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* When Harry is kidnapped by the Denarians. Shiro comes to his rescue, opening up the negotiations by [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome slicing up 3 mooks, knocking Deidre to the ground and putting a sword to her throat in the space of about 2 seconds]]. Harry's delirious (due to having been kept in a cold storage room for several hours AFTER getting the crap beat out of him) reaction to Shiro's badass entrance? He starts singing the ''{{Underdog}} theme tune''.
-->'''Harry:''' Speed of lightning! Roar of thunder! Fighting all who rob or plunder! Underdog!
-->'''Harry:''' Speed of lightning! Roar of thunder! Fighting all who rob or plunder! Underdog!
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** This requires a little bit of context: Harry has just agreed to let Thomas stay with him a bit. In addition, he has spent most of the book accompanied by Mouse, who at this point is a little puppy who has been riding comfortably in Dresden's coat pocket. The line above comes at the end of a paragraph where Harry is musing that sure, it's going to be a little tighter of a fit in his small apartment with Thomas around, but it won't be so bad, ending his monologue with a note that Mouse won't take up much room. Then Thomas gets home with the groceries.
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---> '''Marcone''': I am under no illusions about your fondness for myself and my business. I regard it as a preventative measure. In my judgment, my buildings are considerable less likely to burn to the ground during one of your bisits if you are disoriented from being treated like a sultan.
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---> '''Marcone''': I am under no illusions about your fondness for myself and my business. I regard it as a preventative measure. In my judgment, my buildings are considerable less likely to burn to the ground during one of your bisits visits if you are disoriented from being treated like a sultan.
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*** The previous quote, a CMOF for Harry, was a result of showing up at one of "Gentleman" Johnny Marcone's businesses, particularly a brothel posing as a health club. Harry was greeted at the door with a Platinum membership package. When pressed for a reason why, Marcone delivers his CMOF:
---> '''Marcone''': I am under no illusions about your fondness for myself and my business. I regard it as a preventative measure. In my judgment, my buildings are considerable less likely to burn to the ground during one of your bisits if you are disoriented from being treated like a sultan.
---> '''Marcone''': I am under no illusions about your fondness for myself and my business. I regard it as a preventative measure. In my judgment, my buildings are considerable less likely to burn to the ground during one of your bisits if you are disoriented from being treated like a sultan.
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* The entropy curse. In the middle of a melee, Harry channels the curse--a very nasty spell that alters probability to cause fatal accidents--away from its intended target and toward a vampire that's currently attacking his side. A moment later, the vamp is crushed. By a twenty-pound frozen turkey falling from the sky. The drumstick tips wrapped in red tinfoil. ''And then the timer dings.''
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* The entropy curse. In the middle of a melee, Harry channels the curse--a curse-- a very nasty spell that alters probability to cause fatal accidents--away accidents-- away from its intended target and toward a vampire that's currently attacking his side. A moment later, the vamp is crushed. By a twenty-pound frozen turkey falling from the sky. The drumstick tips wrapped in red tinfoil. ''And then the timer dings.''
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* Opening line: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault."
* Closing line: "Why did you buy large breed puppy chow"?
* Closing line: "Why did you buy large breed puppy chow"?
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* Opening line: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault."
* Closing line: "Why did you buy large breed puppy chow"?" It even found its way into the RPG as one of Harry's aspects.
* Closing line: "Why did you buy large breed puppy chow"?
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* Closing line: [[HilarityEnsues "Why did you buy large breed puppy chow?"]]
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** But especially "Someone needs to explain to this guy that if you simultaneously carry a katana and wear a trenchcoat, you're a dork..." Hah. {{Take THAT}} [[FinalFantasy7 Sephiroth]]!
*** Sure he's not referring to [[{{Highlander}} Connor McLeod of the Clan McLeod]]? Who was carrying a katana and wearing a trenchcoat 20 years earlier?
*** It's probably a reference to cliche World of Darkness and Shadowrun characters.
** Or when Harry complains that if "Jim B." is his player in real life, he needs to roll better.
** There's a section dealing with the idea that having Harry around could potentially interfere with storylines, and that in that case it might be easier to run the game if you kill him off in the background, with a list of ways this could have happened. Harry, naturally, [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel is not amused]], and his [[http://i54.tinypic.com/2iia90o.png comments on the subject]] are likely to induce slightly nervous, uncomfortable giggling. Crowning Moment of MoodWhiplash?
** "Do not fight Happy Fun Merlin. Back away slowly."
* Harry Complaining about the capricious dick of a GM he's got.
*** Sure he's not referring to [[{{Highlander}} Connor McLeod of the Clan McLeod]]? Who was carrying a katana and wearing a trenchcoat 20 years earlier?
*** It's probably a reference to cliche World of Darkness and Shadowrun characters.
** Or when Harry complains that if "Jim B." is his player in real life, he needs to roll better.
** There's a section dealing with the idea that having Harry around could potentially interfere with storylines, and that in that case it might be easier to run the game if you kill him off in the background, with a list of ways this could have happened. Harry, naturally, [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel is not amused]], and his [[http://i54.tinypic.com/2iia90o.png comments on the subject]] are likely to induce slightly nervous, uncomfortable giggling. Crowning Moment of MoodWhiplash?
** "Do not fight Happy Fun Merlin. Back away slowly."
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-->''I demand 23 retroactive Fate points.''
* "I hate when you reduce my insecurities to game mechanics."
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** Or when Harry complains that if "Jim B." is his player in real life, he needs to roll better.better.
** There's a section dealing with the idea that having Harry around could potentially interfere with storylines, and that in that case it might be easier to run the game if you kill him off in the background, with a list of ways this could have happened. Harry, naturally, [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel is not amused]], and his [[http://i54.tinypic.com/2iia90o.png comments on the subject]] are likely to induce slightly nervous, uncomfortable giggling. Crowning Moment of MoodWhiplash?
** There's a section dealing with the idea that having Harry around could potentially interfere with storylines, and that in that case it might be easier to run the game if you kill him off in the background, with a list of ways this could have happened. Harry, naturally, [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel is not amused]], and his [[http://i54.tinypic.com/2iia90o.png comments on the subject]] are likely to induce slightly nervous, uncomfortable giggling. Crowning Moment of MoodWhiplash?
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* Lara after Harry wards her off with his four years of... fidelity.
-->"Still... A man like you and it's been four ''years''..." She shook her head. "I have enormous personal respect for you, wizard. But that's just... sad."
-->"Still... A man like you and it's been four ''years''..." She shook her head. "I have enormous personal respect for you, wizard. But that's just... sad."
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* This exchange when Thomas admits to calling his sister and threatening her for information.
-->'''Harry''': So you're telling me that I just engaged in blackmail against the ruler of the White Court. By proxy.
-->'''Thomas''': Yeah. You've got some great big brass balls on you to do something like that, Harry.
-->'''Harry''': So you're telling me that I just engaged in blackmail against the ruler of the White Court. By proxy.
-->'''Thomas''': Yeah. You've got some great big brass balls on you to do something like that, Harry.
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* Harry's KlatchianCoffee potion takes him from beat up and worn out to whistling ''Carmen'' and composing a poem about autumn.
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* Harry's reaction to watching Kincaid click off his gun's safety and lay it across his chest before going to sleep.
-->'''Harry:''' How cute. He's got a teddy Glock.
-->'''Harry:''' How cute. He's got a teddy Glock.
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** But especially "Someone needs to explain to this guy that if you simultaneously carry a katana and wear a trenchcoat, you're a dork..." Hah. Take THAT [[FinalFantasy7 Sephiroth]]!
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** But especially "Someone needs to explain to this guy that if you simultaneously carry a katana and wear a trenchcoat, you're a dork..." Hah. Take THAT {{Take THAT}} [[FinalFantasy7 Sephiroth]]!
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** "That's Doctor Smart-ass. I didn't go through 4 years of insult college to be called Mister."
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* Bob's reaction to Molly showing up at Harry's door to shower. Giddy doesn't even begin to cover it.
** Made even funnier in the audiobooks, where JamesMarsters' giddy Bob voice is absolutely hilarious.
** Made even funnier in the audiobooks, where JamesMarsters' giddy Bob voice is absolutely hilarious.
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** [[spoiler:[[StealthPun Stealth]] IncrediblyLamePun?]]
** And again at the end of the scene where Mouse reveals that, as far as he is concerned, Dresden is his {{Familiar}}, not the other way around.
** And again at the end of the scene where Mouse reveals that, as far as he is concerned, Dresden is his {{Familiar}}, not the other way around.
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** [[spoiler:[[StealthPun [[StealthPun Stealth]] IncrediblyLamePun?]]
IncrediblyLamePun?
** And again at the end of the scene whereMouse [[spoiler: Mouse]] reveals that, as far as he is concerned, Dresden is his {{Familiar}}, not the other way around.
** And again at the end of the scene where
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* Lara bitchslapping Harry and then winking at him during her tirade.
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you bitch!"]]
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get "[[{{Alien}} Get away from her you bitch!"]]
her, you]] ''[[ShoutOut bitch!]]''"
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* Harry, upon entering [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast The Deeps]].
-->I'd been in a few caves that were the headquarters for dark magic and those who trafficked in it. None of them had been warm. None of them had been pleasant. And none of them had been professionally decorated.\\
Until now.
-->I'd been in a few caves that were the headquarters for dark magic and those who trafficked in it. None of them had been warm. None of them had been pleasant. And none of them had been professionally decorated.\\
Until now.
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you ''bitch!''"]]
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you ''bitch!''"]]
bitch!"]]
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you bitch!"]]
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* Harry kicks down a door, ready for a fight, and shouts, [[ChewBubblegum "And I'm all out of bubblegum!"]]. Naturally, there's nobody there.
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* Harry kicks down a door, ready for a fight, and shouts, [[ChewBubblegum "And I'm all out of bubblegum!"]]. Naturally, there's nobody there.
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* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you bitch!"]]
* [[{{Alien}} "Get away from her you bitch!"]]
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--> '''Morgan''': I know it's no doughnut...
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--> '''Morgan''': [[ContinuityNod I know it's no doughnut...]]
** Bonus points: Harry asks how the hell Morgan found out about it, and he explains the entire Seelie court have been laughing about it for months.
** Bonus points: Harry asks how the hell Morgan found out about it, and he explains the entire Seelie court have been laughing about it for months.
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* Harry and Michael on certain enemies:
-->'''Harry''': Holy shit. Hellhounds.
-->'''Michael''': Harry, you know I don't like it when you swear.
-->'''Harry''': Oh, sorry. Holy shit. Heckhounds.
-->'''Harry''': Holy shit. Hellhounds.
-->'''Michael''': Harry, you know I don't like it when you swear.
-->'''Harry''': Oh, sorry. Holy shit. Heckhounds.
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-->Harry: Hel-- uh, [[GoshdarnItToHeck heck]] no. I'm billing ''you''.
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-->Harry: Hel-- uh, [[GoshdarnItToHeck [[GoshDangItToHeck heck]] no. I'm billing ''you''.
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* Harry kicks down a door, ready for a fight, and shouts, [[ChewBubblegum "And I'm all out of bubblegum!"]]. Naturally, there's nobody there.
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** Or when Harry complains that "Jim B." needs to roll better.
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* Harry's 'revenge' on Thomas for leaving him out of the loop.
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*** It's probably a reference to cliche World of Darkness and Shadowrun characters.
