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-->"Oi'z jus da [[Franchise/MetalGear Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"\\
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-->"Oi'z jus da [[Franchise/MetalGear [[VideoGame/MetalGear Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"\\
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[TheUsualAdversaries GREEN things happen."]]
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[TheUsualAdversaries GREEN things happen."]]
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* [[spoiler:Anything to do with Zara's many personalities is this preceded by a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.]]
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* [[spoiler:Anything to do with Zara's many personalities is this preceded by a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}}.]]
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-->"Oi'z jus da [[Franchise/MetalGear Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"
-->[[spoiler:WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"\\
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[TheUsualAdversaries GREEN things happen."]]
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[TheUsualAdversaries GREEN things happen."]]
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise Tech]][[AveMachina priest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise Tech]][[AveMachina priest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' ''VideoGame/CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Reading on how the Guardsmen and Marines are seriously treating Michael's house like a battlefield is hilarious. Particularly "Fridge Pass" and "Coffee Plateau".
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* Chapter 33: While cheering Emma up, Michael and Sohm joke about the Michael not being 'Lord General' material. [[GodEmperor Emma's]] [[{{Troll}} response]]? [[spoiler: Officially appoint Michael as the equivalent of a ''Primarch'' (essentially second only to Her in authority), with the Imperium forces [[OhCrap realizing that yes, she can totally do that]].]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Sohm''']]: MyGodWhatHaveIDone?
--> [[spoiler: '''Sohm''']]: MyGodWhatHaveIDone?
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise Tech]] [[AveMachina priest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise Tech]] [[AveMachina Tech]][[AveMachina priest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise AveMachina Techpriest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise AveMachina Techpriest]] Tech]] [[AveMachina priest]] to play ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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-->"Oi'z jus da [[MetalGearSolid [[Franchise/MetalGear Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"
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* First proper meeting with [[spoiler:Batel]] is this, followed immediately after by HighOctaneNightmareFuel.
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* First proper meeting with [[spoiler:Batel]] is this, followed immediately after by HighOctaneNightmareFuel.until it turns scary.
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''FanFic/ToyHammer'' has many, mostly based around shout outs and the introduction of ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' characters to Earth circa 2009:
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise AveMachina Techpriest]] to play ''CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Allowing a [[GodGuise AveMachina Techpriest]] to play ''CounterStrike'' ''VideoGame/{{Counter-Strike}}'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen."]]
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks [[TheUsualAdversaries GREEN things happen."]]
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* "Goddamn Bipolar bipolar Eldar..."
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* Allowing a CargoCult AveMachina Techpriest to play ''CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen."]]-->"Oi'z jus da [[MetalGearSolid Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"
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* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen."]]-->"Oi'z "]]
-->"Oi'z jus da [[MetalGearSolid Big Boss]]. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"
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* Another Omake one (Ordo Vermin): "AAH! Its (rat shit) seeping through my armor weave!" - [[StealthPun Wu]]'[[TheWoobie 'bie]]
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* Another Omake one (Ordo Vermin): "AAH! Its (rat shit) seeping through my armor weave!" - [[StealthPun Wu]]'[[TheWoobie 'bie]]bie]]
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* Another Omake one (Ordo Vermin): "AAH! Its (rat shit) seeping through my armor weave!" - [[StealthPun ]] [[TheWoobie Wu'bie]]
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* Another Omake one (Ordo Vermin): "AAH! Its (rat shit) seeping through my armor weave!" - [[StealthPun ]] [[TheWoobie Wu'bie]]Wu]]'[[TheWoobie 'bie]]
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* [[FanFic/ToyHammer Toy Hammer]] has many, mostly based around shout outs and the introduction of ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' characters to Earth circa 2009:
** Allowing a CargoCult AveMachina Techpriest to play ''CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
** Eldar Howling Banshees + Iron Maiden = CMOF, or subtle TakeThat?
** Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen."]]
** An Eldar [[ColdSniper Ranger]] takes out a pair of daemons with swords. When called out on this, the Ranger shrugs and answers; "Multiclassing."
** This exchange between the main character and the two more powerful psychics in the house.
--> [[ActionSurvivor Michael]]: "Can we all behave like adults here?"
--> [[SexyMentor Zara]]: ''Absolutely not.''
--> [[PhysicalGod Emma]]: "No. I'm still ten years old, remember?"
** Allowing a CargoCult AveMachina Techpriest to play ''CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
** Eldar Howling Banshees + Iron Maiden = CMOF, or subtle TakeThat?
** Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen."]]
** An Eldar [[ColdSniper Ranger]] takes out a pair of daemons with swords. When called out on this, the Ranger shrugs and answers; "Multiclassing."
** This exchange between the main character and the two more powerful psychics in the house.
--> [[ActionSurvivor Michael]]: "Can we all behave like adults here?"
--> [[SexyMentor Zara]]: ''Absolutely not.''
--> [[PhysicalGod Emma]]: "No. I'm still ten years old, remember?"
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* Michael's self-introduction:
-->"Alright. So. Introductions first, along with whoever is your command squad. I'm Michael, I own this house and can crush you with a tank."\\
Thinking for a moment, I decided to add: "Repeatedly, if necessary. Or with something heavier."
* Allowing a CargoCult AveMachina Techpriest to play ''CounterStrike'' counts as a CMOF just by the ''concept'' of it.
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* Alice getting the freak out of her system and most of Chapter 12; CornerOfWoe, Vincent's {{Squee}} problems, [[TheUnpronounceable Shas'ui Fi'rios Yon'anuk Eldi'myr]] (AKA Sergeant Talon) and this is within the first third of the chapter.
* Denying Chaplain Morteus his trophy near the end of said chapter.
--> "Why does 'with all due respect' sound like 'frak you', Vincent?"
* [[spoiler:Anything to do with Zara's many personalities is this preceded by a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.]]
* Also, from a SpinOff Omake: "[[ShoutOut You won't like me when I'm angry.]] [[TheIncredibleHulk Bad Things happen.]] [[GoddamnOrks GREEN things happen.
** An Eldar [[ColdSniper Ranger]] takes out a pair of daemons
-->[[spoiler: It began to [[ItsRainingMen rain Orks]]]]
---> Also, [[spoiler:ceiling orks watch you torture the main character!]]
* First proper meeting with
* The Tau Fire Warrior getting taught by Madork Gunna how to properly ''WAAAAAAAGH!!''
* "Goddamn Bipolar Eldar..."
* Michael explaining himself in front of Zara and all surviving psykers: After the Slaaneshi cultist keeps turning his words against him, he changes his tactic:
->'''Michael:''' Look, I'll show you what I've been trying to do to her, how about that?\\
'''Rose of Slaanesh:''' Oh, you can't possibly do that while I'm still dressed, dear t--\\
''('''[[MoreDakka LOTS OF DAKKA!]]''')''\\
'''Weirdboyz:''' O_O
* Zara's reaction to Michael calling her [[spoiler:'Dear']]: she slaps him so hard that it sets his cheek on fire!
* The answer when asking an Eldar [[ColdSniper Ranger]] (predominantly a sniper class) why he is fighting by DualWielding swords.
--> "Multiclassing."
* Eldar Howling Banshees + Iron Maiden = CMOF, or subtle TakeThat?
* This exchange between the main character and the two more powerful psychics in the house.
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--> [[SexyMentor Zara]]:
'''[[SexyMentor Zara]]''': ''Absolutely not.
--> [[PhysicalGod Emma]]: "No.
'''[[PhysicalGod Emma]]''': No. I'm still ten years old,
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