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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] (and a few men) in his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] (and a few just as much men) in his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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** Bob does not have a notably high sex drive.
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** Bob does not have a notably high sex drive.drive but is a pretty NiceGuy.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. Especially for a guy who's always staring at my ass."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. "Thanks a lot for saving my ass, Bob! Especially for a guy who's always since you won't stop staring at my ass.it..."
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** Bob has good people skills and is pleasant to be around, making it more likely women want to have sex with him.
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** Bob's chivalry is an act. Once Alice wakes up, he goes into EntitledToHaveYou mode for not raping her.
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** Bob's chivalry is an act. Once Alice wakes up, he goes into EntitledToHaveYou mode for not raping her.
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** The story has the moral, "Being proudly open with your sexuality and a vile depraved rapist are by no means the same thing."
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** Of course, by "pervert" we mean [[AnythingThatMoves "overly kinky"]]. As for the "sex fiend" part, well that's true enough.
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** Of course, by "pervert" we mean [[AnythingThatMoves "overly kinky"]].kinky". As for the "sex fiend" part, well that's true enough.
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** Bob rejects underage Alice's advances, but the characters go back and forth about how chivalrous he is. Some argue that he he seemed a little to tempted for a man his age.
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** Bob rejects underage Alice's advances, but the characters go back and forth about how chivalrous he is. Some argue that he he seemed a little to too tempted for a man his age.
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** Bob comes off as WantingAPrizeForBasicDecency because even though he won't take advantage of vulnerable women, he's still a sleazy boor who makes women feel uncomfortable.
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** Bob comes off as WantingAPrizeForBasicDecency [[WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency wanting a prize for basic decency]] because even though he won't take advantage of vulnerable women, he's still a sleazy boor who makes women feel uncomfortable.
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** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him.
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** In spite of being a good guy, his otherwise upstanding morals, Bob's sexual jokes turn still ruin his chances because they're towards women off from him.who don't want to hear them or made in inappropriate situations.
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** Bob comes off as WantingAPrizeForBasicDecency because even though he won't take advantage of vulnerable women, he's still a sleazy boor who makes women feel uncomfortable.
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** Bob learns the importance of respecting women's boundaries, being attentive to their needs and desires, and showing genuine interest who they are.
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** GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex
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* '''Conversed''': "Bob drools over every woman he sees. Why is he suddenly being so polite to Alice?"
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* '''Conversed''': "Bob drools over every woman he sees. Why is he this character suddenly being so polite to Alice?"Alice?" "The reason is obvious -- the show wants to give Bob a redeeming quality so he doesn't seem ''that'' bad."
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* '''Discussed''': "Bob might come across as a drooling, sex-mad neanderthal, but he's got HiddenDepths, Alice -- you'll see."
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* '''Discussed''': "Bob might come across as a drooling, sex-mad neanderthal, but he's got HiddenDepths, Alice -- you'll see." "I don't care, he's getting sued."
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** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him. Worse, he gets accused of sexual harassment in the workplace due to his lewd comments.
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** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him. Worse, he him.
** Bob gets accused of sexual harassment in the workplace due to his lewd comments.
** Bob gets accused of sexual harassment in the workplace due to his lewd comments.
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** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him.
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** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him. Worse, he gets accused of sexual harassment in the workplace due to his lewd comments.
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** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit on and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
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** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit on and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
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** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
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** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit on and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
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** Alternately, Bob has the "chivalrous" part down, but the "pervert" part is more of [[{{Flanderization}} an annoying]] [[UrbanLegendLoveLife reputation]] than a real trait.
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** Alternately, Bob has the "chivalrous" part down, but the "pervert" part is more of [[{{Flanderization}} an annoying]] annoying [[UrbanLegendLoveLife reputation]] than a real trait.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would rape women is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''': Bob has [[{{Asexuality}} no interest in sex whatsoever]] and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.
* '''Averted''': Bob has [[{{Asexuality}} no interest in sex whatsoever]] and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''':
** While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would rape women is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''': ** Bob has [[{{Asexuality}} no interest rejects underage Alice's advances, but the characters go back and forth about how chivalrous he is. Some argue that he he seemed a little to tempted for a man his age.
* '''Averted''':
** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
** Bob does not have a notably high sexwhatsoever]] and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.drive.
** While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would rape women is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''':
** Bob is a lecherous jerk who is willing to hit and and proposition women in crude and demanding ways.
** Bob does not have a notably high sex
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] ([[BiTheWay and a few men]]) in his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] ([[BiTheWay and (and a few men]]) men) in his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] ([[BiTheWay and a few men]]) over the course of his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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** Bob has [[TheCasanova slept with dozens (or even hundreds!) of women]] ([[BiTheWay and a few men]]) over the course of in his adult life. However, every single one of his partners regard him as the absolute epitome of a gentleman and a NiceGuy.
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* '''Justified''': Bob has a very active sex drive, but was taught to always respect women and to treat his partners well.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Bob has a very active sex drive, but was taught to always respect women and to treat his partners well.
** Bob has a very active sex drive, but was taught to always respect women and to treat his partners well.
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** Bob is TheCasanova and a CovertPervert who puts on an air of restraint to lure in prospective sexual partners, only to coldly and cruelly discard them once he's had his fun.
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** Bob is TheCasanova and a CovertPervert who puts on an air of restraint to lure in prospective sexual partners, only to discard them coldly and cruelly discard them once he's had his fun.
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** Mens' manners are used to judge their sexual appetites. Bob, being the perfect gentleman, gets twenty proposals a day. Charlie, being a {{Jerkass}}, is lucky to get one date a year.
* '''Zig Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would actually rape women or not is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''': Bob has no interest in sex whatsoever and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.
* '''Zig Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would actually rape women or not is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''': Bob has no interest in sex whatsoever and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.
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** Mens' manners are used to judge their sexual appetites. Bob, being the perfect gentleman, gets twenty proposals a day. Charlie, being a {{Jerkass}}, JerkAss, is lucky to get one date a year.
*'''Zig Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would actually rape women or not is largely DependingOnTheWriter.
* '''Averted''': Bob has [[{{Asexuality}} no interest in sexwhatsoever whatsoever]] and mostly ignores any person with a double X chromosome.
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* '''Averted''': Bob has [[{{Asexuality}} no interest in sex
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** "I'm a bit worried that Bob always leching over Alice is having a negative effect on the viewers. We'll have to write a scene that shows that he's really a gentleman underneath it all".
** "We want to make Bob as much of a LovableSexManiac as possible. [[MrFanservice The fangirls will love it.]]"
** Bob is played by an actor who because of his look suffers DracoInLeatherPants when playing a villain, so he was cast in something which allowed him to be naturally flirty and good natured so his fans can enjoy the character as is.
* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. Especially for a guy who's always staring at my ass".
* '''Invoked''': Bob intentionally cultivates the impression of a sex-mad TheCasanova because he got his heart broken once and blames his nice-guy persona; when push comes to shove, however, it's the nice guy who wins through.
* '''Exploited''': Bob is chosen to infiltrate a sex trafficking cartel because he can fit in with the pimps without succumbing to temptation.
** "We want to make Bob as much of a LovableSexManiac as possible. [[MrFanservice The fangirls will love it.]]"
** Bob is played by an actor who because of his look suffers DracoInLeatherPants when playing a villain, so he was cast in something which allowed him to be naturally flirty and good natured so his fans can enjoy the character as is.
* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. Especially for a guy who's always staring at my ass".
* '''Invoked''': Bob intentionally cultivates the impression of a sex-mad TheCasanova because he got his heart broken once and blames his nice-guy persona; when push comes to shove, however, it's the nice guy who wins through.
* '''Exploited''': Bob is chosen to infiltrate a sex trafficking cartel because he can fit in with the pimps without succumbing to temptation.
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** "I'm a bit worried that Bob always leching over Alice is having a negative effect on the viewers. We'll have to write a scene that shows that he's really a gentleman underneath it all".
all."
** "We want to make Bob as much of a LovableSexManiac as possible. [[MrFanservice Thefangirls fangirls]] [[AllGirlsWantBadBoys will love it.]]"
** Bob is played by an actor who because of hislook looks suffers DracoInLeatherPants when playing a villain, so he was cast in something which allowed him to be naturally flirty and good natured good-natured so his fans can enjoy the character as is.
he is.
* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. Especially for a guy who's always staring at myass".
ass."
* '''Invoked''': Bob intentionally cultivates the impression of a sex-madTheCasanova [[TheCasanova Casanova]] because he got his heart broken once and blames his nice-guy NiceGuy persona; when push comes to shove, however, it's the nice guy who wins through.
* '''Exploited''': Bob is chosen to infiltrate a sex trafficking cartel because he can fit in with the pimps without succumbing to temptation.
** "We want to make Bob as much of a LovableSexManiac as possible. [[MrFanservice The
** Bob is played by an actor who because of his
* '''Lampshaded''': "Thank you, Bob. That was really sweet of you. Especially for a guy who's always staring at my
* '''Invoked''': Bob intentionally cultivates the impression of a sex-mad
* '''Exploited''': Bob is chosen to infiltrate a sex trafficking cartel because he can fit in with the pimps without succumbing to temptation.
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* '''Discussed''': "Bob might come across as a drooling, sex-mad neanderthal, but he's got HiddenDepths, Alice -- you'll see".
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* '''Discussed''': "Bob might come across as a drooling, sex-mad neanderthal, but he's got HiddenDepths, Alice -- you'll see".see."
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** The story has the moral, "Being proudly open with your sexuality and a vile depraved rapist are by no means the same thing".
** Bob finds women who also enjoy making sexual jokes, and/or learns the appropriate time and place for the jokes.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that erodes his restraint.
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
** Bob finds women who also enjoy making sexual jokes, and/or learns the appropriate time and place for the jokes.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that erodes his restraint.
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
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** The story has the moral, "Being proudly open with your sexuality and a vile depraved rapist are by no means the same thing".
thing."
** Bob finds women who also enjoy making sexual jokes, and/or learns the appropriate time and place for thejokes.
jokes.
* '''PlayedFor for Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that erodes his restraint.
restraint.
* '''Played for Laughs''': Bob tries to be this but turns into a nosey prude due to his efforts.
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
** Bob finds women who also enjoy making sexual jokes, and/or learns the appropriate time and place for the
* '''Played
* '''Played for Laughs''': Bob tries to be this but turns into a nosey prude due to his efforts.
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice seems to be in her time of need, and Bob refuses to take advantage of her, but this is a BatmanGambit by Alice, and she takes advantage of him.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice seems to be in her time of need, and Bob refuses to take advantage of her, but this is a BatmanGambit by Alice, and she takes advantage ofhim.him.
** Bob's chivalry is an act. Once Alice wakes up, he goes into EntitledToHaveYou mode for not raping her.
** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him.
** Alice seems to be in her time of need, and Bob refuses to take advantage of her, but this is a BatmanGambit by Alice, and she takes advantage of
** Bob's chivalry is an act. Once Alice wakes up, he goes into EntitledToHaveYou mode for not raping her.
** In spite of being a good guy, Bob's sexual jokes turn women off from him.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that errodes his restraint.
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** Bob finds women who also enjoy making sexual jokes, and/or learns the appropriate time and place for the jokes.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality thaterrodes erodes his restraint.restraint.
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that
* '''Implied''': Bob is known to be a pervert. However, he is notably absent from the people who defend Charlie after he sexually harasses a woman.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Bob is chosen to infiltrate a sex trafficking cartel because he can fit in with the pimps without succumbing to temptation.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob wants to be a good person, but he struggles with hypersexuality that errodes his restraint.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would actually rape women or not is largely DependingOnTheWriter
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* '''Zig Zagged''': While Bob has a consistently active libido, whether he would actually rape women or not is largely DependingOnTheWriterDependingOnTheWriter.