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** [[EvilIsSexy Horrible Holly]] dresses up in a skimpy costume and gives [[TheHero Daring Dirk]] a lap dance to get info out of him.
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** [[EvilIsSexy Horrible Holly]] Holly dresses up in a skimpy costume and gives [[TheHero Daring Dirk]] a lap dance to get info out of him.
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** The skimpy slave outfit doubles as a PowerNullifier so it also prevents Holly to retaliate. Doubly so if Holly adheres to ClothesMakeTheSuperman trope.
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** The "it's a fetish" part of the enslavement [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes a bit iffy]] because Alice is the cast's LovableSexManiac and this turns her on big time. She is not locked inside of a base with Dirk. Dirk is locked inside of a base with ''[[AbhorrentAdmirer her]]''.
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** Dirk doesn't thinks the bikini Holly is wearing is sexy enough and makes her switch to [[BarelyThereSwimwear a much smaller one]].
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** Upon being captured by the heroes, Horrible Holly is forced to wear a bikini.
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** Dirk parades Holly naked in public, encouraging his subjects to harass, grope and photograph Holly.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Holly is given no clothing whatsoever, and she has to make do as best she can with [[HandOrObjectUnderwear strategically placed chains]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Holly is given no clothing whatsoever, and she has to make do as best she can with [[HandOrObjectUnderwear strategically placedchains]].chains]].
** Holly is not only naked, but repeatedly forced to dance to entertain Dirk, his guards and the public. Dirk also has photographs and videos of her [[InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube naked uploaded online]].
** Holly is given no clothing whatsoever, and she has to make do as best she can with [[HandOrObjectUnderwear strategically placed
** Holly is not only naked, but repeatedly forced to dance to entertain Dirk, his guards and the public. Dirk also has photographs and videos of her [[InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube naked uploaded online]].
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* '''Gender Inverted''': After being captured by [[TheBaroness Baroness Betty]], [[DistressedDude Distressed Dave]] is forced to wear a speedo.
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** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! You're like a horny labrador... Guards, get this creep off of me!"
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** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! You're acting like a horny labrador... Guards, get this creep off of me!"
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** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! Christ, you're like a horny labrador... Guards!"
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** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! Christ, you're You're like a horny labrador... Guards!"Guards, get this creep off of me!"
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** Holly was already wearing a bikini when she was captured.
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** Holly is a SexSlave
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** Holly is a SexSlaveSexSlave.
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* '''Subverted''': Dirk provides Holly with new clothes. It's a rather tasteful floor length dress.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Dirk provides Holly with new clothes. It's a rather tasteful floor length dress.
** Dirk provides Holly with new clothes. It's a rather tasteful floor length dress.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...which turns out to be a see-through nightgown.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...which turns out to be a see-through nightgown.
** ...which turns out to be a see-through nightgown.
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** Holly is PurityPersonified, and being forced to wear such skimpy clothing in public is psychological torture. Dirk's sleazy henchmen leer at her constantly, and she spends every moment in fear that one of them will decide to [[RapeAsDrama have his way with her]]. Even after she's rescued, she has BadDreams flashing back to her imprisonment for years afterwards.
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** Holly is PurityPersonified, and being forced to wear such skimpy clothing in public is psychological torture. Dirk's sleazy henchmen leer at her constantly, and she spends every moment in fear that one of them will decide to [[RapeAsDrama have his way with her]]. Even after she's rescued, she has BadDreams [[PastExperienceNightmare bad dreams]] flashing back to her imprisonment for years afterwards.
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** Dirk is a SerialKiller that enjoys offering his victims a SadisticChoice: In this case, Holly can walk out of that open door into a raging snowstorm wearing only a bikini and freeze to death, or remain next to the potent calefactor in this room, awaiting an uncertain future.
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** Dirk is a SerialKiller that enjoys offering his victims a SadisticChoice: In this case, Holly can walk out of that an open door into a raging snowstorm wearing only a bikini and freeze to death, or remain next to the potent calefactor heater in this his room, awaiting an uncertain future.
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** Dirk's lair is in a place with a warm climate and NoNudityTaboo.
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** Dirk's lair is in a place with a warm climate and NoNudityTaboo.[[InnocentFanserviceGirl no nudity taboo]].
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** Dirk wants to humiliate Holly to prove he has power over her.
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* '''Played For Laughs:''' "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! Christ, you're like a horny labrador... Guards!"
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* '''Played For Laughs:''' Laughs''':
** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! Christ, you're like a horny labrador... Guards!"
** "Now I have you, my pretty, and soon your little boyfriend will stumble into my tr- why are you stripping off? No, I did NOT force you to! What kind of sick- get dressed! People will think I'm a pervert. And [[LegCling get off my leg]]! Christ, you're like a horny labrador... Guards!"
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-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that on!]]"''
-->'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.]]''"
-->'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap ...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
* '''Played For Drama:'''
-->'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.]]''"
-->'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap ...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
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-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that on!]]"''
-->'''Dirk:'''on!]]"''\\
'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.]]''"
-->'''Holly:''']]''"\\
'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap ...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
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-->'''Dirk:'''
'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.
-->'''Holly:'''
'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap ...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
* '''Played For
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-->'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
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-->'''Holly:''' "''[[OhCrap..."''[[OhCrap ...Can I rephrase that?]]''"
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-->'''Holly:''' ""[[OhCrap...Can I rephrase that?]]""
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-->'''Holly:''' ""[[OhCrap..."''[[OhCrap...Can I rephrase that?]]""that?]]''"
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Back to GoGoEnslavement
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Back to GoGoEnslavementGoGoEnslavement.
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-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that one!]]"''
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-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that one!]]"''on!]]"''
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-->'''Holly:''' ""...Can I rephrase that?""
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-->'''Holly:''' ""...""[[OhCrap...Can I rephrase that?""that?]]""
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** Dirk forces Holly to go naked.
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-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that one!]]"''
-->'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.]]''"
-->'''Holly:''' ""...Can I rephrase that?""
-->'''Holly:''' ''"I'm not wearing''THAT! ''[[TemptingFate I'd rather be naked than put that one!]]"''
-->'''Dirk:''' "''Hmm. [[ExactWords I like]] [[ShamefulStrip that idea.]]''"
-->'''Holly:''' ""...Can I rephrase that?""
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** [[EstrogenBrigadeBait Brave Bob]] fails in his attempt to rescue Holly and is captured. The next shot shows him wearing another bikini, in the cell next to hers.
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** [[EstrogenBrigadeBait [[MrFanservice Brave Bob]] fails in his attempt to rescue Holly and is captured. The next shot shows him wearing another bikini, in the cell next to hers.
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** Dirk is a [[MadeASlave slave trader]] who wants to show his merchandize at the coming auction.
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** Dirk is a [[MadeASlave slave trader]] who wants to show his merchandize goods at the coming auction.
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** Dirk is a SerialKiller that enjoys offering his victims a SadisticChoice: In this case, Holly can walk out of that open door into a raging snowstorm wearing only a bikini and freeze to death, or remain next to the potent calefactor in this room awaiting an uncertain future.
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** Dirk is a SerialKiller that enjoys offering his victims a SadisticChoice: In this case, Holly can walk out of that open door into a raging snowstorm wearing only a bikini and freeze to death, or remain next to the potent calefactor in this room room, awaiting an uncertain future.
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** Dirk is a [[MadeASlave slave trader]] who wants to show the merchandize at the coming auction.
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** Dirk is a [[MadeASlave slave trader]] who wants to show the his merchandize at the coming auction.
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** [[EstrogenBrigadeBait Brave Bob]] fails in his attempt to rescue Holly and is captured. The next shot shows him also wearing a bikini, in the cell next to hers.
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** [[EstrogenBrigadeBait Brave Bob]] fails in his attempt to rescue Holly and is captured. The next shot shows him also wearing a another bikini, in the cell next to hers.