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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hVpA_k5pCU&feature=youtu.be Heather performs the]] [[https://krazykrow.deviantart.com/art/Spinnymini-By-Retr8bit-582146620 ice bucket challenge.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hVpA_k5pCU&feature=youtu.be [[https://kokobun.deviantart.com/art/Spinnerette-mecha-maid-als-ice-bucket-challenge-477289587 Heather performs the]] [[https://krazykrow.deviantart.com/art/Spinnymini-By-Retr8bit-582146620 ice bucket challenge.]]
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After editing the link, I found the fan who started it, AND the official answer. Heartwarming as Precision F Strike.
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* [[https://krazykrow.deviantart.com/art/Spinnymini-By-Retr8bit-582146620 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hVpA_k5pCU&feature=youtu.be Heather performs the]] [[https://krazykrow.deviantart.com/art/Spinnymini-By-Retr8bit-582146620 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BoZMCxrk34 And Greta Gravity returns the challenge]].
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BoZMCxrk34 And Greta Gravity returns the challenge]].
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changed the link to the author's DA page because the old link now points to an unrelated page of the comic.
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/issue-23-the-cure-22 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/issue-23-the-cure-22 [[https://krazykrow.deviantart.com/art/Spinnymini-By-Retr8bit-582146620 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
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--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[TearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]
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--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[TearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]right]]'')[[/note]]
* [[TearJerker Tear Jerking]] as White Heron's death is, her peaceful smile and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/08-09-2013 last words of happiness at the infant that she gave her life rescuing being safe and sound]] do show ''exactly'' why she was a heroine.
* [[TearJerker Tear Jerking]] as White Heron's death is, her peaceful smile and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/08-09-2013 last words of happiness at the infant that she gave her life rescuing being safe and sound]] do show ''exactly'' why she was a heroine.
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--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[tearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]
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--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[tearJerker ''[[TearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]
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-->'''Current Pumpkin Princess''': "I'm not allowed to eat sugar. I have ''diabetes''."
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-->'''Current Pumpkin Princess''': "I'm not allowed to eat sugar. I have ''diabetes''.""
* Every time Heather, despite her general lack of sensibility, still manages to find the ''exact words to say'' to Marilyn.
** [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/04-06-2012 To a heartbroken Mecha Maid]] (because Heather ran out right after her AnguishedDeclarationOfLove):
--->'''Heather: '''How the hell am I supposed to know what to do? You just drop that... that ''bombshell'' on me, and expect me to know everything! Well, I don't! I... I'm not as brave as I pretend to be. No one has ever told me they were in love with me before, Marilyn. No one.
** When Mecha Maid is telling her that she considers White Heron her adoptive mother because Heron [[HeroicSacrifice gave her life]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/08-14-2013 rescuying an infant Marilyn]]:
--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[tearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]
* Every time Heather, despite her general lack of sensibility, still manages to find the ''exact words to say'' to Marilyn.
** [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/04-06-2012 To a heartbroken Mecha Maid]] (because Heather ran out right after her AnguishedDeclarationOfLove):
--->'''Heather: '''How the hell am I supposed to know what to do? You just drop that... that ''bombshell'' on me, and expect me to know everything! Well, I don't! I... I'm not as brave as I pretend to be. No one has ever told me they were in love with me before, Marilyn. No one.
** When Mecha Maid is telling her that she considers White Heron her adoptive mother because Heron [[HeroicSacrifice gave her life]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/08-14-2013 rescuying an infant Marilyn]]:
--->'''Heather: '''She must have felt a mother's love for you in her last moments.[[note]](even if this particular example, being in the middle of a heated argument, doesn't elicit a reaction from Mecha Maid, we've just seen in the previous page that ''[[tearJerker Heather was right]]'')[[/note]]
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* The Werewolf of London, Ontario gets a [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2011/07/11/07112011/ farewell kiss]].
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* The Werewolf of London, Ontario gets a [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2011/07/11/07112011/ com/comic/07-11-2011 farewell kiss]].
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* [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=346 here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=346 com/comic/08-17-2012 here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=416 "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=416 com/comic/02-08-2013 "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 com/comic/11-21-2012 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.
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* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]
* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=601 com/comic/issue-23-the-cure-22 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 com/comic/09-24-2014 only three words for her.]]
* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.
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* Despite the Tearjerker moment of [[spoiler: Marilyn's stem cell treatment being ineffective,]] the arc still ends on a hopeful shot of [[spoiler: Dr. Singh doubling down on his work, heavily implying he isn't ready to give up on Marilyn's treatment.]]
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* "I know exactly who you are. You're Spinnerette."
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* "I "[[http://www.spinnyverse.com/comic/08-27-2012 I know exactly who you are. You're Spinnerette.Spinnerette]]."
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* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]
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* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]]]
* And so Spinnerette is saved [[spoiler: from being gunned down by her pie-doped father]]... by the current little Pumpkin Princess of Circleville, telling the town that all this violence isn't the home she knows. It also crosses into an AwesomeMoment and BadassBoast when Sarah asks how she could have resisted the drugs in the pies.
-->'''Current Pumpkin Princess''': "I'm not allowed to eat sugar. I have ''diabetes''."
* And so Spinnerette is saved [[spoiler: from being gunned down by her pie-doped father]]... by the current little Pumpkin Princess of Circleville, telling the town that all this violence isn't the home she knows. It also crosses into an AwesomeMoment and BadassBoast when Sarah asks how she could have resisted the drugs in the pies.
-->'''Current Pumpkin Princess''': "I'm not allowed to eat sugar. I have ''diabetes''."
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=601 Heather performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]
* After all the events surrounding Col Glass, including [[spoiler:Mecha Maid going on a suicide mission to take him down, and failing]], Spinny has [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=609 only three words for her.]]
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* Heather performing the ice bucket challenge.
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=601 Heather performing performs the ice bucket challenge.]]
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* [[spoiler:Glass's PetTheDog moment when he discovers that Mecha Maid is crippled as a result of the breeding camps]].
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* [[spoiler:Glass's PetTheDog moment when he discovers that Mecha Maid is crippled as a result of the breeding camps]].camps]].
* Heather performing the ice bucket challenge.
* Heather performing the ice bucket challenge.
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* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
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* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.HatePlague.
* [[spoiler:Glass's PetTheDog moment when he discovers that Mecha Maid is crippled as a result of the breeding camps]].
* [[spoiler:Glass's PetTheDog moment when he discovers that Mecha Maid is crippled as a result of the breeding camps]].
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2013/02/08/02082013/ "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2013/02/08/02082013/ com/index.php?id=416 "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
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* [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ com/index.php?id=346 here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2013/02/08/02082013/ "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]"]]
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
* Infected with a HatePlague, Minerva (well, her far left head, anyways) and The Werewolf get into an argument, and [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/index.php?id=386 almost immediately kiss and make up...]] while both of them are still infected by the HatePlague.
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* "Does this count as a date?" "It most certainly does.""
* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2013/02/08/02082013/ "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
* [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2013/02/08/02082013/ "I'll sit outside as long as you need me to."]]
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* "Does this count as a date?" "It most certainly does."
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* [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]]]
* "I know exactly who you are. You're spinnerette."
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* [[spooiler:Speaking [[spoiler:Speaking of Greta, her PetTheDog moment [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[spooiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] PetTheDog moment [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[spooiler: Speaking [[spooiler:Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* [[spooiler: Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
* [[spooiler: Speaking of Greta, her [[PetTheDog Petting the Dog]] [[http://www.spinnyverse.com/2012/08/17/08172012/ here]] is a nice softener to a week-long string of TearJerker.]]
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* Heather thanking Great Greta at the end of issue 11 and Great Greta responding.
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* "Let's start with a date." "I'd like that.""
* Heather thanking Great at the end of issue 11 and Great responding.
* Heather thanking Great at the end of issue 11 and Great responding.
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* The Werewolf of London, Ontario gets a [[http://www.krakowstudios.com/spinnerette/2011/07/11/07112011/ farewell kiss]].
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* The Werewolf of London, Ontario gets a [[http://www.krakowstudios.com/spinnerette/2011/07/11/07112011/ spinnyverse.com/2011/07/11/07112011/ farewell kiss]].
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* "Thank you, Heather. Thank you for being you."
* "Let's start with a date." "I'd like that."
* "Let's start with a date." "I'd like that."
