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* TouchedByVorlons: Very mild case, in that Simon's dragon scar gives him the ability to sense things he wouldn't otherwise be able to. This factors heavily in the climax.
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* TouchedByVorlons: Very mild case, in that Simon's dragon scar gives him the ability to sense things he wouldn't otherwise be able to. This factors heavily in the climax. He also is mildly psychic and lives closer to the Dream Road than others. This is also invoked, to a degree, by Prince Josua, who is willing to make use of Simon's popularity and time with the Sithi as a way to bolster morale for the Battle at the Stone. Finally, this is invoked again at the end of the novel when Isgrimnur and others push Simon to take the throne, pointing out not only Simon's recently discovered heritage, but all the ''other'' crap he's gone through, saying of his heritage that "I'd be tempted to make it up if it weren't true." The fact is, that, with the exception of the Dragon's blood, none of his encounters have given him special abilities, he's just [[CharacterDevelopment grown up]].
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Prester John is over ninety years old and a very devout [[CrystalDragonJesus definitely-not-Christian]]. Prester is another form of presbyter, meaning "ruling elder of the church". Emphasis on "elder".
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* RuleOfThree: The Conqueror's star appears in three consecutive years (though very dimly in the second) when it appears, and this is its third appearance in history. There are also the three swords.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Frustrated by Miriamele's refusal to reciprocate his affections, Simon instead declares that he will be her knight-protector, and abandons his duties to Josua in order to accompany her on her journey back to the Hayholt.
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* IWillProtectHer: Frustrated by Miriamele's refusal to reciprocate his affections, Simon instead declares that he will be her knight-protector, and abandons his duties to Josua in order to accompany her on her journey back to the Hayholt.
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* IWillProtectHer: Frustrated by Miriamele's refusal to reciprocate his affections, Simon instead declares that he will be her knight-protector, and abandons his duties to Josua in order to accompany her on her journey back to the Hayholt.
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* ArcherArchetype: Miriamele's weapon of choice is the bow, which fits with her theme of independence; plus as a woman (and a princess) she would be unable to easily acquire training with a sword. Some humor comes from the contrast between her archery skills and Simon's, who self-deprecatingly claims to be able to "hit a cow at ten paces."
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* ArcherArchetype: Miriamele's weapon of choice is the bow, which fits with her theme of independence; plus as a woman (and a princess) she would be unable to easily acquire training with a sword. Some humor comes from the contrast between her archery skills and Simon's, who self-deprecatingly claims to be able to "hit a cow at ten paces."" Her skill with the bow also comes in very handy in the climax.
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* TheArcher: Miriamele's weapon of choice is the bow. Some humor comes from the contrast between her archery skills and Simon's, who self-deprecatingly claims to be able to "hit a cow at ten paces."
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* TheArcher: ArcherArchetype: Miriamele's weapon of choice is the bow.bow, which fits with her theme of independence; plus as a woman (and a princess) she would be unable to easily acquire training with a sword. Some humor comes from the contrast between her archery skills and Simon's, who self-deprecatingly claims to be able to "hit a cow at ten paces."
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Miriamele swears that she will only trust Cadrach again "when the stars shine at midday." Cue his [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice to save them from the CollapsingLair]]. Simon uses the same phrase [[spoiler: when thinking that if Elias and Josua were both killed, he might end up as King Simon]].
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** Miriamele swears that she will only trust Cadrach again "when the stars shine at midday." Cue his [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice to save them from the CollapsingLair]]. Simon uses the same phrase [[spoiler: when thinking that if Elias and Josua were both killed, he might end up as King Simon]].
** Miriamele swears that she will only trust Cadrach again "when the stars shine at midday." Cue his [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice to save them from the CollapsingLair]].
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** Simon uses the same phrase to describe his chances of [[spoiler:[[StandardHeroReward becoming King and marrying Miriamele]]]].
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Miriamele swears that she will only trust Cadrach again "when the stars shine at midday." Cue his [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice to save them from the CollapsingLair]].
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Miriamele swears that she will only trust Cadrach again "when the stars shine at midday." Cue his [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice to save them from the CollapsingLair]]. Simon uses the same phrase [[spoiler: when thinking that if Elias and Josua were both killed, he might end up as King Simon]].
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Inch is a CompleteMonster, but the capper for Jeremias' litany of his villainy not-so-delicately implies that Inch used him as a catamite.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Inch is a CompleteMonster, pure evil, but the capper for Jeremias' litany of his villainy not-so-delicately implies that Inch used him as a catamite.
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* TheUnfettered: Pryrates claims to be this. Since his origins and motivations are never made clear, it's impossible to say if he's telling the truth, but his [[CompleteMonster actions speak for themselves]].
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* TheUnfettered: Pryrates claims to be this. Since his origins and motivations are never made clear, it's impossible to say if he's telling the truth, but his [[CompleteMonster actions speak for themselves]].themselves.
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* TheWisePrince: Prince Josua.
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* TheWisePrince: TheWisePrince:
** PrinceJosua.Josua is a benevolent and kindhearted ruler. He is loved by his people, but is also seen to have [[TheChainsOfCommanding difficulty making harsh choices]] that may lead to the deaths of his subjects.
** Ineluki was said to have been a noble and wise prince before he went JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope.
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** Ineluki was said to have been a noble and wise prince before he went JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope.
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* BadBoss: Benigaris of Nabban has a habit of [[ShootTheMessenger executing people]] who tell him what he doesn't want to hear. In this way, he manages to ignore the fact that Camaris (the rightful heir to the throne) is marching across his country, crushing his armies, and recruiting all the people who have become disaffected by his rule.
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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: [[spoiler: Ineluki/The Storm King's tragic backstory is this.]] He went from TheWisePrince, and a compassive ruler who wanted to save his people, to a WellIntentionnedExtremist, was then maddened by rejection, disgrace and a failure, and became an OmnicidalManiac.
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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: [[spoiler: Ineluki/The Storm King's tragic backstory is this.]] He went from TheWisePrince, and a compassive ruler who wanted to save his people, to a WellIntentionnedExtremist, WellIntentionedExtremist, was then maddened by rejection, disgrace and a failure, and became an OmnicidalManiac.
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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: [[spoiler: Ineluki/The Storm King's tragic backstory is this.]] He went from TheWisePrince, and a compassive ruler who wanted to save his people, to a WellIntentionnedExtremist, was then maddened by rejection, disgrace and a failure, and became an OmnicidalManiac.
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* {{Knighting}}: Simon is knighted by Prince Josua atop the Stone of Farewell as a reward for his bravery in recovering Thorn. The ceremony is preceded by a night of fasting and vigil, in keeping with Aedonite tradition.
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* ThroatLight: A symptom of the Storm King's DemonicPossession: "Emberlight bloomed in his mouth."
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* {{Astrologer}}{{Astrologer}}: Xannasavin in the court of Nabban does an astonishingly good job of predicting the future -- it doesn't hurt that in this universe, astrology is entirely valid. Of course, the future he predicts ends up not being what Duke Benigaris wants to hear, which gets him [[ShootTheMessenger thrown off a roof]].
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Sinkhole of a subjective trope. Opinions don\'t go in main pages
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Geloë practices the Art in a manner akin to classic Druidism, shapeshifting into birds. Handled fairly realistically in that it does not affect her clothing. Also used by Pryrates, thanks to the Words of Changing. His choice of form is [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel anything but natural]], however.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Geloë practices the Art in a manner akin to classic Druidism, shapeshifting into birds. Handled fairly realistically in that it does not affect her clothing. Also used by Pryrates, thanks to the Words of Changing. His choice of form is [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel anything but natural]], natural, however.
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* ApronMatron: Rachel, headmistress of the Hayholt, who has earned the nickname "The Dragon" for her strictness. Needless to say, Simon is her "favorite" disciplinary case.
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* CharacterDevelopment: The focus of the story is Simon's development into a hero, but many other characters get this as well. In fact, Simon's development is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the return of boyhood friend Jeremiah, who points out just how far Simon has come.
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* CharacterDevelopment: The focus of the story is Simon's development into a hero, but many other characters get this as well. In fact, Simon's development is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the return of boyhood friend Jeremiah, Jeremias, who points out just how far Simon has come.
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* EvilIsNotAToy, TheStarscream: Pryrates hopes to use the power he was granted by the Storm King to [[spoiler:control him and use him to rule the world. Needless to say, [[KarmicDeath it doesn't work]]]].
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* EvilIsNotAToy, TheStarscream: Pryrates hopes to use the power he was granted by the Storm King to [[spoiler:control him and use him to rule the world. Needless to say, Unfortunately (for him), [[KarmicDeath it doesn't work]]]].
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* HopeSpot: Miriamele's lucky shot that appears to [[spoiler:kill Pryrates]]. Needless to say, he gets better, and disturbingly quickly.
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* ThePowerOfLove: In the climax, Simon [[spoiler:unravels the scheme to summon the Storm King by reacting to his evil with ''{{forgiveness}}'']]. Needless to say, the latter [[DidntSeeThatComing Didn't See That Coming]], and is weakened just enough for Miriamele to [[spoiler:kill his physical host]].
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* ThePowerOfLove: In the climax, Simon [[spoiler:unravels the scheme to summon the Storm King by reacting to his evil with ''{{forgiveness}}'']]. Needless to say, the The latter [[DidntSeeThatComing Didn't See That Coming]], and is weakened just enough for Miriamele to [[spoiler:kill his physical host]].
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Inch is a CompleteMonster, but the capper for Jeremiah's litany of his villainy not-so-delicately implies that Inch used him as a catamite.
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: There is a ''lot'' of [[DangerousForbiddenTechnique dark, dangerous knowledge]] in the world of Osten Ard. Those who delve too deep tend to GoMadFromTheRevelation. Underlying it all is a concept called "Unbeing" which apparently makes you DeaderThanDead. Needless to say, Ineluki is one of the greatest practitioners of these arts. Pryrates likes them, too. Cadrach discovering some in the pages of ''[[TomeOfEldritchLore Du Svardenvyrd]]'' sent him over the DespairEventHorizon.
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: There is a ''lot'' of [[DangerousForbiddenTechnique dark, dangerous knowledge]] in the world of Osten Ard. Those who delve too deep tend to GoMadFromTheRevelation. Underlying it all is a concept called "Unbeing" which apparently makes you DeaderThanDead. Needless to say, Ineluki is one of the greatest practitioners of these arts. Pryrates likes them, too. Cadrach discovering some in the pages of ''[[TomeOfEldritchLore Du Svardenvyrd]]'' sent him over the DespairEventHorizon.
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** In a certain sense, Simon as well. He is a meek scullion, who is inexperienced, naive and dependent on adults like Binabik - however, in times of grave danger, he will be the one who saves the lives of his companions.
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I wished to add Simon to the CMHB trope, because it describes him well, IMO.
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* LeftJustifiedFantasyMap: Osten Ard is a textbook example with ocean to the west and vast unexplored territory to the east.
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* HopeSpot: Miriamele's lucky shot that appears to [[spoiler:kill Pryrates]]. Needless to say, [[IGotBetter he gets better]], and disturbingly quickly.
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* ConvenientDecoyCat: A grey cat that lives in the Hayholt saves Simon when he's trapped in a cellar by Pryrates, by offering itself as a distraction. The cat makes several appearances later in the story.
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* BigNo: Isgrimnur is ''not'' happy when [[spoiler:Josua makes him shave off [[BadassBeard his beard]]]].
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Almost every single human nation is one of these, from the Nabbanai (Rennaisance Italy) to the Wrannamen (Aborigines). The Qanuc are a mashup of Inuit culture with AllTrollsAreDifferent and the Sithi have a pinch of Japanese to a good helping of TheFairFolk. Fortunately, no real life human culture is anything like the Norns.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Almost every single human nation is one of these, from the Nabbanai (Rennaisance (Renaissance Italy) to the Wrannamen (Aborigines). The Qanuc are a mashup of Inuit culture with AllTrollsAreDifferent and the Sithi have a pinch of Japanese to a good helping of TheFairFolk. Fortunately, no real life human culture is anything like the Norns.Norns.
* FantasticRacism: Rimmersgarders and trolls do not get along.
* FantasticRacism: Rimmersgarders and trolls do not get along.
* OfferedTheCrown: [[spoiler:Simon, after his MosesInTheBullrushes reveal.]] In fact, Isgrimnur states outright that if he didn't have royal blood, they'd be inclined to make it up anyway, just to give the people someone to rally behind.
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* OfferedTheCrown: [[spoiler:Simon, after his MosesInTheBullrushes reveal.]] In fact, Isgrimnur states outright that if he didn't have royal blood, they'd be inclined to make it up anyway, just to give the people someone to rally behind.
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* OfferedTheCrown: [[spoiler:Simon, after his MosesInTheBullrushes reveal.]] In fact, Isgrimnur states outright that if OhMyGods: A number of non-Aedonist characters do this. most Hilariously, so does Duke Isgrimnur- he didn't have royal blood, they'd be inclined converted as an adult, but tends to make it up anyway, just to give the people someone to rally behind.forget and start swearing by FantasyCounterpartCulture versions of [[NorseMythology Odin and Thor]] instead of Usires.
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* SlutShaming: Sex doesn't have a large role in the story, but when it shows up, expect talk of shame to come close behind. Simon takes it hard that Miriamele isn't a virgin and Josua gets some guff for not having made an honest woman out of his horselady.
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* EmergencyImpersonation: The heroes' army uses {{Body Double}}s for the [[StormingTheCastle final battle]] to hide the fact that Prince Josua and Camaris have both gone into the Hayholt via the tunnels, both for the enemy's benefit and to boost the morale of their troops. Although the ruse does work, [[spoiler:it turns out to be irrelevant]].
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* GuiseWillBeGuise: The heroes' army uses {{Body Double}}s for the [[StormingTheCastle final battle]] to hide the fact that Prince Josua and Camaris have both gone into the Hayholt via the tunnels, both for the enemy's benefit and to boost the morale of their troops. Although the ruse does work, [[spoiler:it turns out to be irrelevant]].
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* SupportingHero: Duke Isgrimnur becomes the de facto leader of the army besieging the Hayholt after Josua and Camaris both enter the castle via the tunnels.
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* TheAragorn: Subverted. The heroic army led by Prince Josua and Duke Isgrimnur intends to use their attempt to [[StormingTheCastle storm the Hayholt]] as a diversion for the swords to be rescued from the castle via the tunnels, but they are actually playing directly into Pryrates' plan, as the conflict and destruction is a necessary component of the final ritual.
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The [[{{Characters/ptitler65i0omv}} character sheet]] is here.
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The [[{{Characters/ptitler65i0omv}} [[Characters/MemorySorrowAndThorn character sheet]] is here.