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* StepfordSuburbiaStepfordSuburbia: Camazotz.
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* ShesAManInJapan: The Happy Medium is played man who claims he's "beyond gender" in TheFilmOfTheBook, even though she's clearly a woman in the book.
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* ShesAManInJapan: The Happy Medium is played by a man who claims he's "beyond gender" in TheFilmOfTheBook, even though she's clearly a woman in the book.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: '''And how.''' The Man With Red Eyes is a soulless monster right at the bottom of the UncannyValley, as befitting IT'S enforcer.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: '''And how.''' The Man With Red Eyes is a soulless monster right at the bottom of the UncannyValley, as befitting IT'S ITS enforcer.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: '''And how.''' The Man With the Red Eyes is a soulless monster, as befitting IT'S enforcer.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: '''And how.''' The Man With the Red Eyes is a soulless monster, monster right at the bottom of the UncannyValley, as befitting IT'S enforcer.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Camazotz comes across as a combination of the worst points of both ColdWar superpowers: one part 1950's America, one part Stalinist Russia, all parts bad.
* TheDragon: The Man with the Red Eyes.
* TheDragon: The Man with the Red Eyes.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Camazotz comes across as a combination of the worst points parts of both ColdWar superpowers: one part 1950's America, one part Stalinist Russia, all parts bad.
* TheDragon: The Man with the RedEyes.Eyes to IT.
* TheDragon: The Man with the Red
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: ''And '''And how.''''' The Man With the Red Eyes is a soulless monster, as befitting IT'S enforcer.
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* RedEyesTakeWarningRedEyesTakeWarning: ''And how.''
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The family\'s name is actually Murry, not Wallace
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Dr. Wallace has been missing since Charles Wallace was a baby; at least four years. However, being trapped on a crazy, ultra-controlling planet with no way to get home or communicate with your family is a totally plausible reason.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Dr. Wallace Murry has been missing since Charles Wallace was a baby; at least four years. However, being trapped on a crazy, ultra-controlling planet with no way to get home or communicate with your family is a totally plausible reason.
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Less awkward wording.
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murry household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murry, her younger and precocious brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murry household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murry, her younger and precocious younger brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Meg is very protective of Charles Wallace.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Dr. Wallace has been missing since Charles Wallace was a baby; at least four years. However, being trapped on a crazy, ultra-controlling planet with no way to get home or communicate with your family is a totally plausible reason.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: Calvin's family.
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* ChekhovsGunman: For the series, Mr. Jenkins and Mrs. O'Keefe.
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* NamesTheSame: Camazotz is the name of a real life bat-god. This name is also used in Kenneth Oppel's ''{{Silverwing}}'' series.
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* NamesTheSame: Camazotz is the name of a real life bat-god. This name is also used in Kenneth Oppel's ''{{Silverwing}}'' ''Literature/{{Silverwing}}'' series.
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* StarfishAliens: The people of Ixchel. They also have {{Eyeless Face}}s. But are good.
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* StarfishAliens: The peaceful people of Ixchel. They also Ixchel, who are [[EyelessFace all blind, and have {{Eyeless Face}}s. But are good.no sense of color]].
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consistency for last name (double-checked that Murry, though unusual, is correct)
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murray household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murray, her younger and precocious brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murray Murry household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murray, Murry, her younger and precocious brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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The further adventures of the Murrays and, especially, Meg are detailed in the sequels: ''AWindInTheDoor'', ''ASwiftlyTiltingPlanet'' and ''ManyWaters,'' followed by a series of books centered around [[spoiler: Meg and Calvin's daughter Poly.]]
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The further adventures of the Murrays Murrys and, especially, Meg are detailed in the sequels: ''AWindInTheDoor'', ''ASwiftlyTiltingPlanet'' and ''ManyWaters,'' followed by a series of books centered around [[spoiler: Meg and Calvin's daughter Poly.]]
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* BlackSheep: Calvin, in his family. The twins, Sandy and Dennys, in the Murray family, to a lesser extent. They're normal in a family of misfit intellectuals.
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* BlackSheep: Calvin, in his family. The twins, Sandy and Dennys, in the Murray Murry family, to a lesser extent. They're normal in a family of misfit intellectuals.
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* PunctuationShaker: An odd inversion: Meg's mother is "Mrs. Murray" but the witches are "Mrs Whatsit" and so forth. I.e., the witches don't have a period at the end of their "Mrs". What this ''means'' is up in the air...
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* PunctuationShaker: An odd inversion: Meg's mother is "Mrs. Murray" Murry" but the witches are "Mrs Whatsit" and so forth. I.e., the witches don't have a period at the end of their "Mrs". What this ''means'' is up in the air...
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* TechnoBabble: Mrs Whatsit explains to Calvin that instead of traveling at any speed, they "tesser" or "wrinkle."
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* PunctuationShaker: An odd inversion: Meg's mother is "Mrs. Murry" Murray" but the witches are "Mrs Whatsit" and so forth. I.e., the witches don't have a period at the end of their "Mrs". What this ''means'' is up in the air...
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** Well, there is that description about dimensions (a tesseract is a four-dimensional structure similar to a three-dimensional cube, or a two-dimensional square.)
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murry household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murry, her younger and precocious brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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The first book in the Time Quartet series by MadeleineLEngle, ''A Wrinkle in Time'' opens with the well-honored line "[[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight It was a dark and stormy night]]" and the appearance of a stranger at the Murry Murray household. The stranger, who calls herself Mrs Whatsit, turns out to be much more than the dotty old lady she initially comes across as. Soon, Meg Murry, Murray, her younger and precocious brother Charles Wallace, and her schoolmate Calvin find themselves on an interplanetary and interdimensional journey with Mrs Whatsit and her equally odd buddies Mrs Who and Mrs Which to rescue Meg's missing father. To tell more would spoil your enjoyment of this unusual and fantastic (in more than one way) book.
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The further adventures of the Murrys and, especially, Meg are detailed in the sequels: ''AWindInTheDoor'', ''ASwiftlyTiltingPlanet'' and ''ManyWaters,'' followed by a series of books centered around [[spoiler: Meg and Calvin's daughter Polly.]]
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The further adventures of the Murrys Murrays and, especially, Meg are detailed in the sequels: ''AWindInTheDoor'', ''ASwiftlyTiltingPlanet'' and ''ManyWaters,'' followed by a series of books centered around [[spoiler: Meg and Calvin's daughter Polly.Poly.]]
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* InnocentProdigy: Charles Wallace.
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* TheLinus: Charles Wallace.
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* GeniusBreedingAct: Meg's parents are both doctors; her father is a physicist, while her mother is a microbiologist.
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Don\'t know how it got missed, but there\'s a trope here that belongs to Wind. Echthroi aren\'t in Wrinkle.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "''And the light shineth forth in darkness, and the darkness comprehendeth it not.''"
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "''And the light shineth forth in darkness, and the darkness comprehendeth it not.''"
* EvilSmellsBad: The Echthroi have a horrible stench, which only manifests when they aren't disguising themselves.''"
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** A similar incident is revealed to be part of Mrs. Whatsit's backstory.
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There\'s got to be a trope for Mrs. Whatsit\'s choice of words (tesser or wrinkle) that would mean absolutely nothing to Calvin.
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* FasterThanLightTravel: The tesseract.
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* FasterThanLightTravel: The tesseract.
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* AnotherDimension: The fifth dimension, to be exact. And there's an amusing near-stop in the second dimension.
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* AnotherDimension: The fifth dimension, to be exact. And there's an amusing near-stop in the second dimension.on a two-dimensional planet.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Explicitly noted by Calvin, who tells Meg flat out that "I don't want anyone else to see what dreamboat eyes you have."
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* NamesTheSame: Camazotz is the name of a real life bat-god. This name is also used in Kenneth Oppel's ''Silverwing'' series.
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** "Sorry for ''what'', [[TransformersGeneration1 Megatron]]?"
** "Sorry for ''what'', [[TransformersGeneration1 Megatron]]?"