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* Heathcliff giving Godfree a verbal smack down when the later tries to spread untrue rumors about Kirita is this and a Moment of Awesome.
* Shortly afterwards Heathcliff listening to Juho's worries counts as well.
!!Chapter 12
* Shortly afterwards Heathcliff listening to Juho's worries counts as well.
!!Chapter 12
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* Heathcliff giving Godfree a verbal smack down when the later latter tries to spread untrue rumors about Kirita is this and a Moment of Awesome.
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!!Chapter 16Thirteen
* Klein sends a message to Kirita, telling her that he has heard many versions of what happened in the first boss battle - and wants to hear Kirita's version, because he is sure that, whatever happened there, she has not done what most players are accusing her of. Kirita becomes happy when learning she has more friends than she believed.
!!Chapter Sixteen
* Klein sends a message to Kirita, telling her that he has heard many versions of what happened in the first boss battle - and wants to hear Kirita's version, because he is sure that, whatever happened there, she has not done what most players are accusing her of. Kirita becomes happy when learning she has more friends than she believed.
!!Chapter Sixteen
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** She even wonders what else he could make.
** Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair of gloves.
* Kirita receiving a pair of fingerless gloves that Akio made for her with his sewing skill.
** She gets giddy and excited like an adorable/normal teenage girl.
** She even wonders what else he could make.
** Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair of gloves.
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* Kirita receiving a pair of fingerless gloves that Akio made for her with his sewing skill. \n** She gets giddy and excited like an adorable/normal teenage girl.
** She evengirl, and wonders what else he could make.
** Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair ofgloves. gloves.
!!Chapter Twenty-Two
* It's the first ChristmasEpisode. And it shows.
** Argo tells Kirita where she can find a place to take a break away from fighting and idiot players. She takes Akio with her.
** Akio and Kirita open up about their real lives.
** The two of them separately got Leonardo to craft things for each other: Akio a bow and arrows so she can retake the use of that weapon, Kirita a set of heavy wrist and ankle weights so he can train better.
** Then, Akio brings out one last present: a red scarf for Kirita. She loves it immediately, and he helps her put it on. It becomes obvious that, just in one month, the two have become more than just friends.
!!Chapter Twenty-Three
* More Christmas love, as other characters meet and exchange presents between themselves.
** Caynz and Yolko. After remembering how they met when they were kids (she found him crying in front of his mother's tomb, and she held him), she tells him that she is sure they would have ended up together anyway, he gives her flowers and a weapon and she gives him new armor.
** Kikuchiyo dresses up as Santa Claus so he can give the orphanage kids a surprise. Argo and Sasha give presents to each other.
** The Conquerors enjoying Christmas together. Particularly wonderful is to see [=XaXa=] and Slade giving presents to each other.
** Kirita and Akio playing in the snow and making snowmen.
** Klein trying to cheer Grimlock during the Golden Apple[=/=]Fuurinkazan joint celebration.
* Kirita and Akio agreeing that, yes, [[FireForgedFriends after everything they have gone through, they are friends]], and agreeing to help each other to get over their issues.
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[[folder:Story Arc Four: Forging Connections]]
!!Chapter Twenty-Five
* Little Kazuta reaching out for Kayaba, and him holding her in his arms. It actually makes TheStoic smile and accept that, maybe, he could be her older brother.
* Hideyoshi telling to Kayaba that he really should take the time to meet Kirita.
* Kirita receiving a pair of fingerless gloves that Akio made for her with his sewing skill.
** She even
** Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair of
!!Chapter Twenty-Two
* It's the first ChristmasEpisode. And it shows.
** Argo tells Kirita where she can find a place to take a break away from fighting and idiot players. She takes Akio with her.
** Akio and Kirita open up about their real lives.
** The two of them separately got Leonardo to craft things for each other: Akio a bow and arrows so she can retake the use of that weapon, Kirita a set of heavy wrist and ankle weights so he can train better.
** Then, Akio brings out one last present: a red scarf for Kirita. She loves it immediately, and he helps her put it on. It becomes obvious that, just in one month, the two have become more than just friends.
!!Chapter Twenty-Three
* More Christmas love, as other characters meet and exchange presents between themselves.
** Caynz and Yolko. After remembering how they met when they were kids (she found him crying in front of his mother's tomb, and she held him), she tells him that she is sure they would have ended up together anyway, he gives her flowers and a weapon and she gives him new armor.
** Kikuchiyo dresses up as Santa Claus so he can give the orphanage kids a surprise. Argo and Sasha give presents to each other.
** The Conquerors enjoying Christmas together. Particularly wonderful is to see [=XaXa=] and Slade giving presents to each other.
** Kirita and Akio playing in the snow and making snowmen.
** Klein trying to cheer Grimlock during the Golden Apple[=/=]Fuurinkazan joint celebration.
* Kirita and Akio agreeing that, yes, [[FireForgedFriends after everything they have gone through, they are friends]], and agreeing to help each other to get over their issues.
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[[folder:Story Arc Four: Forging Connections]]
!!Chapter Twenty-Five
* Little Kazuta reaching out for Kayaba, and him holding her in his arms. It actually makes TheStoic smile and accept that, maybe, he could be her older brother.
* Hideyoshi telling to Kayaba that he really should take the time to meet Kirita.
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*Kirita telling Akio how he's a good adjustment that she made when she made changes to her traveling plans.
!!Chapter 16
*Delano easing Ryota's nerves of not being the 'hero' on the field by talking to him casually.
*Akio choosing the sewing skill just to be more helpful to Kirita
*Kirita receiving a pair of fingerless gloves that Akio made for her with his sewing skill.
**She gets giddy and excited like an adorable/normal teenage girl.
**She even wonders what else he could make.
**Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair of gloves.
*Kirita telling Akio how he's a good adjustment that she made when she made changes to her traveling plans.
!!Chapter 16
*Delano easing Ryota's nerves of not being the 'hero' on the field by talking to him casually.
*Akio choosing the sewing skill just to be more helpful to Kirita
*Kirita receiving a pair of fingerless gloves that Akio made for her with his sewing skill.
**She gets giddy and excited like an adorable/normal teenage girl.
**She even wonders what else he could make.
**Akio smiles seeing a cute side of Kirita he's never seen before. All it took was a pair of gloves.
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** Heathcliff giving Godfree a verbal smack down when the later tries to spread untrue rumors about Kirita is this and a Moment of Awesome.
** Shortly afterwards Heathcliff listening to Juho's worries counts as well.
** Shortly afterwards Heathcliff listening to Juho's worries counts as well.
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Shortly afterwards Heathcliff listening to Juho's worries counts as well.
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** Kirita telling Akio that she does not want him to come with her because she thinks it will cause problems for him.
** [[spoiler:After Kirita is made a 'Beater,' he tells her that he wants to travel with her despite any problems they may face together.]]
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** [[spoiler:After Kirita is made a 'Beater,' he tells her that he wants to travel with her despite any problems they may face together.]]
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!!Chapter One
*Chapter 8: Kayaba Akihiko helping Kirigaya Midori adopt Kazuta.
!!Chapter Two
* Akio following Kazuta's advice and improving his life.
!!Chapter Three
* Kazuta wishing Suguha luck in her kendo practice. Even though their relationship was not exactly a great one at this point, Kazuta still cared enough about her younger step-sister to wish her luck before entering Sword Art Online.
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!!Chapter Four
* Similar to canon, Kirita tries to convince Klein to travel with her.
!!Chapter Five
* Gorobei making it clear that he wants to make sure both him and his sworn brother Kikuchiyo survive the Death Game.
* Delano saving Johnny Black's life and building a grave for the other players that died.
* Even though [[spoiler:Coper attempted to kill her,]] Kirita attempted to warn him about the danger. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, she is still unsuccessful.]]
* Kirita [[spoiler:building Coper a grave.]]
!!Chapter Six
* Kirita apologizes to Argo for threatening him and Argo admitting he was partly at fault too.
!!Chapter Seven
* Kirita apologizes to Argo again about threatening him, and he tells her not to worry about it.
* Juho and Michiko's relationship is a mixture of this and a tearjerker.
!!Chapter Eight
* Kirito/Kirita's interactions with Akio during this chapter have quite a bit of this, especially towards the end which showcases their character development. The previous chapters have been building towards these moments between these two characters and it shows.
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!!Chapter One
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!!Chapter Two
* Akio following Kazuta's advice and improving his life.
!!Chapter Three
* Kazuta wishing Suguha luck in her kendo practice. Even though their relationship was not exactly a great one at this point, Kazuta still cared enough about her younger step-sister to wish her luck before entering Sword Art Online.
[[folder:Story Arc Two: Welcome to the Death Game]]
!!Chapter Four
* Similar to canon, Kirita tries to convince Klein to travel with her.
!!Chapter Five
* Gorobei making it clear that he wants to make sure both him and his sworn brother Kikuchiyo survive the Death Game.
* Delano saving Johnny Black's life and building a grave for the other players that died.
* Even though [[spoiler:Coper attempted to kill her,]] Kirita attempted to warn him about the danger. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, she is still unsuccessful.]]
* Kirita [[spoiler:building Coper a grave.]]
!!Chapter Six
* Kirita apologizes to Argo for threatening him and Argo admitting he was partly at fault too.
!!Chapter Seven
* Kirita apologizes to Argo again about threatening him, and he tells her not to worry about it.
* Juho and Michiko's relationship is a mixture of this and a tearjerker.
!!Chapter Eight
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* After the defeat of the first boss battle and the [[spoiler:death of Diabel]] Agil's group and Akio [[spoiler:defend Kirita from Kira's group and some of the other supporters they gathered.]]
* Kirita accepting Akio's friend request.
* After the defeat of the first boss battle and the [[spoiler:death of Diabel]] Agil's group and Akio [[spoiler:defend Kirita from Kira's group and some of the other supporters they gathered.]]
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* Chapter8, when Kirito and 8: Kirito/Kirita's interactions with Akio first during this chapter have dinner together, after Kirito apologizes for hitting him. quite a bit of this, especially towards the end which showcases their character development. The previous chapters have been building towards this moment these moments between these two characters and it shows.shows.
** Kirita/Kirita apologizing to Akio after punching him.
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