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* '''Lampshaded''': "You know Lance, you'd never have made it this far in your quest without if it wasn't for that swimming pool worth of Tonic you drank."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You know Lance, you'd never have made it this far in your quest without if it wasn't for that swimming pool worth of Tonic you drank."
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* '''Deconstructed''': Lance's use of Tonic has him labeled as a cheater and coward by his enemies, who taunt that YoureNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum. Which leads Lance to charge into attack without it and get defeated.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Lance's use of Tonic has him labeled as a cheater and coward by his enemies, who taunt that YoureNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum. Which leads Lance to charge into attack without it and getdefeated.defeated.
** Lance's reliance on Tonic causes him to neglect actual medical knowledge. When he tries to use Tonic to heal his broken leg, he forgets to immobilize the leg first, causing it to become malformed.
** Lance's use of Tonic has him labeled as a cheater and coward by his enemies, who taunt that YoureNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum. Which leads Lance to charge into attack without it and get
** Lance's reliance on Tonic causes him to neglect actual medical knowledge. When he tries to use Tonic to heal his broken leg, he forgets to immobilize the leg first, causing it to become malformed.
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* '''Justified''': Tonic is an alchemical brew with powerful WhiteMagic backing it up.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Tonic is an alchemical brew with powerful WhiteMagic backing it up.
** Tonic is an alchemical brew with powerful WhiteMagic backing it up.
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* '''Justified''': Tonic is an alchemical brew with powerful WhiteMagic backing it up. Alternately, it's made of {{Nanomachines}} with ShapeShifterBaggage compensators that rebuild the drinker from the DNA up.
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* '''Justified''': Tonic is an alchemical brew with powerful WhiteMagic backing it up. Alternately, it's
** Tonic is made of {{Nanomachines}} with ShapeShifterBaggage compensators that rebuild the drinker from the DNA up.
** Tonic is made of {{Nanomachines}} with ShapeShifterBaggage compensators that rebuild the drinker from the DNA up.
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* '''Downplayed''': When Lance drinks Tonic all it does is rehydrate him and provide mild pain relief.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** When Lance drinks Tonic all it does is rehydrate him and provide mild painrelief.relief.
** Tonic can heal scrapes, cuts, and bruises when poured onto them.
** When Lance drinks Tonic all it does is rehydrate him and provide mild pain
** Tonic can heal scrapes, cuts, and bruises when poured onto them.
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* '''Parodied''': Lance drinks entire bottles of Tonic to cure incredibly minor injuries like paper cuts, hangovers, and hangnails.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Lance drinks entire bottles of Tonic to cure incredibly minor injuries like paper cuts, hangovers, andhangnails.hangnails.
** It has no healing properties whatsoever, it just makes Lance hallucinate that he's OK.
** Lance drinks entire bottles of Tonic to cure incredibly minor injuries like paper cuts, hangovers, and
** It has no healing properties whatsoever, it just makes Lance hallucinate that he's OK.
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* '''Exploited''': Knowing his enemies also use Tonic, Lance purposely refills an old bottle with poison and reverse pickpockets it into his enemies inventory.
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* '''Exploited''': '''Exploited''':
** Knowing his enemies also use Tonic, Lance purposely refills an old bottle with poison and reverse pickpockets it into his enemies inventory.
** Knowing his enemies also use Tonic, Lance purposely refills an old bottle with poison and reverse pickpockets it into his enemies inventory.
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** Lance knows a spell that is CastFromHitpoints, and sets up a beer helmet filled with Tonic in order to heal himself whenever he uses the spell.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You know Lance, you'd never have made it this far in your quest without if it wasn't for that metric gallon of Tonic you drank."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You know Lance, you'd never have made it this far in your quest without if it wasn't for that metric gallon swimming pool worth of Tonic you drank."
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* '''Parodied''': Lance drinks entire bottles of Tonic to cure incredibly minor injuries like paper cuts, hangover's, and hangnails.
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* '''Parodied''': Lance drinks entire bottles of Tonic to cure incredibly minor injuries like paper cuts, hangover's, hangovers, and hangnails.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...''[[ForgedByTheGods brewed by the gods!]]''
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* '''Double Subverted''': ... ''[[ForgedByTheGods brewed Brewed by the gods!]]''
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* '''Reconstructed''': Because Tonic can cure any injury, it is seen by society as dangerous for promoting carelessness and violence, so it becomes a controlled substance. Lance has to constantly fight feelings of inferiority for using it, and may even decide it's TooAwesomeToUse.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Because Tonic can cure any injury, it is seen by society as dangerous for promoting carelessness and violence, so it becomes a controlled substance. Lance has to constantly fight feelings of inferiority for using it, and may even decide it's TooAwesomeToUse.
** Because Tonic can cure any injury, it is seen by society as dangerous for promoting carelessness and violence, so it becomes a controlled substance. Lance has to constantly fight feelings of inferiority for using it, and may even decide it's TooAwesomeToUse.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
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** Alternatively, Lance is a CombatPragmatist who doesn't give two shits about the personal opinions of his ENEMIES, and he is more than willing to do whatever it takes to pull off a victory. He realizes the edge that Tonic gives him in battle and chooses to take full advantage off it. Sure, it may not be honorable in the eyes of others, but in the end he didn't come here to earn anyone's respect, he came to WIN.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Lance is addicted to Tonic, and at the same time it's slowly killing him.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Lance is addicted to Tonic, and at the same time it's slowly killing him.
him. And since the only way to cure THAT is to drink more tonic...
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* '''Exaggerated''': Lance lost an arm and both legs and is rapidly dying from blood loss, but one drop of Tonic instantly heals all his wounds and cures him of his allergys.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Lance lost an arm and both legs and is rapidly dying from blood loss, but one drop of Tonic instantly heals all his wounds and cures him of his allergys.allergies.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Lance lost an arm and both legs and is rapidly dying from blood loss, but one drop of Tonic instantly heals all his wounds.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Lance lost an arm and both legs and is rapidly dying from blood loss, but one drop of Tonic instantly heals all his wounds.wounds and cures him of his allergys.
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* '''Discussed''': "Isn't it ironic that this potion grants a new lease on life, yet it promotes a desensitization to violence because it makes it's effects easily reversed?"
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* '''Discussed''': "Isn't it ironic that this potion grants a new lease on life, yet it promotes a desensitization to violence because it makes it's its effects easily reversed?"
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The ramifications of Tonic creating a TerminallyDependentSociety are explored, and it's effects on the player's play style as well (Lance frequently lampshades how he'd be dead, or that he hates the player forcing him to drink yucky Tonic). Halfway through the story, every vial of Tonic becomes so much flavored water as the magic or technology behind it ceases to function. Lance and the world are forced to live a new, fearful existence where their mortality is far more at risk.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The ramifications of Tonic creating a TerminallyDependentSociety are explored, and it's its effects on the player's play style as well (Lance frequently lampshades how he'd be dead, or that he hates the player forcing him to drink yucky Tonic). Halfway through the story, every vial of Tonic becomes so much flavored water as the magic or technology behind it ceases to function. Lance and the world are forced to live a new, fearful existence where their mortality is far more at risk.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...''[[ForgedByTheGods brewed by the gods!]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...''[[ForgedByTheGods brewed by the gods!]]gods!]]''
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* '''Deconstructed''': Lance's use of Tonic has him labeled as a cheater and coward by his enemies, who taunt that YoudBeNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum. Which leads Lance to charge into attack without it and get defeated.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Lance's use of Tonic has him labeled as a cheater and coward by his enemies, who taunt that YoudBeNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum.YoureNothingWithoutYourPhlebotinum. Which leads Lance to charge into attack without it and get defeated.