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** DatingCatwoman Alice and Davina are [[DatingCatwoman lovers]] and go on dates regularly.
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** Davina Vile is a PunchClockVillain, and/or Alice Virtuous is a PunchClockHero.
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** Davina Vile is a PunchClockVillain, and/or Alice Virtuous is a PunchClockHero. Their paychecks might paid and signed for by opposing sides, but that doesn't mean they have to make it personal.
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** Alice and Devina are HeterosexualLifePartners yet practically hate each other on the battlefield
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** Alice and Devina are HeterosexualLifePartners yet practically hate each other on the battlefieldbattlefield.
** While Davina likes Alice and avoids harming her, she extends no such mercy to Alice’s allies and behaves FauxAffablyEvil to them.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice and David become such good friends that they sing, dance, drink, eat, and live together. David insists that it's to spy on her, and Alice insists that it's to keep him under control, and they often hit each other with sticks. Then it moves from there, and HilarityEnsues.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice and David Davina become such good friends that they sing, dance, drink, eat, and live together. David Davina insists that it's to spy on her, and Alice insists that it's to keep him her under control, and they often hit each other with sticks. Then it moves from there, and HilarityEnsues.
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** Alice’s partner Bob brutally kills Davina, prompting Alice to do a FaceHeelTurn in memory of her fallen friend.
** Conversely, Duchess kills Alice and Davina does a HeelFaceTurn to avenge Alice.
** Conversely, Duchess kills Alice and Davina does a HeelFaceTurn to avenge Alice.
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** Conversely, Davina or Alice kill the other, intentionally or not, and [[HeroicBSOD break]] [[AntagonistInMourning down]] in grief and guilt.
** Davina and Alice mortally wound each other during a fight, intentionally or not. They spend their last moments joking and reminiscing with each other.
** Davina and Alice mortally wound each other during a fight, intentionally or not. They spend their last moments joking and reminiscing with each other.
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** The story is a WhiteAndGrayMorality type conflict, and Davina Vile is an AntiVillain whom Alice Virtuous respects due to her goal but fights against due to her methods.
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** The story is a WhiteAndGrayMorality WhiteAndGreyMorality type conflict, and Davina Vile is an AntiVillain whom Alice Virtuous respects due to her goal but fights against due to her methods.
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** The story is a WhiteAndGrayMorality type conflict, and Davina Vile is an AntiVillain whom Alice Virtuous respects due to her goal but fights against due to her methods.
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** "I can't help spending time with her, being her enemy is just too much fun!"
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* '''Reconstructed''': Of course, being professionals, they're equally matched and their efforts aren't from a lack of trying. After all, [[NoChallengeEqualsNoSatisfaction part of their relationship comes from the challenge they have to offer each other.]]
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* '''Defied''': "I have no interest in spending time with her, she's a total bitch and I hate her guts!"
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
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** "I don't want to get too fond of someone I might have to kill."
** "I have no interest in spending time with her, she's a total bitch and I hate her
** "I don't want to get too fond of someone I might have to kill."
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* '''Deconstructed''': In the end, they're still on opposing sides, and eventually one of them is forced to to harm, or even ''kill'', the other.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSODbreaks]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].breaks]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
** In the end, they're still on opposing sides, and eventually one of them may have to harm, or even ''kill'', the other.
** Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD
** In the end, they're still on opposing sides, and eventually one of them may have to harm, or even ''kill'', the other.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is TheHero and Davina is TheDragon; they [[GoKartingWithBowser go to the movies together]], share brainstorming session for problem-solving, tell jokes to each other, play video games, and so on.
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** Alice is TheHero and Davina is TheDragon; they [[GoKartingWithBowser go to the movies together]], share brainstorming session for problem-solving, tell jokes to each other, play video games, and so on.
** DatingCatwoman
** Alice is TheHero and Davina is TheDragon; they [[GoKartingWithBowser go to the movies together]], share brainstorming session for problem-solving, tell jokes to each other, play video games, and so on.
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'''Basic Trope''': Both the vilain and the hero are friendly towards one another and share a code of honor.
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'''Basic Trope''': Both the vilain villain and the hero are friendly towards one another and share a code of honor.
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* '''Enforced''': Due to popularity ratings, the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] force the writer of the work to make Davina move towards good so Alice has less reason to kill her and end the show. To show that the writer did not want to do this, he retools the relationship into one of these.
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* '''Enforced''': Due to popularity ratings, the [[ExecutiveMeddling executives]] {{executive|Meddling}}s force the writer of the work to make Davina move towards good so Alice has less reason to kill her and end the show. To show that the writer did not want to do this, he retools the relationship into one of these.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks ]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks ]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone breaks]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
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Back to FriendlyEnemyFriendlyEnemy.
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* '''Exploited''': Davina's partner-in-evil, Duchess, notices her weakness in Alice and uses it against Davina.
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** Davina's partner-in-evil, Duchess, notices her weakness in Alice and uses it againstDavina.Davina.
** In the other direction, Davina's friendship with Alice is what eventually prompts her HeelFaceTurn, as well as provide her a means of preventing a HeelFaceDoorSlam.
** Davina's partner-in-evil, Duchess, notices her weakness in Alice and uses it against
** In the other direction, Davina's friendship with Alice is what eventually prompts her HeelFaceTurn, as well as provide her a means of preventing a HeelFaceDoorSlam.
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** They are BirdsOfAFeather whom just happen to be on opposite sides of the conflict. They might as well get along well when not engaged in direct conflict.
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--> '''Davina''' ''(as the cops tow her to jail)'': "You were good. So will you come play crosswords with me in prison?"
--> '''Alice''': "I said I would and I will."
--> '''Alice''': "I said I would and I will."
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'''Alice''': "I said I would and I will."
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* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, in a sense, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks ]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it over coffee.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it over coffee.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it as they have a coffee.
* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other,in a sense, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks ]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it over coffee.down]].
* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other,
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it over coffee.
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** Davina is Alice's EvilFormerFriend, only not quite "former".
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** Davina is Alice's EvilFormerFriend, only EvilFormerFriend... Only not quite "former"."former" yet, as she can't bring herself to completely sever her emotional ties with Alice.
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** Davina is Alice's EvilFormerFriend, only not quite "former".
* '''Implied''': Alice and Davina have no problem getting along out-of-costume, and they're both more than perceptive enough to see through the PaperThinDisguise that is the other's outfit.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice beats Davina and sends her off to jail, the latter screaming curses at her the whole way. JumpCut to the two of them laughing about it over coffee.
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* '''Defied''': "I have no interes in spending time with her, she's a total bitch and I hate her guts!"
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* '''Defied''': "I have no interes interest in spending time with her, she's a total bitch and I hate her guts!"
* '''Played For Drama''': Davina and Alice genuinely care for each other, in a sense, meaning neither can well and truly bring themselves to stop the other entirely, thus perpetuating the conflict between them. Furthermore, this kind of relationship also causes them both to decide that [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou nobody else has the right to end the conflict]]. Meanwhile, both are using up precious resources to fight the other, and the collateral damage is astounding. When this finally kicks in with Alice, she [[HeroicBSOD breaks ]][[MyGodWhatHaveIDone down]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice and Davina are often at cross purposes, and this often harms their friendship, but at the end of the day they stay in touch with one another.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Alice and Davina are often at cross purposes, and this often harms their friendship, but at the end of the day they stay in touch with one another.
** Alice and Davina are often at cross purposes, and this often harms their friendship, but at the end of the day they stay in touch with one another.
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** They're rivals, not enemies; they both want to win, but respect each other and the rules of the game.
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** They're rivals, not enemies; they both want to win, but respect each other and the rules of the game.FriendlyRivalry (same friendship, less enmity.)