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* ''Fanfic/OniGaShikuSeries'': Back when he was a normal civilian, [[spoiler:Akatani]] attempted to pass the physical portion of the [[HeroSchool UA entrance exams]]... without a quirk or any physical training whatsoever. Needless to say, he failed spectacularly. By contrast, Izuku, who also doesn't have a quirk but has been training for years passes with flying colours, further highlighting how stupid [[spoiler:Akatani]] was at the time.
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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysVisible'': When Galbraith miraculously arrives at doctor Baselard's apartment, he takes no action to capture him, instead watching him escape right before his eyes.
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* ''Fanfic/StarscreamAndTheDrones'': Megatron holds a meeting to tell Starscream he's getting replaced by a group of drones that do everything they're told, but doesn't actually do anything to prevent Starscream from accessing and ordering them around. Consequently, Starscream storms out of the meeting, discovers the drones have been left unattended and will obey him, and orders the drones to destroy themselves before the day is out.
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* ''Fanfic/TheUltimateEvil'': In the Hollowlands Penitentiary chapter, when Valerie hears that a prisoner has landed himself in solitary confinement, she assumes without any proof that it's the undercover Jackie and rushes to meet him, ending up berating herself for getting herself in a locked cell with Shendu.

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* ''Fanfic/TheUltimateEvil'': In the Hollowlands Penitentiary chapter, when When Jackie's undercover in Hollowland's penitentiary, Valerie tries to ask about him without knowing his false name. When she hears that a prisoner one of the newest prisoners has landed himself in solitary confinement, she assumes without any proof that it's the undercover Jackie and rushes to meet him, ending him. She ends up berating herself for getting after she finds herself in a locked cell with Shendu.
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* ''Fanfic/TheOldLifeAliveAgain'': Both Xemnas and Xigbar are victim to this. When Xigbar tells Xemnas that Roxas and Xion's love was getting in the way of the Organization's goal, Xemnas didn't bother to ask Roxas and Xion about their side of the story. When Xigbar tells Xemnas and Saix about his plan to kill Xion, he doesn't bother to make sure no one listens to them, allowing Axel to learn about his plan. The result: Roxas and Xion predictably run away from the Organization.
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* In [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12548804/1/Lord-Hermione Lord Hermione?]] Harry got permission from the Dursleys to stay with Hermione over the summer. One day, Hermione’s parents come home from work to find Harry gone and Hermione saying that his godfather took him against his will. Instead of doing the sensible thing, they, without even bothering to check with the Dursleys, decide that Sirius had joint custody of Harry, and that Harry and Hermione lied to arrange for Harry to stay with them. Never mind that most child abduction cases are carried out by people with a connection to the child. Of course, the Grangers are attacked by Death Eaters that night, but absent the magical elements, and if the Dursleys had actually been suitable guardians, Hermione’s parents would have found themselves in deep trouble for their assumptions.
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* Rose Potter, from ''The Girl Who Lived'' series, tends to get thrown the IdiotBall often, due to having [[GodModeSue special powers that Canon Harry lacked]], which would allow her to solve the plot before it even got started, unless she did something [[WhatAnIdiot entirely stupid]]. For example, in Rose Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Rose can control her connection with Voldemort, and knows Occlumency and Legilimency. Thus, she knows that the image of Sirius Voldemort sent her was fake. What does she do? Why, exactly what Canon!Harry did, except she did it in full knowledge that it was a trap. Did she tell Dumbledore, and with him, the Order of the Phoenix? No. Did she, knowing that her going there with a few friends was exactly what Voldemort wanted, and with no reason to take the bait, did she do nothing and inform the adults who wouldn't be playing into Voldemort's hands by walking into his trap? No. She, although she has no reason to, does exactly what Voldemort wants her to do, and is considered smart for doing so.

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* Rose Potter, from ''The Girl Who Lived'' series, tends to get thrown the IdiotBall often, due to having [[GodModeSue special powers that Canon Harry lacked]], which would allow her to solve the plot before it even got started, unless she did something [[WhatAnIdiot entirely stupid]].stupid. For example, in Rose Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Rose can control her connection with Voldemort, and knows Occlumency and Legilimency. Thus, she knows that the image of Sirius Voldemort sent her was fake. What does she do? Why, exactly what Canon!Harry did, except she did it in full knowledge that it was a trap. Did she tell Dumbledore, and with him, the Order of the Phoenix? No. Did she, knowing that her going there with a few friends was exactly what Voldemort wanted, and with no reason to take the bait, did she do nothing and inform the adults who wouldn't be playing into Voldemort's hands by walking into his trap? No. She, although she has no reason to, does exactly what Voldemort wants her to do, and is considered smart for doing so.
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* ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'': Enoby, despite being told that Draco and Harry were a couple long before Draco and her had "you-know-what", insists on believing that Draco cheated on her. About a paragraph later, she has a "brainstorm" and wonders if Draco and Harry dated ''before'' she started dating Draco. Whether this is genuine stupidity on Enoby's part, or the result of Tara forgetting what she just wrote, we may never know.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1633756 For The Want of a Nail]] provides two seperate examples:

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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1633756 For The Want of a Nail]] ''Fanfic/ForTheWantOfANailSeries'' provides two seperate examples:
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* The entire plot of [[Fanfic/ProjectChimeraTheAtticHypothesis The Attic Hypothesis]] was set in motion by an idiot ball rolling down the metaphorical hill of scientific advancement.

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* ''Fanfic/AbraxasHrodvitnon'': [[Characters/AbraxasHrodvitnonHumans Mark Russell]] handles it in Chapter 8 during [[TwoBeingsOneBody San and Vivienne Graham]]'s rebirth into their second hybrid form. He, the same animal expert who convinced Monarch in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' that firing on an agitated Godzilla was tantamount to suicide compared to standing down; asks why the hell Monarch aren't fencing the hybrid with a containment field to be on the safe side, prompting Mariko to remind him and the audience that Viv and San have already been fenced in by one of those for six months and doing so again here and now would likely set off Vivienne's PTSD with destructive consequences.


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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1633756 For The Want of a Nail]] provides two seperate examples:
** In ''Fanfic/DekuIThinkHesSomePro'', All Might spends the entirety of the USJ attack firmly grasped onto this, dismissing the very real threat the villains pose to everyone else besides [[UnSorcerer Izuku]] and assuming they will hold back due to them being kids until Shigaraki explcitly spelling out they're here to kill as many aspiring heroes as they can, to his shock.
** ''Fanfic/ViridianTheGreenGuide'', meanwhile, has Izuku's [[DeathSeeker passively suicidal tendancies]] lead to him picking this up whilst [[spoiler: fighting a Trigger user with a crab Quirk, running in up close to hit him with his pipes rather than using his slingshot.]]
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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many {{idiot ball}}s as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a ''desert''. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.

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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many {{idiot ball}}s as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a ''desert''. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because (because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), him), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.
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* In ''[[{{Fanfic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]'', Rainbow Dash trusts [[spoiler: Gilda]] who wants to talk with her about something. Considering the last time Rainbow saw her was after Pinkie Pie's party, [[{{BlatantLies}} there's absolutely no way she would do Rainbow any harm]].

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* In the ''{{Series/Firefly}}[=/=]Series/DoctorWho'' crossover fanfic ''Fanfic/TheManWithNoName'', some of the characters are hunting Reavers. When they stop, thinking they've heard something, [[ItsProbablyNothing the Doctor keeps going anyway]], walking smack right into one. Even the Doctor admits it was blindingly stupid.

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* From ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4991314/1/Escape-from-the-Hokage-s-Hat Escape from the Hokage's Hat]]'', we have the advisers council (Homura and Koharu) and the Daimyo. See the council want to banish Naruto and have convinced the Daimyo to agree both saying it's part of a TheNeedsOfTheMany type situaton. This is naturally pointed out as stupid since Konoha is recovering from an invasion and kicking out the PersonOfMassDestruction who can either protect the village or act as a deterrent to any attacks is just asking for trouble.
* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many [[IdiotBall idiot balls]] as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a ''desert''. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.

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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many [[IdiotBall idiot balls]] {{idiot ball}}s as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a ''desert''. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.



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* In ''Fanfic/TheChroniclesOfTheFellowship'', Peter tells Susan to shoot the Bal-rog as it confronts Gandalf, with Susan pointing out that a giant flaming demon is unlikely to be bothered by a wooden arrow.
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* In ''Ash's ''New Look Series'' the titular character thought a place named "Salon Rocket" was a bit suspicious and went in to investigate. He then sees Team Rocket in a PaperThinDisguise and asks if they met before. This eventually resulted in Ash getting a makeover by them.

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* In ''Ash's ''New Look Series'' ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6850479/1/Ash-s-New-Look-Salon-Rock%C3%A9t Ash's New Look]]'' the titular character thought a place named "Salon Rocket" was a bit suspicious and went in to investigate. He then sees Team Rocket in a PaperThinDisguise and asks if they met before. This eventually resulted in Ash getting a makeover by them.
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* The cast of ''Fanfic/HogwartsExposed'' grab the IdiotBall frequently, but special mention has to go to the scene in which Harry, Hermione and the entire Hogwarts faculty get outwitted by Crabbe and Goyle.

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* In ''[[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Ash's]] [[FanFic/NewLookSeries New Look]]'' the titular character thought a place named "Salon Rocket" was a bit suspicious and went in to investigate. He then sees Team Rocket in a PaperThinDisguise and asks if they met before. This eventually resulted in Ash getting a makeover by them.

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* {{Lampshaded}} in "Fanfic/PastContinuous". Eleya remarks in her InternalMonologue that the coalition could have avoided a lot of trouble by basing the effort to retake Deep Space 9 out of a nearby Bajoran military base instead of the middle of a major city.

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* In the fanfic ''IProopedMyPants'' all of the characters get this at some point. After their mansion burns down, the Zharjeks all take minimum wage jobs at a hotel, even though they are still supermodels. And when the Mafia kidnaps [[spoiler:Tiffany]], they let her use her phone as long as she doesn't use it to call the police.

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* In the ''Series/{{Angel}}'' fic “[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1215322/1/Impact Impact]]”, when Wolfram & Hart blackmail a time-manipulating demon into trying to kill Angel by abducting his offspring, after his actions cause Cordelia to swap places with her past self from two years ago, Cordelia asks the demon why he didn’t just go back in time a few hours to stop Wolfram & Hart abducting his child in the first place. Presented with that option, the demon awkwardly admits that he just never thought of it that way because he isn’t used to using his powers to manipulate history in that manner.

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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many [[IdiotBall idiot balls]] as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a desert. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.

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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many [[IdiotBall idiot balls]] as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a desert. ''desert''. That he spends the entire mission being insubordinate to his superior ([[YourCheatingHeart because two years prior he learned she was cheating on him]]), even after she explains she could have him court-martialed for disobeying orders, further exasperates things.things.
** Naruto's handling of the mission is that rather than follow Anko's plan of sneaking in, planting explosives, and sneaking out before blowing the place sky high, he summons Manda and lets him eat everyone in the reservoir in exchange for destroying the place. As Anko furiously berates him, the forces at the reservoir had plenty of time to send out a distress message including that they were being attacked by a giant snake. Suna knows full well that only three people in the world can summon Manda, meaning Naruto completely blew their cover and all of Suna knows both who attacked their base and where they are, rather than the pair having at least a few hours head start.




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* Hiashi Hyuuga causes Naruto to become elected Fifth Hokage in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8162488/1/The-Hat-Hangs-Heavy The Hat Hangs Heavy]]'' because he turns the whole thing into a popularity contest between Naruto and himself rather than just pointing out Naruto's relative incompetence and inexperience, something Jiraiya lampshades. Afterwards, Hiashi decides the only way to save Konoha is to gain some level of control over Naruto. Rather than trying to mentor the boy, he gives Naruto a SadisticChoice that he either marries Hinata or she's relegated to the Branch Clan and branded with the Caged Bird Seal. While Naruto agrees to marry Hinata, his opinion of Hiashi deteriorates from mild dislike to outright hatred.


* You wanna know how bad the CaptainObviousReveal is in ''FanFic/TheEndOfEnds''? In Beast Boy's letter to the Titans, he lists his true name: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Garfield]] ''Logan''. And no one, not even Beast Boy's ''former'' group, The Doom Patrol, managed to figure out Count ''Logan'''s true identity.

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* You wanna know how bad the CaptainObviousReveal is in ''FanFic/TheEndOfEnds''? In Beast Boy's letter to the Titans, he lists his true name: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler [[FirstEpisodeTwist Garfield]] ''Logan''. And no one, not even Beast Boy's ''former'' group, The Doom Patrol, managed to figure out Count ''Logan'''s true identity.

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* PlayedForLaughs in ''FanFic/ChildOfTheStorm.'' Harry kvetches to Carol about having to carry [[BigEater Ron]] up eight flights of stairs after the latter falls into a food coma. Not only is he [[ForgotAboutHisPowers both a telekinetic and a wizard who knows how to do a basic Levitation Charm,]] he also has a pair of highly intelligent, pony-sized wolves with him who would probably be willing to carry Ron on their back.
** Snape grabs it firmly in the sequel, when he, as per canon, makes a snarky remark about Harry [[spoiler: supposedly entering his name in the Goblet of Fire]]. Pissing off a demigod is stupid enough. Doing so when said demigod currently has a HairTriggerTemper thanks to having just recently been put through a TraumaCongaLine? He's ''lucky'' that all Harry did was to be rude back.

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* PlayedForLaughs in ''FanFic/ChildOfTheStorm.'' Harry kvetches to Carol about having to carry [[BigEater Ron]] up eight flights of stairs after the latter falls into a food coma. Not only is he [[ForgotAboutHisPowers both a telekinetic and a wizard who knows how to do a basic Levitation Charm,]] he also has a pair of highly intelligent, pony-sized wolves with him who would probably be willing to carry Ron on their back.
** Snape grabs it firmly in the sequel, when he, as per canon, makes a snarky remark about Harry [[spoiler: supposedly entering his name in the Goblet of Fire]]. Pissing off a demigod is stupid enough. Doing so when said demigod currently has a HairTriggerTemper thanks to having just recently been put through a TraumaCongaLine? He's ''lucky'' that all Harry did was to be rude back.
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* Naruto in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5012103/1/That-Look That Look]]'' at times seems to juggle as many [[IdiotBall idiot balls]] as he can find. Perhaps the worst is that he required several explanations to understand why a reservoir that supplies over 70% of Suna's water would be a good military target, despite knowing full well that Suna is in the middle of a desert.

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* ''Fanfic/AllGuardsmenParty'': Nubby takes firm possession of this during the ''Discount Spaceship'' chapter - it starts with buying the hunk of junk that is the Occurrence Border and escalates from there.
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** Snape grabs it firmly in the sequel, when he, as per canon, makes a snarky remark about Harry [[spoiler: supposedly entering his name in the Goblet of Fire]]. Pissing off a demigod is stupid enough. Doing so when said demigod currently has a HairTriggerTemper thanks to having just recently been put through a TraumaCongaLine? He's ''lucky'' that all Harry did was to be rude back.
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** The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Voldemort having Harry, who has his wand and nothing else, surrounded by Death Eaters who are ordered to shoot Harry if he does anything. So does Voldemort take away his wand so Harry would be completely helpless? No. He instead acts even stupider than his book counterpart and lets Harry keep his wand.]]

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** The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Voldemort having Harry, who has his wand and nothing else, surrounded by Death Eaters who are ordered to shoot Harry if he does anything. So does Voldemort take away his wand so Harry would be completely helpless? No. He instead acts even stupider than his book counterpart and lets Harry keep his wand.]]wand allowing him to kill all the Death Eaters and mindwipe Voldemort.]] For such a smart guy he sure gripped the ball hard in his final moments.

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