alice what it thinks sex is like for humans. Then Alice talks to the alien so that it can understand the importance and emotional impact of sex to humans, and the alien learns more about humanity in a touching moment.
* '''Zig Zagged''':???The description is so bland they might be putting furniture together. And they are putting furniture together. Because their fetish is furniture assembly. But they're both incredibly bored with it and it's mechanical to them.
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Defied''': ???Alice stops, says that she doesn't want the sex to be bland and boring, and puts on soft music and mood lighting.
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Put your mouse on IKEAErotica, IfYouKnowWhatIMean.
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Put your mouse on IKEAErotica, IfYouKnowWhatIMean.IKEAErotica.
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* '''Deconstructed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': ???The dry description of the sex scene is actually what's going on in Alice's mind. She finds the act so dull and emotionally uninvolving that it amounts to nothing more than the physical action of "in, out, repeat."
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???The writer wants to show that Alice and Bob find the sex incredibly boring and passionless.
