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Character's name is Elise, not Elsie
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* Frank's and Elsie's first meeting on the train:
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* Frank's and Elsie's Elise's first meeting on the train:
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--> '''Elsie''': That's a terrible name.
--> '''Frank''': ''(shrugs)'' It's the only one I've got.
--> '''Elsie''': Perhaps we can find you a new one.
* Frank's attempts to invite Elsie to dinner.
--> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
--> '''Frank''': ''(shrugs)'' It's the only one I've got.
--> '''Elsie''': Perhaps we can find you a new one.
* Frank's attempts to invite Elsie to dinner.
--> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
to:
--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': That's a terrible name.
--> '''Frank''':''(shrugs)'' ''[Shrugs]'' It's the only one I've got.
-->'''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Perhaps we can find you a new one.
* Frank's attempts to inviteElsie Elise to dinner.
-->'''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
--> '''Frank''':
-->
* Frank's attempts to invite
-->
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--> '''Elsie''': ''(gives him a look)''
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--> '''Elsie''': ''(gives '''Elise''': ''[Gives him a look)''look]''
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--> '''Elsie''': Women don't like questions.
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Women don't like questions.
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--> '''Elsie''': Too demanding.
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Too demanding.
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--> '''Elsie''': Another question.
--> '''Frank''': ''(thinks for a moment)'' I'm having dinner, if you'd care to join me.
--> '''Elsie''': ''(smiles at him)''
* When Frank sees Elsie in her evening wear.
--> '''Frank''': ''(thinks for a moment)'' I'm having dinner, if you'd care to join me.
--> '''Elsie''': ''(smiles at him)''
* When Frank sees Elsie in her evening wear.
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Another question.
--> '''Frank''':''(thinks ''[Thinks for a moment)'' moment]'' I'm having dinner, if you'd care to join me.
-->'''Elsie''': ''(smiles '''Elise''': ''[Smiles at him)''
him]''
* When Frank seesElsie Elise in her evening wear.
--> '''Frank''':
-->
* When Frank sees
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--> '''Elsie''': ''Gives look''.
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--> '''Elsie''': ''Gives look''.'''Elise''': ''[Gives look]''.
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--> '''Elsie''': Do you mean 'ravishing'?
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Do you mean 'ravishing'?
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--> '''Elsie''': You're ravenous.
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': You're ravenous.
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--> '''Frank''': ''(into the phone)'' Hello? Please help!
--> '''Concierge''': ''(answering phone)'' Buongiorno, signore.
--> '''Frank''': Buongiorno- I, I need help! There are two men trying to break down the door...
--> '''Concierge''': ''(answering phone)'' Buongiorno, signore.
--> '''Frank''': Buongiorno- I, I need help! There are two men trying to break down the door...
to:
--> '''Frank''': ''(into ''[Into the phone)'' phone]'' Hello? Please help!
--> '''Concierge''':''(answering phone)'' ''[Answering phone]'' Buongiorno, signore.
--> '''Frank''':Buongiorno- I, Buongiorno--I, I need help! There are two men trying to break down the door...
--> '''Concierge''':
--> '''Frank''':
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--> ''(The thugs start to shoot out the door lock)''
--> '''Frank''': Ah, I gotta go! ''(Frank drops the phone and exits through the window)''
--> '''Concierge''': Sir? ''(slams down the receiver)'' American!
--> '''Frank''': Ah, I gotta go! ''(Frank drops the phone and exits through the window)''
--> '''Concierge''': Sir? ''(slams down the receiver)'' American!
to:
--> ''(The ''[The thugs start to shoot out the door lock)''
lock]''
--> '''Frank''': Ah, I gotta go!''(Frank ''[Frank drops the phone and exits through the window)''
window]''
--> '''Concierge''': Sir?''(slams ''[Slams down the receiver)'' receiver]'' American!
--> '''Frank''': Ah, I gotta go!
--> '''Concierge''': Sir?
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--> '''Policeman''': *{{Beat}}* ''De nada.''
* Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested. (Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of Jack Sparrow.)
* Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested. (Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of Jack Sparrow.)
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--> '''Policeman''': *{{Beat}}* ''De nada.''
''[{{Beat}}]'' De nada.
* Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested. (Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl JackSparrow.Sparrow]].)
* Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested. (Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl Jack
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--> '''Shaw''': ''(checking new suit in mirror)'' Does it look all right?
--> '''Bodyguard''': ''(nervous)'' Yes. Like always.
--> '''Bodyguard''': ''(nervous)'' Yes. Like always.
to:
--> '''Shaw''': ''(checking ''[Checking new suit in mirror)'' mirror]'' Does it look all right?
--> '''Bodyguard''':''(nervous)'' ''[Nervous]'' Yes. Like always.
--> '''Bodyguard''':
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--> '''Elsie''': Twenty million dollars worth of plastic surgery and that's the face you choose?
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': Twenty million dollars worth of plastic surgery and that's the face you choose?
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--> '''Elsie''': ''(smiles)'' It will do.
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--> '''Elsie''': '''Elise''': ''(smiles)'' It will do.do.
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* Frank's constant use of Spanish instead of Italian is pretty funny in just about every instance.
--> '''Frank''': ''Gracias.''
--> '''Policeman''': *{{Beat}}* ''De nada.''
--> '''Frank''': ''Gracias.''
--> '''Policeman''': *{{Beat}}* ''De nada.''
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* --> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
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* Frank's attempts to invite Elsie to dinner.
--> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
--> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
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''(at their first meeting on the train:)''
-> FRANK: My name's Frank.
-> ELSIE: That's a terrible name.
-> FRANK: ''(shrugs)'' It's the only one I've got.
-> ELSIE: Perhaps we can find you a new one.
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-> ELSIE: Invite me to dinner, Frank?
-> FRANK: What?
-> ELSIE: ''(gives him a look)''
-> FRANK: Would you like to have dinner?
-> ELSIE: Women don't like questions.
-> FRANK: Join me for dinner.
-> ELSIE: Too demanding.
-> FRANK: Join me for dinner?
-> ELSIE: Another question.
-> FRANK: ''(thinks for a moment)'' I'm having dinner, if you'd care to join me.
-> ELSIE: ''(smiles at him)''
-
''(seeing ELSIE in her evening wear:)''
-> FRANK: [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck.]]
-> ELSIE: ''Gives look''.
-> FRANK: You're ravenous.
-> ELSIE: Do you mean 'ravishing'?
-> FRANK: I do.
-> ELSIE: You're ravenous.
-> FRANK: I am.
-
''(as two THUGS are trying to break into FRANK's hotel room:)''
-> FRANK: ''(into the phone)'' Hello? Please help!
-> CONCIERGE: ''(answering phone)'' Buongiorno, signore.
-> FRANK: Buongiorno- I, I need help! There are two men trying to break down the door...
-> CONCIERGE: I see, what kind of problem do you have with the door, sir?
-> FRANK: No, no, no! There are two men with guns trying to break in! Dos hombres, con... con pistolas!
-> CONCIERGE: Your Spanish is excellent, sir.
-> FRANK: Thank you...
-> ''(The THUGS start to shoot out the door lock)''
-> FRANK: Ah, I gotta go! ''(FRANK drops the phone and exits through the window)''
-> CONCIERGE: Sir? ''(slams down the receiver)'' American!
-
Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested.
(Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of Jack Sparrow.)
->
-
''(after FRANK narrowly escapes the two THUGS:)''
-> POLICEMAN: You wish to report a murder.
-> FRANK: Attempted murder.
-> POLICEMAN: That's not so serious.
-> FRANK: Not when you downgrade it from murder. But when you upgrade it from room service, it's quite serious.
-
''(right after SHAW strangles an incompetent minion with a measuring tape:)''
-> SHAW: ''(checking new suit in mirror)'' Does it look all right?
-> BODYGUARD: ''(nervous)'' Yes. Like always.
-> SHAW: What's always?
-> BODYGUARD: Very good.
-> SHAW: Yes, I think it looks all right.
-
(referring to ALEXANDER's stealing millions of dollars from him:)
-> SHAW: You know, Alexander was like a son to me. I loved him. That brilliant, playful, disrespectful young bastard. I even thought that he and I were two of a kind. Oh, I took great pleasure in never knowing what this man would do next. Until one day what he did next didn't give me any pleasure at all.
-
''(at the end, as the two are escaping on a boat:)''
-> ELSIE: Twenty million dollars worth of plastic surgery and that's the face you choose?
-> FRANK: You don't like it?
-> ELSIE: ''(smiles)'' It will do.
-> FRANK: My name's Frank.
-> ELSIE: That's a terrible name.
-> FRANK: ''(shrugs)'' It's the only one I've got.
-> ELSIE: Perhaps we can find you a new one.
-
-> ELSIE: Invite me to dinner, Frank?
-> FRANK: What?
-> ELSIE: ''(gives him a look)''
-> FRANK: Would you like to have dinner?
-> ELSIE: Women don't like questions.
-> FRANK: Join me for dinner.
-> ELSIE: Too demanding.
-> FRANK: Join me for dinner?
-> ELSIE: Another question.
-> FRANK: ''(thinks for a moment)'' I'm having dinner, if you'd care to join me.
-> ELSIE: ''(smiles at him)''
-
''(seeing ELSIE in her evening wear:)''
-> FRANK: [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck.]]
-> ELSIE: ''Gives look''.
-> FRANK: You're ravenous.
-> ELSIE: Do you mean 'ravishing'?
-> FRANK: I do.
-> ELSIE: You're ravenous.
-> FRANK: I am.
-
''(as two THUGS are trying to break into FRANK's hotel room:)''
-> FRANK: ''(into the phone)'' Hello? Please help!
-> CONCIERGE: ''(answering phone)'' Buongiorno, signore.
-> FRANK: Buongiorno- I, I need help! There are two men trying to break down the door...
-> CONCIERGE: I see, what kind of problem do you have with the door, sir?
-> FRANK: No, no, no! There are two men with guns trying to break in! Dos hombres, con... con pistolas!
-> CONCIERGE: Your Spanish is excellent, sir.
-> FRANK: Thank you...
-> ''(The THUGS start to shoot out the door lock)''
-> FRANK: Ah, I gotta go! ''(FRANK drops the phone and exits through the window)''
-> CONCIERGE: Sir? ''(slams down the receiver)'' American!
-
Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested.
(Yes, the whole sequence is ''very'' reminiscent of Jack Sparrow.)
->
-
''(after FRANK narrowly escapes the two THUGS:)''
-> POLICEMAN: You wish to report a murder.
-> FRANK: Attempted murder.
-> POLICEMAN: That's not so serious.
-> FRANK: Not when you downgrade it from murder. But when you upgrade it from room service, it's quite serious.
-
''(right after SHAW strangles an incompetent minion with a measuring tape:)''
-> SHAW: ''(checking new suit in mirror)'' Does it look all right?
-> BODYGUARD: ''(nervous)'' Yes. Like always.
-> SHAW: What's always?
-> BODYGUARD: Very good.
-> SHAW: Yes, I think it looks all right.
-
(referring to ALEXANDER's stealing millions of dollars from him:)
-> SHAW: You know, Alexander was like a son to me. I loved him. That brilliant, playful, disrespectful young bastard. I even thought that he and I were two of a kind. Oh, I took great pleasure in never knowing what this man would do next. Until one day what he did next didn't give me any pleasure at all.
-
''(at the end, as the two are escaping on a boat:)''
-> ELSIE: Twenty million dollars worth of plastic surgery and that's the face you choose?
-> FRANK: You don't like it?
-> ELSIE: ''(smiles)'' It will do.
to:
-> FRANK:
--> '''Frank''': My name's Frank.
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-> ELSIE:
* --> '''Elsie''': Invite me to dinner, Frank?
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''(seeing ELSIE
* When Frank sees Elsie in her evening
-> FRANK:
--> '''Frank''': [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck.]]
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''(as
* When the two
-> FRANK:
--> '''Frank''': ''(into the phone)'' Hello? Please help!
-
* Fleeing his would-be assailants, Frank runs along rooftops, leaps across a gap to an awning, and dashes through a crowded marketplace... in his pajamas. The chase ends when he runs into a policeman (literally), and is promptly arrested.
->
-
''(after FRANK
* After Frank narrowly escapes the two
-> POLICEMAN:
--> '''Policeman''': You wish to report a murder.
-
''(right
* Right after
-> SHAW:
--> '''Shaw''': ''(checking new suit in mirror)'' Does it look all right?
-
(referring
* Shaw referring to
-> SHAW:
--> You know, Alexander was like a son to me. I loved him. That brilliant, playful, disrespectful young bastard. I even thought that he and I were two of a kind. Oh, I took great pleasure in never knowing what this man would do next. Until one day what he did next didn't give me any pleasure at
-
''(at
* At the end, as the two are escaping on a
-> ELSIE:
--> '''Elsie''': Twenty million dollars worth of plastic surgery and that's the face you choose?
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-> FRANK: [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck.]]
-> ELSIE: ''Gives look''.
-> ELSIE: ''Gives look''.