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* AmazonianBeauty: Archer has a lean, muscular form which Lexie finds quite attractive, lovingly describing the stomach's abs when Archer's naked.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Archer has a lean, muscular form which Lexie finds quite attractive, lovingly describing the her stomach's abs when Archer's naked.
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YouthfulFreckles: Lexie has many freckles over her face which make her look younger, which she's not happy with.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Lexie has many freckles over her face which make her look younger, which she's not happy with.
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* WallBangHer: After they've transformed into wolf form, Lexie and Archer have passionate sex, partly up against the tree holding up Archer's treehouse.
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* WallBangHer: After they've transformed into wolf form, Lexie and Archer have passionate sex, partly up against the tree holding up of Archer's treehouse.
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* StrawFeminist: Blythe is a vocal feminist who [[SoapboxSadie never ceases to lecture others about it]]. Despite this, she is revealed to very controlling of her pack and pretty abusive, in a way that feminists condemn. In the series however this is not used against feminism overall, as it's made clear this was a personal failing of Blythe's, and not the philosophy. The pack members continue to uphold feminism, but not in a hypocritical way like her.
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* StrawFeminist: Blythe is a vocal feminist who [[SoapboxSadie never ceases to lecture others about it]]. Despite this, she is revealed to as very controlling of her pack the Pack and pretty abusive, in a way that feminists condemn. In the series however this is not used against feminism overall, as it's made clear this was a personal failing of Blythe's, and not the philosophy. The pack Pack members continue to uphold feminism, but not in a hypocritical way like her.
