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** Danny is a [[TheSociopath sociopath]] with NoSympathy for anyone that gets hurt from his lying, so he continues it until [[LaserGuidedKarma he's the one that suffers from his own actions]].
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** Danny is a [[TheSociopath sociopath]] with NoSympathy a LackOfEmpathy for anyone that gets hurt from his lying, so he continues it until [[LaserGuidedKarma he's the one that suffers from his own actions]].
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** Danny's attempts to warn someone else about the robbery go ignored, and ''[[AesopCollateralDamage they]]'' get badly hurt from the incident, leaving Danny wracked with guilt.
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** Danny is a [[TheSociopath sociopath]] with NoSympathy for anyone that gets hurt from his lying, so he continues it until [[LaserGuidedKarma he's the one that suffers from his own actions]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': The townspeople believe Danny's house is being robbed but they allow it to happen because they think he deserves it and they're sick of him.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognise that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognise that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** The townspeople believe Danny's house is being robbed but they allow it to happen because they think he deserves it and they're sick of him.
** Danny suffers a heavy loss from the robbery, and is unable to receive support from the townsfolk because of his bad reputation.
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** The townspeople recognise that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend hisways.ways.
** Danny leads a difficult life following the robbery, but nonetheless pulls through and uses his story to convince others not to make his mistake.
** The townspeople believe Danny's house is being robbed but they allow it to happen because they think he deserves it and they're sick of him.
** Danny suffers a heavy loss from the robbery, and is unable to receive support from the townsfolk because of his bad reputation.
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** The townspeople recognise that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his
** Danny leads a difficult life following the robbery, but nonetheless pulls through and uses his story to convince others not to make his mistake.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Danny's alarm is about how that SerialKiller who escaped two weeks ago is trying to get into his home. The morning after, people find Danny and his entire family disemboweled, and lament how they didn't came to help him after a gratuitous amount of time puking their guts out-
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* '''Played For Horror''': Danny's alarm is about how that SerialKiller who escaped two weeks ago is trying to get into his home. The morning after, people find Danny and his entire family disemboweled, and lament how they didn't came to help him after a gratuitous amount of time puking their guts out-out... not to mention that [[WorseWithContext that means the serial killer is now roaming the neighborhood, and their chance to get him before he hurt someone is now long gone]].
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* '''Played For Horror''': Danny's alarm is about how that SerialKiller who escaped two weeks ago is trying to get into his home. The morning after, people find Danny and his entire family disemboweled, and lament how they didn't came to help him after a gratuitous amount of time puking their guts out-
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* '''Inverted''': Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anythinguntrue.untrue.
** Truthful Tom sees thieves threatening other people's homes and alerts the others, but the "thieves" turn out to be his friends trying to prank people with no intention of harm or stealing. When the real thieves show up however, Tom thinks they're just his prankster friends again and does absolutely nothing to stop them.
** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything
** Truthful Tom sees thieves threatening other people's homes and alerts the others, but the "thieves" turn out to be his friends trying to prank people with no intention of harm or stealing. When the real thieves show up however, Tom thinks they're just his prankster friends again and does absolutely nothing to stop them.
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** "Danny, you can lie and prank all you want as long as it's harmless -- that you didn't pee in the pool, that the sky is yellow instead of blue, that a dog ate your homework, that kind of stuff. If you ever lie about people robbing your home for a lark, you better hope that it's the best damn prank in the history of mankind, [[ImpliedDeathThreat because it's damn sure gonna be the your last.]]"
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* '''Defied''': "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it really happens".
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it reallyhappens".happens".
** The town charter has two standing rules: if anybody says that his house is being robbed the response must always be prompt and with full power, and if anybody is ever caught lying (even if it takes a full investigation) they will be punished to the full extent of the law.
** "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it really
** The town charter has two standing rules: if anybody says that his house is being robbed the response must always be prompt and with full power, and if anybody is ever caught lying (even if it takes a full investigation) they will be punished to the full extent of the law.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Danny gets a serious injury as a result of this trope.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** Danny gets a serious injury as a result of thistrope.trope.
** Danny dies as a result of this trope. The townspeople flinch because this goes too much past LaserGuidedKarma for them to feel comfortable.
** Danny gets a serious injury as a result of this
** Danny dies as a result of this trope. The townspeople flinch because this goes too much past LaserGuidedKarma for them to feel comfortable.
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** Everyone in town believes that Deceitful Danny is lying, even when the thieves are breaking in his house right in front of them.
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** Everyone in town believes that Deceitful Danny is lying, even when the thieves are breaking in into his house right in front of them.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Deceitful Danny lied once about the flavor of a pie (it was cherry, he said apple) and now no one in town believes a word he says.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Everyone in town believes that Deceitful Danny is lying, even when the thieves are breaking in his house right in front of them.
** Deceitful Danny lied once about the flavor of a pie (it was cherry, he said apple) and now no one in town believes a word he says.
** Everyone in town believes that Deceitful Danny is lying, even when the thieves are breaking in his house right in front of them.
** Deceitful Danny lied once about the flavor of a pie (it was cherry, he said apple) and now no one in town believes a word he says.
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"Better stop lying, Danny. What if something bad ''does'' happen?!"
* '''Conversed''':???"That character better stop lying, or else something bad will happen."
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* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Danny comes running into town, [[AmusingInjuries banged up,]] fleeing for his life, [[BringMeMyBrownPants a fresh load in his trousers,]] with a wolf hot on his heels. [[ImplausibleDeniability The villagers STILL don't believe him.]]
* '''Played For Laughs''': Danny comes running into town, [[AmusingInjuries banged up,]] fleeing for his life, [[BringMeMyBrownPants a fresh load in his trousers,]] with a wolf hot on his heels. [[ImplausibleDeniability The villagers STILL don't believe him.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize recognise that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Danny comes running into town, [[AmusingInjuries banged up,]] fleeing for hislife, [[BringMeMyBrownPants a fresh load in his trousers,]] life with a wolf hot on his heels. [[ImplausibleDeniability The villagers STILL don't believe him.]]
* '''Played For Drama''': Danny gets a serious injury as a result of this trope.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Danny comes running into town, [[AmusingInjuries banged up,]] fleeing for his
* '''Played For Drama''': Danny gets a serious injury as a result of this trope.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Danny comes running into town, [[AmusingInjuries banged up,]] fleeing for his life, [[BringMeMyBrownPants a fresh load in his trousers,]] with a wolf hot on his heels. [[ImplausibleDeniability The villagers STILL don't believe him.]]
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* '''Downplayed''': ???The authorities are skeptical about Danny's claims because of his history, but they do send help. However, they send only one or two people when Danny's story indicates a larger response might be justified.
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* '''Justified''': Danny is in frail health and suffering from the advanced stages of dementia. His alarms warrant one or two investigations but are ignored afterwards.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Danny is in frail health and suffering from the advanced stages of dementia. His alarms warrant one or two investigations but are ignoredafterwards.afterwards.
** Frankly, it would be difficult to trust a person who is known to have lied constantly in the past, so it would make sense that one would refuse to believe Deceitful Danny even when he tells the truth.
** Danny is in frail health and suffering from the advanced stages of dementia. His alarms warrant one or two investigations but are ignored
** Frankly, it would be difficult to trust a person who is known to have lied constantly in the past, so it would make sense that one would refuse to believe Deceitful Danny even when he tells the truth.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???The robbers target Danny ''because'' nobody will believe him.
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** [[CassandraTruth Cassandra]] says something true and nobody believes it.
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** [[CassandraTruth Cassandra]] says something true and nobody believes it.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
** [[Theatre/{{Othello}} Iago]]
** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
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**'''Inverted''': Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
** [[Theatre/{{Othello}} Iago]]untrue.
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** [[Theatre/{{Othello}} Iago]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': The townspeople believe Danny's house is being robbed but they allow it to happen because they think he deserves it and they're sick of him.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
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* '''Defied''': "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it really happens."
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* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it reallyhappens."happens".
* '''Defied''': "If I lie about that now, they might not believe me if it really
* '''Deconstructed''': The townspeople believe Danny's house is being robbed but they allow it to happen because they think he deserves it and they're sick of him.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
* '''Reconstructed''': The townspeople recognize that statements can be true even if liars are saying them, but they give up on Danny as hopelessly untruthful just as he's starting to mend his ways.
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** [[{{Othello}} [[Theatre/{{Othello}} Iago]]
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* '''Inverted''': Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
** Truthful Tom tells an obvious lie and gets away with it because he has never been known to say anything untrue.
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* '''Averted''': A habitual liar's proclamations are treated with skepticism but are generally given the benefit of the doubt.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** A habitual liar's proclamations are treated with skepticism but are generally given the benefit of the doubt.
** A habitual liar's proclamations are treated with skepticism but are generally given the benefit of the doubt.
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** [[Othello Iago]]
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** [[Othello [[{{Othello}} Iago]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': ... the robbers.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ... help the robbers.robbers, that is.
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* '''Subverted''': Danny calls and worries no one will come, but then some of his neighbors decide to help anyway.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except they're actually just there to help the robbers.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except they're actually just there to help the robbers.
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* '''Subverted''': Danny calls and worries no one will come, but then some of his neighbors decide to help anyway.
help.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except they're actually just there to help the robbers.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...
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** Alternatively, it's a drill.
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* '''Subverted''': Danny who always claims responsibility for every murder in the city isn't believed when he confesses to one he has actually committed.
* '''Double Subverted''': But he gets convicted for one of the murders he confessed to but didn't commit and is executed anyway.
* '''Double Subverted''': But he gets convicted for one of the murders he confessed to but didn't commit and is executed anyway.
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* '''Subverted''': Danny who always claims responsibility for every murder in the city isn't believed when he confesses to calls and worries no one he has actually committed.
will come, but then some of his neighbors decide to help anyway.
* '''DoubleSubverted''': But he gets convicted for one of Subverted''': ...Except they're actually just there to help the murders he confessed to but didn't commit and is executed anyway.robbers.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???New people ''keep coming'', each of them eventually revealing themselves to be there to rob Danny. When Zeke finally comes to help, Danny shoos him away, [[HypocriticalHumor not believing his story of being there to help]].
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** No one lies enough for this to happen.
** No one ever discovers that Danny's lying.
** No one ever discovers that Danny's lying.