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* ActionGirl: Amy, Tullia and Fiannuala all qualify.
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* NiceHat: Summer Phoenix wears a cavalier hat.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Laurendred is introduced as a skilled ActionGirl and an experienced commander, but she spends the rest of ''The Dragon and the Sword'' getting overshadowed by Irithelie's Tarshishin powers. In universe, Laurendred feels this way compared to her mother, while Iri, ironically enough, feels overshadowed by her older sisters.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Laurendred is introduced as a skilled ActionGirl Action Girl and an experienced commander, but she spends the rest of ''The Dragon and the Sword'' getting overshadowed by Irithelie's Tarshishin powers. In universe, Laurendred feels this way compared to her mother, while Iri, ironically enough, feels overshadowed by her older sisters.
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* WorldOfActionGirls: Amy, Tullia and Fiannuala all qualify.
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Trope has been renamed.
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** ''Spirit of the Sword: Pride and Fury'': The Voice of Corona, with Quirian as the BiggerBad
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** ''Spirit of the Sword: Pride and Fury'': The Voice of Corona, with Quirian as the BiggerBadGreaterScopeVillain
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* OurFairiesAreDifferent: Fairies are native to the world of Tarshish, stand about six inches high and produce motes of sparkling light. They're also in service to the BiggerBad and can tap into his powers.
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* OurFairiesAreDifferent: Fairies are native to the world of Tarshish, stand about six inches high and produce motes of sparkling light. They're also in service to the BiggerBad GreaterScopeVillain and can tap into his powers.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Princess Romana has purple hair (and purple eyes) as a sign of her descent from Aegea. Notably her two brothers do not, which Romana and her supporters see as a sign that she is better suited to the throne: the bloodline has 'bred true' in her. Jason also has purple hair, making it difficult to hide his bastardy.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Hespera claims that she and Summer are alike (both ambitious, talent outcasts rejected by their mothers/mother figures and thrown on their own resources) when she is trying to get her to betray her companions.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Hespera claims that she and Summer are alike (both ambitious, talent outcasts rejected by their mothers/mother figures and thrown on their own resources) when she is trying to get her to betray her companions.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Miranda
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* DualWielding: Michael, Gideon, Quirian and the Voice of Corona all indulge in this.
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dewicking Our Elves Are Better per trs
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* OurElvesAreBetter: Elves (who call themselves 'Alver') are divided into four kinds, of which only two have been seen in detail: Stone Elves are the most common, with a more advanced level of development than humans (they have printed books, crossbows and their armour is described in Renaissance/17th Century terms compared to the humans' Greco-Roman style), as well as talking in a more modern fashion. Dark Elves, on the other hand, are a ProudWarriorRace with a much more old fashioned culture and manners. Elves can also generate a glamour similar to dragons, allowing them to enchant and enslave those who look upon them.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: OurElvesAreDifferent: Elves (who call themselves 'Alver') are divided into four kinds, of which only two have been seen in detail: Stone Elves are the most common, with a more advanced level of development than humans (they have printed books, crossbows and their armour is described in Renaissance/17th Century terms compared to the humans' Greco-Roman style), as well as talking in a more modern fashion. Dark Elves, on the other hand, are a ProudWarriorRace with a much more old fashioned culture and manners. Elves can also generate a glamour similar to dragons, allowing them to enchant and enslave those who look upon them.
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Irrelevant.
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* RotatingArcs: In ''Spirit of the Sword'', Michael is the {{Protagonist}} with Miranda as the {{Deuteragonist}}. In ''The Dragon and the Sword'', Summer takes over as the {{Protagonist}}, with Irithelie as the {{Deuteragonist}} and Laurendred as the tritagonist while Michael is demoted to the SupportingLeader and Miranda gets PutOnABus.
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* RotatingArcs: In ''Spirit of the Sword'', Michael is the {{Protagonist}} protagonist with Miranda as the {{Deuteragonist}}. In ''The Dragon and the Sword'', Summer takes over as the {{Protagonist}}, protagonist, with Irithelie as the {{Deuteragonist}} and Laurendred as the tritagonist while Michael is demoted to the SupportingLeader and Miranda gets PutOnABus.
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* PurpleEyes: Romana and Jason both have them, demonstrating their descent from Aegea.
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* TheEmpire: The Divine Empire of All Pelarius, Lavissar, Triazica and All the Lands that Lie Between or May be Found Beyond. It was founded with the intent of WorldDomination, but hasn't made any meaningful progress (or effort) towards that goal in centuries. Whether it is a benign or wicked entity is something the characters could debate fiercely, but for all its many faults it does provide peace and stability to most of its citizens.
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* TheEmpire: The Divine Empire of All Pelarius, Lavissar, Triazica and All the Lands that Lie Between or May be Found Beyond. It was founded with the intent of WorldDomination, [[TakeOverTheWorld world domination]], but hasn't made any meaningful progress (or effort) towards that goal in centuries. Whether it is a benign or wicked entity is something the characters could debate fiercely, but for all its many faults it does provide peace and stability to most of its citizens.
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* BadassPrincess: Princess Fiannuala of Eena.
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* ChekovsGun: Upon becoming First Sword of the Empire, Michael is granted five boons by the Empress Aegea but doesn't claim any of them at the time. The first shot of this revolver is fired in ''The Dragon and the Sword'' when he uses one boon to save Summer's life.
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Upon becoming First Sword of the Empire, Michael is granted five boons by the Empress Aegea but doesn't claim any of them at the time. The first shot of this revolver is fired in ''The Dragon and the Sword'' when he uses one boon to save Summer's life.
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* BlingOfWar: Amy's armour includes a breastplate [[GemEncrusted encrusted with sapphires]], forming the image of a leaping dolphin.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Hespera devours all the children in the villages she enslaves, as they are too small and weak to serve her. This, more than anything else, is what puts her into ThisIsUnforgiveable territory as far as Amy is concerned. Amalia is also perfectly willing to stab a fourteen year old girl through the stomach and leave her to bleed to death.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Hespera devours all the children in the villages she enslaves, as they are too small and weak to serve her. This, more than anything else, is what puts her into ThisIsUnforgiveable ThisIsUnforgivable territory as far as Amy is concerned. Amalia is also perfectly willing to stab a fourteen year old girl through the stomach and leave her to bleed to death.
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* LineageComesFromTheFather: Both Amy and Octavia have human mothers and non-human fathers, from whom they have inherited their extraordinary abilities.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Amy (half-human, half naiad) and Octavia (half-human, half aestival); ''The Dragon and the Sword'' adds Ceresia, who is half-elf, half-human and deeply unhappy about it.
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* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Amy was on the receiving end of this from the naiads, when she lived with them, and from every human she grew up with not named 'Michael' or 'Felix'; Ceresia also suffered from this as a result of her apparent human heritage. Averted with Octavia, whose troubles were more the result of being a ChildByRape than anything to do with what her father was.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Amy (half-human, half naiad) and Octavia (half-human, half aestival);''The Dragon and the Sword'' adds Ceresia, who is half-elf, half-human and deeply unhappy about it.Ceresia may also be one, as several characters remark upon human or un-elven aspects of her physical features.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Amy (half-human, half naiad) and Octavia (half-human, half aestival);
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Amy (half-human, half naiad) and Octavia (half-human, half aestival)
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Amy (half-human, half naiad) and Octavia (half-human, half aestival)aestival); ''The Dragon and the Sword'' adds Ceresia, who is half-elf, half-human and deeply unhappy about it.
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* Nice Hat: Summer Phoenix wears a cavalier hat.
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* Nice Hat: NiceHat: Summer Phoenix wears a cavalier hat.