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AsYouKnow: The story follows the life and adventures of Carmen Dula; who begins the story as an 18 year old girl going on a friendly family road trip [[InSpace to mars]] (thus the name ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Marsbound]]''). As such a trip might imply, [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale you can't simply hop into the car and drive there]], [[FridgeHorror and space travel is still relatively new]]! Cue [[TimeSkip Time Skips]], a RoadTripRomance, and the [[ForegoneConclusion inevitable]] [[SmallTownBoredom Space Ship Boredom]].

Things don't get any better when they arrive on the Red Planet, either. The first thing that happens to the new arrivals when they get off the spaceplane is they're shuffled into a colony of 100 people that isn't much bigger than the spaceship they just got off of, assigned chores to do during their stay, and told to [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch get used to it, bitch]]. A combination of menial labor, an AlphaBitch (who happens to be the [[BadBoss administrator in charge of the whole shebang]]), and the [[OverlyLongGag still inevitable]] [[SmallTownBoredom Mars Colony Boredom]] drives the younger members of the colony to do something... eh, [[GoneSwimmingClothesStolen slightly inappropriate]] [[{{Squick}} in the colony's brand new water supply]].

Of course you CantGetAwayWithNuthin, and when the misguided youths are called out on their shenanigans [[spoiler: RocksFallEverybodyDies]]... Actually, Carmen storms off into the martian landscape [[TooDumbToLive alone, and in the middle of the night]], [[FailedAttemptAtDrama falls into a pit]], and [[ItGotWorse is left on the verge of death]]. TheEnd. [[MoveAlongNothingToSeeHere Don't look at me in that tone of voice]]! TheHeroDies, and [[BlatantLies this is the most anticlimactic novel of all time]].

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AsYouKnow: The story follows the life and adventures of Carmen Dula; who begins the story as an eighteen year old girl going on a friendly family road trip [[InSpace to mars]] (thus the name ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Marsbound]]''). As such a trip might imply, [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale you can't simply hop into the car and drive there]], and space travel is still relatively new! Cue [[TimeSkip Time Skips]], a RoadTripRomance, and the [[ForegoneConclusion inevitable]] [[SmallTownBoredom Space Ship Boredom]].

Things don't get any better when they arrive on the Red Planet, either. The first thing that happens to the new arrivals when they get off the spaceplane is they're shuffled into a colony of 100 people that isn't much bigger than the spaceship they just got off of, assigned chores to do during their stay, and told to [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch get used to it, bitch]]. A combination of menial labor, an AlphaBitch (who happens to be the [[BadBoss administrator in charge of the whole shebang]]), and the [[OverlyLongGag still inevitable]] [[SmallTownBoredom Mars Colony Boredom]] drives the younger members of the colony to do something -- eh, [[GoneSwimmingClothesStolen slightly inappropriate]] in the colony's brand new water supply.

Of course you CantGetAwayWithNuthin, and when the misguided youths are called out on their shenanigans. Actually, Carmen storms off into the martian landscape [[TooDumbToLive alone, and in the middle of the night]], [[FailedAttemptAtDrama falls into a pit]], and [[ItGotWorse is left on the verge of death]]. TheEnd. [[MoveAlongNothingToSeeHere Don't look at me in that tone of voice]]! TheHeroDies, and [[BlatantLies this is the most anticlimactic novel of all time]].

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* AlphaBitch: Apparently Dargo Solingen's social skills never evolved much past sophomore year of High School.
** [[spoiler: Her grudge against Carmen almost gets the entire human race killed.]]
* AlternateDimension: Where do you think all that "free" energy comes from?
** By the end of Starbound? [[spoiler: [[OhCrap Earth]]]]
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: After the entire first novel takes place from the point of view of Carmen Dula, the very next novel opens with a chapter again from her perspective, allowing the reader to believe that it's going to be more of the same... And then the very next two chapters are given from the perspectives of a somewhat minor character from the first book, and another character who wasn't even IN the first book. The novel continues this way, alternating between these three perspectives seemingly at random. This often ends up confusing the reader about whose point of view they're actually reading from when not a lot of character insight is given, or when not a lot of other characters are mentioned by name.
* ApocalypseHow: With the awesome capabilities of the Others, it is probably as yet unknown just how apocalyptic they can be. It was speculated that they could initiate a class X-2 by blowing up the sun! [[spoiler: Considering what they did to the moon, with seemingly no effort, that doesn't seem all that far-fetched.]]
** If it wasn't thwarted at the last minute, the plot at the end of the first novel probably would have resulted in a class 3a or class 4 extinction. [[spoiler: The explosion that would have resulted by turning 100% of the Martian leader, Red's mass into energy would have been big enough to boil the Earth's oceans and blow away most of the atmosphere on the side facing the space station... From geosynchronous orbit.]] Oh, and don't think that just because you were on the far side of the planet when this went down that you'd be safe. [[spoiler: The sudden loss of air pressure would probably kill the rest of humanity outright, and if it didn't then fires all over the planet would soon blanket out the sky and disrupt all agriculture for a very, very long time. The survivors would literally starve to death (can you say "NoPartyLikeADonnerParty"?).]]
*** This would not have rendered Earth uninhabitable forever [[spoiler: and the Others had intended for the Martians to inherit the Earth themselves if their plan had worked]].
* AppliedPhlebotinum: See the entry for AlternateDimension - Nobody knows how it works, [[HandWave it just DOES, okay!?]]
** Of course, this could just be a side-effect of the SufficientlyAdvancedAlien trope (see below).
* [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter]]: Played straight for Marsbound, but retconned in the sequel. This trope still ''technically'' applies, but [[spoiler: Carmen's twins aren't actually grown in her own womb, since the Martians have a type of disease/condition that somehow affects humans while they're young, and kills many children right after they're born. They're also given to the care of the entire colony, so she has more of a detached role in their development - She might as well be their aunt.]]
* ArtificialGravity: Averted for the humans, who have to rely on rotating frames of reference and the equivalence principal to keep their feet on the floor.
** But played straight with the Others, who are [[SufficientlyAdvancedAlien Sufficiently Advanced Aliens]].
* BizarreAlienBiology: The Martians? [[VertebrateWithExtraLimbs Eight-limbed]] [[StarfishAliens potato-heads]] with [[ExtraEyes fifty eyes]]; they reproduce by [[BizarreAlienReproduction rolling around in each others' fluids until one of them accepts the genetic material and spawns babies all over their skin]]; and [[PsychicLink when one dies their memories and personalities are transmitted to the next Martian who will be born to replace them]], so their population is more or less constant.
** And then there are the Others: [[SiliconBasedLife Silicon Based Lifeforms]] who live completely submerged in liquid Nitrogen, have superconducting brains that can think at literally the speed of light, yet move glacially slow because of their biology. They may actually be [[spoiler: an assimilated life form]] that [[spoiler: accepts new members from the civilizations they come in contact with]] [[HumanPopsicle by freezing them in liquid nitrogen]], and [[PsychicLink absorbing their memories]].
*** Oh, and they are [[spoiler: [[TimeAbyss immortal]]]]!

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* AlphaBitch: Apparently Dargo Solingen's social skills never evolved much past sophomore year of High School.[[spoiler: Her grudge against Carmen almost gets the entire human race killed.]]
* AlternateDimension: Where do you think all that "free" energy comes from? By the end of ''Starbound''? [[spoiler: [[OhCrap Earth]]]]
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: After the entire first novel takes place from the point of view of Carmen Dula, the very next novel opens with a chapter again from her perspective, allowing the reader to believe that it's going to be more of the same... And then the very next two chapters are given from the perspectives of a somewhat minor character from the first book, and another character who wasn't even in the first book. The novel continues this way, alternating between these three perspectives seemingly at random. This often ends up confusing the reader about whose point of view they're actually reading from when not a lot of character insight is given, or when not a lot of other characters are mentioned by name.
* ApocalypseHow:
** With the awesome capabilities of the Others, it is probably as yet unknown just how apocalyptic they can be. It was speculated that they could initiate a class X-2 by blowing up the sun! [[spoiler: Considering what they did to the moon, with seemingly no effort, that doesn't seem all that far-fetched.]]
** If it wasn't thwarted at the last minute, the plot at the end of the first novel probably would have resulted in a class 3a or class 4 extinction. [[spoiler: The explosion that would have resulted by turning 100% of the Martian leader, Red's mass into energy would have been big enough to boil the Earth's oceans and blow away most of the atmosphere on the side facing the space station... From geosynchronous orbit.]] Oh, and don't think that just because you were on the far side of the planet when this went down that you'd be safe. [[spoiler: The sudden loss of air pressure would probably kill the rest of humanity outright, and if it didn't then fires all over the planet would soon blanket out the sky and disrupt all agriculture for a very, very long time. The survivors would literally starve to death (can you say "NoPartyLikeADonnerParty"?).]]\\
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This would not have rendered Earth uninhabitable forever [[spoiler: and the Others had intended for the Martians to inherit the Earth themselves if their plan had worked]].
* AppliedPhlebotinum: See the entry for AlternateDimension -- Nobody knows how it works, [[HandWave it just does, okay!?]] Of course, this could just be a side-effect of the SufficientlyAdvancedAlien trope (see below).
* ArtificialGravity: Averted for the humans, who have to rely on rotating frames of reference and the equivalence principal to keep their feet on the floor. But played straight with the Others, who are [[SufficientlyAdvancedAlien Sufficiently Advanced Aliens]].
* BizarreAlienBiology:
** The Martians? [[VertebrateWithExtraLimbs Eight-limbed]] [[StarfishAliens potato-heads]] with [[ExtraEyes fifty eyes]]; they reproduce by [[BizarreAlienReproduction rolling around in each others' fluids until one of them accepts the genetic material and spawns babies all over their skin]]; and [[PsychicLink when one dies their memories and personalities are transmitted to the next Martian who will be born to replace them]], so their population is more or less constant.
** And then there are the Others: [[SiliconBasedLife Silicon Based Lifeforms]] who live completely submerged in liquid Nitrogen, have superconducting brains that can think at literally the speed of light, yet move glacially slow because of their biology. They may actually be [[spoiler: an assimilated life form]] that [[spoiler: accepts new members from the civilizations they come in contact with]] [[HumanPopsicle by freezing them in liquid nitrogen]], and [[PsychicLink absorbing their memories]]. Oh, and they are [[spoiler: [[TimeAbyss immortal]]]]!

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* FreeLoveFuture: While the start of Marsbound has a more traditional take on monogamous relationships, by the time of Starbound (and to a lesser degree, the third act of Marsbound), monogamous relationships have started to become viewed as antiquated; a holdover from the old days when women were viewed as property. While there is still the resultant jealousy in the future, for the most part men and women are allowed to sleep around as they wish.
** There are even "Triunes" - Three way marriages.
* HeroicSacrifice: Textbook subversion. [[spoiler: Paul]] totally expected to die while [[spoiler: flying Red to the far side of the moon, so that when he exploded it wouldn't render the Earth temporarily uninhabitable and kill off most, if not all of the human race]]. He even loses radio contact as he passes over the horizon, and everyone expects him to be a goner [[spoiler: (Carmen's already mourning him as dead)]]. Some quick thinking by Red, however, and after the brilliant fireworks display he's back and everybody's happy! Cue TheEnd, and [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter]].
*** Then again, maybe not-so-subverted. [[spoiler: Since Red had to give his life in order to save the human race. He would have died anyway, but at least in this way he didn't take everyone else with him.]] That has to count for something!
** Lazlo Motkin (see WhatHappenedToTheMouse) very ''strongly'' suggests that the crew of the ''Ad Astra'' do this [[spoiler: by turning their ship into a giant ball of ice moving at 99% the speed of light... [[ColonyDrop and smashing it right into the Others' homeworld]]]]. The crew decides to ignore him.

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** She also points out that if you count vibrators, then she isn't ''[[TechnicalVirgin technically]]'' a virgin.
*** [[spoiler: That still doesn't stop her though.]]
* NeglectfulPrecursors: Perhaps subverted by [[spoiler: the Others]]. While they did leave the Martians with the technology to eventually intercept and listen to human radio broadcasts, ''literally'' the gift of speech (from birth, with one exception), the ability to [[AppliedPhlebotinum generate free energy from nowhere]] [[spoiler: (actually it's siphoned from a "donor" planet in AnotherDimension; a planet which Earth eventually has the "honor" of becoming)]], and perform medical miracles on themselves and the humans, [[NoBiochemicalBarriers with whom they share nothing in common biologically]]... [[spoiler: they left them with absolutely no knowledge of where it all came from, how it works, or even how to actually use it!]]
** You'd think that since the Martians' ''entire purpose in life'' was to [[spoiler: observe the humans and determine whether or not they would ever actually become a threat to the Others, that the Others would probably cue them in on the whole thing]]. Or, you know, at least give them a ''little'' hint.
*** [[spoiler: But they ''did'' leave the knowledge of their existence locked away in the memories of the yellow family, which counts for something...]] [[BlatantLies Or does it?]]
** Possibly subverted since [[spoiler: the Others]] aren't technically precursors. [[spoiler: They just created them and put them on Mars so that they could eventually make contact with humankind as a kind of proxy race]].

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* NeglectfulPrecursors: Subverted by [[spoiler: the Others]]. While they did leave the Martians with the technology to eventually intercept and listen to human radio broadcasts, ''literally'' the gift of speech (from birth, with one exception), the ability to [[AppliedPhlebotinum generate free energy from nowhere]] [[spoiler: (actually it's siphoned from a "donor" planet in AnotherDimension; a planet which Earth eventually has the "honor" of becoming)]], and perform medical miracles on themselves and the humans, [[NoBiochemicalBarriers with whom they share nothing in common biologically]]... [[spoiler: they left them with absolutely no knowledge of where it all came from, how it works, or even how to actually use it!]]\\
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Since the Martians' ''entire purpose in life'' was to [[spoiler: observe the humans and determine whether or not they would ever actually become a threat to the Others, that the Others would probably cue them in on the whole thing]]. Or, you know, at least give them a ''little'' hint.

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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Basically played straight, but it is at least acknowledged by all the scientists on Mars that this makes absolutely no sense, and the government devotes almost countless resources to building a space station where they can study that exact phenomenon.
** Upon making first contact with an injured Carmen Dula, the Martians apply their alien medicine and it works perfectly (despite the fact that they hadn't the slightest idea what they were actually doing).
** When she returns to the Colony, Carmen brings with her a strange type of "Martian Lung Crap" ([[IncurableCoughOfDeath it's exactly as pleasant as it sounds]]), that is apparently the Martian equivalent of the Measles, except that literally ''every'' Martian gets it upon transition to adolescence. For the humans, it's not so benign...
*** Again, Martian medicine saves the day!
*** Come to think of it, the "Lung Crap Outbreak" was probably an excellent choice of PlotDevice to introduce the Martians to the rest of the human colony on Mars.
** Even more strange is that the previously mentioned lung crap only seems to affect humans under the age of twenty, with no adverse effects in adults.

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* SmashTheSymbol: The space elevator, as well as the fifty-plus ship fleet that was legitimately intended to be purely self defensive - both of which represent humanity's rapid expansion into space, its commitment to stay there following FirstContact with the Martians, as well as the desperate stand to defend themselves against any aggression by the Others - [[spoiler: is wiped out in minutes when the Others blow up Earth's moon, turning every cubic centimeter of exoatmospheric space into a debris field of lethal dust that would easily shred any spacecraft that tries to take off into it.]]
* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien: the Others, hands down. Not only can they literally pull energy out of an AlternateDimension and use it to power essentially all their technology... [[spoiler: They can apparently ''[[BeyondTheImpossible assign the planet this energy comes from at will!]]]]''
** Let's not forget that they can apparently [[spoiler: suspend the passage of time]] within any arbitrary volume of space. This ability comes in handy when traveling the massive distances between star systems. It could be that they are just taking advantage of time dilation, and traveling at the speed of light, but that theory has enough evidence to stand against it on its own:
*** For one thing, that would require getting ''to'' the speed of light... But since they have a theoretically unlimited amount of energy, this may not be impossible (as it takes an infinite amount of energy to move anything with mass at the speed of light). However,
*** This does not explain how the ''Ad Astra'' is able to do this with its currently existing engines after [[spoiler: Spy]] comes to visit. Since the ''Ad Astra'' does theoretically use the same (or similar enough) propulsion technology as the Others, perhaps it was an easy modification to make. Then again,
*** On the return leg of the journey from Wolf 25, the Earth's Space Force describes clearly seeing them decelerating for some time before they actually received a response. It is heavily suggested that time passes normally for anyone not inside the spaceship directly.
** Oh, and did I mention that [[spoiler: they can blow up the moon on a whim?]]
** All the applications of this trope to the Others could probably fill their own page!
** The Martians to a lesser extent, although this may or may not be true since most (if not all) of their technology was given to them by the Others.
*** Which is really just another example of how advanced they really are.
* TimeAbyss: the Others live for a very, very long time. [[spoiler: In fact, there is a very strong chance that they are truly immortal.]] Compared to them, the span of a human's life is utterly insignificant, and perhaps even incomprehensible. Because of this, they are unable to communicate directly with humans, and so create organic "machines" (really lifeforms) [[spoiler: like the Martians]] to do their talking for them.
** [[spoiler: No wonder they have such a nonchalant attitude about wiping humanity off the face of the galaxy.]]

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* SmashTheSymbol: The space elevator, as well as the fifty-plus ship fleet that was legitimately intended to be purely self defensive - both of which represent humanity's rapid expansion into space, its commitment to stay there following FirstContact with the Martians, as well as the desperate stand to defend themselves against any aggression by the Others -- [[spoiler: is wiped out in minutes when the Others blow up Earth's moon, turning every cubic centimeter of exoatmospheric space into a debris field of lethal dust that would easily shred any spacecraft that tries to take off into it.]]
* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien:
** The Others, hands down. Not only can they literally pull energy out of an AlternateDimension and use it to power essentially all their technology... [[spoiler: They can apparently ''[[BeyondTheImpossible assign the planet this energy comes from at will!]]]]''. They can apparently [[spoiler: suspend the passage of time]] within any arbitrary volume of space. This ability comes in handy when traveling the massive distances between star systems. It could be that they are just taking advantage of time dilation, and traveling at the speed of light, but that theory has enough evidence to stand against it on its own: For one thing, that would require getting ''to'' the speed of light... But since they have a theoretically unlimited amount of energy, this may not be impossible (as it takes an infinite amount of energy to move anything with mass at the speed of light).\\
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However, This does not explain how the ''Ad Astra'' is able to do this with its currently existing engines after [[spoiler: Spy]] comes to visit. Since the ''Ad Astra'' does theoretically use the same (or similar enough) propulsion technology as the Others, perhaps it was an easy modification to make. Then again, On the return leg of the journey from Wolf 25, the Earth's Space Force describes clearly seeing them decelerating for some time before they actually received a response. It is heavily suggested that time passes normally for anyone not inside the spaceship directly.\\
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Oh, and [[spoiler: they can blow up the moon on a whim?]] All the applications of this trope to the Others could probably fill their own page!
** The Martians to a lesser extent, although this may or may not be true since most (if not all) of their technology was given to them by the Others. Which is really just another example of how advanced they really are.
* TimeAbyss: the Others live for a very, very long time. [[spoiler: In fact, there is a very strong chance that they are truly immortal.]] Compared to them, the span of a human's life is utterly insignificant, and perhaps even incomprehensible. Because of this, they are unable to communicate directly with humans, and so create organic "machines" (really lifeforms) [[spoiler: like the Martians]] to do their talking for them. [[spoiler: No wonder they have such a nonchalant attitude about wiping humanity off the face of the galaxy.]]

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Lazlo Motkin [[spoiler: - The well-to-do, god fearing, alien hating president of Earth -]] sends the ''Ad Astra'' a radio transmission requesting (to put it mildly) that they [[spoiler: turn their home spaceship into a kamikaze bomber and pilot it straight into the Others' homeworld]]. This course of action obviously proves to be unpopular with the crew, and after all of one chapter's deliberation, they basically decide to tell him to fuck off. They radio Earth back asking if this guy was legitimate, and the entire arc was dropped immediately thereafter, with no further mentioning anywhere in the story.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: After the Martian Lung Crap incident, there was a general fear that other maladies might be transferred from Martians to Humans. The Earth effectively quarantined the entire planet of Mars; Martian colonists were allowed to enter Earth orbit, but were restricted to literally half of a space station (albeit a very large one). Eventually the quarantine is lifted, but it takes two entire novels, and there was always the very distinct possibility that it wouldn't be... ever.

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Lazlo Motkin [[spoiler: -- The well-to-do, god fearing, alien hating president of Earth --]] sends the ''Ad Astra'' a radio transmission requesting (to put it mildly) that they [[spoiler: turn their home spaceship into a kamikaze bomber and pilot it straight into the Others' homeworld]]. This course of action obviously proves to be unpopular with the crew, and after all of one chapter's deliberation, they basically decide to tell him to fuck off. They radio Earth back asking if this guy was legitimate, and the entire arc was dropped immediately thereafter, with no further mentioning anywhere in the story.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: After the Martian Lung Crap incident, there was a general fear that other maladies might be transferred from Martians to Humans. The Earth effectively quarantined the entire planet of Mars; Martian colonists were allowed to enter Earth orbit, but were restricted to literally half of a space station (albeit a very large one). Eventually the quarantine is lifted, but it takes two entire novels, and there was always the very distinct possibility that it wouldn't be... ever.
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