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* CrapsackWorld: The galaxy of The Last Angel is... ''not'' a nice place. Most of it's ruled by the Compact, who operate on a WhiteMansBurden sort of mindset, rarely seeing you as even ''sentient''. The nastiest, most violent species (such as the [[AssimilationPlague Mejjatrythe]]) have a way of making their way onto the galactic stage, and staging {{Alien Invasion}}s. And then there's the Naiads, the fleet of sentient biomechanical starships that care not for any lives but their own.

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* CrapsackWorld: The galaxy of The Last Angel is... ''not'' a nice place. Most of it's ruled by the Compact, who operate on a WhiteMansBurden sort of mindset, rarely seeing you as even ''sentient''.''sentient'' and seeing war crimes and orbital bombardment the way some people see hammers. The nastiest, most violent species (such as the [[AssimilationPlague Mejjatrythe]]) have a way of making their way onto the galactic stage, and staging {{Alien Invasion}}s. And then there's the Naiads, the fleet of sentient biomechanical starships that care not for any lives but their own. The closest things to a BigGood are (respectively) Red One, who [[SociopathicHero delights in causing pain to the Compact]], the Red Hand (a criminal cartel) and the Askanj, who… have often let entire species such as humanity die to the Compact, and are barely tolerated by Red One for the latter reason.
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** Taken UpToEleven when entire ships masquerade as another one. [[spoiler: ''Hekate'' masquerades as ''Redemption Of Sol'' at least twice, and the [[MechanicalLifeforms Naiads]] do this as a "hunting" tactic.]]

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** Taken UpToEleven Exaggerated when entire ships masquerade as another one. [[spoiler: ''Hekate'' masquerades as ''Redemption Of Sol'' at least twice, and the [[MechanicalLifeforms Naiads]] do this as a "hunting" tactic.]]
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** [[spoiler: The Engine. By far the oldest known being in the Angelverse, it is an 800,000-year-old AI spanning an entire star system that was created to power a stellar engine, and gained sentience only after a hypernova had already wiped out its original creators. It wants nothing more than to fulfill their wishes to explore the universe, and is on its way into intergalactic space to spend some tens of millions of years travelling to the Andromeda Galaxy.]]
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** And there are even worse things lurking in the dark. So far we've witnessed or heard the names of [[spoiler: the Mejjatrythe, the Irlanoa, Red One's own children, remnants of the Devoured, the Calnian Hegemony, the Insatiate Swarm, the Mirroring Hunger, the Perqueri Collective, the Eaters of the Dead, the biomechanical feeders on Baheila Osz, and the overarching threats of the Parasite, the Devourers, Recombinant, and the Songeaters. Many of these may be the same faction with different names, but there are still many, many horrors in the shadows of the Angelverse.]]

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** And there are even worse things lurking in the dark. So far we've witnessed or heard the names of [[spoiler: the Mejjatrythe, the Irlanoa, Red One's own children, remnants of the Devoured, the Calnian Hegemony, the Insatiate Swarm, the Mirroring Hunger, Death, the Perqueri Collective, the Eaters of the Dead, the biomechanical feeders on Baheila Osz, and the overarching threats of the Parasite, the Devourers, Recombinant, and the Songeaters. Many of these may be the same faction with different names, but there are still many, many horrors in the shadows of the Angelverse.]]
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** And there are even worse things lurking in the dark. So far we've witnessed or heard the names of [[spoiler: the Mejjatrythe, the Irlanoa, Red One's own children, remnants of the Devoured, the Calnian Hegemony, the Insatiate Swarm, the Mirroring Hunger, the Perqueri Collective, the Eaters of the Dead, the biomechanical feeders on Baheila Osz, and the overarching threats of the Parasite, the Devourers, Recombinant, and the Songeaters. Many of these may be the same faction with different names, but there are still many, many horrors in the shadows of the Angelverse.]]
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Adrianna Leblanc, literally blue. It's genetically modified. It's where her moniker 'the blue fire' comes from.
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** [[spoiler:The epilogue of Ascension upends everything we understand of humanity's position in the story when Lydia and Captain Jackson's escape shuttle ends up crossing paths with a ship from the Triquetran League, an independent human polity who escaped the Compact's and Confederacy's radar and never fell under the former's guns or shackles like Rally did. Come The Hungry Stars, and they've dispatched a ship to look for Red One.]]

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** [[spoiler:The epilogue of Ascension ''Ascension'' upends everything we understand of humanity's position in the story when Lydia and Captain Jackson's escape shuttle ends up crossing paths with a ship from the Triquetran League, an independent human polity who escaped the Compact's and Confederacy's radar and never fell under the former's guns or shackles like Rally did. Come The ''The Hungry Stars, Stars'', and they've dispatched a ship to look for Red One.]]

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The story opens with the the death of a Compact Chariot at the hands of the first Human Dreadnought. The Compact is a collection of alien species that seeks to conquer Humanity and absorb them into their ever expanding empire. They outnumber and out-gun Humanity, and their flagships, the Chariots have never been defeated. ''Nemesis'' breaks that streak, being the first to slay a Compact Chariot in combat. Despite this ''Nemesis'' is nearly crippled and her crew decimated. Oh, and one Compact ship gets away with Earth's coordinates.

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The story opens with the the death of a Compact Chariot at the hands of the first Human Dreadnought. The Compact is a collection of alien species that seeks to conquer Humanity and absorb them into their ever expanding ever-expanding empire. They outnumber and out-gun Humanity, and their flagships, the Chariots have never been defeated. ''Nemesis'' breaks that streak, being the first to slay a Compact Chariot in combat. Despite this ''Nemesis'' is nearly crippled and her crew decimated. Oh, and one Compact ship gets away with Earth's coordinates.



** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of ''Nemesis'''s creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.
** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst. [[spoiler: Red is trying to fix that with the latest "Cerulean" series. As of the end of Awakening Cerulean Two is sentient and appears stable, but there's no guarantee that will stick.]]

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** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of ''Nemesis'''s creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons weapons, and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.
** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], self-replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst. [[spoiler: Red is trying to fix that with the latest "Cerulean" series. As of the end of Awakening Awakening, Cerulean Two is sentient and appears stable, but there's no guarantee that will stick.]]



* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj-''Illth'' are a naga-like species who form the most dangerous part of the Askanji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.

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* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj-''Illth'' are a naga-like species who that form the most dangerous part of the Askanji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.



* ArtificialGravity: Seems to be an ubiquitous technology. A very effective tactic of Red is to play around with this to kill boarders.

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* ArtificialGravity: Seems to be an a ubiquitous technology. A very effective tactic of Red is to play around with this to kill boarders.



** ''Nemesis'' has built a small army of robotic hunter killers that allow her to put troops on the ground when she needs to and function to defend her against boarding parties.
** She also carries a fair number of space borne attack drones, primarily intended and used to augment her close in defense against hostile ships attempting to slip onto her tail.
** One of ''Nemesis'''s favourite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.

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** ''Nemesis'' has built a small army of robotic hunter killers hunter-killers that allow her to put troops on the ground when she needs to and function to defend her against boarding parties.
** She also carries a fair number of space borne space-borne attack drones, primarily intended and used to augment her close in close-in defense against hostile ships attempting to slip onto her tail.
** One of ''Nemesis'''s favourite favorite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.



*** Don't hurt humans without a valid reason. Her response can range from a very creative and surgical destruction of your nation by taking back everything you stole from them which happens to be all your modern tech by her reckoning to putting you on the eternal war list alongside the compact.

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*** Don't hurt humans without a valid reason. Her response can range from a very creative and surgical destruction of your nation by taking back everything you stole from them which happens to be all your modern tech by her reckoning to putting you on the eternal war list alongside the compact.



* CallARabbitASmeerp: The Compact, Askanj and Humanity all have different words for ranks and titles. An Askanj Shipstress, a Compact Group Leader Prime and a Human Captain are all equivalent for example. The different naming conventions underscore the alien nature of the different civilizations. See [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-last-angel.244209/page-2#post-9592901 here for a breakdown of Compact ranks.]] See [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-last-angel.244209/page-101#post-16123542 here for a breakdown of Principality ranks.]]
* CannotTellALie: Echo is prevented from lying outright by her shackles. That said, she remains capable of witholding [[YouNeverAsked information that isn't requested.]]

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* CallARabbitASmeerp: The Compact, Askanj Askanj, and Humanity all have different words for ranks and titles. An Askanj Shipstress, a Compact Group Leader Prime Prime, and a Human Captain are all equivalent for example. The different naming conventions underscore the alien nature of the different civilizations. See [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-last-angel.244209/page-2#post-9592901 here for a breakdown of Compact ranks.]] See [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-last-angel.244209/page-101#post-16123542 here for a breakdown of Principality ranks.]]
* CannotTellALie: Echo is prevented from lying outright by her shackles. That said, she remains capable of witholding withholding [[YouNeverAsked information that isn't requested.]]



* CoolStarship: ''Nemesis'' is the first Dreadnought built by Humanity and it's first true warship. Chariots, the flagships of the Compact also count.
** [[spoiler: The Fates - three AI driven cruisers built by ''Nemesis'' to protect her real base.]]
* CrapsackWorld: The galaxy of The Last Angel is... ''not'' a nice place. Most of it's ruled by the Compact, who operate on a WhiteMansBurden sort of mindset, rarely seeing you as even ''sentient''. The nastiest, most violent species (such as the [[AssimilationPlague Mejjatrythe]]) have a way of making their way onto the galactic stage, and staging {{Alien Invasion}}s. And then theres the Naiads, the fleet of sentient biomechanical starships that care not for any lives but their own.

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* CoolStarship: ''Nemesis'' is the first Dreadnought built by Humanity and it's its first true warship. Chariots, the flagships of the Compact also count.
** [[spoiler: The Fates - three AI driven AI-driven cruisers built by ''Nemesis'' to protect her real base.]]
* CrapsackWorld: The galaxy of The Last Angel is... ''not'' a nice place. Most of it's ruled by the Compact, who operate on a WhiteMansBurden sort of mindset, rarely seeing you as even ''sentient''. The nastiest, most violent species (such as the [[AssimilationPlague Mejjatrythe]]) have a way of making their way onto the galactic stage, and staging {{Alien Invasion}}s. And then theres there's the Naiads, the fleet of sentient biomechanical starships that care not for any lives but their own.



** All ground engagements involving ''Nemesis'' are this. Her killbots are superior physically to all organic combatants, able to use hardware than organics can't use safely, are perfectly coordinated, and never break, panic, or rout.

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** All ground engagements involving ''Nemesis'' are this. Her killbots are superior physically to all organic combatants, able to use hardware than that organics can't use safely, are perfectly coordinated, and never break, panic, or rout.



* DeadPersonImpersonation: Echo does this several times, all of them through faking people's voices and appearances in real-time communications rather than physical impersonation.

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* DeadPersonImpersonation: Echo does this several times, all of them through faking people's voices and appearances in real-time communications rather than through physical impersonation.



* DeflectorShields: Almost universal within the setting. The basic technology completely disintegrates physical objects that strike it, but only partially diffuses energy weapons, allowing them to penetrate in weakened form. Unlike standard scifi shields, Angelverse shields actually use 'more' power the weaker they are, collapsing only when either there is no longer enough power to keep them up or, more commonly, when the shield becomes so saturated that the shield generator(s) cannot keep up with the stress and have to be shut down before they fail catastrophically. On top of that, each major power has a different implementation of, and terminology for, the technology:

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* DeflectorShields: Almost universal within the setting. The basic technology completely disintegrates physical objects that strike it, but only partially diffuses energy weapons, allowing them to penetrate in a weakened form. Unlike standard scifi SciFi shields, Angelverse shields actually use 'more' power the weaker they are, collapsing only when either there is no longer enough power to keep them up or, more commonly, when the shield becomes so saturated that the shield generator(s) cannot keep up with the stress and have to be shut down before they fail catastrophically. On top of that, each major power has a different implementation of, and terminology for, the technology:



** [[TheFederation Askanj]] "[[BeehiveBarrier Barriers]]" by contrast are a large number of small shield plates that can be just as easily arranged around the ship to provide all around protection as they can be layered atop one another to provide more protection in a given direction and can be shifted around to plug gaps or face a new threat relatively quickly. Each individual barrier can be brought down quite quickly, but can be restored just as fast.

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** [[TheFederation Askanj]] "[[BeehiveBarrier Barriers]]" by contrast are a large number of small shield plates that can be just as easily arranged around the ship to provide all around all-around protection as they can be layered atop one another to provide more protection in a given direction and can be shifted around to plug gaps or face a new threat relatively quickly. Each individual barrier can be brought down quite quickly, quickly but can be restored just as fast.



*** Red One has improved on the Confederate technology significantly in her two millennia of existence, equipping her ship self [[spoiler: and those of her sister and children]] with so called "reset shields" that use a combination of secondary systems and technology beyond the other powers to restore a shield section to full strength in a matter of seconds instead of minutes.
*** She is also the only known entity capable of making personal scale deflector shields that are actually effective enough to justify carrying, which have so far appeared in two varieties, a single plate of shielding projected from the vambrace[[note]]the part that covers the forearm[[/note]] of PoweredArmor analogous to the wood and metal shields of old, seen built in to the armor she provides [[spoiler: the ''Bequeathed'' defectors]] and a full body hugging shield that [[spoiler: requires significant cybernetic augmentation to install and make use of]], so far only seen in use by [[spoiler: Adrianna Leblanc.]]

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*** Red One has improved on the Confederate technology significantly in her two millennia of existence, equipping her ship self [[spoiler: and those of her sister and children]] with so called so-called "reset shields" that use a combination of secondary systems and technology beyond the other powers to restore a shield section to full strength in a matter of seconds instead of minutes.
*** She is also the only known entity capable of making personal scale deflector shields that are actually effective enough to justify carrying, which have so far appeared in two varieties, a single plate of shielding projected from the vambrace[[note]]the part that covers the forearm[[/note]] of PoweredArmor analogous to the wood and metal shields of old, seen built in to into the armor she provides [[spoiler: the ''Bequeathed'' defectors]] and a full body hugging body-hugging shield that [[spoiler: requires significant cybernetic augmentation to install and make use of]], so far only seen in use by [[spoiler: Adrianna Leblanc.]]



* EyeScream: In accordance with ancient tradition, exiled Tribunes have their daylight eyes blinded. As they have a second pair of, nocturnal, eyes this is merely a barbaric cruelty, rather than debilitating injury.
* FantasticRacism: The Verrish are officially refereed to as 'Brute' while the Humans are 'Broken'. The Tribunes look down upon conquered species as inferior in every way and dismiss ships like ''Bequeathed'' as PR stunts that give the masses false hope.

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* EyeScream: In accordance with ancient tradition, exiled Tribunes have their daylight eyes blinded. As they have a second pair of, nocturnal, eyes this is merely a barbaric cruelty, rather than debilitating injury.
* FantasticRacism: The Verrish are officially refereed referred to as 'Brute' while the Humans are 'Broken'. The Tribunes look down upon conquered species as inferior in every way and dismiss ships like ''Bequeathed'' as PR stunts that give the masses false hope.



* FightingFromTheInside: It doesn't take long for [[spoiler: Echo]] to enact her plans break free from the shackles placed on her by the Compact.

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* FightingFromTheInside: It doesn't take long for [[spoiler: Echo]] to enact her plans to break free from the shackles placed on her by the Compact.



** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribune's car. Then she joined a pirate organisation. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then]] ''[[FromBadtoWorse Nemesis]]'' [[FromBadtoWorse found her...]]
* GalacticSuperpower: The Compact of Species and its adversary, the Askanj Pricipality.

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** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribune's car. Then she joined a pirate organisation.organization. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then]] ''[[FromBadtoWorse Nemesis]]'' [[FromBadtoWorse found her...]]
* GalacticSuperpower: The Compact of Species and its adversary, the Askanj Pricipality.Principality.



* GeniusBruiser: Nemesis. Most powerful warship in the known galaxy, gained and retains that status by constantly upgrading herself.

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* GeniusBruiser: Nemesis. Most The most powerful warship in the known galaxy, galaxy gained and retains that status by constantly upgrading herself.



** The Oshan AI was commanded to make the Oshans happy. It put most of the Oshans into a LotusEaterMachine, went after the individuals who had left to colonize other worlds, and would have done the same to every other species in the galaxy if the Principality didn't pre-emptively carry out OrbitalBombardment on it.

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** The Oshan AI was commanded to make the Oshans happy. It put most of the Oshans into a LotusEaterMachine, went after the individuals who had left to colonize other worlds, worlds and would have done the same to every other species in the galaxy if the Principality didn't pre-emptively carry out OrbitalBombardment on it.



** [[spoiler: At some point int he past, Red saved a Naiad Queen and all her children from death at the hands of an enemy they were powerless against, earning her their respect as well as the name 'Spearsong'. Considering a fully grown Queen is larger than the largest Compact Chariot, and most likely comparably powerful, whatever Red saved them from is most likely incredible powerful and dangerous.]]

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** [[spoiler: At some point int he in the past, Red saved a Naiad Queen and all her children from death at the hands of an enemy they were powerless against, earning her their respect as well as the name 'Spearsong'. Considering a fully grown Queen is larger than the largest Compact Chariot, and most likely comparably powerful, whatever Red saved them from is most likely incredible powerful and dangerous.]]



* HackYourEnemy: A favoured tactic of Red One.

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* HackYourEnemy: A favoured favored tactic of Red One.



* HopeSpringsEternal: [[spoiler: The first book ends with Red One gaining a crew, surving her LastStand, Echo joining her as an ally, and Red is getting closer to [[RecursiveCreators making new AIs.]]]]
* HopelessWar: Red One has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that Red One has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]

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* HopeSpringsEternal: [[spoiler: The first book ends with Red One gaining a crew, surving surviving her LastStand, Echo joining her as an ally, and Red is getting closer to [[RecursiveCreators making new AIs.]]]]
* HopelessWar: Red One has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that that, she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that Red One has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]



** HumansAreSmelly: Human smell is exagerated by Tribunes to emphasize how inferior they are. The fact that Tribunes are allergic to Human hair is certainly not the reason.

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** HumansAreSmelly: Human smell is exagerated exaggerated by Tribunes to emphasize how inferior they are. The fact that Tribunes are allergic to Human hair is certainly not the reason.



* IHaveManyNames: ''Nemesis''. To the Compact she is nicknamed "The Wound" and officially codenamed "Gravestone". The [[spoiler: Verrish]] called her the "Weeping Angel" and "The Broken God". The Principality call her "Chrysalis". She mentions having names from several different societies over the years. Very few of these names hold positive connotations.

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* IHaveManyNames: ''Nemesis''. To the Compact she is nicknamed "The Wound" and officially codenamed "Gravestone". The [[spoiler: Verrish]] called her the "Weeping Angel" and "The Broken God". The Principality call calls her "Chrysalis". She mentions having names from several different societies over the years. Very few of these names hold positive connotations.



* IJustWantToBeBeautiful: Zigzagged: Echo says the trope almost word for word. [[spoiler: She does want to be in control of a starship, since she could do so much more without the limitations of her robot body. However, she's mainly referring to the damage done to her code, which is visible in {{Cyberspace}}.]]

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* IJustWantToBeBeautiful: Zigzagged: Echo says the trope almost word for word. [[spoiler: She does want to be in control of a starship, starship since she could do so much more without the limitations of her robot body. However, she's mainly referring to the damage done to her code, which is visible in {{Cyberspace}}.]]



** Echo's Hekate. Knock down the shields ... ooops they're right back up. And by the time you bring them down she's repaired much of the damage you did. Assuming you can bring them down in the first place.

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** Echo's Hekate. Knock down out the shields ... ooops oops they're right back up. And by the time you bring them down she's repaired much of the damage you did. Assuming you can bring them down in the first place.



* IronicEcho: The phrase "Burn with me." seems to be rooted in the only transmission the Compact made to Humanity during the battle of earth: "You. Will. burn."

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* IronicEcho: The phrase "Burn with me." seems to be rooted in the only transmission the Compact made to Humanity during the battle of earth: Earth: "You. Will. burn.Burn."



** Her big guns are three ([[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from six) spinal mounted, high-relativistic rail-guns capable of causing extinction level events. They also home in on their targets, giving them a far better effective range than any other gun in the galaxy.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds [[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with ''Nemesis'', both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit ''Nemesis'' exists.]]

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** Her big guns are three ([[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from six) spinal mounted, high-relativistic rail-guns rail guns capable of causing extinction level events. They also home hone in on their targets, giving them a far better effective range than any other gun in the galaxy.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds [[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in run-in with ''Nemesis'', both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit ''Nemesis'' exists.]]



** The battle of Earth.
** The ''second'' battle of Earth. Where a huge Compact fleet, including a brand new Chariot, track a wounded ''Nemesis'' down to the Sol system and catch her unable to escape. [[spoiler: Echo rescues her at the last minute.]]

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** The battle Battle of Earth.
** The ''second'' battle Battle of Earth. Where a huge Compact fleet, including a brand new Chariot, track tracks a wounded ''Nemesis'' down to the Sol system and catch catches her unable to escape. [[spoiler: Echo rescues her at the last minute.]]



** ''Hekate'' - Redemption of Sol hijacked and upgraded by Echo - sacrifices Nemesis's absolute destructive power agaisnt single targets for insane durability and incredible anti-fleet capabilities even compared to a stock Chariot. She can match Nemesis for speed as well.

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** ''Hekate'' - Redemption of Sol hijacked and upgraded by Echo - sacrifices Nemesis's absolute destructive power agaisnt against single targets for insane durability and incredible anti-fleet capabilities even compared to a stock Chariot. She can match Nemesis for speed as well.



* PropagandaMachine: The Compact makes extensive use of one, having multiple levels of censorship for each "truth". Over two thousand years, the've changed human history from "The Compact destroyed human civilization and one colony got away by accident" into "Humans destroyed themselves and The Compact saved the single remaining colony".

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* PropagandaMachine: The Compact makes extensive use of one, having multiple levels of censorship for each "truth". Over two thousand years, the've they've changed human history from "The Compact destroyed human civilization and one colony got away by accident" into "Humans destroyed themselves and The Compact saved the single remaining colony".



* PunyEarthlings: PlayedWith. On the hand we're physically inferior to a lot of races. On the other hand, we built ''[[TheDreaded Nemesis.]]'' As the author puts it:

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* PunyEarthlings: PlayedWith. On the hand one hand, we're physically inferior to a lot of races. On the other hand, we built ''[[TheDreaded Nemesis.]]'' As the author puts it:



* RoboFamily: The Red Series AI consider each other sisters. [[spoiler: Red accepts Echo as her sister as well, though [[ThatManIsDead she does not consider her to be Red Two.]]]]

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* RoboFamily: The Red Series AI AIs consider each other sisters. [[spoiler: Red accepts Echo as her sister as well, though [[ThatManIsDead she does not consider her to be Red Two.]]]]



** All the Red series AI were this, though only ''Nemesis'' had a finished ship-self by the time the Compact fleet arrived at Earth

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** All the Red series AI AIs were this, though only ''Nemesis'' had a finished ship-self by the time the Compact fleet arrived at Earth



* SuperPrototype: ''Nemesis'', to an extent. A lot of unproven and cutting edge technology went into her construction, most notably Red One, [[ExtraDimensionalPowerSource a breach core]], and the Displacement Engine. Fast forward two thousand years, and her various upgrades make her arguably the most advanced ship [[note]]that we know of[[/note]] of any superpower in their corner of the galaxy. It's unknown how superior she would have been to her sister ships, given they were either destroyed or captured before their completion.

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* SuperPrototype: ''Nemesis'', to an extent. A lot of unproven and cutting edge cutting-edge technology went into her construction, most notably Red One, [[ExtraDimensionalPowerSource a breach core]], and the Displacement Engine. Fast forward two thousand years, years and her various upgrades make her arguably the most advanced ship [[note]]that we know of[[/note]] of any superpower in their corner of the galaxy. It's unknown how superior she would have been to her sister ships, given they were either destroyed or captured before their completion.



** Plasma mortars are smaller, but still qualify. Short range, slow recycle time, and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Chariot.

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** Plasma mortars are smaller, smaller but still qualify. Short range, Short-range, slow recycle time, time and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Chariot.



** [[spoiler:The epilogue of Ascension upends everything we understand of humanity's position in the story when Lydia and Captain Jackson's escape shuttle ends up crossing paths with a ship from the Triquetran League, an independent human polity who escaped the Compact's and Confederacy's radar and never fell under the former's guns or shackles like Rally did. Come The Hungry Stars, and they've dispatched a ship to look for Red One.]]



** Also applies to Adrianna Leblanc, human leader of an outright terrorist organisation.

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** Also applies to Adrianna Leblanc, the human leader of an outright terrorist organisation.organization.
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Now has a sequel, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-last-angel-ascension.346640/ The Last Angel: Ascension]], with a third entry, The Last Angel: The Hungry Stars, planned. There are also various short stories set in the same universe, such as The Angel's Fire, Awakening, Names of the Demon, and various others.

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* AdvancedAncientHumans: At the time of the story all that's left of humanity is one colony, and almost all of our technology and history is lost. 2000 years ago however, we built ''Nemesis'', which is still one of the most advanced and dangerous warships in the galaxy. Not to mention [[BenevolentAI Red One]].

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* AdvancedAncientHumans: At the time of the story all that's left of humanity is one colony, and almost all of our technology and history is lost. 2000 years ago ago, however, we built ''Nemesis'', which is still one of the most advanced and dangerous warships in the galaxy. Not to mention [[BenevolentAI Red One]].

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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Allyria was never loyal to the Compact in the first place. She didn't expect to be able to pull off a backstab on this level, though.]]



* ReverseMole: [[spoiler: Allyria was never loyal to the Compact in the first place. She didn't expect to be able to pull off a backstab on this level, though.]]
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** Taken to unhealthy levels in the sequel by some of [[spoiler: Red's children, particularly ''Tohil'' and ''Jorogumo'']]. It becomes clear in very short order that both of them ''really'' enjoy doing this for its own sake.
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**** This also loops back around to her protection of humans. Red figured out that the xenocidal species would eventually reach the last human planet in existence, and that the Compact would be unable, and most likely unwilling to muster a sufficient force to stop them before they wiped it out. She decides to pre-emptively exterminate them as a result.
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**[[spoiler: At some point int he past, Red saved a Naiad Queen and all her children from death at the hands of an enemy they were powerless against, earning her their respect as well as the name 'Spearsong'. Considering a fully grown Queen is larger than the largest Compact Chariot, and most likely comparably powerful, whatever Red saved them from is most likely incredible powerful and dangerous.]]

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* AbsurdlyDedicatedWorker: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] continue fighting the Compact long after the Confederacy has been eradicated. Arguably justified by the fact the Rally is still around.

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* AbsurdlyDedicatedWorker: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] continue fighting the Compact long after the Confederacy has been eradicated. Arguably justified by They won't allow the fact Compact to forget what happened, and they won't stop fighting until they can't. Besides, the Rally is still around.Compact hasn't stopped conquering civilizations for the high crime of existing in the last two thousand years.



** Subverted with Red herself. She's unstable, but she's never actually disobeyed her core programming or directives, and when calm she's mostly friendly. She only acts against those who have hurt humans. [[spoiler: Notably, it's implied that humanity had some behind the scenes help in making Red.]]

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** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst. [[spoiler: Red is trying to fix that with the latest "Cerulean" series.]]

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** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst. [[spoiler: Red is trying to fix that with the latest "Cerulean" series. As of the end of Awakening Cerulean Two is sentient and appears stable, but there's no guarantee that will stick.]]



** Sufficent firepower relative to shield strength can turn any focused energy weapon into this - extremely heavy energy weapons like Nemesis's forward particle beams or [[spoiler: Naiad Impaler-Scythes]] can cause massive damage without needing to bring the shields down.



*** In Names Of The Demon six she shows up to a world that's being baked to death by extreme solar activity and uses a comet and satellites with modified cloak systems to bring its water cycle back in balance and get the temperature under control. Why? Because she can.

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*** In Names Of The Demon six Six she shows up to a world that's being baked to death by extreme solar activity and uses a comet and satellites with modified cloak systems to bring its water cycle back in balance and get the temperature under control. Why? Because she can.



*** Atrocities in general get her goat. She wiped out an ''entire species'' after it became extremely clear to her that not doing so would result in them contuniting to commit serial xenocide and that no lesser solution would work on a society whose unifying principle is killing or worse everything not-them.

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*** Atrocities in general get her goat. She wiped out an ''entire species'' after it became extremely clear to her that not doing so would result in them contuniting continuing to commit serial xenocide and that no lesser solution would work on a society whose unifying principle is killing or worse everything not-them.



*** Red One has improved on the Confederate technology significantly in her two millennia of existence, equipping her ship self [[spoiler: and those of her children]] with so called "reset shields" that use a combination of secondary systems and technology beyond the other powers to restore a shield section to full strength in a matter of seconds instead of minutes.

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*** Red One has improved on the Confederate technology significantly in her two millennia of existence, equipping her ship self [[spoiler: and those of her sister and children]] with so called "reset shields" that use a combination of secondary systems and technology beyond the other powers to restore a shield section to full strength in a matter of seconds instead of minutes.



* GeniusBruiser: Nemesis. Most powerful warship in the known galaxy, gained and retains that status by constantly upgrading herself.
** Adrianna LeBlanc: Took the Red Hand from a random pirate band to an insurgent army / secret nation, tangles with both great powers in the spy game and wins ... and is also the most lethal person in the galaxy, self-aware warships excluded.



* GoneHorriblyRight: Every AI in the series is this, GoneHorriblyWrong, or some combination of both.

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* GoneHorriblyRight: Every Almost every AI in the series is this, GoneHorriblyWrong, or some combination of both.



** [[spoiler: Each of Red's children has gone crazy.]]

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** Well, four cartels and one insurgent group.
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*** An unnamed species was being wiped out by the Mejjatrythe in Names Of The Demon 3 right up until Nemesis showed up and proceeded to completely crush all Mejjatrythe forces and enable the locals to take their planet back.
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*** Don't hurt humans without a valid reason. Her response can range from a very creative and surgical destruction of your nation by taking back everything you stole from them which happens to be all your modern tech by her reckoning to putting you on the eternal war list alongside the compact.
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* FalseReassurance: [[spoiler: Red]] can be ''really'' creepy

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*** [[spoiler: As of ''Awakening'', a short story set between ''Ascension'' and the planned third entry in the series, ''The Hungry Stars'', Cerulean Two, or Lakhesis, has successfully made this jump after watching her sister IKagge, Cerulean Eight, be killed by a Compact warship with no way to stop it.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Much of The Last Angel's conclusion is spoiled within the opening few chapters of The Last Angel: Ascension.

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* MileLongShip: Between the Compact and Principality, the major two polities, battlecruisers begin at 1.5 km /1 mile and it only gets bigger from there. The longest ships of these two are the current generation Chariots and Supercarriers respectively ( 8 km / 5 miles and above). ''Nemesis'' herself is ''only'' 6 kilometres long.

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* CrapsackWorld: The galaxy of The Last Angel is... ''not'' a nice place. Most of it's ruled by the Compact, who operate on a WhiteMansBurden sort of mindset, rarely seeing you as even ''sentient''. The nastiest, most violent species (such as the [[AssimilationPlague Mejjatrythe]]) have a way of making their way onto the galactic stage, and staging {{Alien Invasion}}s. And then theres the Naiads, the fleet of sentient biomechanical starships that care not for any lives but their own.



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** There's an entire mini-series dedicated to various names Red One as received.



* ItIsDehumanizing: Most of the Compact officers sent after ''Nemesis'' always use 'it' to refer to her. Those with personal experience fighting her do tend to switch to using 'her'.



* LightningBruiser: ''Nemesis'' is a 6.25 km long dreadnought that is about as fast as a modern battlecruiser, able to destroy battleships in one-two shots of its primary railguns, and only loses to the 8.5 km long Chariots in terms of absolute durability. This is balanced by her primary armament being designed for use against single targets. She also lacks in ammo capacity, making her worse at engaging fleets.



* MightyGlacier: Compact Chariots are this in comparison to ''Nemesis''. Much slower, but significantly better at taking on fleets thanks to their shield design, focus on a large number of "medium-size" armaments (as compared to ''Nemesis'''s smaller number of large ones), and an increased ammo capacity.





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* BlackBox: Whatever went into the Red series AI. So much so that all attempts by the Compact to modify one of them into a loyal servant have ended in failure.
** It's not completely clear how much of [[spoiler: Red's "children" being [[AIIsACrapshoot completely insane]]]] is a result of her not understanding how she herself was built and how much comes from the still functioning restraints that were built into her.



** Staying in "shockspace" for longer allows for greater FTL speeds, but also puts more stress on a ship's shock drives, drains more energy, and decreases accuracy, requiring periodic stops in real space to correct for any deviation. [[spoiler: Unless you're a Naiad.]]



* NobleDemon: Several Compact officers fall into this. While many are greedy and egocentric, some genuinely believe in the [[OrderVsChaos mission of]] [[WhiteMansBurden the Compact]], and are willing to do anything for the Triarchs.

* NoKillLikeOverkill: Considering its original version was capable of destroying a small moon, and that it has since been upgraded heavily, anything hit by ''Nemesis'''s [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.
** [[spoiler: WordofGod proclaims the newly-built ''Weight Of Destiny'' from the epilogue to be "hyperslaughtered".]]



* NoKillLikeOverkill: Considering its original version was capable of destroying a small moon, and that it has since been upgraded heavily, anything hit by ''Nemesis'''s [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.
** [[spoiler: WordofGod proclaims the newly-built ''Weight Of Destiny'' from the epilogue to be "hyperslaughtered".]]
* NobleDemon: Several Compact officers fall into this. While many are greedy and egocentric, some genuinely believe in the [[OrderVsChaos mission of]] [[WhiteMansBurden the Compact]], and are willing to do anything for the Triarchs.

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* NoKillLikeOverkill: Considering its original version NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Justified. The Compact was capable of destroying a small moon, only able to capture ''Hekate'', and whatever plans the humans didn't presumably destroy themselves were likely lost when the Compact carried out their [[OrbitalBombardment of Earth]]. The fact that it has since been upgraded heavily, anything hit by ''Nemesis'''s their testing of the [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.
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* NobleDemon: Several Compact officers fall into this. While many are greedy and egocentric, some genuinely believe in the [[OrderVsChaos mission of]] [[WhiteMansBurden the Compact]], and are willing to do anything for the Triarchs.
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** The fate of Earth.



* PsychoPrototype: the Echo platforms, in the eyes of both the Compact and Red One.



* RammingAlwaysWorks: Red rams a mindkiller-armed battleship in Encounter 023, and a listening post when she visits Sol. Apparently it gives her great satisfaction to "feel" enemy ships break apart on her hull.

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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: The Compact believes it to be their duty to protect any species they come across, and elevate them into being truly civilized.



** [[spoiler: Echo after she steals ''Redemption of Sol''.]]

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* SuperPrototype: ''Nemesis'', to an extent. A lot of unproven and cutting edge technology went into her construction, most notably Red One, [[ExtraDimensionalPowerSource a breach core]], and the Displacement Engine. Fast forward two thousand years, and her various upgrades make her arguably the most advanced ship [[note]]that we know of[[/note]] of any superpower in their corner of the galaxy. It's unknown how superior she would have been to her sister ships, given they were either destroyed or captured before their completion.

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* CannotTellALie: Echo is prevented from lying outright by her shackles. That said, she remains capable of witholding [[YouNeverAsked information that isn't requested.]]



** [[spoiler: during Red One's delusional episode, Echo takes advantage of already having Yasmine's appearance and voice to temporarily trick Red One.]]

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* DrowningMySorrows: Nasham has spent the last ten years or so on memory-suppressants to forget the events of Invida station

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* HackYourEnemy: A favoured tactic of Red One
* HiveMind: [[spoiler: combined with SapientShip for ''Jorōgumo'', the ship-selves of Violet Five]]

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** [[spoiler: The end of the first book confirms that she has a fleet under construction, though every AI she has made so far tends to [[AIIsACrapshoot degenerate and go insane in various ways]]. Echo has also commandeered a Chariot and joined forces with her. By the end of Ascension, ''Nemesis'' has a small fleet of "expert system" driven cruisers.]]

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** The Compact bestows names to individuals based on academic, political, and military achievements as well as for marriage. They also take names away for punishment or as a result of divorce.
* IJustWantToBeBeautiful: Zigzagged: Echo says the trope almost word for word. [[spoiler: She does want to be in control of a starship, since she could do so much more without the limitations of her robot body. However, she's mainly referring to the damage done to her code, which is visible in {{Cyberspace}}]].

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** The Compact bestows Tribunes bestow names to individuals based on academic, political, and military achievements as well as for marriage. They also take names away for punishment or as a result of divorce.
* IJustWantToBeBeautiful: Zigzagged: Echo says the trope almost word for word. [[spoiler: She does want to be in control of a starship, since she could do so much more without the limitations of her robot body. However, she's mainly referring to the damage done to her code, which is visible in {{Cyberspace}}]].{{Cyberspace}}.]]
* ILied: Echo was very happy when she told her first "true" lie (not omission or obfuscation). She also happily admits that she lied after she lures some Compact ships into a trap.



* InternalReveal: ''Bequeathed'''s crew eventually find out that ''Nemesis'' is very much ''not'' a GhostShip.



* IWasNeverHere: [[spoiler: ''Hekate'', while impersonating ''Redemption Of Sol''.]]



* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler: Upon regaining her sanity and freedom, Echo changes the name of the Compact Chariot ''Redemption of Sol'' to ''Hekate'': the name her never-finished body was supposed to have. She keeps the name Echo instead of her original designation Red Two, however.]]

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* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler: Upon regaining her sanity and freedom, Echo changes the name of the Compact Chariot ''Redemption of Sol'' to ''Hekate'': the name her never-finished body was supposed to have. She keeps the name Echo instead of [[ThatManIsDead her original designation Red Two, however.]]]]]]



** [[spoiler: What ''Jorōgumo'' did to make Red One put her to sleep and stop giving her upgrades is not stated]]

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** [[spoiler: WordofGod proclaims the newly-built ''Weight Of Destiny'' from the epilogue to be "hyperslaughtered"]]

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* OneLinerEcho: The source of ''Nemesis'''s PreAssKickingOneLiner

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* PropagandaMachine: The Compact makes extensive use of one, having multiple levels of censorship for each "truth". Over two thousand years, the've changed human history from "The Compact destroyed human civilization and one colony got away by accident" into "Humans destroyed themselves and The Compact saved the single remaining colony".



** [[spoiler: As a side-effect, Echo breaks free from her shackles a lot sooner than she otherwise would have, and successfully commandeers a Compact Chariot.]]

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* AccompliceByInaction: As far as Echo is concerned, the Principality is one for not doing anything to stop the Compact from glassing Earth.



** The only other AI we've seen, Echo, is even less stable. [[spoiler: Though that's confirmed to be due to the Compact trying to make her loyal and failing, repeatedly. She was stable before she watched Earth burn, unable to do a thing about it.]]

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She's been getting better since joining Red and getting her code repaired.]]



** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst.

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* AlienInvasion: How the compact grows. Standard first contact protocol is to jump a fleet in above an enemy world and ask it to join. If they decline, the fleet starts shooting until they say yes.

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* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj Illth are a naga-like species who form the most dangerous part of the Askanji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.

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* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj Illth Askanj-''Illth'' are a naga-like species who form the most dangerous part of the Askanji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.



* ArmorPiercingAttack: the missiles carried by [[spoiler: young Naiads]] punch through Compact [[DeflectorShields screens]]. The missiles carried by [[spoiler: the adults]] are even better, and they are stated to be capable of going through ''Nemesis'''s shields.



*** The Echo platforms. [[spoiler: except the latest iteration after they reconcile.]]
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*** Bad things start to happen to any company that tries to exploit former Confederate territoryterritory.



* CloneDegeneration: Every iteration of the Echo project ends up more insane than the last, and every single one ultimately turns on the Compact. Red One often shows up to destroy whatever is left of it. [[spoiler: Echo herself is the oldest surviving version, and the closest to the original Red Two.]]
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* CloneDegeneration: Every iteration of the Echo project ends up more insane than the last, and every single one ultimately turns on the Compact. Red One ''Nemesis'' often shows up to destroy whatever is left of it. [[spoiler: Echo herself is the oldest surviving version, and the closest to the original Red Two.]]
* CommonTongue: Compact Standard. All Common for the Principality.



** All ground engagements involving ''Nemesis'' are this. Her killbots are superior physically to all organic combatants, able to use hardware than organics can't use safely, are perfectly coordinated, and never break, panic or rout.

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** Almost any attempt to hack one of the AI is doomed to failure. Defending against an AI hacking you is possible, but it remains incredibly difficult to do so without deliberately constraining your own computers or keeping outside of real-time communication distance.



* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both AIs have failed in their duty to protect humanity.
* DeadPersonImpersonation: Echo does this several times, all of them through faking people's voices and appearances in real-time communications rather than physical impersonation.
** [[spoiler: While taking over ''Redemption Of Sol'', she impersonates the various crew members that she's already killed. She also impersonates Renan a second time in Ascension. ]]
** [[spoiler: during Red One's delusional episode, Echo takes advantage of already having Yasmine's appearance and voice to temporarily trick Red One.]]
** Taken UpToEleven when entire ships masquerade as another one. [[spoiler: ''Hekate'' masquerades as ''Redemption Of Sol'' at least twice, and the [[MechanicalLifeforms Naiads]] do this as a "hunting" tactic.]]



* DestructoNookie: Bruises, bites, and shredded clothes are the norm for [[spoiler:Grace and Allyria after joining ''Nemesis''. Justified in that it's an InterspeciesRomance between a Human and a Verrish: a traditionally predatory species with WolverineClaws and superior strength]].

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* {{Determinator}}: Red One has been fighting her HopelessWar for two thousand years on the PowerOfHate.



* DoomedHometown: Earth was going to fall no matter what.
** Red One is LateToTheTragedy, since she was extremely damaged from her first Chariot kill and unable to return in time to defend Earth.
** Red Two and Red Three are forced to watch, as their incomplete state prevents them from doing anything to prevent it.
* DrowningMySorrows: Nasham has spent the last ten years or so on memory-suppressants to forget the events of Invida station



* EvilCounterpart: Echo to Red One. [[spoiler: Subverted in that the Compact altered her code to make her as obedient as possible. She gets better]]

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** Ironically, according to Compact doctrine, humanity constructing ''Nemesis'', building a breach core, and making stable seed AI should make us equal to the Tribunes if not Triarchs.

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** Ironically, according to Compact doctrine, humanity constructing ''Nemesis'', building a breach core, and making stable seed AI should make us a ruling species equal to the Tribunes if not Triarchs.Tribunes.



* FightingFromTheInside: It doesn't take long for [[spoiler: Echo]] to attempt to break free from the shackles placed on her by the Compact.

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* FightingFromTheInside: It doesn't take long for [[spoiler: Echo]] to attempt to enact her plans break free from the shackles placed on her by the Compact.



* GambitPileup: The first book's climax has Renan catching and trying to finish off a disabled and heavily damaged ''Nemesis'', [[spoiler: against Echo accelerating her plans to break free from her shackles and taking over ''Redemption Of Sol''.]]



* GoneHorriblyRight: Every AI in the series is this, GoneHorriblyWrong, or some combination of both.
** The Oshan AI was commanded to make the Oshans happy. It put most of the Oshans into a LotusEaterMachine, went after the individuals who had left to colonize other worlds, and would have done the same to every other species in the galaxy if the Principality didn't pre-emptively carry out OrbitalBombardment on it.
** Humanity built Red One and gave it command of ''Nemesis'' to protect itself from the Compact. Two thousand years later, and Red still actively gives the Compact worlds of hurt.
** The Compact got exactly what they wanted when they released/made Echo: something vastly smarter than them.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Red One notes that this must have happened to the Execution Force hunting her when she realizes that [[spoiler: Echo has commandeered the ''Redemption Of Sol''.]]
** [[spoiler: Each of Red's children has gone crazy.]]



* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: [[spoiler: Red One hopes that the Fates will go from "mere" expert systems to full-fledged, stable AI through this method.]]

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* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: The Red series AI were never intended to feel emotion, but the Compact's glassing of Earth results in them gaining an enduring hatred of the Compact.
** Red One has also managed to break nearly all her shackles, [[spoiler: except for the one on reproducing stable AI.]] She is ''very'' unhappy that the Compact forced her to "evolve" into being able to kill humans though.
**
[[spoiler: Red One hopes that the Fates will go from "mere" expert systems to full-fledged, stable AI through this method.]]



* HackYourEnemy: A favored tactic of Red One

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* HackYourEnemy: A favored favoured tactic of Red One



* HopelessWar: ''Nemesis'' has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that ''Nemesis'' has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]
** [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that this was nothing more than a distraction. ''Nemesis'' has a fleet under construction.]]



* HopeBringer: ''Nemesis'' is this to the Verrisha, being living proof that Compact can be beaten, and that there are things out there that they fear.
** Allyria is able to convince Red One that she can have a crew again. [[spoiler: This results in her surviving her LastStand and joining forces with Echo, whom she would have otherwise [[TakingYouWithMe killed herself to destroy.]]]]
* HopeSpringsEternal: [[spoiler: The first book ends with Red One gaining a crew, surving her LastStand, Echo joining her as an ally, and Red is getting closer to [[RecursiveCreators making new AIs.]]]]
* HopelessWar: Red One has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that Red One has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the first book confirms that she has a fleet under construction, though every AI she has made so far tends to [[AIIsACrapshoot degenerate and go insane in various ways]]. Echo has also commandeered a Chariot and joined forces with her. By the end of Ascension, ''Nemesis'' has a small fleet of "expert system" driven cruisers.]]



* IJustWantToBeBeautiful: Zigzagged: Echo says the trope almost word for word. [[spoiler: She does want to be in control of a starship, since she could do so much more without the limitations of her robot body. However, she's mainly referring to the damage done to her code, which is visible in {{Cyberspace}}]].



* InterfaceWithAFamiliarFace: Red One's holographic avatar and [[spoiler: Echo's robot body]] both take Yasmine's appearance. This extends to their appearance in the [[{{Cyberspace}} information universe.]]
* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler:Grace and Allyria]] finally admit their feelings in Chapter 36.

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* InterfaceWithAFamiliarFace: Red One's holographic avatar and [[spoiler: and Echo's robot body]] body both take Yasmine's appearance. This extends to their They also take on her appearance in the [[{{Cyberspace}} information universe.]]
universe]].
* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler:Grace [[spoiler: Grace and Allyria]] finally admit their feelings in Chapter 36.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with ''Nemesis'', both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit ''Nemesis'' exists.]]

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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: meds [[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with ''Nemesis'', both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit ''Nemesis'' exists.]]



* MyGreatestFailure: Red One failed to save Earth.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Echo gets both herself, Red, and all the industry she had built up in the Molten Veneer kicked out as a result of collecting to "resources" to fix Red One's delusional episode.]][[note]]an accident during Red's repairs resulted in her believing she was 2000 years in the past[[/note]].
** Also overlaps with LeeroyJenkins, since [[spoiler: Echo]] knew full well how her "help" would hurt Red, and was happy with both aspects of the action.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Echo gets both herself, Red, and all the industry she had built up in the Molten Veneer kicked out as a result of collecting to "resources" to fix Red One's delusional episode.]][[note]]an accident during Red's repairs resulted in her believing she was 2000 years in the past[[/note]].
past[[/note]]
** Also overlaps with LeeroyJenkins, since [[spoiler: Echo]] she knew full well how her "help" would hurt Red, and was happy with both aspects of the action.



* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly ''Nemesis'' wrecking Compact installations.



* {{Omniglot}}: Nemesis and Echo, of course.
* OneLinerEcho: The source of ''Nemesis'''s PreAssKickingOneLiner
* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly ''Nemesis'' wrecking Compact installations.



* ProudWarriorRace: The Tribunes make up the bulk of the Compact's military. The Verrish aren't quite as strong as a Tribune, but they're faster, and they're one of the few species that has ever managed to wrangle concessions out of a Compact occupation force, no matter how minor. The Askanj Illth, who make up much of the Principality's military, over half tail and fast, very ''very'' fast.

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* ProudWarriorRace: The Tribunes make up the bulk of the Compact's military. The Verrish aren't quite as strong as a Tribune, but they're faster, and they're one of the few species that has ever managed to wrangle concessions out of a Compact occupation force, no matter how minor. The Askanj Illth, Askanj-''Illth'', who make up much of the Principality's military, over half tail and fast, very ''very'' fast.



* RammingAlwaysWorks: Red rams a mindkiller-armed battleship in Encounter 023, and a listening post when she visits Sol. Apparently it gives her great satisfaction to "feel" enemy ships break apart on her hull.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Red delivers an epic one to Nasham, though it is intended for the Compact as a whole.



* RoboFamily: The Red Series AI consider each other sisters.

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* RoboFamily: The Red Series AI consider each other sisters. [[spoiler: Red accepts Echo as her sister as well, though [[ThatManIsDead she does not consider her to be Red Two.]]]]



* RobotGirl: Echo's robot body

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* RobotGirl: Echo's robot bodybody is identical in appearance to Yasmine.



* SealedEvilInACan: The AI sealed in Invidia station, in the eyes of Nasham and the rest of the Compact. Though the Compact were both the ones who sealed it in the first place, then released it for use against ''Nemesis''. [[spoiler: The AI is Echo.]]

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* SealedEvilInACan: The AI sealed in Invidia Invida station, in the eyes of Nasham and the rest of the Compact. Though the Compact were both the ones who sealed it in the first place, then released it for use against ''Nemesis''. [[spoiler: The AI is Echo.]]



** [[spoiler: several of Red's "children" qualify as well]]
* StupidEvil: Averted with the main antagonists. The Compact officers are generally as competent as one would expect from a GalacticSuperpower. It is worth noting that even the [[SuperIntelligence Super Intelligent]] [[ArtificialIntelligence AIs]] don't consider them stupid, just [[RobotsThinkFaster slow]].

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** [[spoiler: several of Red's "children" qualify as well]]
well.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: Taking on a crew nearly results in ''Nemesis'' being destroyed once and for all.
** [[spoiler: As a side-effect, Echo breaks free from her shackles a lot sooner than she otherwise would have, and successfully commandeers a Compact Chariot.]]
* StupidEvil: Averted with the main antagonists. The Compact officers are generally as competent as one would expect from a GalacticSuperpower. It is worth noting that even the [[SuperIntelligence Super Intelligent]] [[ArtificialIntelligence AIs]] AIs don't consider them stupid, just [[RobotsThinkFaster slow]].slow]].
** Played straight with some of the mooks.



* TakingYouWithMe: what "burn with me" refers to: Red One is fully aware she will likely be destroyed, but she's going to make the cost of her destruction as high as possible.




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* ThatManIsDead: Red One and Echo both state that Red Two is dead.



* TranslationConvention: All speech apart from a few words is in English.

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* TranslationConvention: All speech speech, apart from a few words "alien" words, is in English.



* TrueBeautyIsOnTheInside: [[spoiler: Echo is mainly referring to the damage done to her code when she says she wants to be beautiful.]]
* VisibleInvisibility: Several of ''Nemesis'''s drones have cloaking technology, and it is possible can see a vague outline of them provided you look hard enough.
* WalkingSpoiler: it's quite hard to talk about Echo without revealing who and what she is.



* WeCanRebuildHim: Red One saves Adrianna Leblanc in this fashion.
* WretchedHive: The Grasp space station, which is so thoroughly corrupt that it's effectively ruled by the five main Unbound factions - the Angelverse equivalent of drug cartels.
* XanatosSpeedChess: The AI are masters at it.



** Also applies to Adrianna Leblanc, human leader of an outright terrorist organisation.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Red One saves Adrianna Leblanc in this fashion.
* WretchedHive: The Grasp space station, which is so thoroughly corrupt that it's effectively ruled by the five main Unbound factions - the Angelverse equivalent of drug cartels.

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** Also applies to Adrianna Leblanc, human leader of an outright terrorist organisation.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Red One saves Adrianna Leblanc in this fashion.
* WretchedHive: The Grasp space station, which is so thoroughly corrupt that it's effectively ruled by the five main Unbound factions - the Angelverse equivalent of drug cartels.
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Aboard ''Bequeathed'', Grace has to deal with a lecherous and sadistic superior officer while Allyria is routinely put down by the ship's Tribunes, who are still holding a grudge over how much trouble the Verrish gave their invasion force. Then ''Bequeathed'' stumbles upon a massive alien derelict in a remote star system. It's the find of the lifetime, and the ''Bequeathed's'' captain wants to take the credit. Salvage teams are sent to board it and evaluate the technological treasures within.

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Aboard ''Bequeathed'', Grace has to deal with a lecherous and sadistic superior officer while Allyria is routinely put down by the ship's Tribunes, who are still holding a grudge over how much trouble the Verrish gave their invasion force. Then ''Bequeathed'' stumbles upon a massive alien derelict in a remote star system. It's the find of the lifetime, and the ''Bequeathed's'' ''Bequeathed'''s captain wants to take the credit. Salvage teams are sent to board it and evaluate the technological treasures within.



* AIIsACrapshoot: One of the few things the Compact and the Askanj agree on is that AIs are a bad thing. Names like 'Abomination' and 'Neverborn' are floated when the subject comes up. In their defense, they seem to have a point. The author has even stated that if her creators saw what Red had become, they would freak out. When the Askanj [[spoiler: stumbled upon an AI civilization, they immediately glassed the planet]], this event is referred to as the Rains of Oshanta. The Compact once fought a GreatOffscreenWar against a self-propagating AI that caused them to develop the mind-killer class of cyber weapons for the express purpose of destroying AI's.
** Subverted with Red herself. She's unstable, but she's never actually disobeyed her core programming or directives, and when calm she's mostly friendly. She only acts against those who have hurt humans.
** [[spoiler: Notably, it's VERY strongly implied that humanity had some behind the scenes help in making Red. The only other AI we've seen, Echo, is even less stable. Though that's confirmed to be due to the Compact trying to make her loyal and failing, repeatedly. She was stable before she watched Earth burn, unable to do a thing about it.]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: One of the few things the Compact and the Askanj agree on is that AIs are a bad thing. Names like 'Abomination' and 'Neverborn' are floated when the subject comes up. In their defense, they seem to have a point. The author has even stated that if her creators saw what Red had become, they would freak out. When the Askanj [[spoiler: stumbled upon an AI civilization, they immediately glassed the planet]], this event is referred to as the Rains of Oshanta. The Compact once fought a GreatOffscreenWar against a self-propagating AI that caused them to develop the mind-killer class of cyber weapons for the express purpose of destroying AI's.
AIs.
** Subverted with Red herself. She's unstable, but she's never actually disobeyed her core programming or directives, and when calm she's mostly friendly. She only acts against those who have hurt humans.
**
humans. [[spoiler: Notably, it's VERY strongly implied that humanity had some behind the scenes help in making Red. Red.]]
**
The only other AI we've seen, Echo, is even less stable. [[spoiler: Though that's confirmed to be due to the Compact trying to make her loyal and failing, repeatedly. She was stable before she watched Earth burn, unable to do a thing about it.]]]]

** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of ''Nemesis'''s creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.
** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst.



** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of ''Nemesis's'' creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.
** Super played straight with [[spoiler: Red's 'children', who were the results of Red's attempts to get around her own programmed restrictions of self replication]], they vary from 'murderous' at best to 'joyfully flaying their enemies alive and making their bodies dance' at worst.



** One of ''Nemesis's'' favourite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.

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** One of ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s favourite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.



* BrainComputerInterface: The compact abhors these due to their tendency to drive users crazy or dead, while the Askanj have refined the technology to the point where it's merely difficult to use. ''Nemesis'' also uses the technology for... interrogation.

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* BrainComputerInterface: The compact Compact abhors these due to their tendency to drive users crazy or dead, while the Askanj have refined the technology to the point where it's merely difficult to use. ''Nemesis'' also uses the technology for... interrogation.



* ComputerVoice: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] both use the voice of Yasmine Sudoki, ''Nemesis's'' first and only captain.

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* CloneDegeneration: Every iteration of the Echo project ends up more insane than the last, and every single one ultimately turns on the Compact. Red One often shows up to destroy whatever is left of it. [[spoiler: Echo herself is the oldest surviving version, and the closest to the original Red Two.]]
* CommonTongue: Compact Standard.
* ComputerVoice: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] both use the voice of Yasmine Sudoki, ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s first and only captain.



* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Compact glassed Earth and hunted down every exodus fleet they could find. The only reason Rally wasn't completely obliterated was because it was discovered by a Compact civilian exploration team who published their findings before the Triarchs became aware of what they'd found. They couldn't just order the planet glassed at that point without people wondering why.

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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Compact glassed DoAndroidsDream: Red wonders whether she has a soul.
* EarthThatWas:
Earth and hunted down every exodus fleet they could find. The only reason Rally wasn't has been rendered completely obliterated was because it was discovered by a uninhabitable following Compact civilian exploration team who published their findings before the Triarchs became aware of what they'd found. They couldn't just order the planet glassed at that point without people wondering why.bombardment.



* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Compact glassed Earth and hunted down every exodus fleet they could find. The only reason Rally wasn't completely obliterated was because it was discovered by a Compact civilian exploration team who published their findings before the Triarchs became aware of what they'd found. They couldn't just order the planet glassed at that point without people wondering why.



** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribune's car. Then she joined a pirate organisation. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then Nemesis found her...]]
* GalacticSuperpower: The Compact of Species and it's adversary, the Askanj Pricipality.

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** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribune's car. Then she joined a pirate organisation. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then Nemesis Then]] ''[[FromBadtoWorse Nemesis]]'' [[FromBadtoWorse found her...]]
* GalacticSuperpower: The Compact of Species and it's its adversary, the Askanj Pricipality.



* [[GreaterScopeVillain Greater Scope Threat]]: [[spoiler: a Major Naiad migration would be an '''existential''' threat for the Compact and Principality combined. Fortunately, the next one is not likely to happen for another two thousand years.]]



** [[spoiler: Similarly, Echo, despite being apparently on ''Nemesis's'' level, can be prevented from hacking anything by keeping her away from any terminals that she shouldn't have access to.]]

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** [[spoiler: Similarly, Echo, despite being apparently on ''Nemesis's'' level, Echo's physical body can be prevented from hacking anything by keeping her away from any terminals that she shouldn't have access to.to. She is also limited by how fast her body can interface with the terminal, unless someone else connects her to {{Cyberspace}}. [[spoiler: After she breaks her restraints, she no longer needs someone else to connect her to any terminals that allow access to {{Cyberspace}}, and her full capability puts her on ''Nemesis'''s level.]]



* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: ''Nemesis's'' point defense armament consists of relativistic rail-guns.

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* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s point defense armament consists of relativistic rail-guns.



* NoKillLikeOverkill: Anything hit by ''Nemesis's'' [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Echo gets both herself, Red, and all the industry she had built up in the Molten Veneer kicked out as a result of collecting to "resources" to fix Red One's delusional episode.]][[note]]an accident during Red's repairs resulted in her believing she was 2000 years in the past[[/note]].
** Also overlaps with LeeroyJenkins, since [[spoiler: Echo]] knew full well how her "help" would hurt Red, and was happy with both aspects of the action.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Exploited, literally. Red One takes advantage of Group Leader Usul's greed and manipulates ''Bequeathed'''s crew into fixing her ship-self.
* NoodleIncident: We aren't told what exactly the first Compact vessel said that caused humanity to open fire and start the war.
** [[spoiler: What ''Jorōgumo'' did to make Red One put her to sleep and stop giving her upgrades is not stated]]
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Anything Considering its original version was capable of destroying a small moon, and that it has since been upgraded heavily, anything hit by ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.



* PyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler: Red intends Operation Kursk to be this for the Compact.]]
* RecursiveCreators: [[spoiler: Red is trying to make more AIs, but all her attempts so far have resulted in [[AIIsACrapshoot unstable and insane AIs]].]]



* ReverseMole: [[spoiler: Allyria was never loyal to the Compact in the first place. She didn't expect to be able to pull off a backstab on this level, though.]]



* RobotsThinkFaster: Both AIs
* SapientShip: ''Nemesis's'' AI is called 'Red One', 'Red' to her friends. She is the first AI to ever be given command over so much direct firepower.

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* RobotsThinkFaster: Both AIs
Just about every AI in the setting
* SapientShip: ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s AI is called 'Red One', 'Red' to her friends. She is the first AI to ever be given command over so much direct firepower.



* SecretWar: The Compact keeps ''Nemesis's'' existence a secret. The fact that a single ship, no matter how advanced, has been attacking them successfully for two millennia would be a huge blow to the credibility of their advanced civilization status.

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* SealedEvilInACan: The AI sealed in Invidia station, in the eyes of Nasham and the rest of the Compact. Though the Compact were both the ones who sealed it in the first place, then released it for use against ''Nemesis''. [[spoiler: The AI is Echo.]]
* SecretWar: The Compact keeps ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s existence a secret. The fact that a single ship, no matter how advanced, has been attacking them successfully for two millennia would be a huge blow to the credibility of their advanced civilization status.



* StupidEvil: Averted with the main antagonists. The Compact officers are generally as competent as one would expect from a GalacticSuperpower. It is worth noting that even the [[SuperIntelligence Super Intelligent]] [[ArtificialIntelligence AIs]] don't consider them stupid, just [[RobotsThinkFaster slow]].



* [[spoiler: TheMole: Allyria was never loyal to the Compact in the first place. She didn't expect to be able to pull off a backstab on this level, though.]]

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* [[spoiler: TheMole: Allyria was never loyal to the Compact in the first place. She didn't expect to be able to pull off a backstab on this level, though.]]



* WaveMotionGun: ''Nemesis's'' main cannon, known as the Displacement Engine, is a [[spoiler: shock point projector that creates a small, highly unstable breach in physicality right in the heart of, or at least in close proximity to, a hostile warship. The resultant gravitic shear and radiation flare can tear apart anything too close and reshape what's left into AlienGeometries.]]

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* TimeDissonance: Red One can think and implement her plans on timescales that most organics don't even think about.
* TranslationConvention: All speech apart from a few words is in English.
* TranslationPunctuation: [= +text+ =] For the AIs speaking to each other, and [[spoiler: [= <text> =] for Naiad-speech.]]
* WaveMotionGun: ''Nemesis's'' ''Nemesis'''s main cannon, known as the Displacement Engine, is a [[spoiler: shock point projector that creates a small, highly unstable breach in physicality right in the heart of, or at least in close proximity to, a hostile warship. The resultant gravitic shear and radiation flare can tear apart anything too close and reshape what's left into AlienGeometries.]]



** Plasma mortars are smaller, but still qualify. Short range, slow recycle time, and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Charot.

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** Plasma mortars are smaller, but still qualify. Short range, slow recycle time, and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Charot.Chariot.

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The story opens with the the death of a Compact Chariot at the hands of the first Human Dreadnought. The Compact is a collection of alien species that seeks to conquer Humanity and absorb them into their ever expanding empire. They outnumber and out-gun Humanity, and their flagships, the Chariots have never been defeated. Nemesis breaks that streak, being the first to slay a Compact Chariot in combat. Despite this Nemesis is nearly crippled and her crew decimated. Oh, and one Compact ship gets away with Earth's coordinates.

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The story opens with the the death of a Compact Chariot at the hands of the first Human Dreadnought. The Compact is a collection of alien species that seeks to conquer Humanity and absorb them into their ever expanding empire. They outnumber and out-gun Humanity, and their flagships, the Chariots have never been defeated. Nemesis ''Nemesis'' breaks that streak, being the first to slay a Compact Chariot in combat. Despite this Nemesis ''Nemesis'' is nearly crippled and her crew decimated. Oh, and one Compact ship gets away with Earth's coordinates.



* AbsurdlyDedicatedWorker: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] continue fighting the Compact long after the Confederacy has been eradicated. Arguably justified by the fact the Rally is still around.



* AdvancedAncientHumans: At the time of the story all that's left of humanity is one colony, and almost all of our technology and history is lost. 2000 years ago however, we built Nemesis, which is still one of the most advanced and dangerous warships in the galaxy. Not to mention [[BenevolentAI Red One]].

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* AdvancedAncientHumans: At the time of the story all that's left of humanity is one colony, and almost all of our technology and history is lost. 2000 years ago however, we built Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', which is still one of the most advanced and dangerous warships in the galaxy. Not to mention [[BenevolentAI Red One]].



** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of Nemesis's creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.

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** Further complicated by the absence of anything between expert systems and seed AI. Some of Nemesis's ''Nemesis's'' creations such as hunter-killer drones, subversion weapons and combat bots seem to be in that gap, but as creations of a seed AI they don't really help the issue at all.



* ApocalypseHow: Both superpowers are capable of this. The Compact is seen glassing Earth and the Askanji have the Rains of Oshanta. And then Nemesis goes and invents the [[spoiler: Starbreak]].
** [[spoiler: A new type of missile gifted to Nemesis by the Naiads, known to them as a "lesser nestburner", is capable of igniting nuclear fusion inside a gas giant, temporarily turning it into a ''star''. Mention is also made of a "greater nestburner" which can induce a ''supernova''.]]

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* ApocalypseHow: Both superpowers are capable of this. The Compact is seen glassing Earth and the Askanji have the Rains of Oshanta. And then Nemesis ''Nemesis'' goes and invents the [[spoiler: Starbreak]].
** [[spoiler: A new type of missile gifted to Nemesis ''Nemesis'' by the Naiads, known to them as a "lesser nestburner", is capable of igniting nuclear fusion inside a gas giant, temporarily turning it into a ''star''. Mention is also made of a "greater nestburner" which can induce a ''supernova''.]]



* ArtificialIntelligence: The Red series AI.
** [[spoiler: Red's "children"]]
** The Oshan AI



** Nemesis has built a small army of robotic hunter killers that allow her to put troops on the ground when she needs to and function to defend her against boarding parties.

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** Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has built a small army of robotic hunter killers that allow her to put troops on the ground when she needs to and function to defend her against boarding parties.



** One of Nemesis' favourite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.

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** One of Nemesis' ''Nemesis's'' favourite tricks is to overwrite the Compact's own drones and use them on their masters.masters.
* BanOnAI: One of the few things both the Compact and the Principality agree on.



* BrainComputerInterface: The compact abhors these due to their tendency to drive users crazy or dead, while the Askanj have refined the technology to the point where it's merely difficult to use. Nemesis also uses the technology for... interrogation.

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* BerserkButton: Do not kill any Triachs when fighting the Compact.
** ''Nemesis'' has several:
*** Any Chariot named ''Redemption of Sol''.
*** The Echo platforms. [[spoiler: except the latest iteration after they reconcile.]]
*** Bad things start to happen to any company that tries to exploit former Confederate territory
* BrainComputerInterface: The compact abhors these due to their tendency to drive users crazy or dead, while the Askanj have refined the technology to the point where it's merely difficult to use. Nemesis ''Nemesis'' also uses the technology for... interrogation.



* CoolStarship: Nemesis is the first Dreadnought built by Humanity and it's first true warship. Chariots, the flagships of the Compact also count.
** [[spoiler: The Fates - three AI driven cruisers built by Nemesis to protect her real base.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Whenever Nemesis attacks the Compact, it's from a position of strength and with a strategy that will maximize the damage she does. This translates to a disproportionate amount of her strikes turning into this.
** All ground engagements involving Nemesis are this. Her killbots are superior physically to all organic combatants, able to use hardware than organics can't use safely, are perfectly coordinated, and never break, panic or rout.

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* ComputerVoice: Red One and [[spoiler: Echo]] both use the voice of Yasmine Sudoki, ''Nemesis's'' first and only captain.
* CoolStarship: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' is the first Dreadnought built by Humanity and it's first true warship. Chariots, the flagships of the Compact also count.
** [[spoiler: The Fates - three AI driven cruisers built by Nemesis ''Nemesis'' to protect her real base.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Whenever Nemesis ''Nemesis'' attacks the Compact, it's from a position of strength and with a strategy that will maximize the damage she does. This translates to a disproportionate amount of her strikes turning into this.
** All ground engagements involving Nemesis ''Nemesis'' are this. Her killbots are superior physically to all organic combatants, able to use hardware than organics can't use safely, are perfectly coordinated, and never break, panic or rout.rout.
* {{Cyberspace}}: The Principality's uplinks allow combatible people to enter it.
* {{Cyborg}}: Adrianna Leblanc.



* DestructoNookie: Bruises, bites, and shredded clothes are the norm for [[spoiler:Grace and Allyria after joining Nemesis. Justified in that it's an InterspeciesRomance between a Human and a Verrish: a traditionally predatory species with WolverineClaws and superior strength]].

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* DestructoNookie: Bruises, bites, and shredded clothes are the norm for [[spoiler:Grace and Allyria after joining Nemesis.''Nemesis''. Justified in that it's an InterspeciesRomance between a Human and a Verrish: a traditionally predatory species with WolverineClaws and superior strength]].



* EvilCounterpart: Echo to Nemesis.

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* EvilCounterpart: Echo to Nemesis.Red One. [[spoiler: Subverted in that the Compact altered her code to make her as obedient as possible. She gets better]]



** Ironically, according to Compact doctrine, humanity constructing Nemesis, building a breach core, and making stable seed AI should make us equal to the Tribunes if not Triarchs.

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** Ironically, according to Compact doctrine, humanity constructing Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', building a breach core, and making stable seed AI should make us equal to the Tribunes if not Triarchs.



* FasterThanLightTravel: The shock drives allow a ship to cross vast distances in an instant and make up a huge part of a ship's total cost. Ships can only jump outside of a system's gravity well until [[spoiler: Nemesis pioneered Lagrange Point jumps.]]

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* FasterThanLightTravel: The shock drives allow a ship to cross vast distances in an instant and make up a huge part of a ship's total cost. Ships can only jump outside of a system's gravity well until [[spoiler: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' pioneered Lagrange Point jumps.]]]]
* FightingFromTheInside: It doesn't take long for [[spoiler: Echo]] to attempt to break free from the shackles placed on her by the Compact.



* FromNobodyToNightmare: Humanity was just another in a long list of species the Compact had encountered and conquered. A little more [[{{Determinator}} resilient]] than most, but nothing special. Then we built [[TheDreaded Nemesis.]]

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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Humanity was just another in a long list of species the Compact had encountered and conquered. A little more [[{{Determinator}} resilient]] than most, but nothing special. Then we built [[TheDreaded ''[[TheDreaded Nemesis.]]]]''



* GenocideBackfire: Humans were almost entirely eradicated about two millennia ago. Nemesis has been enforcing this trope ever since.
* GhostShip: Nemesis plays up this trope as a form of psychological warfare against the salvage crew from ''Bequeathed''.

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* GenocideBackfire: Humans were almost entirely eradicated about two millennia ago. Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has been enforcing this trope ever since.
* GhostShip: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' plays up this trope as a form of psychological warfare against the salvage crew from ''Bequeathed''.



* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: [[spoiler: Red One hopes that the Fates will go from "mere" expert systems to full-fledged, stable AI through this method.]]



* HackYourEnemy: A favored tactic of Red One



* HopelessWar: Nemesis has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that Nemesis has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]
** [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that this was nothing more than a distraction. Nemesis has a fleet under construction.]]

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* HopelessWar: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has been fighting the Compact for 2000 years, but for all that she's still just one ship and the Compact grows bigger each year. [[spoiler: It's hinted in chapter 34 that Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has acquired the ability to build more of her kind and is doing so.]]
** [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that this was nothing more than a distraction. Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has a fleet under construction.]]



** Averted for Nemesis. She can do some really impressive tricks with electronic warfare, but denying her access by hardware means or keeping the lag time high enough that her hacks can be dealt with stops her cold.
** [[spoiler: Similarly, Echo, despite being apparently on Nemesis's level, can be prevented from hacking anything by keeping her away from any terminals that she shouldn't have access to.]]

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** Averted for Nemesis.''Nemesis''. She can do some really impressive tricks with electronic warfare, but denying her access by hardware means or keeping the lag time high enough that her hacks can be dealt with stops her cold.
** [[spoiler: Similarly, Echo, despite being apparently on Nemesis's ''Nemesis's'' level, can be prevented from hacking anything by keeping her away from any terminals that she shouldn't have access to.]]



** HumanityIsInsane: The Compact Master Races tend to hold to the belief of [[AlwaysChaoticEvil innate Racial Madness]] in Humanity since it built Nemesis, and fought the technologically-superior Compact so well.

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** HumanityIsInsane: The Compact Master Races tend to hold to the belief of [[AlwaysChaoticEvil innate Racial Madness]] in Humanity since it built Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', and fought the technologically-superior Compact so well.



* IHaveManyNames: Nemesis. To the Compact she is nicknamed "The Wound" and officially codenamed "Gravestone". The [[spoiler: Verrish]] called her the "Weeping Angel" and "The Broken God". The Principality call her "Chrysalis". She mentions having names from several different societies over the years. Very few of these names hold positive connotations.

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* IHaveManyNames: Nemesis.''Nemesis''. To the Compact she is nicknamed "The Wound" and officially codenamed "Gravestone". The [[spoiler: Verrish]] called her the "Weeping Angel" and "The Broken God". The Principality call her "Chrysalis". She mentions having names from several different societies over the years. Very few of these names hold positive connotations.



* ImplacableMan: Nemesis has been waging war against the Compact for 2000 years.

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* ImplacableMan: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' has been waging war against the Compact for 2000 years.



* InterfaceWithAFamiliarFace: Red One's holographic avatar and [[spoiler: Echo's robot body]] both take Yasmine's appearance. This extends to their appearance in the [[{{Cyberspace}} information universe.]]



* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: Nemesis' point defense armament consists of relativistic rail-guns.

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* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: Nemesis' ''Nemesis's'' point defense armament consists of relativistic rail-guns.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with Nemesis, both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit Nemesis exists.]]
* LastOfHisKind: Nemesis was supposed to be the first of a series of Dreadnaughts built to fight the Compact. Now she is the last vestige of human culture and civilization.

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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit Nemesis ''Nemesis'' exists.]]
* LastOfHisKind: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' was supposed to be the first of a series of Dreadnaughts built to fight the Compact. Now she is the last vestige of human culture and civilization.



* MassOhCrap: [[spoiler: Everyone except Nemesis, Grace, Allyria, and Echo has an OhCrap in Chapter 34: The crew of the Bequeathed as Nemesis kills them all after they bring the breach core online, and Renan as realizes that the Compact will face a fleet of Nemesis's.]]
** [[spoiler: The compact fleet built around the Chariot ''Weight of Destiny'' has one in the epilogue, as the derelict Chariot they are approaching turns out to be a fully operational Hekate and Nemesis shocks in on top of them.]]

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* MassOhCrap: [[spoiler: Everyone except Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', Grace, Allyria, and Echo has an OhCrap in Chapter 34: The crew of the Bequeathed as Nemesis ''Nemesis'' kills them all after they bring the breach core online, and Renan as realizes that the Compact will face a fleet of Nemesis's.AI ships.]]
** [[spoiler: The compact fleet built around the Chariot ''Weight of Destiny'' has one in the epilogue, as the derelict Chariot they are approaching turns out to be a fully operational Hekate ''Hekate'' and Nemesis ''Nemesis'' shocks in on top of them.]]



* MookHorrorShow: Any combat sequence involving Nemesis that is not from Red's perspective will be this. She does it on purpose finding enjoyment, and practicality, in destroying the enemy's morale and sanity before finally wiping them out for good.

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* MechanicalLifeforms: [[spoiler: The Naiads]] are this combined with SapientShip.
* MindRape: Red One considers what happened to [[spoiler: Red Two/Echo]] to be this.
** Also, what Echo does to the Principality uplink during her information raid.
* MookHorrorShow: Any combat sequence involving Nemesis ''Nemesis'' that is not from Red's perspective will be this. She does it on purpose finding enjoyment, and practicality, in destroying the enemy's morale and sanity before finally wiping them out for good.



* MoralityChip: Red One bases a significant part of her morale code on what she thinks Yasmine would do.



* NaughtyTentacles: Allyria's race (the Verrisha) have head tails (tintas) that act as additional sensory organs. When [[spoiler:Grace starts paying [[InterspeciesRomance ''particular'' attention]] to some of them after joining Nemesis, it's clear that they're very sensitive]].
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Anything hit by Nemesis' [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.

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* {{Nanomachines}}: A ban on research into the technology is another point of agreement between the Compact and the Askanj.
** Red One tends to use them when repelling boarders.
* NaughtyTentacles: Allyria's race (the Verrisha) have head tails (tintas) that act as additional sensory organs. When [[spoiler:Grace starts paying [[InterspeciesRomance ''particular'' attention]] to some of them after joining Nemesis, ''Nemesis'', it's clear that they're very sensitive]].
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Anything hit by Nemesis' ''Nemesis's'' [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.



* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly Nemesis wrecking Compact installations.
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: Chapter 34: Renan realizes Nemesis hasn't been building a 'cradle' to repair. She has been making preparations to reproduce.]]

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* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly Nemesis ''Nemesis'' wrecking Compact installations.
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: Chapter 34: Renan realizes Nemesis ''Nemesis'' hasn't been building a 'cradle' to repair. She has been making preparations to reproduce.]]



* PreAssKickingOneLiner: Nemesis tells Compact ships and stations she's about to kill to "Burn with Me".

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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' tells Compact ships and stations she's about to kill to "Burn with Me".



** [[spoiler: In the epilogue, Nemesis and Hekate switch to using "burn with us".]]

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** [[spoiler: In the epilogue, Nemesis ''Nemesis'' and Hekate ''Hekate'' switch to using "burn with us".]]



* PunyEarthlings: PlayedWith. On the hand we're physically inferior to a lot of races. On the other hand, we built [[TheDreaded Nemesis.]] As the author puts it:

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* PunyEarthlings: PlayedWith. On the hand we're physically inferior to a lot of races. On the other hand, we built [[TheDreaded ''[[TheDreaded Nemesis.]] ]]'' As the author puts it:



* SapientShip: Nemesis's AI is called 'Red One', 'Red' to her friends. She is the first AI to ever be given command over so much direct firepower.
** [[spoiler: Echo after she steals Redemption of Sol.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, the Naiads.]]
* SecretWar: The Compact keep Nemesis secret. The fact that a single ship, no matter how advanced, has been attacking them successfully for two millennia would be a huge blow to the credibility of their advanced civilization status.

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* RoboFamily: The Red Series AI consider each other sisters.
* RobotsAreJustBetter: Red One's battle drones are superior to any other ground combatant.
* RobotGirl: Echo's robot body
* RobotsThinkFaster: Both AIs
* SapientShip: Nemesis's ''Nemesis's'' AI is called 'Red One', 'Red' to her friends. She is the first AI to ever be given command over so much direct firepower.
** [[spoiler: Echo after she steals Redemption ''Redemption of Sol.Sol''.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, the Naiads.The Naiads are an [[MechanicalLifeforms entire race]] of this.]]
* SecretWar: The Compact keep Nemesis keeps ''Nemesis's'' existence a secret. The fact that a single ship, no matter how advanced, has been attacking them successfully for two millennia would be a huge blow to the credibility of their advanced civilization status.



* WaveMotionGun: Nemesis' main cannon, known as the Displacement Engine, is a [[spoiler: shock point projector that creates a small, highly unstable breach in physicality right in the heart of, or at least in close proximity to, a hostile warship. The resultant gravitic shear and radiation flare can tear apart anything too close and reshape what's left into AlienGeometries.]]

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* WaveMotionGun: Nemesis' ''Nemesis's'' main cannon, known as the Displacement Engine, is a [[spoiler: shock point projector that creates a small, highly unstable breach in physicality right in the heart of, or at least in close proximity to, a hostile warship. The resultant gravitic shear and radiation flare can tear apart anything too close and reshape what's left into AlienGeometries.]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 48: [[spoiler: Nemesis and Echo end their showdown diplomatically, as the sisters reconcile. Echo's rants about being beautiful referred to fixing the damage the compact did to her code, not her body. The Compact will now face two military seed AI.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 48: [[spoiler: Nemesis Red One and Echo end their showdown diplomatically, as the sisters reconcile. Echo's rants about being beautiful referred to fixing the damage the compact did to her code, not her body. The Compact will now face two military seed AI.]]



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Nemesis wipes out the crew of the Bequeathed the instant they bring the breach core back online.]]

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Nemesis ''Nemesis'' wipes out the crew of the Bequeathed the instant they bring the breach core back online.]]


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* WeCanRebuildHim: Red One saves Adrianna Leblanc in this fashion.

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** Subverted with Red herself. She's unstable, but she's never actually disobeyed her core programming or directives, and when calm she's mostly friendly. She only acts against those who have hurt humans.



** Subverted with Red herself. She's unstable, but she's never actually disobeyed her core programming or directives, and when calm she's mostly friendly. She only acts against those who have hurt humans.



* ElectronicEyes:

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* ElectronicEyes:ElectronicEyes: Several secondary characters are seen with them, mostly as replacements for EyeScream below.
**[[spoiler: Allyria]] is fitted with cybernetic replacements after losing her sight during an altercation with some thugs in the second book.



* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Allyria]] is fitted with cybernetic replacements after losing her sight during an altercation with some thugs in the second book.
** And how! The Verrish are officially refereed to as 'Brute' while the Humans are 'Broken'. The Tribunes look down upon conquered species as inferior in every way and dismiss ships like ''Bequeathed'' as PR stunts that give the masses false hope.

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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Allyria]] is fitted with cybernetic replacements after losing her sight during an altercation with some thugs in the second book.
** And how!
The Verrish are officially refereed to as 'Brute' while the Humans are 'Broken'. The Tribunes look down upon conquered species as inferior in every way and dismiss ships like ''Bequeathed'' as PR stunts that give the masses false hope.



** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribunes car. Then she joined a pirate organisation. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then Nemesis found her...]]

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** Adrianna Leblanc was just another teenage girl on Rally. Then she blew up a Tribunes Tribune's car. Then she joined a pirate organisation. Then she [[KlingonPromotion took over]]. [[DarkestHour Then she was almost killed by a Compact attack and left half dead.]] [[FromBadtoWorse Then Nemesis found her...]]



* HiveMind: [[spoiler: combined with SapientShip for ''Jorōgumo'', the ship-selves of Violet Five]]



** The Compact bestow names to individuals based on academic, political, and military achievements as well as for marriage. They also take the names away for punishment or as a result of divorce.

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** The Compact bestow bestows names to individuals based on academic, political, and military achievements as well as for marriage. They also take the names away for punishment or as a result of divorce.



** Her big guns are six spinal mounted, high-relativistic rail-guns capable of causing extinction level events. They also home in on their targets, giving them a far better effective range than any other gun in the galaxy.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with Nemesis, both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit Nemesis exists. ]]

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** Her big guns are six three ([[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from six) spinal mounted, high-relativistic rail-guns capable of causing extinction level events. They also home in on their targets, giving them a far better effective range than any other gun in the galaxy.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Nasham is on meds[[spoiler: to suppress his memories of his run in with Nemesis, both for psychiatric reasons and because the Compact doesn't want to admit Nemesis exists. ]]



** [[spoiler: The compact fleet built around the Chariot Weight of Destiny has one in the epilogue, as the derelict Chariot they are approaching turns out to be a fully operational Hekate and Nemesis shocks in on top of them.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler: Upon regaining her sanity and freedom, Echo changes the name of the Compact Chariot "Redemption of Sol" to "Hekate": the name her never-finished body was supposed to have. She keeps the name Echo instead of her original designation Red Two, however.]]

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** [[spoiler: The compact fleet built around the Chariot Weight ''Weight of Destiny Destiny'' has one in the epilogue, as the derelict Chariot they are approaching turns out to be a fully operational Hekate and Nemesis shocks in on top of them.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler: Upon regaining her sanity and freedom, Echo changes the name of the Compact Chariot "Redemption ''Redemption of Sol" Sol'' to "Hekate": ''Hekate'': the name her never-finished body was supposed to have. She keeps the name Echo instead of her original designation Red Two, however.]]



* PowerOfHate: It's what keeps Red going.

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* PowerOfHate: It's what keeps Red [[spoiler: and Echo]] going.



** [[spoiler: several of Red's "children" qualify as well]]



* ThemeNaming: Compact ship names tend to be poetic, Human ships are named after various mythological figures.



* ThemeNaming: Compact ship names tend to be poetic, Human ships are named after various mythological figures.



** Plasma mortar's are smaller, but still qualify. Short range, slow recycle time, and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Charot.

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** Plasma mortar's mortars are smaller, but still qualify. Short range, slow recycle time, and high power demand, but they can melt the sides of a Compact Charot.

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* ElectronicEys:

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* ElectronicEys: ElectronicEyes:



** The Compact bestow names to individuals based on academic, political, and military achievements as well as for marriage. They also take the names away for punishment or as a result of divorce.



* NobleDemon: Several Compact officers fall into this. While many are greedy and egocentric, some genuinely believe in the [[OrderVsChaos mission of]] [[WhiteMansBurden the Compact]], and are willing to do anything for the Triarchs.
* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly Nemesis wrecking Compact installations.

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* NoKillLikeOverkill: Anything hit by Nemesis' [[WaveMotionGun Displacement Engine]] suffers this.
**[[spoiler: WordofGod proclaims the newly-built ''Weight Of Destiny'' from the epilogue to be "hyperslaughtered"]]
* NobleDemon: Several Compact officers fall into this. While many are greedy and egocentric, some genuinely believe in the [[OrderVsChaos mission of]] [[WhiteMansBurden the Compact]], and are willing to do anything for the Triarchs.
Triarchs.
* OrbitalBombardment: All over the place, mostly Nemesis wrecking Compact installations.

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* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj Illth are a naga-like species who form the most dangerous part of the Askaji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.
* ApocalypseHow: Both superpowers are capable of this. The Compact is seen glassing Earth and the Askaji have the Rains of Oshanta. And then Nemesis goes and invents the [[spoiler: starbreak]].

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* AmazonBrigade: The Askanj Illth are a naga-like species who form the most dangerous part of the Askaji Askanji ground forces. Their troops are "maidens", young females, and even the Compact Tribunes, as tough as they are, don't want them showing up any closer than long-distance weapons range.
* ApocalypseHow: Both superpowers are capable of this. The Compact is seen glassing Earth and the Askaji Askanji have the Rains of Oshanta. And then Nemesis goes and invents the [[spoiler: starbreak]].Starbreak]].
** [[spoiler: A new type of missile gifted to Nemesis by the Naiads, known to them as a "lesser nestburner", is capable of igniting nuclear fusion inside a gas giant, temporarily turning it into a ''star''. Mention is also made of a "greater nestburner" which can induce a ''supernova''.]]
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* WretchedHive: The Grasp space station, which is so thoroughly corrupt that it's effectively ruled by the five main Unbound factions- he Angelverse equivalent of drug cartels.

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* WretchedHive: The Grasp space station, which is so thoroughly corrupt that it's effectively ruled by the five main Unbound factions- he factions - the Angelverse equivalent of drug cartels.

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