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** Hagrid goes from merely resisting the Aurors attempting to arrest him to ''beating the hell out of them'' when they use Stunners to knock out Fang and [=McGonagall=].
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hagrid is generally seen as everyone's big jolly friend (or as a harmless oaf by people who dislike him such as the Slytherins), but when Umbridge comes with a bodyguard of Aurors to try and arrest him in the middle of the night, he fights them all off single-handedly due to his giant blood enabling him to shrug off their stunner spells. When the Aurors stun Fang and [=McGonagall=], he ''completely'' [[BerserkButton loses what little restraint he had left]] and starts laying them out with his bare hands, as well as hurling the man who stunned Fang ten feet through the air, before escaping. The students watching from a tower top are actually quite frightened.
-->''None of them had ever seen Hagrid in a real temper before.''
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* ActOfTrueLove: Voldemort takes a moment to pull Bellatrix to safety with him before fleeing the Ministry of Magic and by doing so risks his own safety and harms his movement and even loses the opportunity to have his archenemy Dumbledore captured.
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Corrected information—according to Chapter 10 Pages 187-188 of OOTP, Harry doesn't mind being seen with Ginny; it's only Neville and Luna whom he's embarrassed to be seen with (at the time).





* FireForgedFriends: At the beginning of the book, Harry is embarrassed to be seen in public with Neville, Ginny and Luna, and the main trio are exasperated to have to bring them along on the mission to rescue Sirius. After the events at the Ministry, the six of them are now firm friends as they discuss Voldemort's return in the Hospital Wing, and Hermione even resists the urge to challenge Luna's latest rambling about Crumple-Horned Snorkacks.

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* FireForgedFriends: At the beginning of the book, Harry is embarrassed to be seen in public with Neville, Ginny Neville and Luna, and the main trio are exasperated to have to bring them and Ginny along on the mission to rescue Sirius. After the events at the Ministry, the six of them are now firm friends as they discuss Voldemort's return in the Hospital Wing, and Hermione even resists the urge to challenge Luna's latest rambling about Crumple-Horned Snorkacks.
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* SoProudOfYou: When the Order briefs Harry on what Voldemort has been doing over the summer, Sirius tells Harry that Voldemort messed up his resurrection plan. Lupin, with a satisfied smile, immediately corrects this to Harry messed up Voldemort's plan for him.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 750 pages no matter which edition and the ''longest'' book in the series; nearly a quarter of the word count of ''the entire series'' is contained in this one book, since it usually has smaller print than the others [[UpToEleven but ends up with the highest page count anyway]]. Magazines and newspapers pointed out that the book wouldn't fit through most mail slots if mail-ordered. Comedians had a field day joking that book 6 would be called ''Harry Potter and the End of Trees''.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 750 pages no matter which edition and the ''longest'' book in the series; nearly a quarter of the word count of ''the entire series'' is contained in this one book, since it usually has smaller print than the others [[UpToEleven but ends up with the highest page count anyway]]. Fittingly, it has the longest gap between releases, coming three years after ''Goblet''. Magazines and newspapers pointed out that the book wouldn't fit through most mail slots if mail-ordered. Comedians had a field day joking that book 6 would be called ''Harry Potter and the End of Trees''.
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* TwoTimerDate: Harry averts this on Valentine's Day in Hogsmeade, which is when Hermione has set up Rita Skeeter's interview with him. Cho, however, thinks it is this, which is how their burgeoning romance gets nipped in the bud.

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* TwoTimerDate: Harry averts this on Valentine's Day in Hogsmeade, which is when Hermione has set up Rita Skeeter's interview with him. Cho, however, thinks it is this, which is how their burgeoning romance gets nipped in the bud. While Hermione pressed the interview's importance on Harry, she also lets him know after-the-fact he erred in not playing up to Cho what an inconvenience Hermione and the interview was and would rather spend time with Cho.

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* AllForNothing: By the end of the story, more than a few people were left reflecting on how fruitless their actions had been and just how badly they had screwed up.
** Cornelius Fudge and the Ministry of Magic spent nearly twelve months slandering Harry and Dumbledore because they thought that they were either insane or trying to make a grab for power. Fudge even manipulated and changed the law to his benefit, in an effort to oust both heroes, simply because he could not accept that Voldemort was back. In the end, all he did was delay the inevitable war and give Voldemort a chance to rebuild his army whilst denying the rest of Britain a chance to prepare for the coming conflict. As we learn in the sequel, his days were numbered.
** On the same note, Dolores Umbridge's efforts to silence Harry's "lies", her general intervention at Hogwarts and her effort to prevent her students from learning any real magic, were all for nought. When Dumbledore returns as the Headmaster, the first thing he does is cancel all of her decrees and dismiss what was essentially Umbridge's private police force.
** Although it is not shown, Percy undoubtedly got a very nasty shock when he realised that the family he had deserted for siding with Dumbledore against the Ministry had been right all along.
** The worst offender by far though is Marietta Edgecombe [[spoiler: i.e. Cho Chang's treacherous friend, who willingly sold out the rest of Dumbledore's Army to Umbridge, knowing that the group would be expelled]]. Not only will she have to spend the rest of her life branded as a snitch (both literally and metaphorically) but by the time she got back onto the Hogwarts Express, Marietta had learnt that the boy she thought was telling lies was in fact telling the truth all along. Thus, she is left shamed forever, receives little to no sympathy (in or out of universe) and is left to reflect on the fact that her actions really were all for nothing.

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* AllForNothing: By the end of the story, more than a few people were characters are left reflecting on upon just how fruitless pointless their actions were.
** Voldemort failed to hear the prophecy in its entirety thus denying him important information that could have helped him defeat Harry. Worse still, some of his most loyal Death Eaters were captured and his return was publicly confirmed. On the downside, he
had been and just how badly they had screwed up.
already built up a sizeable enough force to start his war anew.
** Cornelius Fudge and to a lesser extent, the Ministry of Magic Magic. Fudge spent nearly twelve months trying to convince himself not only that Voldemort had not returned, but slandering Harry and Dumbledore Dumbledore's names. He did this because they he thought that they were either Harry was an insane or glory hound and troublemaker and that Dumbledore was finally trying to make a grab for power. usurp him. Fudge even manipulated and deliberately changed the law to his benefit, in an effort to oust both heroes, simply because he could not accept that Voldemort was back. In By the end, end of the book; it is clear that all he did was delay the inevitable war and give Voldemort a chance to rebuild his army whilst denying the rest of Britain a chance to prepare for the coming conflict. As we learn in the sequel, Needless to say, his days were as Minister are now numbered.
** On the same note, Dolores Umbridge's efforts to silence Harry's "lies", her general intervention at Hogwarts and her effort to prevent her students from learning any real magic, were all for nought. When Within five minutes of Fudge confirming that Voldemort had indeed returned, Dumbledore returns was reinstated as the Headmaster, Headmaster. He immediately ordered her dismissal from the first thing he does is cancel school, retracted all of her decrees and dismiss what was essentially disbanded the Inquisitorial Squad, i.e. Umbridge's private police force.
** Although it is not shown, Percy undoubtedly all of Harry's detractors no doubt got a very nasty shock when he they realised that he and Dumbledore had been right all along. This is especially true for Percy Weasley, who now had to face the reality that the family he had deserted for siding with Dumbledore against the Ministry had been were right all along.
and he wasn't.
** The worst offender by far though is Marietta Edgecombe [[spoiler: i.e. Cho Chang's treacherous friend, who willingly sold out the rest of Dumbledore's Army to Umbridge, knowing that the group would be expelled]]. Not only will she have to spend the rest of her life branded as a snitch (both literally and metaphorically) but by By the time she got gets back onto the Hogwarts Express, Marietta had Express at the end of the story, she, like everybody else, has finally learnt that the boy she thought was telling lies was in fact telling the truth all along. the entire time. As such, Marietta will now spend the rest of her life branded (both figuratively and literally) as the snitch who sold out both Harry Potter and Dumbledore and nearly doomed the magical world because of it. Thus, she is left shamed forever, loses all of her friends (bar Cho), receives little to no sympathy (in or (both in and out of universe) and is left to reflect on the fact that her actions really were all for nothing.
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* CapsLock: Some reviewers complained about Harry yelling IN ALL CAPS in the book. While they may have a point, you have to wonder if they've ever actually had to talk with an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old with PTSD before. Let alone an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old who knows his life is in danger, and knows that everyone he trusts to protect him is lying to him, keeping secrets, or both. Not to mention having a mind-link to an AxCrazy sociopath who's deliberately trying to screw with him. Really, it's a minor miracle Harry ''isn't'' screaming at everyone at the top of his lungs all the time.

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* CapsLock: Some reviewers complained about Harry yelling IN yells in ALL CAPS in the book. While they may have quite a point, you have lot here compared to wonder if they've ever actually had to talk with an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old with PTSD before. Let alone an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old who knows his life is in danger, and knows that everyone he trusts to protect him is lying to him, keeping secrets, or both. Not to mention having other books. Having a mind-link PsychicLink to an AxCrazy sociopath who's deliberately trying to screw with him. Really, it's a minor miracle Harry ''isn't'' screaming at everyone at the top of his lungs all the time.him does wonders to your composure.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: More major (or at least plot-important) characters come up in this book than any since the first. Luna Lovegood, Nymphadora Tonks, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Mundungus Fletcher, Dolores Umbridge, Kreacher, Arabella Figg, Amelia Bones, Zacharias Smith, Phineas Nigellus Black, Bellatrix Lestrange...
** Several of these characters -- notably the Lestranges and Mundungus Fletcher -- had been mentioned in passing previously. Arabella Figg in particular [[spoiler:is revealed to be the very same "Mrs. Figg" mentioned all the way back in the first book.]]
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** Moody has trouble with his magical eye because it keeps sticking (this is apparently been a problem after being revived from being impersonated for a year in the last book). So he pops it out of his head and later moistens it in water so it can move better, as he wants 360 degree visibility.

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** Moody has trouble with his magical eye because it keeps sticking (this is apparently been a problem after being revived from being impersonated for a year in the last book). So he [[EyePop pops it out of his head head]] and later moistens it in water so it can move better, as he wants 360 degree visibility.visibility. Later during the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, [[spoiler:he loses it again after getting beaten by Dolohov.]]



* TreacheryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:The curse Hermione gave to anyone ratting on Dumbledore's Army was a permanent marking on the front.]]

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* TreacheryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:The curse Hermione gave to anyone ratting on Dumbledore's Army was a permanent marking on the front.face.]]

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** A Death Eater is stabbed in the eye with a wand during the final battle.

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** A Moody has trouble with his magical eye because it keeps sticking (this is apparently been a problem after being revived from being impersonated for a year in the last book). So he pops it out of his head and later moistens it in water so it can move better, as he wants 360 degree visibility.
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Death Eater Eaters, [=MacNair=], is stabbed in the eye with a wand during the final battle.
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* ActofTrueLove: Voldemort takes a moment to pull Bellatrix to safety with him before fleeing the Ministry of Magic and by doing so risks his own safety and harms his movement and even loses the opportunity to have his archenemy Dumbledore captured.

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* ActofTrueLove: ActOfTrueLove: Voldemort takes a moment to pull Bellatrix to safety with him before fleeing the Ministry of Magic and by doing so risks his own safety and harms his movement and even loses the opportunity to have his archenemy Dumbledore captured.

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* ActofTrueLove: Voldemort takes a moment to pull Bellatrix to safety with him before fleeing the Ministry of Magic and by doing so risks his own safety and harms his movement and even loses the opportunity to have his archenemy Dumbledore captured.



* DeerInTheHeadlights: Harry Potter tries to make a stand in the climax, only for the situation to get drastically worse, causing him to freeze in fear as his life comes under threat. [[spoiler:Harry taunts Bellatrix over how Voldemort can't hear her frantic apologies for losing the prophecy. Then Voldemort appears right in front of him and announces that ''this'' time, he'll just kill Harry with no more theatrics. OhCrap indeed for Harry and Bellatrix alike.]]

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* DeerInTheHeadlights: Harry Potter tries to make a stand in the climax, only for the situation to get drastically worse, causing him to freeze in fear as his life comes under threat. [[spoiler:Harry taunts Bellatrix over how Voldemort can't hear her frantic apologies for losing the prophecy. Then Voldemort appears right in front of him and announces that ''this'' time, he'll just kill Harry with no more theatrics. OhCrap indeed for Harry and Bellatrix alike.Harry.]]



* VillainousRescue: Voldemort takes a moment to pull Bellatrix to safety with him before fleeing the Ministry of Magic.

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* SickeninglySweet: An InvokedTrope with Umbridge's pink, kitten-decorated office. Also, when Harry and Cho go to Madam Puddifoot's Tea Shop, on Valentine's Day, Cho says thinks the shop is cute, but Harry lies in agreement, as he is unpleasantly reminded of Umbridge's office.



* TastesLikeDiabetes: An InvokedTrope with Umbridge's pink, kitten-decorated office. Also, when Harry and Cho go to Madam Puddifoot's Tea Shop, on Valentine's Day, Cho says thinks the shop is cute, but Harry lies in agreement, as he is unpleasantly reminded of Umbridge's office.
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** Although it is not shown, Percy, undoubtedly got a very nasty shock when he realised that the family he had deserted for siding with Dumbledore against the Ministry had been right all along.

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** Although it is not shown, Percy, Percy undoubtedly got a very nasty shock when he realised that the family he had deserted for siding with Dumbledore against the Ministry had been right all along.
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* AllForNothing: By the end of the story, more than a few people were left reflecting on how fruitless their actions had been and just how badly they had screwed up.
** Cornelius Fudge and the Ministry of Magic spent nearly twelve months slandering Harry and Dumbledore because they thought that they were either insane or trying to make a grab for power. Fudge even manipulated and changed the law to his benefit, in an effort to oust both heroes, simply because he could not accept that Voldemort was back. In the end, all he did was delay the inevitable war and give Voldemort a chance to rebuild his army whilst denying the rest of Britain a chance to prepare for the coming conflict. As we learn in the sequel, his days were numbered.
** On the same note, Dolores Umbridge's efforts to silence Harry's "lies", her general intervention at Hogwarts and her effort to prevent her students from learning any real magic, were all for nought. When Dumbledore returns as the Headmaster, the first thing he does is cancel all of her decrees and dismiss what was essentially Umbridge's private police force.
** Although it is not shown, Percy, undoubtedly got a very nasty shock when he realised that the family he had deserted for siding with Dumbledore against the Ministry had been right all along.
** The worst offender by far though is Marietta Edgecombe [[spoiler: i.e. Cho Chang's treacherous friend, who willingly sold out the rest of Dumbledore's Army to Umbridge, knowing that the group would be expelled]]. Not only will she have to spend the rest of her life branded as a snitch (both literally and metaphorically) but by the time she got back onto the Hogwarts Express, Marietta had learnt that the boy she thought was telling lies was in fact telling the truth all along. Thus, she is left shamed forever, receives little to no sympathy (in or out of universe) and is left to reflect on the fact that her actions really were all for nothing.

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* AdultFear: Molly Weasley's Boggart, which shapeshifts into one dead family member after another, starting with Ron and ending with [[LikeASonToMe Harry himself.]] Just to rub salt in the wound, Sirius arrives in time to see that last one, and is clearly shaken.


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* IKnowWhatYouFear: Molly Weasley's Boggart, which shapeshifts into one dead family member after another, starting with Ron and ending with [[LikeASonToMe Harry himself.]] Just to rub salt in the wound, Sirius arrives in time to see that last one, and is clearly shaken.

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** Harry doesn't initially think Ginny falls in the CompetenceZone. She points out that she's three years older than he was during his first confrontation with Voldemort.

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** Harry doesn't initially think Ginny falls in the CompetenceZone. She points out that she's three years older than he was during [[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone his first confrontation with Voldemort.Voldemort]].



* AnchoredShip: Harry and Cho. Her emotional issues over Cedric's death make it too difficult for her to be in a relationship. Harry is suffering SurvivorsGuilt over the fact that Cedric died because of him, and Dudley mentions he's heard Harry screaming for him in his sleep. Not to mention that Harry, at that point in time, didn't have the emotional maturity to try and work Cho through her problems — instead, he gets angry at her for always wanting to talk about Cedric, which made things a lot more difficult for them. Had they both waited until they were both more stable emotionally, they could have gotten together and had a happy relationship.
* AngerIsNotEnough: Harry attempts to use the [[AgonyBeam Cruciatus Curse]] on Bellatrix Lestrange while burning with righteous anger at her for murdering [[spoiler:his godfather]] — and this allows him to use the Curse at all, but Bellatrix notes it doesn't hurt her much, because a Cruiciatus Curse fuelled by anger pales in comparison to one fuelled by ''sadism'' — which she is used to slinging around.

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* AnchoredShip: Harry and Cho. Her emotional issues over Cedric's death make it too difficult for her to be in a relationship. Harry is suffering SurvivorsGuilt over the fact that Cedric died because of him, and Dudley mentions he's heard Harry screaming for him in his sleep. Not to mention that Harry, at that point in time, didn't have the emotional maturity to try and work Cho through her problems -- instead, he gets angry at her for always wanting to talk about Cedric, which made things a lot more difficult for them. Had they both waited until they were both more stable emotionally, they could have gotten together and had a happy relationship.
* AngerIsNotEnough: Harry attempts to use the [[AgonyBeam Cruciatus Curse]] on Bellatrix Lestrange while burning with righteous anger at her for murdering [[spoiler:his godfather]] -- and this allows him to use the Curse at all, but Bellatrix notes it doesn't hurt her much, because a Cruiciatus Curse fuelled by anger pales in comparison to one fuelled by ''sadism'' — ''sadism'', which she is used to slinging around.



* ArrestedForHeroism: Harry is hit with this after the Dementor attack. The Ministry even declares him expelled from Hogwarts until Dumbledore reminds them that ''THEY'' had overstepped their authority and it's kind of ''his'' job to decide who's expelled from his own school.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When talking to Sirius and Lupin after seeing Snape's memory, Harry seems to be almost equally upset about the fact that his father kept messing up his hair to look cool as about him having been a bully at school.

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* ArrestedForHeroism: Harry is hit with this after the Dementor attack. The Ministry even declares him expelled from Hogwarts -- until Dumbledore reminds them that ''THEY'' had overstepped their authority and it's kind of ''his'' job to decide who's expelled from his own school.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When talking to Sirius and Lupin after seeing Snape's memory, Harry seems to be almost equally as upset about the fact that his father kept messing up his hair to look cool as about him having been a bully at school.



* BadDate: Harry's first and only date with Cho is, by his own admission "a complete fiasco".
* BarredFromTheAfterlife: As Sir Nicholas explains, ghosts are created when a wizard or witch chooses not to pass on to the afterlife. Unfortunately, it seems one can't retract one's decision — Nick has had centuries to wonder if he chose well.

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* BadDate: Harry's first and only date with Cho is, by his own admission admission, "a complete fiasco".
* BarredFromTheAfterlife: As Sir Nicholas explains, ghosts are created when a wizard or witch chooses not to pass on to the afterlife. Unfortunately, it seems one can't retract one's decision -- Nick has had centuries to wonder if he chose well. well.



* BigBrotherInstinct: Hagrid is really protective of his little brother and he takes it bad when the centaurs say Grawp is not welcomed in the forest.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Hagrid is really very protective of his little brother and he takes it bad when the centaurs say Grawp is not welcomed in the forest.



** Twice in a row: Harry and his friends are saved from the Death Eaters by members [[TheCavalry of the Order]] (Sirius, Lupin, Tonks, Kingsley, and Mad-Eye Moody), then when the Death Eaters appear to gain the upper hand over the Order, Dumbledore himself arrives and saves the day, rounding up most of the Death Eaters within a matter of seconds.

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** Twice in a row: Harry and his friends are saved from the Death Eaters by members Members [[TheCavalry of the Order]] (Sirius, Lupin, Tonks, Kingsley, and Mad-Eye Moody), then Moody) save Harry and his friends from the Death Eaters. Then, when the Death Eaters appear to gain the upper hand over the Order, Dumbledore himself arrives and saves the day, rounding up most of the Death Eaters within a matter of seconds.



* BigScrewedUpFamily: The House of Black were an ''extremely'' elitist family of wizard supremacists. Whenever a family member married anyone not pure-blood, actually tried to treat Muggles and Muggle-borns like human beings, or were a Squib (which couldn't be helped), [[IHaveNoSon they were disowned]]. Because of the dwindling number of pure-blood families, several times the Blacks resorted to incest, which only resulted in mental instability.

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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The House of Black were was an ''extremely'' elitist family of wizard supremacists. Whenever a family member married anyone not pure-blood, actually tried to treat Muggles and Muggle-borns like human beings, or were was a Squib (which couldn't be helped), [[IHaveNoSon they were disowned]]. Because of the dwindling number of pure-blood families, several times the Blacks resorted to incest, which only resulted in mental instability.



* BigWhat:
** Harry when Ron fills him in on why Percy has fallen out with the family, learning that he's sick of their reputation.
** Ron when Ginny reveals she's stopped seeing Michael Corner and turned her affection towards Dean Thomas. He also moves so suddenly he upsets his and Harry's game of chess, Crookshanks, and Pigwidgeon.



** Mundungus Fletcher is lured away from his post with cauldrons from a questionable source, presumed stolen. Almost one year earlier Percy Weasley had been working on a report about cauldrons with slightly thin bottoms, which most buyers probably would not have objected to, but Percy did. It is left to the reader to connect the dots from Percy's efforts to take some cauldrons off the market, to the cauldrons that serve Umbridge's purpose a year later.

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** Mundungus Fletcher is lured away from his post with cauldrons from a questionable source, presumed stolen. Almost one year earlier earlier, Percy Weasley had been working on a report about cauldrons with slightly thin bottoms, which most buyers probably would not have objected to, but Percy did. It is left to the reader to connect the dots from Percy's efforts to take some cauldrons off the market, to the cauldrons that serve Umbridge's purpose a year later.



* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Harry forgets that several books ago, Ginny was possessed by Lord Voldemort for the better part of a year. For Harry, it was just one detail of one of his many adventures so Ginny's involvement wasn't a major event to him, but for Ginny it's probably the most significant event of her life thus far. He says he forgot about it, and her reply is a cool "lucky you". Harry feels sincerely sorry and apologizes.

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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Harry forgets that several books ago, three years before, Ginny was possessed by Lord Voldemort for the better part of a year. For Harry, it was just one detail of one of his many adventures adventures, so Ginny's involvement wasn't a major event to him, but for Ginny Ginny, it's probably the most significant event of her life thus far. He says he forgot about it, and her reply is a cool "lucky you". Harry feels sincerely sorry and apologizes.



* CallBack: Molly says Witches and wizards can't join the order of the Phoenix until they're of age. Fred and George, who turned 17 the previous April, protest in outrage, and Molly amends her statement to refer to witches and wizards who have left school. The twins end up leaving Hogwarts a few weeks early to start their own joke shop.
* CallingTheOldManOut: A non-heroic version occurs when Percy Weasley gets into a shouting match with his father during the hiatus between Books 4 and 5. During the fight, Percy blames his father for their family's poverty and a lousy reputation he's had to fight against since joining the Ministry. He vows to end his association with their family in order to protect himself from what he views as their foolish support of Dumbledore.
* CapsLock: Some reviewers complained about Harry yelling IN ALL CAPS in the book. While they may have a point, you have to wonder if they've ever actually had to talk with an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old with PTSD before. Let alone an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old who knows his life is in danger, and knows that everyone he trusts to protect him is lying to him, keeping secrets, or both. Not to mention having a mind-link to an AxCrazy sociopath who's deliberately trying to screw with him. Really, it's a minor miracle Harry ''isn't'' screaming at everyone at the top his lungs all the time.

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* CallBack: Molly says Witches witches and wizards can't join the order of the Phoenix until they're of age. Fred and George, who turned 17 seventeen the previous April, protest in outrage, and Molly amends her statement to refer to witches and wizards who have left school. The twins end up leaving Hogwarts a few weeks early to start their own joke shop.
* CallingTheOldManOut: A non-heroic version occurs when Percy Weasley gets into a shouting match with his father during the hiatus between Books 4 and 5. During the fight, Percy blames his father Arthur for their the family's poverty and a lousy reputation he's had to fight against since joining the Ministry. He vows to end his association with their family in order to protect himself from what he views as their foolish support of Dumbledore.
* CapsLock: Some reviewers complained about Harry yelling IN ALL CAPS in the book. While they may have a point, you have to wonder if they've ever actually had to talk with an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old with PTSD before. Let alone an angsty, grumpy fifteen-year-old who knows his life is in danger, and knows that everyone he trusts to protect him is lying to him, keeping secrets, or both. Not to mention having a mind-link to an AxCrazy sociopath who's deliberately trying to screw with him. Really, it's a minor miracle Harry ''isn't'' screaming at everyone at the top of his lungs all the time.



** But then the boomerang comes back around again at the end of DH when [[spoiler:Expelliarmus is the spell that Harry uses that leads to Voldemort's death in their final confrontation. It doesn't kill him, but it stops Voldemort's Killing Curse in its tracks during their brief BeamOWar that leads to the Elder Wand flying out of Voldemort's hand and the Killing Curse rebounding.]]

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** But then the boomerang comes back around again at the end of DH when [[spoiler:Expelliarmus [[spoiler:''Expelliarmus'' is the spell that Harry uses that leads to Voldemort's death in their final confrontation. It doesn't kill him, but it stops Voldemort's Killing Curse in its tracks during their brief BeamOWar that leads to the Elder Wand flying out of Voldemort's hand and the Killing Curse rebounding.]]



* CorporalPunishment: Umbridge does not hesitate to use it on "problematic" students... to the tune of WritingLines with a quill that ''carves the words into their hand and uses their own blood as ink''. According to Rowling, Umbridge ''invented'' that quill.
** Worse, once she [[TyrantTakesTheHelm takes over as Headmistress]], she writes up a Educational Decree that allows [[ChildHater Filch]] to torture students (though only stringing them up by their ankles and ATasteOfTheLash are specifically mentioned). And he's absolutely ''delighted'' about it. Though we never see him actually punishing any students thusly, as Fred and George drop out of school before he can punish them for deploying their swamp and the subsequent open rebellion among most of the students leaves him overwhelmed with no idea which way to turn.

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* CorporalPunishment: Umbridge does not hesitate to use it on "problematic" students... to the tune of WritingLines with a quill that ''carves the words into their hand and uses their own blood as ink''. According to Rowling, Umbridge ''invented'' that quill.
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quill. Worse, once she [[TyrantTakesTheHelm takes over as Headmistress]], she writes up a an Educational Decree that allows [[ChildHater Filch]] to torture students (though only stringing them up by their ankles and ATasteOfTheLash are specifically mentioned). And he's absolutely ''delighted'' about it. Though we never see him actually punishing any students thusly, in that way, as Fred and George drop out of school before he can punish them for deploying their swamp and the subsequent open rebellion among most of the students leaves him overwhelmed with no idea which way to turn.



** (To an angry Harry) "You know, this is precisely why I loathed being a teacher! Young people are so infernally convinced they are absolutely right about everything."
** "I have better things to do than listen to adolescent agonising."

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** (To an angry Harry) "You know, this is precisely why I loathed being a teacher! Young people are so infernally convinced they are absolutely right about everything."
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everything" and "I have better things to do than listen to adolescent agonising."



-->'''Creator/StephenFry:''' So if any of you hear someone pronounce her name [[NoPronunciationGuide "Rohw-ling"]], you have my permission to hit them over the head with — not with ''Order of the Phoenix'', [[InsultToRocks that would be cruel. Something smaller; like a fridge.]]

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-->'''Creator/StephenFry:''' So if any of you hear someone pronounce her name [[NoPronunciationGuide "Rohw-ling"]], you have my permission to hit them over the head with -- not with ''Order of the Phoenix'', [[InsultToRocks that would be cruel. Something smaller; like a fridge.]]



** After Umbridge fires Trelawney, Dumbledore pisses her off supremely by hiring Firenze the centaur. He reminds her that Educational Decree Number 22 gives the Ministry the right to appoint a teacher '''only if''' the headmaster cannot find one.

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** After Umbridge fires Trelawney, Dumbledore pisses her off supremely by hiring Firenze the centaur. He reminds her that Educational Decree Number 22 Twenty-Two gives the Ministry the right to appoint a teacher '''only if''' the headmaster Headmaster cannot find one.



* HoistByHisOwnPetard

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* HoistByHisOwnPetardHoistByHisOwnPetard:



* TheHorseshoeEffect: Umbridge pursues an insanely harsh and fundamentalist interpretation of law and order. Despite her self-proclaimed virtue, she is ''incredibly'' guilty of numerous sins while trying to "the Ministry’s work", including pride. By the end of the novel [[spoiler: she goes so far as to use the Cruciatus Curse on Harry, becoming the “naughty person” she claimed to oppose]].

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* TheHorseshoeEffect: Umbridge pursues [[HangingJudge an insanely harsh and fundamentalist interpretation of law and order. order]]. [[KnightTemplar Despite her self-proclaimed virtue, she is ''incredibly'' is]] ''[[KnightTemplar incredibly]]'' [[KnightTemplar guilty of numerous sins while trying to carry out "the Ministry’s work", including pride. pride.]] By the end of the novel [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she goes so far as to try to use the Cruciatus Curse on Harry, becoming the very “naughty person” she claimed to oppose]]. oppose, only not following through because Hermione interrupts her]].



* IronicEcho: At his trial, Harry is asked by one of the Wizengamot (Madame Bones) if his use of underage magic involved a "corporeal" patronus, which he was at first confused by. And during Dumbledore's Army meeting at the Hog's Head, her niece Susan Bones is one of the people who showed up, and she asks him if he can do a "corporeal" patronus as well, with their exchange almost exactly identical. However, Madam Bones' questioning comes during a trial prosecuting Harry, while Susan's questioning comes in support of Harry. [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay Harry instantly makes the connection between those two, and deduces that the two are related, which she confirms]].
* {{Jerkass}}: Harry himself acts as one towards his friends throughout the book. However, this is mitigated by the fact that it was to cover up the inferiority complex he felt after being subjected to the blood quill torture by Umbridge. It doesn't help that he's SurroundedByIdiots who are in complete denial of Voldemort's return. [[spoiler:He also seems to have Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, and it's also rather heavily implied that sharing thoughts with Voldemort isn't doing his mental state any favours.]]

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* IronicEcho: At his trial, Harry is asked by one of the Wizengamot (Madame Bones) if his use of underage magic involved a "corporeal" patronus, Patronus, which he was at first confused by. And during Dumbledore's Army Army's first meeting at the Hog's Head, her niece Susan Bones is one of the people who showed up, and she asks him if he can do a "corporeal" patronus Patronus as well, with their exchange almost exactly identical. However, Madam Bones' questioning comes during a trial prosecuting Harry, while Susan's questioning comes in support of Harry. [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay Harry instantly makes the connection between those two, and deduces that the two are related, which she confirms]].
confirms.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: JerkAss: Harry himself acts as one towards his friends throughout the book. However, this is mitigated by the fact that it was to cover up the inferiority complex he felt after being subjected to the blood quill torture by Umbridge. It doesn't help that he's SurroundedByIdiots who are in complete denial of Voldemort's return. [[spoiler:He also seems to have Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, and it's also rather heavily implied that sharing thoughts with Voldemort isn't doing his mental state any favours.]]



** Harry during his fight with Cho, while [[KickTheDog he tells her not to run off crying]], points out several facts: [[spoiler:Marietta sold out everyone, including ''Cho'', to Umbridge, who would have expelled them all. Also, her wanting to save her mother's job is a terrible excuse; Arthur Weasley works in the Ministry and Fred, George, Ginny and Ron didn't feel the need to betray anyone. He doesn't even have to bring up Susan Bones and her aunt Amelia.]]

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** Harry during his fight with Cho, while [[KickTheDog he tells her not to run off crying]], points out several facts: [[spoiler:Marietta sold out everyone, including ''Cho'', to Umbridge, who would have expelled them all. Also, her wanting to save her mother's job is a terrible excuse; Arthur Weasley works in for the Ministry as well and Fred, George, Ginny and Ron didn't feel the need to betray anyone. He doesn't even have to bring up Susan Bones and her aunt Amelia.]]



* KilledOffForReal: A main character dies in the climax, and doesn't come back in the form of a ghost, portrait, Priori Incantum shade or Pensieve memory. This devastates Harry, and it's only furthered when Nearly Headless Nick explains that even if the character did return by any of these methods, it would only be a pale imitation of the original.
* KissingDiscretionShot: In the book, Cho leans in to kiss Harry, and the paragraph ends, then cutting to a few minutes later when he returns to the Gryffindor common room.

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* KilledOffForReal: A main major supporting character dies in the climax, and doesn't come back in the form of a ghost, portrait, Priori Incantum shade or Pensieve memory. This devastates Harry, and it's only furthered when Nearly Headless Nick explains that even if the character did return by any of these methods, it would only be as a pale imitation of the original.
their original self.
* KissingDiscretionShot: In the book, Cho leans in to kiss Harry, and the paragraph scene ends, then cutting to a few minutes later when he returns to the Gryffindor common room.room and discusses it with Ron and Hermione.



** The book opens with Harry dealing with his frustrations over going so long without knowing what Voldemort is up to following his resurrection during the events of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire Goblet of Fire]]'', similar to how readers had to wait three years following ''Goblet of Fire'''s release to find out what would happen in this book.

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** The book opens with Harry dealing with his frustrations over going so long without knowing what Voldemort is up to following his resurrection during the events of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire Goblet of Fire]]'', similar to how readers had to wait three years following ''Goblet of Fire'''s Fire''[='=]s release to find out what would happen in this book.



* LetsSplitUpGang: During the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, Lucius Malfoy tells the remaining Death Eaters to split into pairs and search the various chambers for Harry and his friends. Suffice to say, it goes badly to the Death Eaters.

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* LetsSplitUpGang: During the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, Lucius Malfoy tells the remaining Death Eaters to split into pairs and search the various chambers for Harry and his friends. Suffice to say, it goes badly to for the Death Eaters.



* LoveDoodles: Teenage James Potter writes Lily Evans' initials inside a drawing of a snitch. He's in love with her.

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* LoveDoodles: Teenage James Potter writes Lily Evans' initials inside a drawing of a snitch.Golden Snitch. He's in love with her.



* MadnessSharedByTwo: Harry is now able to see the horses which pull the normally-horseless carriages for returning students to the school. Neither Ron nor Hermione or any of Harry's circle of friends can see them, and Harry wonders if he's having hallucinations, only for [[TheDitz Luna Lovegood]] to say she can see them too and reassure him that [[AssuranceBackfire he's just as sane as she is.]] Subverted when it turns out the horses (called thestrals) can only be seen by those who have watched someone die in front of them, and both Harry and Luna are perfectly sane.

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* MadnessSharedByTwo: Harry is now able to see the horses which pull the normally-horseless carriages for returning students to the school. Neither Ron nor Hermione or any of Harry's circle of friends can see them, and Harry wonders if he's having hallucinations, only for [[TheDitz Luna Lovegood]] to say she can see them too and reassure him that [[AssuranceBackfire he's just as sane as she is.]] Subverted when it turns out the horses (called thestrals) Thestrals) can only be seen by those who have watched someone die in front of them, and both Harry and Luna are perfectly sane.



* NeverSpeakIllOfTheDead: Becomes an issue with Harry's father. Up until now, Harry has only been exposed to a spotless, eulogized version of James. When he witnesses some of his father's very human flaws such as his arrogance and tendency towards bullying, Harry is sent into an emotional tailspin.

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* NeverSpeakIllOfTheDead: Becomes an issue with Harry's father. Up until now, Harry has only been exposed to a spotless, eulogized version of James. When he witnesses some of his father's very human flaws such as his arrogance and tendency towards bullying, Harry is sent goes into an emotional tailspin.



* TheNotSoHarmlessPunishment: Harry is punished for speaking out against Umbridge in class by being made to write lines... [[DisproportionateRetribution with a magic quill that cuts his skin and takes his own blood as ink.]]
* ObsessiveCompulsiveBarkeeping: As the Power Trio and the rest of the students that will eventually take Defence Against the Dark Arts lessons with Harry meet at the Hog's Head, the bartender is described as clearly listening in, and continually scrubbing a glass with a dirty rag, which is actually making the glass dirtier. Harry notes he looks familiar but doesn’t know he’s Dumbledore’s brother who tells him what they’re up to and that they need help.

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* TheNotSoHarmlessPunishment: Harry is punished for speaking out against Umbridge in class by being made to write lines...lines ... [[DisproportionateRetribution with a magic quill that cuts his skin and takes his own blood as ink.]]
* ObsessiveCompulsiveBarkeeping: As the Power Trio and the rest of the students that will eventually take Defence Against the Dark Arts lessons with Harry meet at the Hog's Head, the bartender is described as clearly listening in, and continually scrubbing a glass with a dirty rag, which is actually making the glass dirtier. Harry notes he looks familiar but doesn’t know he’s Dumbledore’s brother who tells him what they’re up to and that they need help.



** Ron's finest hour as Gryffindor Keeper, when he helps them win the Cup, is never seen as during the match Harry and Hermione are away in the Forbidden Forest with Hagrid meeting his giant half-brother Grawp. Needless to say, a lot of fans wish it had been featured onscreen, to both give Ron focus and allowed the Quidditch scenes to be more diverse.

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** Ron's finest hour as Gryffindor Keeper, when he helps them win the Cup, is never seen as during the match Harry and Hermione are away in the Forbidden Forest with Hagrid meeting his giant half-brother Grawp. Needless to say, Naturally, a lot of fans wish it had been featured onscreen, to both to give Ron focus and allowed to let the Quidditch scenes to be more diverse.



** Bellatrix spends most of her screentime laughing at Harry and Neville and mocking them about their traumas. [[spoiler:Then Harry tries the Cruciatus Curse on her; while it only causes her momentary pain, she drops the act and tells him how to do it properly, that he has to ''want'' to be sadistic. Then she freaks out when he reveals the prophecy got smashed.]]

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** Bellatrix spends most of her screentime page time laughing at Harry and Neville and mocking them about their traumas. [[spoiler:Then Harry tries the Cruciatus Curse on her; while it only causes her momentary pain, she drops the act and tells him [[DoWrongRight how to do it properly, properly]], that he has to ''want'' to be sadistic. Then she freaks out when he reveals the prophecy got smashed.]]



* PerceptionFilter: There's implied to be something like this on the entrance to Saint Mungo's as Harry notices that none of the muggles on the busy shopping street seem to see them stepping through the front window of a shop.

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* PerceptionFilter: There's implied to be something like this on the entrance to Saint Mungo's as Harry notices that none of the muggles Muggles on the busy shopping street seem seems to see them stepping through the front window of a shop.



* ReadingTeaLeaves: It's part of the Divination O.W.Ls. Harry messes it up completely and tells his examiner that she'll be meeting "a round, dark, soggy stranger".

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* ReadingTeaLeaves: It's part of the Divination O.W.Ls.L.s. Harry messes it up completely and tells his examiner that she'll be meeting "a round, dark, soggy stranger".



* SaveTheVillain: No one would have blamed Dumbledore if he left Umbridge to the centaurs' mercy. Regardless, he goes to rescue her after securing her dismissal as DADA teacher from Fudge, and bargains with the centaurs. They like him more than they like any other wizard, so Dumbledore returns quickly with Umbridge and gets her medical treatment before she leaves.

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* SaveTheVillain: No one would have blamed Dumbledore if had he left Umbridge to the centaurs' mercy. Regardless, he goes to rescue her after securing her dismissal as DADA teacher from Fudge, and bargains with the centaurs. They like him more than they like any other wizard, so Dumbledore returns quickly with Umbridge and gets her medical treatment before she leaves.



* ShaggyDogStory: Hagrid's trip to recruit the giants was one of these. He and Madame Maxime spent the entire previous summer trekking to the place where the giants live and spent many days presenting the leader of the giants gifts in hopes of winning him and the giants he led to the Order's side. Their efforts were wasted when another giant backed by the Death Eaters killed that leader and took over, forcing Hagrid and Maxime to make a hasty retreat. The only real long term effect their trip had on the story was [[spoiler:Hagrid finding and bringing his half-brother Grawp home with him.]]

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* ShaggyDogStory: Hagrid's trip to recruit the giants was one of these. He and Madame Maxime spent the entire previous summer trekking to the place where the giants live and spent many days presenting the leader of the giants gifts in hopes of winning him and the giants he led to the Order's side. Their efforts were wasted when another giant backed by the Death Eaters killed that leader and took over, forcing Hagrid and Maxime to make a hasty retreat. The only real long term long-term effect their trip had on the story was [[spoiler:Hagrid finding and bringing his half-brother Grawp home with him.]]



* SpitTake: Ron spits butterbeer on himself when Hermione mentions that Ginny is going out with Michael Corner.
* StressVomit: Dudley, after the encounter with Dementors, promptly upchucks all over the doormat as soon as Harry gets him back home.

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* SpitTake: Ron spits butterbeer Butterbeer on himself when Hermione mentions that Ginny is going out with Michael Corner.
* StressVomit: Dudley, after the encounter with Dementors, promptly upchucks all over the doormat as soon as Harry gets him back home.



* TranquilFury: Dumbledore, twice in the book. The first time is when he ''calmly'' warns Umbridge that he "cannot allow [her] to manhandle my students," and it's enough to leave her cowed. The second, more subtle time is during his duel with Voldemort in the Ministry. Dumbledore notes that '''merely''' killing Voldemort wouldn't satisfy him, and that "there are other ways to destroy a man."
** Averted with Harry, who (thanks to the sheer amount of trauma he's under) bursts out yelling more than once.

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* TranquilFury: TranquilFury:
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Dumbledore, twice in the book. The first time is when he ''calmly'' warns Umbridge that he "cannot allow [her] to manhandle my students," and it's enough to leave her cowed. The second, more subtle subtler time is during his duel with Voldemort in the Ministry. Dumbledore notes that '''merely''' killing Voldemort wouldn't satisfy him, and that "there are other ways to destroy a man."
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** Averted with Harry, who (thanks to the sheer amount of trauma he's under) bursts out yelling more than once.



* TraumaCongaLine: ''Deathly Hallows'' is the only other book in the series that rivals how much misery is piled onto Harry, and even then it's still a pretty close call. To set the tone, this book starts with Harry struggling to cope with the most traumatic event in his life so far (witnessing Cedric being murdered before his eyes, being tortured by knives and the Cruciartus Curse by the man he fears most while all alone and isolated from anyone's help, let alone how Voldemort toyed with him and nearly killed him once again). Said event has clearly given him PTSD and constant nightmares, and the only company he has are his abusive relatives, as his friends won't even write to him, nor can he get any information on Voldemort's current actions. [[TemptingFate Every time he thinks his situation can't get worse,]] [[FromBadToWorse it]] [[UpToEleven does.]]

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* TraumaCongaLine: ''Deathly Hallows'' is the only other book in the series that rivals how much misery is piled onto Harry, and even then it's still a pretty close call. To set the tone, this book starts with Harry struggling to cope with the most traumatic event in his life so far (witnessing Cedric being murdered before his eyes, being tortured by knives and the Cruciartus Cruciatus Curse by the man he fears most while all alone and isolated from anyone's help, let alone how Voldemort toyed with him and nearly killed him once again). Said event has clearly given him PTSD and constant nightmares, and the only company he has are his abusive relatives, as his friends won't even write to him, nor can he get any information on Voldemort's current actions. [[TemptingFate Every time he thinks his situation can't get worse,]] [[FromBadToWorse it]] [[UpToEleven [[ExaggeratedTrope does.]]



* TraumaSwing: Harry does one of these at the start of the book (it's the only swing in the park that Dudley and his gang haven't broken).

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* TraumaSwing: Harry does one of these at the start of the book (it's book, on the only swing in the park that Dudley and his gang haven't broken).broken.



* TheWarHasJustBegun: There's a reason why the final chapter is titled "The Second War Begins". [[spoiler:And the war's first casualty is Sirius.]]
* WartsAndAll: After spending many books with a very idealized view of his parents, Harry gets to view one of Snape's memories of them and is shocked to find out that his father was a showoff and could be kind of a jerk. The shock is so much so that he gets a lot of angst about whether or not everything he'd thought about his father was a lie. He eventually talks to Sirius and Lupin about it and they explain to him that, yes James was being a jackass in that specific instance, but he was an immature teenager at the time and was still a good man and a good husband overall. Later on, Harry witnesses Ron behaving very much like his father did in the memory and finally gets over the shock and accepts his father simply had his faults and flaws, just like everyone else.

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* TheWarHasJustBegun: There's a reason why the final chapter is titled entitled "The Second War Begins". [[spoiler:And the war's first casualty is Sirius.]]
* WartsAndAll: After spending many books with a very idealized view of his parents, Harry gets to view one of Snape's memories of them and is shocked to find out that his father was a showoff and could be kind of a jerk. The shock is so much so that he gets a lot of angst about whether or not everything he'd thought about his father was a lie. He eventually talks to Sirius and Lupin about it and they explain to him that, yes yes, James was being a jackass in that specific instance, but he was an immature teenager at the time and was still a good man and a good husband overall. Later on, Later, Harry witnesses Ron behaving very much like his father James did in the memory and finally gets over the shock and accepts his father simply had his faults and flaws, just like everyone else. else.



* WellThisIsNotThatTrope: Dumbledore's speech before the welcoming feast:
-->To our newcomers, welcome! To our old hands — welcome back! There is a time for speech making, but this is not it. Tuck in!

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* WellThisIsNotThatTrope: Dumbledore's brief speech before the welcoming feast:
-->To -->"To our newcomers, welcome! To our old hands -- welcome back! There is a time for speech making, but this is not it. Tuck in!in!"



** Dumbledore makes a barbed comment about how the wizarding equivalent of the Supreme Court was called in to judge what is normally a mild misdemeanor, causing many of the court's members to shift uncomfortably in their seats.

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** Dumbledore makes a barbed comment about how the highest court in the wizarding equivalent of the Supreme Court world was called in to judge what is normally a mild misdemeanor, causing many of the court's members to shift uncomfortably in their seats.



* WritersCannotDoMath: Snape's worst memory is from the year he and the Marauders sat their [=OWLs=], which was in late spring 1976. Most of the students would have been fifteen years old when they began that year, but James Potter is said to have been fifteen years old at the time of the memory, both in narration and in dialogue -- though his joint gravestone with Lily in ''The Deathly Hallows'' reveals his date of birth as 27 March 1960.

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* WritersCannotDoMath: Snape's worst memory is from when he, Lily, the Marauders, and others in their year he and the Marauders sat their [=OWLs=], which was in late spring 1976. Most of Although the students would have been fifteen years old when they began that year, but James Potter is said to have been fifteen years old at the time of the memory, both in narration and in dialogue -- though his joint gravestone with Lily in ''The Deathly Hallows'' reveals his date of birth as 27 March 1960.



-->Vernon: Fought 'em off, did you, son? Gave 'em the old one-two, did you?
-->Harry: You can't give a Dementor the old one-two!

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-->Vernon: -->'''Vernon''': Fought 'em off, did you, son? Gave 'em the old one-two, did you?
-->Harry: -->'''Harry''': You can't give a Dementor the ''the old one-two!one-two''!



** Harry speaks ill of Seamus' mother due to her believing Harry had lied in claiming Voldemort's return. Seamus ends up arguing with Harry as a result and backs down only when Ron intervenes and threatens to put Seamus in detention.

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** Harry speaks ill of Seamus' mother due to her believing Harry had lied in claiming Voldemort's return.when he claimed Voldemort had returned. Seamus ends up arguing with Harry as a result and backs down only when Ron intervenes and threatens to put Seamus in detention.
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* EveryoneIsRelated: In this book, we belatedly find out that Narcissa Malfoy and Bellatrix Lestrange are sisters and Sirius Black is their cousin, and that Arthur Weasley is a distant relative of all of them. Part of this is related to pureblood supremacy; such families want to keep their lines pure, and as more and more witches and wizards marry half-bloods, Muggleborns, and outright Muggles, the number of purebloods diminishes. That Arthur is related to them is coincidence, as they consider the Weasleys blood traitors.

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* EveryoneIsRelated: In this book, we belatedly find out that Narcissa Malfoy and Bellatrix Lestrange are sisters and Sirius Black is their cousin, and that Arthur Weasley is a distant relative of all of them. Part of this is related to pureblood supremacy; such families want to keep their lines pure, and as more and more witches and wizards marry half-bloods, Muggleborns, and outright Muggles, the number of purebloods diminishes. That Arthur is related to them is coincidence, as they consider the Weasleys blood traitors. Also, [[https://harrypotter.fandom.com/wiki/House_of_Black?file=JKRBlackFamilyTree.jpg in a hand-drawn family tree of the most recent generations of Blacks made by Rowling herself]], Dorea Black married Charlus Potter (Oddly, she wasn't disowned despite the Potters also being pro-Muggle), making Harry and James distantly related to Sirius as well as the Weasleys, the Malfoys, the Lestranges, and other pure-blood families.
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* AccidentalTruth: An article in ''The Quibbler'' suggests a rather convoluted and absurd theory as to why Sirius Black is innocent. Apparently he is secretly singer Stubby Boardman, and the author knows Stubby!Sirius is innocent because he happened to be having a romantic candlelit dinner with her at the time his alleged crimes were committed. Sirius really is innocent though, as we found out in the third book.
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* NoodleImplements: [[spoiler:The spell that Ron is hit with that makes him giggle and laugh at everything has ever been revealed, and causes him to bleed from his mouth.]]

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* NoodleImplements: [[spoiler:The spell that Ron is hit with that makes him giggle and laugh at everything has ever never been revealed, and causes him to bleed from his mouth.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The House of Black were an ''extremely'' elitist family of wizard supremacists. Whenever a family member married anyone not pure-blood, actually tried to treat Muggles and Muggle-borns like human beings, or were a Squib (which couldn't be helped), [[IHaveNoSon they were disowned]]. Because of the dwindling number of pure-blood families, several times the Blacks resorted to incest, which only resulted in mental instability.
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* KnownByThePostalAddress: The Black family house is also usually referred to as "number twelve, Grimmauld Place"; this is significant as it is only possible to access it when specifically told the address by the secret-keeper.
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** Hermione tries to help the Hogwarts house-elves by hiding articles of clothing around the Gryffindor Common Room for them to pick up while cleaning rubbish so they'll be freed. All she succeeds in doing is causing them to further resent her for insulting their intelligence and leaving Dobby to have to clean the entire room by himself.
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* TranquilFury: Dumbledore, twice in the book. The first time is when he ''calmly'' warns Umbridge that he "cannot allow [her] to manhandle my students," and it's enough to leave her cowed. The second, more subtle time is during his duel with Voldemort in the Ministry. Dumbledore notes that '''merely''' killing Voldemort wouldn't satisfy him, and that "there are other ways to destroy a man."
** Averted with Harry, who (thanks to the sheer amount of trauma he's under) bursts out yelling more than once.

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That doesn't mean she failed to think the plan through. She simply didn't believe there was any possibility that Harry was telling the truth.


* XanatosGambit: Umbridge tries this [[spoiler:at the beginning of the book when she sends a pair of Dementors after Harry. If they administer the Kiss, then he's out of the Ministry's hair. If he manages to drive them off with a Patronus charm, then they can prosecute him for underage magic violations and expel him from Hogwarts.]] She failed to think her plan through because [[spoiler:Fudge finds out by the end of the book that Harry and Dumbledore were telling the truth. If Harry had been desouled or expelled, the Ministry would have lost their Chosen One and the only person could defeat Voldemort]].

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* XanatosGambit: Umbridge tries this [[spoiler:at the beginning of the book when she sends a pair of Dementors after Harry. If they administer the Kiss, then he's out of the Ministry's hair. If he manages to drive them off with a Patronus charm, then they can prosecute him for underage magic violations and expel him from Hogwarts.]] She failed to think her plan through because [[spoiler:Fudge finds out by the end of the book that Harry and Dumbledore were telling the truth. If Harry had been desouled or expelled, the Ministry would have lost their Chosen One and the only person could defeat Voldemort]].]]
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** Whatever that mysterious spell Dumbledore fired was, it causes no damage to a shield but produces a "chilling", gong-like sound. Voldemort mocks Dumbledore for not going straight for the kill, but Dumbledore calmly replies that there are other ways of destroying a person.

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** Whatever that mysterious spell Dumbledore fired was, it causes no damage to a shield but produces a "chilling", gong-like sound. Voldemort mocks Dumbledore for not going straight for the kill, but Dumbledore calmly replies that there are other ways of destroying a person.person, and that ''merely'' killing Voldemort wouldn't satisfy him.
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* XanatosGambit: Umbridge tries this [[spoiler:at the beginning of the book when she sends a pair of Dementors after Harry. If they administer the Kiss, then he's out of the Ministry's hair. If he manages to drive them off with a Patronus charm, then they can prosecute him for underage magic violations and expel him from Hogwarts.]]

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* XanatosGambit: Umbridge tries this [[spoiler:at the beginning of the book when she sends a pair of Dementors after Harry. If they administer the Kiss, then he's out of the Ministry's hair. If he manages to drive them off with a Patronus charm, then they can prosecute him for underage magic violations and expel him from Hogwarts.]]]] She failed to think her plan through because [[spoiler:Fudge finds out by the end of the book that Harry and Dumbledore were telling the truth. If Harry had been desouled or expelled, the Ministry would have lost their Chosen One and the only person could defeat Voldemort]].
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** Minutes after ''that'', Ron has to interrupt Cho and Harry's conversation to attack her about supporting the Tutshill Tornadoes, her favoured professional Quidditch team.

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** Minutes after Hours before ''that'', Ron has to interrupt Cho and Harry's conversation to attack her about supporting the Tutshill Tornadoes, her favoured professional Quidditch team.team. After Cho leaves, Hermione scolds Ron for his tactlessness.
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* IronicEcho: At his trial, Harry is asked by one of the Wizengamot (Madame Bones) if his use of underage magic involved a "corporeal" patronus, which he was at first confused by. And during Dumbledore's Army meeting at the Hog's Head, her niece Susan Bones is one of the people who showed up, and she asks him if he can do a "corporeal" patronus as well, with their exchange almost exactly identical. However, Madam Bones' questioning comes during a trial prosecuting Harry, while Susan's questioning comes in support of Harry. [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay Harry instantly makes the connection between those two, and deduces that the two are related, which she confirms]].

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