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* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues It backfires]].
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* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues It backfires]].backfires and makes her sister want to hear more.
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* In an AdultFear kind of way, the story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.
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* In an AdultFear kind of way, the The story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.
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* Allie attempting to step out of a moving car after waking up from oral surgery. Thankfully she still had her seat belt on, but the chance of serious injury was still quite high.
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* Young Allie attempting to step out of a moving car after waking up from oral surgery. Thankfully she still had her seat belt on, but the chance of serious injury was still quite high.
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** In a FridgeHorror way, the fact that despite having to be pulled off the track after passing out, no mention is made of anyone trying to get Allie medical attention despite the fact that she was very obviously unwell.
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** In a FridgeHorror way, the fact that despite having to be pulled off the track after passing out, no mention is made of anyone trying to get Allie medical attention despite the fact that she was very obviously unwell.unwell.
* Allie attempting to step out of a moving car after waking up from oral surgery. Thankfully she still had her seat belt on, but the chance of serious injury was still quite high.
* Allie attempting to step out of a moving car after waking up from oral surgery. Thankfully she still had her seat belt on, but the chance of serious injury was still quite high.
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* [[http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1000/bicycle8.png HELLO LITTLE GIRL]]
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* The part in "Texas" where Allie wanders alone into a rough neighborhood looking for a grocery store. It's terrifying enough that the houses here are described as having bars in all the windows and there are ''bullet holes'' in some of the cars parked along the street, but Allie is also delirious from a high fever and has absolutely no idea where she's going.
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* The part in "Texas" where Allie wanders alone into a rough neighborhood looking for a grocery store. It's terrifying enough that the houses here are described as having bars in all the windows and there are ''bullet holes'' in some of the cars parked along the street, but Allie is also delirious from a high fever and has absolutely no idea where she's going.going.
** In a FridgeHorror way, the fact that despite having to be pulled off the track after passing out, no mention is made of anyone trying to get Allie medical attention despite the fact that she was very obviously unwell.
** In a FridgeHorror way, the fact that despite having to be pulled off the track after passing out, no mention is made of anyone trying to get Allie medical attention despite the fact that she was very obviously unwell.
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* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues Backfires]].
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* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues Backfires]].It backfires]].
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* From the book, the helper dog spazzing out when she first sees the simple dog, snarling and clawing at the car window with wild eyes. To make it worse, the helper dog is a German Shepherd mix -- she's pretty big and strong for a dog.
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* In an AdultFear kind of way, the story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.
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* In an AdultFear kind of way, the story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.them.
* The part in "Texas" where Allie wanders alone into a rough neighborhood looking for a grocery store. It's terrifying enough that the houses here are described as having bars in all the windows and there are ''bullet holes'' in some of the cars parked along the street, but Allie is also delirious from a high fever and has absolutely no idea where she's going.
* The part in "Texas" where Allie wanders alone into a rough neighborhood looking for a grocery store. It's terrifying enough that the houses here are described as having bars in all the windows and there are ''bullet holes'' in some of the cars parked along the street, but Allie is also delirious from a high fever and has absolutely no idea where she's going.
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* [[http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1000/bicycle8.png HELLO LITTLE GIRL]]
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* [[http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1000/bicycle8.png HELLO LITTLE GIRL]]GIRL]]
* In an AdultFear kind of way, the story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.
* In an AdultFear kind of way, the story about how Allie's mom got lost in the woods with her two children with no way to get home and having to desperately put on a brave face so as not to terrify them.
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nightmare fuel
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* For 2nd grade Allie, the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast skeleton man]].
* "Wolves," if not for the reader, then for [[BadlyBatteredBabysitter poor Benny.]]
* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues Backfires]].
* Simple Dog's internal monologue telling her to roll around on a dead animal. The visual aid is pretty disturbing.
* '''CAKE. CAKE IS THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS.'''
* [[http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1000/bicycle8.png HELLO LITTLE GIRL]]
* "Wolves," if not for the reader, then for [[BadlyBatteredBabysitter poor Benny.]]
* Attempted when young Allie tells her younger sister the 'scariest story in the world'. [[HilarityEnsues Backfires]].
* Simple Dog's internal monologue telling her to roll around on a dead animal. The visual aid is pretty disturbing.
* '''CAKE. CAKE IS THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS.'''
* [[http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/1000/bicycle8.png HELLO LITTLE GIRL]]
