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"[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Sweetie]]," said Susan. "[[LampshadeHanging Apparently, I'm the only one who likes my BrainPal.]]"
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-->“Asshole,” I said.
-->“Bitch,” Jesse said.
-->“Dickwad,” said Thomas.
-->“Fuckhead,” said Harry.
-->“Satan,” said Maggie.
-->“[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Sweetie]],” said Susan. “[[LampshadeHanging Apparently, I’m the only one who likes my BrainPal.]]”
-->“Bitch,” Jesse said.
-->“Dickwad,” said Thomas.
-->“Fuckhead,” said Harry.
-->“Satan,” said Maggie.
-->“[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Sweetie]],” said Susan. “[[LampshadeHanging Apparently, I’m the only one who likes my BrainPal.]]”
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-->“Bitch,”
"Bitch," Jesse
-->“Dickwad,”
"Dickwad," said
-->“Fuckhead,”
"Fuckhead," said
-->“Satan,”
"Satan," said
-->“[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Sweetie]],”
"[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Sweetie]]," said Susan.
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* When John notices a boy he hasn't met yet, Enzo, putting his arm around Zoe's waist, [[BoyfriendBlockingDad he gets his heckles up.]] In response, Jane teases him, calling him by Zoe's nickname of "Ninety-nine Year Old Dad" and wrapping her arms around him.
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* When John notices a boy he hasn't met yet, Enzo, putting his arm around Zoe's waist, [[BoyfriendBlockingDad he gets his heckles hackles up.]] In response, Jane teases him, calling him by Zoe's nickname of "Ninety-nine Year Old "Ninety-Year-Old Dad" and wrapping her arms around him.
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* When John notices a boy he hasn't met yet, Enzo, putting his arm around Zoe's waist, [[OverprotectiveDad he gets his heckles up.]] In response, Jane teases him, calling him by Zoe's nickname of "Ninety-nine Year Old Dad" and wrapping her arms around him.
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* When John notices a boy he hasn't met yet, Enzo, putting his arm around Zoe's waist, [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad he gets his heckles up.]] In response, Jane teases him, calling him by Zoe's nickname of "Ninety-nine Year Old Dad" and wrapping her arms around him.
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** [[spoiler:[[MoodWhiplash Brought down immediately afterwards]] when RealityEnsues and Seaborg is killed in the resulting explosion.]]
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** [[spoiler:[[MoodWhiplash Brought down immediately afterwards]] when RealityEnsues and Seaborg is killed in the resulting explosion.]]
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* At one point, John and Jane are being affectionate, and Zoe notes in the narration that she is always of two minds about that sort of thing, because hey, you're happy that your parents love each other, but at the same time, your parents ''love'' each other, which is just gross.
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* While coming to an arrangement between Earth, the Colonial Union, and the Conclave, Sorvalh declares that what she wants from this, more than anything, is to not have to constantly deal with humans or humanity in general, as this whole debacle has taken more of her time than any other inter-species conflict, and she's sick and tired of the whole thing.
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* When he's about to drop into Earth's atmosphere [[spoiler:to warn them about Equilibrium's impending attack]], Harry briefly wishes that he could visit his homeworld normally for once.
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** When Harry finds the dog, he also finds out that the dog had been chewing on the long-lost Icheloe king's skeleton, causing the king's crown to get stuck to it[[note]]because the crown was programmed to recognize the dead king's [=DNA=], and mistook the dog for its owner[[/note]]. After learning that they need to kill the dog to remove the crown, he comes up with a way to safely kill and revive the dog through a transfusion of [=SmartBlood=], and tells the dog to play dead just before he electrocutes it.
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** When Harry finds the dog, he also finds out that the dog had been chewing on the long-lost Icheloe king's skeleton, causing the king's crown to get stuck to it[[note]]because the crown was programmed to recognize the dead king's [=DNA=], and mistook the dog for its owner[[/note]].the king[[/note]]. After learning that they need to kill the dog to remove the crown, he comes up with a way to safely kill and revive the dog through a transfusion of [=SmartBlood=], and tells the dog to play dead just before he electrocutes it.
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* Harry gets the lame job of looking after an Ambassador's dog during a visit to the Icheloe. The dog gets eaten by a carnivorous plant while peeing on it, and Harry has to let himself be eaten by the same plant in order to rescue it. As it's happening, the gardener that Schmidt has wrangled for more info on the plant admits that he's pretty excited about the whole thing and wishes he could record it.
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* Harry gets the lame job of looking after an Ambassador's dog during a visit to the Icheloe. The dog gets eaten by a carnivorous plant while peeing on it, and Harry has to let himself be eaten by the same plant in order to rescue it. As it's happening, the gardener that Schmidt has wrangled for more info on the plant admits that he's pretty excited about the whole thing (because he's never seen the plant eat something alive before) and wishes he could record it.it.
** When Harry finds the dog, he also finds out that the dog had been chewing on the long-lost Icheloe king's skeleton, causing the king's crown to get stuck to it[[note]]because the crown was programmed to recognize the dead king's [=DNA=], and mistook the dog for its owner[[/note]]. After learning that they need to kill the dog to remove the crown, he comes up with a way to safely kill and revive the dog through a transfusion of [=SmartBlood=], and tells the dog to play dead just before he electrocutes it.
-->"'Play dead'?" Schmidt said, ten seconds later, after examining the dog. "That's just cruel."
** When Harry finds the dog, he also finds out that the dog had been chewing on the long-lost Icheloe king's skeleton, causing the king's crown to get stuck to it[[note]]because the crown was programmed to recognize the dead king's [=DNA=], and mistook the dog for its owner[[/note]]. After learning that they need to kill the dog to remove the crown, he comes up with a way to safely kill and revive the dog through a transfusion of [=SmartBlood=], and tells the dog to play dead just before he electrocutes it.
-->"'Play dead'?" Schmidt said, ten seconds later, after examining the dog. "That's just cruel."
