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** [[spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]

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** [[spoiler: Katherine: [[spoiler:Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]



* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth [[spoiler:Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight... with Christopher emerging victorious.]]
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* {{Badass}}: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
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*** He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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*** He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].
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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3009824/1/First_Do_No_Harm First: Do No Harm]] is a Web Serial Novel by @/InsanityLord (Justin J. on Fictionpress). It follows the life of Chastity 'Vanilla' Jackson, a doctor and scientist in the 22nd Century, and the lives of her family and those close to her. Currently nearing the end of its first arc, with a small side arc put in focusing on her brother Kidari and a wanderer named Christopher.

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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3009824/1/First_Do_No_Harm First: Do No Harm]] is a Web Serial Novel by @/InsanityLord (Justin J. on Fictionpress). It follows the life of Chastity 'Vanilla' Jackson, a doctor and scientist in the 22nd Century, and the lives of her family and those close to her. Currently nearing the end of its first arc, with a small side arc put in focusing on her brother Kidari and a wanderer named Christopher. *Curently being re-written*


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* ItGotWorse: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].
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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]]]

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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]]]]]

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* UnstoppableRage: Vanilla. In the ''first chapter'' she [[spoiler:storms a villain's lair, destroys all of his robotic guards, sedates him, and hangs him upside down with a message to just wait for the police and a warning to never go after her younglings again.]]
* TechnicalPacifist: Vanilla. As a doctor, she's sworn to heal, not harm. It doesn't really count for [[spoiler:people that attack her family though]] as the mercs that assaulted her home found out the hard way.

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* UnstoppableRage: Vanilla. In the ''first chapter'' she [[spoiler:storms AfraidOfBlood: [[spoiler:Vanilla]], which is bad because [[spoiler:she's a villain's lair, destroys all of his robotic guards, sedates him, frigging ''doctor'']], and hangs him upside down just seeing a small amount of it sends [[spoiler:her]] into a catatonic state for a full night.
* {{Badass}}: Christopher, who goes head to head
with a message to [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just wait for his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the police and a warning to never go after her younglings again.]]
* TechnicalPacifist: Vanilla. As a doctor, she's sworn to heal, not harm. It doesn't really count for [[spoiler:people that attack her family though]] as the mercs that assaulted her home found out the hard way.
larynx.]]



* BerserkButton: Almost everybody in the cast has one:
** Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord]].
** Kidari: Turning children into zombies will make him lose control of his emotions - a very, very hard thing to accomplish, he's so in control of them, and he will unleash a wave of fire so powerful that it ''melts glass from windows and turns tiles into molten sludge'' along with putting the poor children to rest by burning their bodies to ash.
** Vanilla: She loves children, in fact she's very much a MamaBear about them. Intentionally making your child sick to get attention will get ''her'' attention, and then she'll have to excuse herself from the case in case she gives into her rage and ''throws you off of a building''. [[spoiler:She didn't, but she came close.]] Another good way is to [[spoiler:go after her niece with a rocket launcher, at which point she has no problems breaking bones.]]
** [[spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Astaroth]], from the side arc. So strong that he wiped the floor with Christopher and Kidari, who had been almost unstoppable up until this point. [[spoiler:Then he presses Christopher's BerserkButton and the tables turn quite fast.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him a massive boost in power, and even access to magic if he taps into them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but his body can't take the stress and usually gives out if he overuses them. Good thing he's immortal...]]
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]
* DeadpanSnarker:
** Christopher, a lot. Most of the time he's commenting on the situation they're in, or how scary Kidari is, though.
** Rosalina is another example, as every time her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right, as well as a true artificial intelligence - Vanilla is working on it, she just has a few bugs to work out]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]])



* NotQuiteDead: Christopher, who [[spoiler:gets his neck snapped by a demon in chapter 9, only to revive with little more than a complaint about being taken by surprise in chapter 10.]]
-> *Another example would be the [[spoiler:minotaur, that revives as a zombie moments after Christopher kills it. It gets turned to ash by Kidari moments later though...]]
* BadAss: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Christopher, a lot. Most of the time he's commenting on the situation they're in, or how scary Kidari is, though.
->*Rosalina is another example, as every time her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right, as well as a true artificial intelligence - Vanilla is working on it, she just has a few bugs to work out]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]])
* NamesToRunAwayFrom: [[spoiler:'''''Christopher Glayden''''', also known as the Right Hand of Destruction, Avatar to Keiji, Goddess of Destruction, Death, and War. The BigBad of the side arc recognised him when he brought out his scythe and was terrified of him, even though he had been wiping the floor with both him and Kidari mere minutes before.]]
* AfraidOfBlood: [[spoiler:Vanilla]], which is bad because [[spoiler:she's a frigging ''doctor'']], and just seeing a small amount of it sends [[spoiler:her]] into a catatonic state for a full night.
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Astaroth]], from the side arc. So strong that he wiped the floor with Christopher and Kidari, who had been almost unstoppable up until this point. [[spoiler:Then he presses Christopher's BerserkButton and the tables turn quite fast.]]
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him a massive boost in power, and even access to magic if he taps into them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but his body can't take the stress and usually gives out if he overuses them. Good thing he's immortal...]]

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* NotQuiteDead: Christopher, GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who [[spoiler:gets his neck snapped by then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon in chapter 9, only just to revive see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with little more than a complaint about being taken by surprise in chapter 10.]]
-> *Another example would be
demonic power.]]]]
* ItGotWorse: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge'
the [[spoiler:minotaur, that revives as a zombie moments after Christopher kills it. It gets turned to ash by Kidari moments later though...]]
* BadAss: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones
world of anything non-human are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Christopher, a lot. Most of the time he's commenting on the situation they're in, or how scary Kidari is, though.
->*Rosalina is another example, as every time
her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented family under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right, as well as a true artificial intelligence - Vanilla is working on it, she just has a few bugs to work out]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]])
orders from Marshall]].
* NamesToRunAwayFrom: NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:'''''Christopher Glayden''''', also known as the Right Hand of Destruction, Avatar to Keiji, Goddess of Destruction, Death, and War. The BigBad of the side arc recognised him when he brought out his scythe and was terrified of him, even though he had been wiping the floor with both him and Kidari mere minutes before.]]
* AfraidOfBlood: [[spoiler:Vanilla]], which is bad because [[spoiler:she's NotQuiteDead:
** Christopher, who [[spoiler:gets his neck snapped by
a frigging ''doctor'']], and just seeing a small amount of it sends [[spoiler:her]] into a catatonic state for a full night.
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Astaroth]], from the side arc. So strong that he wiped the floor
demon in chapter 9, only to revive with Christopher and Kidari, who had been almost unstoppable up until this point. [[spoiler:Then he presses Christopher's BerserkButton and the tables turn quite fast.little more than a complaint about being taken by surprise in chapter 10.]]
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes ** Another example would be the floor with [[spoiler:minotaur, that revives as a zombie moments after Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages kills it. It gets turned to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.ash by Kidari moments later though...]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him OhCrap:
** Kidari has one during the side arc when [[spoiler:Astaroth creates
a massive boost in power, lich to hunt them, and even access they haven't got the power needed to magic if he taps into destroy the monster]].
*** He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with
them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but without any effort]]]], and ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his body can't take power as the stress [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and usually gives out if he overuses them. Good thing he's immortal...]]effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].



-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an [[WordOfGod unintentional reference entirely.]]
-> DoctorWho: Vanilla lives and works in a city called Blaidd Drwg, which is Welsh for Bad Wolf.
-> DresdenFiles: Vanilla has some crazy ideas at times (being a somewhat sane version of a MadScientist at times), including a ''robot ninja riding a robotic t-rex meant to look undead''. She had to dismantle it, though she started selling toys based on it..and kids apparently love it.
->DevilMayCry: In the side arc, Christopher finds a claymore and a pistol and wonders if he should dye his hair white, start spouting corny one-liners, and butchering Shakespeare. He then dismisses the idea as stupid.
* BerserkButton: Almost everybody in the cast has one:
-> *Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord]].
->*Kidari: Turning children into zombies will make him lose control of his emotions - a very, very hard thing to accomplish, he's so in control of them, and he will unleash a wave of fire so powerful that it ''melts glass from windows and turns tiles into molten sludge'' along with putting the poor children to rest by burning their bodies to ash.
->*Vanilla: She loves children, in fact she's very much a MamaBear about them. Intentionally making your child sick to get attention will get ''her'' attention, and then she'll have to excuse herself from the case in case she gives into her rage and ''throws you off of a building''. [[spoiler:She didn't, but she came close.]] Another good way is to [[spoiler:go after her niece with a rocket launcher, at which point she has no problems breaking bones.]]
->*[[spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]
* CompleteMonster: Violet's husband. He [[spoiler:keeps her chained to a wall under guard, ''naked'', beats her almost every day with his bare fists because her HealingFactor keeps her alive and it just ''annoys him''. At one point he briefly considers cutting out her ovaries and womb, just to see if her HealingFactor can handle it. Then he decides not to because he might need her to bear another 'tool'. He's also ''in his fifties'', with a ''fifteen year old daughter'', whom he considers as nothing more than a disposable tool. He also sent armed mercenaries after her in an attempt to kill her because he felt she was out of his control.]]
* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]]]
* ItGotWorse: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].
* OhCrap: Kidari has one during the side arc when [[spoiler:Astaroth creates a lich to hunt them, and they haven't got the power needed to destroy the monster]].
-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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-> StarWars: ** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an [[WordOfGod unintentional reference entirely.]]
-> DoctorWho: ** ''Series/DoctorWho'': Vanilla lives and works in a city called Blaidd Drwg, which is Welsh for Bad Wolf.
-> DresdenFiles: ** ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'': Vanilla has some crazy ideas at times (being a somewhat sane version of a MadScientist at times), including a ''robot ninja riding a robotic t-rex meant to look undead''. She had to dismantle it, though she started selling toys based on it..and kids apparently love it.
->DevilMayCry: ** ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry'': In the side arc, Christopher finds a claymore and a pistol and wonders if he should dye his hair white, start spouting corny one-liners, and butchering Shakespeare. He then dismisses the idea as stupid.
* BerserkButton: Almost everybody in the cast has one:
-> *Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is
TechnicalPacifist: Vanilla. As a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord]].
->*Kidari: Turning children into zombies will make him lose control of his emotions - a very, very hard thing to accomplish, he's so in control of them, and he will unleash a wave of fire so powerful that it ''melts glass from windows and turns tiles into molten sludge'' along with putting the poor children to rest by burning their bodies to ash.
->*Vanilla: She loves children, in fact
doctor, she's very much a MamaBear about them. Intentionally making your child sick sworn to get attention will get ''her'' attention, and then she'll have to excuse herself from heal, not harm. It doesn't really count for [[spoiler:people that attack her family though]] as the case in case she gives into mercs that assaulted her rage and ''throws you off of a building''. [[spoiler:She didn't, but she came close.]] Another good way is to [[spoiler:go after her niece with a rocket launcher, at which point she has no problems breaking bones.]]
->*[[spoiler: Katherine: Same as
home found out the hard way.
* UnstoppableRage:
Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as ''first chapter'' she works in Child Services [[spoiler:storms a villain's lair, destroys all of his robotic guards, sedates him, and hangs him upside down with a message to just wait for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body warning to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]
* CompleteMonster: Violet's husband. He [[spoiler:keeps her chained to a wall under guard, ''naked'', beats her almost every day with his bare fists because her HealingFactor keeps her alive and it just ''annoys him''. At one point he briefly considers cutting out her ovaries and womb, just to see if her HealingFactor can handle it. Then he decides not to because he might need her to bear another 'tool'. He's also ''in his fifties'', with a ''fifteen year old daughter'', whom he considers as nothing more than a disposable tool. He also sent armed mercenaries
never go after her in an attempt to kill her because he felt she was out of his control.]]
* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]]]
* ItGotWorse: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].
* OhCrap: Kidari has one during the side arc when [[spoiler:Astaroth creates a lich to hunt them, and they haven't got the power needed to destroy the monster]].
-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].
younglings again.]]
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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]]]], and ''again'' ''Astaroth'' gets one when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].
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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and CurbStompBattle [[CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]], effort]]]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].
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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and CurbStomps them without any effort]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and CurbStomps CurbStompBattle wipes the floor with them without any effort]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].

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* FantasticRacism: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].

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* FantasticRacism: ItGotWorse: The [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].Marshall]].
*OhCrap: Kidari has one during the side arc when [[spoiler:Astaroth creates a lich to hunt them, and they haven't got the power needed to destroy the monster]].
-> He gets another one in the final battle of the arc, when [[spoiler:Astaroth shrugs off their attacks and CurbStomps them without any effort]], and ''again'' when [[spoiler:Christopher unleashes his power as the [[NamesToRunAwayFrom Right Hand of Destruction]] and effortlessly destroys Astaroth in his [[OneWingedAngel demon lord form]]]].
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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]

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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]]]]]
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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster:already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]
* FantasticRacism: The [[KnightTemplar:Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].

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* GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster:already [[CompleteMonster already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]
* FantasticRacism: The [[KnightTemplar:Knights [[KnightTemplar Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].
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* CompleteMonster: Violet's husband. He [[spoiler:keeps her chained to a wall under guard, ''naked'', beats her almost every day with his bare fists because her HealingFactor keeps her alive and it just ''annoys him''. At one point he briefly considers cutting out her ovaries and womb, just to see if her HealingFactor can handle it. Then he decides not to because he might need her to bear another 'tool'. He's also ''in his fifties'', with a ''fifteen year old daughter'', whom he considers as nothing more than a disposable tool. He also sent armed mercenaries after her in an attempt to kill her because he felt she was out of his control.]]

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* CompleteMonster: Violet's husband. He [[spoiler:keeps her chained to a wall under guard, ''naked'', beats her almost every day with his bare fists because her HealingFactor keeps her alive and it just ''annoys him''. At one point he briefly considers cutting out her ovaries and womb, just to see if her HealingFactor can handle it. Then he decides not to because he might need her to bear another 'tool'. He's also ''in his fifties'', with a ''fifteen year old daughter'', whom he considers as nothing more than a disposable tool. He also sent armed mercenaries after her in an attempt to kill her because he felt she was out of his control.]]]]
*GrandTheftMe: Pulled on Violet's husband [[spoiler:Marshall by Astaroth]], who then turned [[spoiler:Marshall into a demon just to see what kind of damage the [[CompleteMonster:already monstrous man could do with demonic power.]]
*FantasticRacism: The [[KnightTemplar:Knights of Purity]], who make it their mission to 'purge' the world of anything non-human are gunning for [[spoiler:Vanilla and her family under orders from Marshall]].
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* Badass: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]

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* Badass: BadAss: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
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* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]

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* MadeOfIron: Badass: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
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*CompleteMonster: Violet's husband. He [[spoiler:keeps her chained to a wall under guard, ''naked'', beats her almost every day with his bare fists because her HealingFactor keeps her alive and it just ''annoys him''. At one point he briefly considers cutting out her ovaries and womb, just to see if her HealingFactor can handle it. Then he decides not to because he might need her to bear another 'tool'. He's also ''in his fifties'', with a ''fifteen year old daughter'', whom he considers as nothing more than a disposable tool. He also sent armed mercenaries after her in an attempt to kill her because he felt she was out of his control.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him a massive boost in power, and even access to magic if he taps into them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but his body can't take the stress and usually gives out if he overuses them.]]

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* BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him a massive boost in power, and even access to magic if he taps into them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but his body can't take the stress and usually gives out if he overuses them. Good thing he's immortal...]]



-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an {{Word Of God unintentional reference entirely.}}

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-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an {{Word Of God [[WordOfGod unintentional reference entirely.}}]]



->DevilMayCry: In the side arc, Christopher finds a claymore and a pistol and wonders if he should dye his hair white, start spouting corny one-liners, and butchering Shakespeare. He then dismisses the idea is stupid.

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->DevilMayCry: In the side arc, Christopher finds a claymore and a pistol and wonders if he should dye his hair white, start spouting corny one-liners, and butchering Shakespeare. He then dismisses the idea is as stupid.
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-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an {{WordOfGod unintentional reference entirely.}}

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-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an {{WordOfGod {{Word Of God unintentional reference entirely.}}



-> *Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord)

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-> *Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord)lord]].



->*[[Spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]

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->*[[Spoiler: ->*[[spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]
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->*Rosalina is another example, as every time her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]]).

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->*Rosalina is another example, as every time her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right]]), right, as well as a true artificial intelligence - Vanilla is working on it, she just has a few bugs to work out]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]]).]])



* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]]]
*BlessedWithSuck: Christopher. [[spoiler:His glyphs grant him a massive boost in power, and even access to magic if he taps into them enough (he ''hates'' magic though), but his body can't take the stress and usually gives out if he overuses them.]]
*ShoutOut: And ''how''! There are plenty:
-> StarWars: Vanilla calls children 'younglings', though this was an {{WordOfGod}} unintentional reference entirely
-> DoctorWho: Vanilla lives and works in a city called Blaidd Drwg, which is Welsh for Bad Wolf.
-> DresdenFiles: Vanilla has some crazy ideas at times (being a somewhat sane version of a MadScientist at times), including a ''robot ninja riding a robotic t-rex meant to look undead''. She had to dismantle it, though she started selling toys based on it..and kids apparently love it.
->DevilMayCry: In the side arc, Christopher finds a claymore and a pistol and wonders if he should dye his hair white, start spouting corny one-liners, and butchering Shakespeare. He then dismisses the idea is stupid.
*BerserkButton: Almost everybody in the cast has one:
-> *Christopher: Threatening his wife ([[spoiler:Vanilla]]) even if you have him at your mercy is a ''bad, bad idea'' and will quickly result in him [[spoiler:going into full Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War mode and destroying your body, even if you are an immortal demon lord)
->*Kidari: Turning children into zombies will make him lose control of his emotions - a very, very hard thing to accomplish, he's so in control of them, and he will unleash a wave of fire so powerful that it ''melts glass from windows and turns tiles into molten sludge'' along with putting the poor children to rest by burning their bodies to ash.
->*Vanilla: She loves children, in fact she's very much a MamaBear about them. Intentionally making your child sick to get attention will get ''her'' attention, and then she'll have to excuse herself from the case in case she gives into her rage and ''throws you off of a building''. [[spoiler:She didn't, but she came close.]] Another good way is to [[spoiler:go after her niece with a rocket launcher, at which point she has no problems breaking bones.]]
->*[[Spoiler: Katherine: Same as Vanilla. In fact, this trait seems to ''run in the family'', as she works in Child Services for the express purpose of helping children legally. When the mother that was hurting her child for attention (she's explicitly said to have Münchhausen By Proxy Syndrome) pulled a gun out on her (stolen from a police officer that she had just attacked and stunned with a chair) and started yelling about how her son should be giving her all the attention, she kicked a table into her body to stun and disarm and coldly told her that if she weren't in such control of her anger, the woman would require a ''wheelchair'' to leave the room.]]
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* NamesToRunAwayFrom: [[Spoiler:'''''Christopher Glayden''''', also known as the Right Hand of Destruction, Avatar to Keiji, Goddess of Destruction, Death, and War. The BigBad of the side arc recognised him when he brought out his scythe and was terrified of him, even though he had been wiping the floor with both him and Kidari mere minutes before.]]

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* NamesToRunAwayFrom: [[Spoiler:'''''Christopher [[spoiler:'''''Christopher Glayden''''', also known as the Right Hand of Destruction, Avatar to Keiji, Goddess of Destruction, Death, and War. The BigBad of the side arc recognised him when he brought out his scythe and was terrified of him, even though he had been wiping the floor with both him and Kidari mere minutes before.]]



* CurbStompBattle: [[Spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.]]
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* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]

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* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
*DeadpanSnarker: Christopher, a lot. Most of the time he's commenting on the situation they're in, or how scary Kidari is, though.
->*Rosalina is another example, as every time her [[spoiler:aunt]] Vanilla reveals more of the tech she uses/created/patented under different names, she flat out comments on how it's either impossible ([[spoiler:teleportation - Vanilla has pretty much perfected it and mocks the government scientists for not doing it right]]), or not something a civilian can legally get their hands on ([[spoiler:nanotechnology - Vanilla ''created it'', and has a far more advanced version of it than the government does.]]).
*NamesToRunAwayFrom: [[Spoiler:'''''Christopher Glayden''''', also known as the Right Hand of Destruction, Avatar to Keiji, Goddess of Destruction, Death, and War. The BigBad of the side arc recognised him when he brought out his scythe and was terrified of him, even though he had been wiping the floor with both him and Kidari mere minutes before.]]
*AfraidOfBlood: [[spoiler:Vanilla]], which is bad because [[spoiler:she's a frigging ''doctor'']], and just seeing a small amount of it sends [[spoiler:her]] into a catatonic state for a full night.
*BigBad: [[spoiler:Astaroth]], from the side arc. So strong that he wiped the floor with Christopher and Kidari, who had been almost unstoppable up until this point. [[spoiler:Then he presses Christopher's BerserkButton and the tables turn quite fast.]]
*CurbStompBattle: [[Spoiler: Astaroth wipes the floor with Christopher and Kidari, shrugging off their attacks, the same ones that had been destroying his minions, with barely any effort in his ''human form'', which is weaker than his true form. Then he manages to enrage Christopher enough to force him to tap into his full power as the Avatar of Destruction, Death, and War, and then it turns into a quick, brutal, one-sided fight...with Christopher emerging victorious.
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* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''granite'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]

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* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''granite'']] ''steel'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]
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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3009824/1/First_Do_No_Harm First: Do No Harm]] is a Web Serial Novel by {{Insanity Lord}} (Justin J. on Fictionpress). It follows the life of Chastity 'Vanilla' Jackson, a doctor and scientist in the 22nd Century, and the lives of her family and those close to her. Currently nearing the end of its first arc, with a small side arc put in focusing on her brother Kidari and a wanderer named Christopher.

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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3009824/1/First_Do_No_Harm First: Do No Harm]] is a Web Serial Novel by {{Insanity Lord}} @/InsanityLord (Justin J. on Fictionpress). It follows the life of Chastity 'Vanilla' Jackson, a doctor and scientist in the 22nd Century, and the lives of her family and those close to her. Currently nearing the end of its first arc, with a small side arc put in focusing on her brother Kidari and a wanderer named Christopher.
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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3009824/1/First_Do_No_Harm First: Do No Harm]] is a Web Serial Novel by {{Insanity Lord}} (Justin J. on Fictionpress). It follows the life of Chastity 'Vanilla' Jackson, a doctor and scientist in the 22nd Century, and the lives of her family and those close to her. Currently nearing the end of its first arc, with a small side arc put in focusing on her brother Kidari and a wanderer named Christopher.
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!!This web serial novel provides examples of:

* UnstoppableRage: Vanilla. In the ''first chapter'' she [[spoiler:storms a villain's lair, destroys all of his robotic guards, sedates him, and hangs him upside down with a message to just wait for the police and a warning to never go after her younglings again.]]
* TechnicalPacifist: Vanilla. As a doctor, she's sworn to heal, not harm. It doesn't really count for [[spoiler:people that attack her family though]] as the mercs that assaulted her home found out the hard way.
* BadassBookworm: Vanilla. She's both a scientst ''and'' a doctor, so she's obviously very well educated, but not afraid put herself in danger. The same can be said for her [[spoiler:niece, Rosalina, who defeated trained soldiers with nothing but a pencil, her hands, and a stolen knife when they tried to kidnap her from Vanilla's home]].
* BadassLongcoat: Christopher and Kidari both wear longcoats, and they're both quite badass, [[spoiler:taking on an entire city full of zombies and demons with nothing but their fists, a single gun, and magic!]]
* GenreShift: The story shifts from [[spoiler:dramatic science fiction to action filled urban fantasy in the form of a magically induced zombie outbreak in an abandoned city at chapter 9]].
* NotQuiteDead: Christopher, who [[spoiler:gets his neck snapped by a demon in chapter 9, only to revive with little more than a complaint about being taken by surprise in chapter 10.]]
-> *Another example would be the [[spoiler:minotaur, that revives as a zombie moments after Christopher kills it. It gets turned to ash by Kidari moments later though...]]
* MadeOfIron: Christopher, who goes head to head with a [[spoiler:minotaur, whose bones are made from ''granite'']] with just his fists. He eventually kills it by [[spoiler:getting it on its back and stomping down on its throat, crushing the larynx.]]

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