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* ReligionOfEvil: Salome institutes one, tearing sown the icons of Ishtar in the temple and replacing them with horrible figurines of long-dead evil gods.
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* KlingonPromotion: How Conan takes the control of the tribe.
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* OneHundredPercentAdorationRating: Taramis is beloved by her people for her justice, wisdom, mercy, and purity.
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Salome, on the other hand, is utterly hated for brutalizing and despoiling her subjects, turning her court into the most debauched and depraved place in the world.
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Salome, on the other hand, is utterly hated for brutalizing and despoiling her subjects, turning her court into the most debauched and depraved place in the world.
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* GenuineHumanHide: Salome wants a dress made of this, so gives Constantius permission for his men to flay alive as many captives as they want after they defeat Conan's host. Just one flaw with that plan...
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* TheDragon: Constantius to Salome, specifically chosen for his lack of morals.
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* CirclingVultures: Conan is crucified out in the desert, and [[VillainBall no guard is placed on him]] because they'll scare off the vultures, and Constantius wants them to [[EatenAlive feast on Conan before he dies]] (as in [[Film/ConanTheBarbarian1982 the movie]], Conan kills a vulture who tries feasting on him too early). Some passing desert nomads admire his toughness and rescue him, figuring he'll be a useful addition to their ranks. The story ends with Conan (now chief of the nomad tribe) leaving Constantius to the same fate, knowing the city-raised sellsword won't last nearly as long as he would and [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating no-one's coming to save him]].
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* CirclingVultures: Conan is crucified out in the desert, and [[VillainBall no guard is placed on him]] because they'll scare off the vultures, and Constantius wants them to [[EatenAlive feast on Conan before he dies]] (as in [[Film/ConanTheBarbarian1982 the movie]], Conan kills a vulture who tries feasting on him too early). Some passing desert nomads admire his toughness and rescue him, figuring he'll be a useful addition to their ranks. The story ends with Conan (now chief of the nomad tribe) leaving Constantius to the same fate, knowing the city-raised sellsword won't last nearly as long as he would and [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating [[HatedByAll no-one's coming to save him]].
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Salome rules Khauran for seven months after taking her sister's place as queen. In that time, the people are made to suffer horribly. The ladies of the court are forced into orgies with Constantius's mercenaries; rich and poor alike are taxed to the breaking point; many of the city's men are sold into slavery; and hundreds of people are killed in HumanSacrifice, either dying under Salome's own knife or being fed to her pet monster.
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* OutOfFocus: Conan himself is only the protagonist in Chapters 2 and 4 and shows up near the end of the sixth and final chapter to save the day. Most of his accomplishments (his raids and his victory against Constantius) occur offscreen and are told by other characters.
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* FaintInShock: Tamaris faints at the height of her rescue. After months of ColdBloodedTorture and [[GoMadFromTheIsolation isolation]], having your sister try to feed you to a monster and and the finding yourself in the middle of a battle do make a good excuse.
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* FaintInShock: Tamaris faints at the height of her rescue. After months of ColdBloodedTorture and [[GoMadFromTheIsolation isolation]], having your sister try to feed you to a monster and and the then finding yourself in the middle of a battle do make a good excuse.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: At the end of the story, Conan gives Constantius a taste of his own medicine by having him crucified like Constantius did to him. Constantius is nowhere near as enduring of the pain as Conan is.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: At the end of the story, Conan gives Constantius a taste of his own medicine by having him crucified like Constantius did to him. Constantius is nowhere near as enduring of the pain as Conan is.
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Generally considered one of the weaker Conan stories, mainly for it's lack of ShowDontTell and underdeveloped characters, as well as a significant lack of poetic storytelling which Creator/RobertEHoward had become known for (he had just finished writing his first novel, Literature/TheHourOfTheDragon, and rushed out ''A Witch Shall Be Born'' quick [[MoneyDearBoy to pay his bills]]). Still, it's not without it's merits.
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* {{Curse}}: Why the witch is born.born; the first of the royal bloodline mated with a HumanoidAbomination.
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* BedouinRescueService: Subverted; the nomads only rescue Conan because they admire his toughness and feel he'll make a useful addition to their ranks. They've no problem leaving Constantius to his fate.
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* CrucifiedHeroShot: Conan's crucifixion, which inspired a similar scene in the first Conan movie.
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* CrucifiedHeroShot: Conan's crucifixion, crucifixion (including nails), which inspired a similar scene in the first Conan movie.
* CrystalBall: Salome scorns using it for study, but doescommunicate use it for communication, sending a crystal ball with it.the army she's sent to crush Conan. The man at the other end lives long enough to deliver exposition on how they've been LuredIntoATrap before [[DeathByTransceiver someone cuts him down]].
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* ManInTheIronMask: Now that she's in full control of the kingdom, one of her mercenaries urges Salome to execute her sister and rule in her own name. She refuses because she enjoys tormenting Taramis, only deciding to kill her as a final act of spite on realising Conan is winning, by which time Valerius is in the process of freeing her.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Conan and his men arrives just in time to save Valerius and Taramis from the toad-like monster summoned by Salome.
* BrainFever: Valerius during the After Action Patchup, to give him an excuse to babble.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Conan and his men arrives horsemen arrive just in time to save Valerius and Taramis from the toad-like monster summoned by Salome.
* BrainFever: Valerius during the After Action Patchup, to give him an [[{{Exposition}} excuse tobabble.babble]].
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* UngratefulBastard: Olgerd rescues Conan from a lingering death on the cross, only for Conan to [[AssKickingEqualsAuthority wrest the support of his followers away from him]]. Conan spares his life however, and points out that Olgerd only rescued him in the first place because he knew Conan would be useful.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: Salome will be born again thousands of years later, have the same name, and cause the beheading of John The Baptist.
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Queen Taramis is woken in the middle of the night by a woman looking just like her, who reveals that she is Salome, Taramis's twin, and the born witch who stems from the curse on the royal family. She has let in an unscrupulous mercenary captain Constantius, and with his aid, seized the city and exiled Taramis to the dungeon.
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Queen Taramis is woken in the middle of the night by a woman looking just like her, who reveals that she is Salome, Taramis's Taramis' twin, and the born witch who stems from the curse on the royal family. She has let in an unscrupulous mercenary captain Constantius, and with his aid, seized the city and exiled Taramis to the dungeon.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The Witches of Khauran; they are born from some ancient curse that bedevils the royal family, marked by a red crescent-moon shape on their chests. [[OneGenderRace Always female]], they have an instinctive knack for foul sorcery and dark rites, compounded by a total [[LackOfEmpathy lack of empathy]] and intense [[TheHedonist hedonistic]] urges. This is why the royal family kills the the Witches at birth, for if one were to live, she would be compelled to usurp control of Khauran and would subsequently ruin it in pursuit of her own endless desires for selfish indulgence and perverse pleasures.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The Witches of Khauran; they are born from some ancient curse that bedevils the royal family, marked by a red crescent-moon shape on their chests. [[OneGenderRace Always female]], they have an instinctive knack for foul sorcery and dark rites, compounded by a total [[LackOfEmpathy lack of empathy]] and intense [[TheHedonist hedonistic]] urges. This is why the royal family kills the the Witches at birth, for if one were to live, she would be compelled to usurp control of Khauran and would subsequently ruin it in pursuit of her own endless desires for selfish indulgence and perverse pleasures.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The Witches of Khauran; they are born from some ancient curse that bedevils the royal family, marked by a red crescent-moon shape on their chests. [[OneGenderRace Always female]], they have an instinctive knack for foul sorcery and dark rites, compounded by a total [[LackOfEmpathy lack of empathy empathy]] and intense hedonistic [[TheHedonist hedonistic]] urges. This is why the royal family kills the the Witches at birth, for if one were to live, she would be compelled to usurp control of Khauran and would subsequently ruin it in pursuit of her own endless desires for selfish indulgence and perverse pleasures.
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* {{Ungrateful B|astard}}itch: Valerius, who's nowhere as strong nor experienced as Conan risks his life several times and manages to rescue his beloved queen Taramis and kill Salome. Taramis doesn't even ''look'' at him when everything's over and has eyes only for Conan.
** Though Conan recommends Valerius as the new chief of the guard.
** Though Conan recommends Valerius as the new chief of the guard.
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