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Per TRS. Bishounen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.
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* {{Bishounen}}: Elihue, Cainen, Mizar... it's easier to list off the male characters who ''don't'' fit the trope.
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trope is renamed Prefers Going Barefoot. Dewicking old name
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Cainen is always barefoot. When he finally wears shoes for Asarella's wedding, she makes a point of mentioning it.
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* PrefersGoingBarefoot: Cainen is always barefoot. When he finally wears shoes for Asarella's wedding, she makes a point of mentioning it.
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* ShortHairWithTail: Cainen and Rakin both sport this.
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Bastard Boyfriend is no longer a trope
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* BastardBoyfriend: Both Elihue and Cainen qualify. Elihue knows that Asarella only sees him as a father, and yet he selfishly emotionally blackmails her into agreeing to marry him. Frustrated that Asarella doesn't return his romantic feelings, he comes close to raping her in a terrifying scene. Cainen on the other hand takes advantage of Asarella's love for Elihue and blackmails her into losing her virginity to him, leaving her traumatized and confused. Neither are good people - even the author believes Asarella would be better off with Hadassah instead.
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* FetishizedAbuser: Both Elihue and Cainen qualify. Elihue knows that Asarella only sees him as a father, and yet he selfishly emotionally blackmails her into agreeing to marry him. Frustrated that Asarella doesn't return his romantic feelings, he comes close to raping her in a terrifying scene. Cainen on the other hand takes advantage of Asarella's love for Elihue and blackmails her into losing her virginity to him, leaving her traumatized and confused. Neither are good people - even the author believes Asarella would be better off with Hadassah instead.
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* RapunzelHair: Several characters sport long, flowing hair, with Rea and Cainen (especially during Rakne's rampage) standing out.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One [[AlternateEnding extra story]] in volume 8 shows Asarella and Cainen married and having seven young children. Asarella is [[MissingMom an absent mom]] who travels for years at a time while Cainen [[HouseHusband stays home]] and cares for their many children. He tries to conceive an eighth because Asarella stays home with him for about a year after the birth of each child.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One [[AlternateEnding extra story]] story in volume 8 shows Asarella and Cainen married and having seven young children. Asarella is [[MissingMom an absent mom]] who travels for years at a time while Cainen [[HouseHusband stays home]] and cares for their many children. He tries to conceive an eighth because Asarella stays home with him for about a year after the birth of each child.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* BettyAndVeronica: Elihue is the nurturing, safe and responsible Betty and Cainen is the dangerous, snarky Veronica to Asarella's Archie. Unfortunatelly for Asarella, over time their negative [[NotSoDifferent similarities begin to arise]].
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* BettyAndVeronica: Elihue is the nurturing, safe and responsible Betty and Cainen is the dangerous, snarky Veronica to Asarella's Archie. Unfortunatelly for Asarella, over time their negative [[NotSoDifferent similarities begin to arise]].arise.
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* NotSoDifferent: Cainen curses Rakne for always using extreme measures to get what he wants, only to immediately admit to himself that he too behaves this way.
** Elihue and Cainen both extort Asarella to get her as their sexual partner. Cainen curses Elihue and conditions the removal of the curse to Asarella sleeping with him, and Elihue uses her filial love for him to strong-arm her into marrying him, threatening to leave her forever if she does not comply.
** Elihue and Cainen both extort Asarella to get her as their sexual partner. Cainen curses Elihue and conditions the removal of the curse to Asarella sleeping with him, and Elihue uses her filial love for him to strong-arm her into marrying him, threatening to leave her forever if she does not comply.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Cainen curses Rakne for always using extreme measures to get what he wants, only to immediately admit to himself that he too behaves this way.
** Elihue and Cainen both extort Asarella to get her as their sexual partner. Cainen curses Elihue and conditions the removal of the curse to Asarella sleeping with him, and Elihue uses her filial love for him to strong-arm her into marrying him, threatening to leave her forever if she does not comply.way.
** Elihue and Cainen both extort Asarella to get her as their sexual partner. Cainen curses Elihue and conditions the removal of the curse to Asarella sleeping with him, and Elihue uses her filial love for him to strong-arm her into marrying him, threatening to leave her forever if she does not comply.
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Tropes in the main list should not have their names potholed. Grammar, too.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: The beautiful and melancholic Cainen has a few women ([[EvenTheGuysWantHim and a man]]) hanging around his castle trying to romance him. He's not interested and keeps teleporting away from them, but they don't get the hint. In fact, if anything his evasiveness appears to make him even ''more'' appealing to them.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: The beautiful and melancholic Cainen has a few women ([[EvenTheGuysWantHim and a man]]) hanging around his castle trying to romance him. He's not interested and keeps teleporting away from them, but they don't get the hint. In fact, if anything anything, his evasiveness appears to make him even ''more'' appealing to them.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Rea despairingly asks Cainen why he doesn't love her, he asks her why does she love him. She doesn't really know what to say.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Rea despairingly asks Cainen why he doesn't love her, he asks her why does she love loves him. She doesn't really know what to say.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One [[AlternateEnding extra story]] in volume 8 shows Asarella and Cainen married and having seven young children. Asarella is [[MissingMom and absent mom]] who travels for years at a time while Cainen [[HouseHusband stays home]] and cares for their many children. He tries to conceive an eight because Asarella stays home with him for about a year after the birth of each child.
* BadassAdorable: Although only 19 years old an a rather inexperienced mage, Asarella is very brave and clever, managing to outwit Belials infinitely older than her... much to their amusement.
* BadassAdorable: Although only 19 years old an a rather inexperienced mage, Asarella is very brave and clever, managing to outwit Belials infinitely older than her... much to their amusement.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One [[AlternateEnding extra story]] in volume 8 shows Asarella and Cainen married and having seven young children. Asarella is [[MissingMom and an absent mom]] who travels for years at a time while Cainen [[HouseHusband stays home]] and cares for their many children. He tries to conceive an eight eighth because Asarella stays home with him for about a year after the birth of each child.
* BadassAdorable: Although only 19 years oldan and a rather inexperienced mage, Asarella is very brave and clever, managing to outwit Belials infinitely older than her... much to their amusement.
* BadassAdorable: Although only 19 years old
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The second volume marks a distinct change of tone in the narrative, which goes from cute and funny to dark, gritty and outright nightmarish sometimes.
* DamselInDistress: Asarella gets regularly rescued by either Elihue, Cainen or the Masked Man.
* DamselInDistress: Asarella gets regularly rescued by either Elihue, Cainen or the Masked Man.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The second volume marks a distinct change of tone in the narrative, which goes from cute and funny to dark, gritty gritty, and outright nightmarish sometimes.
* DamselInDistress: Asarella gets regularly rescued by either Elihue,Cainen Cainen, or the Masked Man.
* DamselInDistress: Asarella gets regularly rescued by either Elihue,
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** Gatmiel offers to heal Cloe's disfigurement if she agrees to marry him. Cloe grudgingly accepts, and endures the humiliation and well as sexual assault that come with the deal. This eventually chips away at her sanity.
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** Gatmiel offers to heal Cloe's disfigurement if she agrees to marry him. Cloe grudgingly accepts, and endures the humiliation and as well as sexual assault that come with the deal. This eventually chips away at her sanity.
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* [[IntimateHairBrushing Intimate Hair Styling]]: Upon seeing that Asarella is unsuccessfully trying to pin her hair up, Elihue takes her hairpin and helps her. It's a sweet moment that underlines their close relationship.
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* [[IntimateHairBrushing Intimate Hair Styling]]: IntimateHairBrushing: Upon seeing that Asarella is unsuccessfully trying to pin her hair up, Elihue takes her hairpin and helps her. It's a sweet moment that underlines their close relationship.
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* ReallYGetsAround: Cainen is shown several times in a pile of exhausted naked men and women, with the implication that he goes through periods in which he indulges in orgies.
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* ReallYGetsAround: ReallyGetsAround: Cainen is shown several times in a pile of exhausted naked men and women, with the implication that he goes through periods in which he indulges in orgies.
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* TallDarkAndSnarky: Cainen.
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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: In the sequel, Rakin unexpectedly visits Rea one night and carries her off to her bedroom. Rea is angry and clearly states that she doesn't want this and slaps him repeatedly, but he overpowers her and she is shown to enjoy their coupling tremendously.
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** Cainen is turned into a hideous corpse by Asarella's love potion. Later in the story, we find out that genuinely falling in love leads to a slow death for Belials.
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No longer to be used as a trope.
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* {{Badass}}: All the Belials qualify, especially Cainen.
** Elihue is a powerful mage who proves his mettle when he saves most of the people of Edda.
** Rea is not only a talented healer and poison master, but she also stood up to a Demon Lord and ''decapitated'' him within moments of meeting him.
** Elihue is a powerful mage who proves his mettle when he saves most of the people of Edda.
** Rea is not only a talented healer and poison master, but she also stood up to a Demon Lord and ''decapitated'' him within moments of meeting him.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Rea despairingly asks Cainen why he doesn't love her, he asks her why does she love him. She doesn't really know what to say.
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* ShortHairWithTail: Cainen and Rakin both sport this.
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* GirlishPigtails: Asarella used to wear her hair like this when she was a little girl.
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* DreadlockWarrior: The warrior Rakin wears part of his hair in long dreadlocks.
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* ParentalNeglect: Of the emotional kind. Cloe's mother doesn't seem to care about her at all, not even bothering to inquire about her safety following the fall of Edda. On top of that, it's heavily implied that she's involved with Gatmiel... even after he becomes engaged to Cloe.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The second volume marks a distinct change of tone in the narrative, which goes from cute and funny to dark, gritty and outright nightmarish sometimes.
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* ImAHumanitarian: A Tannan claims to have eaten Asarella's mother. The Demon Lord of the Underworld takes a bit out of Asarella's arm.
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* ImAHumanitarian: A Tannan claims to have eaten Asarella's mother.
** The Demon Lord of the Underworld takes abit bite out of Asarella's arm.arm.
** In the prequel, Cainen eats a human baby's heart.
** The Demon Lord of the Underworld takes a
** In the prequel, Cainen eats a human baby's heart.
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* ContrivedConcidence: Asarella just happens to give Cainen exactly the same names as Rea.
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* ContrivedConcidence: ContrivedCoincidence: Asarella just happens to give Cainen exactly ''exactly'' the same names as Rea.Rea gave him.
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** Although Rakin offers to take Rea away toward the end of the original manga, in the sequel it is shown that he is not the loving partner Rea might have hoped for because he doesn't believe that the resurrected Rea is in fact the same person he lost half a millennia ago. He ignores her, treats her coldly and eventually forces himself on her out of insecurity when Cainen visits unexpectedly.
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** Elihue is frustrated that Asarella only sees him as her father, and attempts to rape her.
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** Elihue is frustrated that Asarella only sees him as her father, and attempts to rape her. He also keeps tabs on her even after she ceased being his student, and refused to get involved when people came to him for help because he was hoping that a young man who had a crush on Asarella would die in the ensuing war.
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* ShesAllGrownUpNow: Elihue leaves Asarella in a Mascan orphanage for three years because of work, and when he comes back he's surprised to see that she has grown into a beautiful teenager.
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* ShesAllGrownUpNow: SheIsAllGrownUp: Elihue leaves Asarella in a Mascan orphanage for three years because of work, and when he comes back he's surprised to see that she has grown into a beautiful teenager.
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* ShesAllGrownUpNow: Elihue leaves Asarella in a Mascan orphanage for three years because of work, and when he comes back he's surprised to see that she has grown into a beautiful teenager.
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* ContrivedConcidence: Asarella just happens to give Cainen exactly the same names as Rea.
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** It runs in Cloe's family, since her older sister Rea became infatuated with Cainen and got insanely jealous and began to commit increasingly degrading acts out of desperation.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Rea created a powerful poison and wanted to kill both Cainen and herself because she could not stand the idea of him falling for another woman in the future. Cainen slapped the glass away from her lips but the small amount of poison she had managed to ingest killed her over the next hundred years, and she eventually died from it.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: Rea constantly amazes the people who see her through her almost inhuman beauty and perfection.
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* CrypticBackgroundReference: The Belials are fond of reminiscing or mentioning events or characters long dead, without really showing the reader their significance. Some never come up again, others end up playing an important part in the plot.
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* CrypticBackgroundReference: The Belials are fond of reminiscing or mentioning [[CrypticConversation mentioning]] events or characters long dead, dead or unheard of before, without really showing the reader their significance. Some never come up again, others end up playing an important part in the plot.