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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]], and [[TearJerker tear jerking]] all at once.
** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws]] sells it.
* Ereth's rants in general, due to the clever expletives that he uses. The author really deserves a medal!
** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; "Square root of platypus;" "Fish feather fruitcakes;" and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws]] sells it.
* Ereth's rants in general, due to the clever expletives that he uses. The author really deserves a medal!
** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; "Square root of platypus;" "Fish feather fruitcakes;" and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] death is oddly funny, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]], and [[TearJerker tear jerking]] all at once.
**once. Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws]] paws sells it.
* Ereth's rants in general, due to the clever expletives that he uses. The author really deserves amedal!
**medal! Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; "Square root of platypus;" "Fish feather fruitcakes;" and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
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** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
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** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; "Square root of platypus;" "Fish feather fruitcakes;" and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
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** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corsping}} -- we dare you.
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** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corsping}} {{Corpsing}} -- we dare you.
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* Ereth's rants in general.
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* Ereth's rants in general.general, due to the clever expletives that he uses. The author really deserves a medal!
** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corsping}} -- we dare you.
** Some choice gems include: "Musty moose marmalade"; "Lungfish loogies"; "Baggy buffalo boxers"; and "Creamed caterpillar cheese on chocolate-coated cats!" Try saying any of these aloud without {{Corsping}} -- we dare you.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, {{heartwarming}}, and [[TearJerker tear jerking]] all at once.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, {{heartwarming}}, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]], and [[TearJerker tear jerking]] all at once.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, heartwarming, {{heartwarming}}, and [[TearJerker tear jerking jerking]] all at once.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one jokingly suggests to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one jokingly suggests to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one jokingly suggests to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one jokingly suggests to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.revenge.
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Accidentally Correct Writing is not for jokes that turn out to be real. It's for lack of research in a work that happens to match reality, luckily for the author.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one [[AccidentallyAccurate jokingly suggests]] to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one [[AccidentallyAccurate jokingly suggests]] suggests to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws sells it]].
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** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws paws]] sells it]].it.
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* Mr. Ocax's fabricated claims about porcupines being bloodthirsty killers of mice, and Poppy's later discovery to the contrary.
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* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one [[AccidentallyAccurate jokingly suggests]] to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
* When he overhears a trapper claiming to be "hungry enough to eat a porcupine", Ereth eats his way through an axe handle and fills a snowmobile seat with quills. When the trappers discover his doing one [[AccidentallyAccurate jokingly suggests]] to the first that a porcupine might have heard his earlier remark and taken revenge.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, heartwarming, and tear jerking all at once.
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* Ereth [[spoiler:teaching himself to smile in order to ''mourn'' Poppy's apparent death]] is oddly funny, heartwarming, and tear jerking all at once.once.
** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws sells it]].
* Ereth's rants in general.
* Mr. Ocax's fabricated claims about porcupines being bloodthirsty killers of mice, and Poppy's later discovery to the contrary.
** Brian Floca's illustration of Ereth [[spoiler:drawing the corners of his mouth back with his paws sells it]].
* Ereth's rants in general.
* Mr. Ocax's fabricated claims about porcupines being bloodthirsty killers of mice, and Poppy's later discovery to the contrary.
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