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** Saniko asks Cookie to talk with Muko since she's been in an HeroicBSOD for weeks. Cookie initially refuses out of guilt and shame. How does Saniko convince her? [[BigSisterInstinct She threatens to sue her for making Muko fight bikers and participate into a match despite her lack of experience.]] Cookie then gladly goes to their apartment to talk with Muko.
* What's Cookie and Muko's first meeting after weeks following Muko's TenMinuteRetirement ? Cookie enters Muko's room and finds her in the middle of [[CaughtWithYourPantsDown masturbating to Internet porn.]] The next page shows their shocked, blushing, horrified faces before Muko kicks Cookie out of her room.
** A bit of attention is that the porn is pixelated for censure.
*Following Muko's return to furry fighting, Saniko steps in and scolds her for returning to such a profession. Muko reminds us that she's a GamerGirl by seeing Saniko as a boss she must defeat, complete with a command box filled with options to defeat her. Thankfully, Muko chooses to talk it out.
** Cookie's awkward expression as she's in the middle of the family drama, especially knowing that she's partially responsible for it.
* Saniko lets Muko be a Combagal, much to Muko's joy. Unfortunately, Muko must learn what it means to be an adult so she's no longer allowed to live in Saniko's apartment. Cue to Muko's smile being frozen while the page is shattered.
** Cookie feeling a bit uncomfortable with Muko's presence now that she moved in with her as now that Muko and her possessions are in her office, she has less space than before.
* How does Part 2 ends. [[TheBusCameBack Kalita returns after being absent since Chapter 5 and only appearing in a flashback in Chapter 7.]] Muko and Cookie think she wants to be a Combagal. No, she's a LoanShark and she wants the 20,000 Moni that Cookie lost.
* What's Cookie and Muko's first meeting after weeks following Muko's TenMinuteRetirement ? Cookie enters Muko's room and finds her in the middle of [[CaughtWithYourPantsDown masturbating to Internet porn.]] The next page shows their shocked, blushing, horrified faces before Muko kicks Cookie out of her room.
** A bit of attention is that the porn is pixelated for censure.
*Following Muko's return to furry fighting, Saniko steps in and scolds her for returning to such a profession. Muko reminds us that she's a GamerGirl by seeing Saniko as a boss she must defeat, complete with a command box filled with options to defeat her. Thankfully, Muko chooses to talk it out.
** Cookie's awkward expression as she's in the middle of the family drama, especially knowing that she's partially responsible for it.
* Saniko lets Muko be a Combagal, much to Muko's joy. Unfortunately, Muko must learn what it means to be an adult so she's no longer allowed to live in Saniko's apartment. Cue to Muko's smile being frozen while the page is shattered.
** Cookie feeling a bit uncomfortable with Muko's presence now that she moved in with her as now that Muko and her possessions are in her office, she has less space than before.
* How does Part 2 ends. [[TheBusCameBack Kalita returns after being absent since Chapter 5 and only appearing in a flashback in Chapter 7.]] Muko and Cookie think she wants to be a Combagal. No, she's a LoanShark and she wants the 20,000 Moni that Cookie lost.
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* The fact that Peki's true [[RedBaron ring name is "Punching Peki".]] She gets the name by curling her cute slippers into oversized fists!
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** The fact that Adelgund used the old "she came onto me" excuse while Peki is giving her a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown is kind of hilarious.
* Nyarai displays her AbnormalLimbRotationRange after breaking her own spine by twisting herself vertically and even doing a finger gun gesture to Adelgund to creep her out.
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* Shun paying Miho for being a HoneyTrap to Adelgund, who refers to her as a [[ButchLesbian "butch"]] as she's being paid.
* Cookie joking about Muko peeking into the showers in order to cheer her up.
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* Due to the WhamEpisode nature of the previous episode involving Nyarai and Peki betraying their teams and forming a new team by tagging with each other to defeat their former partners, the bird commentator decided to flex to show how much of a drama bomb the fight has become.
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* In the first of many serious chapters for the rest of this volume, Muko offers some moments.
** Muko being DistractedByTheSexy at the sight of all of the Cyclone Crushers.
** Muko entering into a lustful bliss when Nyarai and then Peki do a BattleStrip to form Team Firestorm under Shun's control.
*** The fact that Shun listed Muko being a pervert as a way on which Cookie has shamed furry fighting becomes a NotHelpingYourCase when Muko pretty much ignores the events of the chapter to focus on all the fanservice instead.
* Adelgund has her Exe-Cutie-Ves arrest Shun for interrupting the match, only for Shun to reveal that he has the Cyclone Crushers as bodyguards. The Exe-Cutie-Ves show that they KnowWhenToFoldEm by backing out as they know they can't beat professional fighters. Their latest member is much more vocal about about her feelings.
--->Miho:"I did not sign up for fighting!"
** Muko being DistractedByTheSexy at the sight of all of the Cyclone Crushers.
** Muko entering into a lustful bliss when Nyarai and then Peki do a BattleStrip to form Team Firestorm under Shun's control.
*** The fact that Shun listed Muko being a pervert as a way on which Cookie has shamed furry fighting becomes a NotHelpingYourCase when Muko pretty much ignores the events of the chapter to focus on all the fanservice instead.
* Adelgund has her Exe-Cutie-Ves arrest Shun for interrupting the match, only for Shun to reveal that he has the Cyclone Crushers as bodyguards. The Exe-Cutie-Ves show that they KnowWhenToFoldEm by backing out as they know they can't beat professional fighters. Their latest member is much more vocal about about her feelings.
--->Miho:"I did not sign up for fighting!"
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* Muko still being mesmerized by the BattleStrip that Nyarai and Peki did at the end of the previous chapter, not noticing that Adelgund volunteered her to be her replacement partner and that she's gonna fight Nyarai.
Nyarai. The blissful expression turns into an OhCrap when Nyarai pounces on her like a predator hunting her prey.
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** Muko's initial relief upon being slammed down into the mat and realizing it doesn't hurt as much as her fight with Kalita vanishes as soon as Adelgund winks at her. Muko immediately screams in fear.
** Muko being manhandled while Nyarai either enjoys or is bored by the show.
** Muko's desire for cute girls is so great that she crawls to Adelgund's assistants as if she was an addict experiencing withdrawal.
** Just when Adelgund is about to defeat Muko, she kisses her on the cheek. Muko then screams and convulses, breaking free by kicking Adel in the face.
* One of the Exe-Cutie-Ves calls the newest member a "newbie" for not knowing what overselling is. Despite this member having a permanently dumb expression, her thoughts show a vindictive side.
** The Exe-Cutie-Ve being jealous of Muko for the attention she gets from Adelgund, despite the fact that she's getting beat up in the process.
* Muko calling Peki a loli penguin after Adelgund tags her in.
** Muko being manhandled while Nyarai either enjoys or is bored by the show.
** Muko's desire for cute girls is so great that she crawls to Adelgund's assistants as if she was an addict experiencing withdrawal.
** Just when Adelgund is about to defeat Muko, she kisses her on the cheek. Muko then screams and convulses, breaking free by kicking Adel in the face.
* One of the Exe-Cutie-Ves calls the newest member a "newbie" for not knowing what overselling is. Despite this member having a permanently dumb expression, her thoughts show a vindictive side.
** The Exe-Cutie-Ve being jealous of Muko for the attention she gets from Adelgund, despite the fact that she's getting beat up in the process.
* Muko calling Peki a loli penguin after Adelgund tags her in.
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* Snuggly's CurbStompBattle against Tanka Talon turns on one of the commentators because he has a thing for strong women.
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* Snuggly's CurbStompBattle against Tanka Talon turns on Mayor Chomps one of the commentators has a couple in this chapter.
** He's waving bones as Snuggly is singing her song, which is also about bones.
** As Snuggly is getting a CurbStompBattle from Tanka Talon, Chomps is turned on because he has a thing forstrong muscular women.
*** Speaking of Tanka Talon, she celebrates her victory by chewing on a bone with an annoyed expression while Snuggly cries in defeat.
* Cookie attempts to promote Team Deliverance, with an epic speech. While she nails it, she's blissfully unaware that her childish size makes takes away the impact of her words.
* Muko sees [[ThoseTwoGuys Mellow and her fish fan]] whom she refers as a fish guy.
* Muko slaps herself on the cheeks before charging at Adelgund.
** He's waving bones as Snuggly is singing her song, which is also about bones.
** As Snuggly is getting a CurbStompBattle from Tanka Talon, Chomps is turned on because he has a thing for
*** Speaking of Tanka Talon, she celebrates her victory by chewing on a bone with an annoyed expression while Snuggly cries in defeat.
* Cookie attempts to promote Team Deliverance, with an epic speech. While she nails it, she's blissfully unaware that her childish size makes takes away the impact of her words.
* Muko sees [[ThoseTwoGuys Mellow and her fish fan]] whom she refers as a fish guy.
* Muko slaps herself on the cheeks before charging at Adelgund.
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** As it turns out, Cookie got the money from a LoanShark that is portrayed as [[VisualPun a literal shark.]]
** Dinedon asks Cookie to pay for the drinks, causing Cookie to angrily point out she already paid him 20K.
* Every ImagineSpot Cookie has in this chapter.
** As she speaks about surpassing the first hurdle, we see Cookie landing safely on a mat during an acrobatic event.
** The sight of Nyarai and Muko dressed in armor as they storm a castle on Cookie's orders is hilarious.
** Cookie drowning and then Nyarai and Muko saving her with warm smiles on their faces while Cookie sheds tears of gratitude.
* Nyarai and Cookie's argument regarding Muko's argument has some pieces.
** Nyarai calls Cookie a failure as a manager and shows her the article about Muko. However, Cookie takes a few seconds to look at Nyarai's phone and calls her out for filling it with diamonds, much to Nyarai's embarrassment.
** Cookie reading the article and being left slack-jawed as she realized that her attempts to promote Muko were an EpicFail as somebody took pictures of her defeat against Kalita and wrote libel about the two of them.
** Adelgund joining in on the conversation by taking the phone and reading the article on Muko, much to Cookie and Nyarai's horror as if Adelgund is unimpressed she could easily call off the fight. Nyarai's solution is to snatch the phone and make an unconvincing nonchalant face, which pisses Cookie off.
** Adelgund admitting she likes Muko more than Nyarai, but she then gives Nyarai a friendly slap on the back, telling her not to take offense. Unfortunately for Nyarai, Adelgund ends up hitting her too hard, leading to Nyarai making an amusing expression.
** Dinedon asks Cookie to pay for the drinks, causing Cookie to angrily point out she already paid him 20K.
* Every ImagineSpot Cookie has in this chapter.
** As she speaks about surpassing the first hurdle, we see Cookie landing safely on a mat during an acrobatic event.
** The sight of Nyarai and Muko dressed in armor as they storm a castle on Cookie's orders is hilarious.
** Cookie drowning and then Nyarai and Muko saving her with warm smiles on their faces while Cookie sheds tears of gratitude.
* Nyarai and Cookie's argument regarding Muko's argument has some pieces.
** Nyarai calls Cookie a failure as a manager and shows her the article about Muko. However, Cookie takes a few seconds to look at Nyarai's phone and calls her out for filling it with diamonds, much to Nyarai's embarrassment.
** Cookie reading the article and being left slack-jawed as she realized that her attempts to promote Muko were an EpicFail as somebody took pictures of her defeat against Kalita and wrote libel about the two of them.
** Adelgund joining in on the conversation by taking the phone and reading the article on Muko, much to Cookie and Nyarai's horror as if Adelgund is unimpressed she could easily call off the fight. Nyarai's solution is to snatch the phone and make an unconvincing nonchalant face, which pisses Cookie off.
** Adelgund admitting she likes Muko more than Nyarai, but she then gives Nyarai a friendly slap on the back, telling her not to take offense. Unfortunately for Nyarai, Adelgund ends up hitting her too hard, leading to Nyarai making an amusing expression.
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* The fact that one of the characters is named Handsome Zebra Guy.
* Muko checking out all the photos of the workers in Monyan and then getting disgusted upon seeing the photos of two muscular beaten up.
** Muko's disgust is so great she even has an ArtShift for her reaction.
* Muko meets Tasha, the owner of Monyan, who explains the story behind the photos, and also gives lore regarding Cookie and the Cyclone Crushers. Unfortunately, Muko is [[DistractedByTheSexy entranced by Tasha's beauty]] and decides to ask her out right then and there, which shocks her and Handsome Zebra Guy.
* Muko's surprise when she realizes that her meeting with Cookie was not on Monyan, but on the other side of the city and she's late. Cue to Muko running like an animal and making it on record time.
* As it turns out, the meeting is on a strip club. Muko reveals what happens when her WeaksauceWeakness goes UpToEleven when she undergoes a LustfulMelt that is noticed when a stripper steps on her. The stripper [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere leaves as soon as she sees Muko.]]
** Cookie's reaction to seeing Muko, telling Muko to get solid. Muko notices that Cookie is wearing make-up so that raises her to a 2 out of 10, which causes Cookie to point out that while she shouldn't care the comment stings.
* Muko checking out all the photos of the workers in Monyan and then getting disgusted upon seeing the photos of two muscular beaten up.
** Muko's disgust is so great she even has an ArtShift for her reaction.
* Muko meets Tasha, the owner of Monyan, who explains the story behind the photos, and also gives lore regarding Cookie and the Cyclone Crushers. Unfortunately, Muko is [[DistractedByTheSexy entranced by Tasha's beauty]] and decides to ask her out right then and there, which shocks her and Handsome Zebra Guy.
* Muko's surprise when she realizes that her meeting with Cookie was not on Monyan, but on the other side of the city and she's late. Cue to Muko running like an animal and making it on record time.
* As it turns out, the meeting is on a strip club. Muko reveals what happens when her WeaksauceWeakness goes UpToEleven when she undergoes a LustfulMelt that is noticed when a stripper steps on her. The stripper [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere leaves as soon as she sees Muko.]]
** Cookie's reaction to seeing Muko, telling Muko to get solid. Muko notices that Cookie is wearing make-up so that raises her to a 2 out of 10, which causes Cookie to point out that while she shouldn't care the comment stings.
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** Muko [[TheGlomp hugs Nyarai and takes a selfie with her as hinted in the previous chapter.]] This causes Nyarai to push Muko away while demanding her not to take her picture without permission.
** Muko starts asking Nyarai very personal questions. It even gets a LampshadeHanging from Nyarai herself.
* Muko meets her first opponents: Team Executor. She has mixed feelings with Peki, who's a loli penguin. But her dismay goes to Adelgund, who has a [[LadyLooksLikeADude very masculine appearance.]]
** Muko starts asking Nyarai very personal questions. It even gets a LampshadeHanging from Nyarai herself.
* Muko meets her first opponents: Team Executor. She has mixed feelings with Peki, who's a loli penguin. But her dismay goes to Adelgund, who has a [[LadyLooksLikeADude very masculine appearance.]]
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* The chapter introduces Mellow, the dog who was with Muko back in the first chapter. And it also has him meet with the fish who became Muko's first fan. Their interactions in the first half of the chapter are hilarious, especially with how Mellow describes his first meeting with Muko.
** Muko shamelessly buying Combagal-gravure magazines and admitting she's only in it for the sexy girls. Mellow, trying to get into her good graces, tries to sell her a porn magazine, which disgusts Muko, who prefers erotica.
*** The fact that Muko knows the difference between erotica and porn is both awesome and funny, considering she's not that eloquent.
** Mellow's second meeting with Muko has him trying to apologize for the porn incident, but she forgot about him. Then he slams his head into his desk and asks her out, but Muko thought he was asking out the counter. Finally, Mellow asks Muko out, but she goes BrutalHonesty and tells him he's a funny guy and she's not interested. Mellow pretty much freezes and shatters from the rejection.
** Mellow asking out Muko and bringing her to the match of the first chapter, getting her number, except that he had to buy her a Fenny body pillow and she never called back.
* Once again, Muko is still training using [[IKnowMortalKombat videogames.]] Saniko calls her out on it, because she's using fighting games this time rather than beat'em'up.
** Muko shamelessly buying Combagal-gravure magazines and admitting she's only in it for the sexy girls. Mellow, trying to get into her good graces, tries to sell her a porn magazine, which disgusts Muko, who prefers erotica.
*** The fact that Muko knows the difference between erotica and porn is both awesome and funny, considering she's not that eloquent.
** Mellow's second meeting with Muko has him trying to apologize for the porn incident, but she forgot about him. Then he slams his head into his desk and asks her out, but Muko thought he was asking out the counter. Finally, Mellow asks Muko out, but she goes BrutalHonesty and tells him he's a funny guy and she's not interested. Mellow pretty much freezes and shatters from the rejection.
** Mellow asking out Muko and bringing her to the match of the first chapter, getting her number, except that he had to buy her a Fenny body pillow and she never called back.
* Once again, Muko is still training using [[IKnowMortalKombat videogames.]] Saniko calls her out on it, because she's using fighting games this time rather than beat'em'up.
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* The scene with the Donkizari action figure.
** Muko at first thinks that Cookie gave her a paper bag as a gift, causing Cookie to snap at her that the gift is in the paper bag.
** When Muko points out that Donkizari is the continental champion, Muko points out that she's too small for a champion, causing Cookie [[DopeSlap to kick her on the head.]]
* Muko pokes her new doll and points out that her breasts are too small for her taste. This pisses Cookie off, who demands Muko to show respect to the continental champion.
** Cookie calls Donkizari the greatest {{Face}} in furry fighting (as in the term for heroic wrestlers). Since Muko is an amateur and an IdiotHero to boot, [[LiteralMinded she assumes Donkizari has a big face.]]
** Muko gives TheGlomp to Cookie after her manager shares her life story with her, especially her dream to make Combagals champions in her place. Cookie's discomfort as Muko picks her up and spins her around again is funny.
* Cookie doesn't tell anything to Muko about TheBet (mainly that they had to pay everything back to make up for the damage Muko made during the fight with Kalita) to make her feel better about herself. That being said, Cookie's expression as she recalls that she's [[FromBadToWorse in further debt because they still have to pay for more reparations shows how unlucky our pair is.]]
** Muko at first thinks that Cookie gave her a paper bag as a gift, causing Cookie to snap at her that the gift is in the paper bag.
** When Muko points out that Donkizari is the continental champion, Muko points out that she's too small for a champion, causing Cookie [[DopeSlap to kick her on the head.]]
* Muko pokes her new doll and points out that her breasts are too small for her taste. This pisses Cookie off, who demands Muko to show respect to the continental champion.
** Cookie calls Donkizari the greatest {{Face}} in furry fighting (as in the term for heroic wrestlers). Since Muko is an amateur and an IdiotHero to boot, [[LiteralMinded she assumes Donkizari has a big face.]]
** Muko gives TheGlomp to Cookie after her manager shares her life story with her, especially her dream to make Combagals champions in her place. Cookie's discomfort as Muko picks her up and spins her around again is funny.
* Cookie doesn't tell anything to Muko about TheBet (mainly that they had to pay everything back to make up for the damage Muko made during the fight with Kalita) to make her feel better about herself. That being said, Cookie's expression as she recalls that she's [[FromBadToWorse in further debt because they still have to pay for more reparations shows how unlucky our pair is.]]
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** Nyarai's indignant outburst at Cookie's office being the janitor office of a soapland.
*** She even goes as far to poke Cookie with a dildo in the next page.
** Nyarai just randomly stretching out of nowhere. She does random poses like a bridge, a handstand, and even touching her head with her feet while talking with Cookie.
** While not as angry as the previous times, Cookie still protests her catchphrase when Nyarai stomps her to the ground and calls her a dwarf when she gives her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to find her a partner.
** Muko smiling nervously at Muko and telling her that she'll love Nyarai and that Nyarai will love her, pretty much TemptingFate as Muko is the opposite of a partner that Nyarai desires.
*** She even goes as far to poke Cookie with a dildo in the next page.
** Nyarai just randomly stretching out of nowhere. She does random poses like a bridge, a handstand, and even touching her head with her feet while talking with Cookie.
** While not as angry as the previous times, Cookie still protests her catchphrase when Nyarai stomps her to the ground and calls her a dwarf when she gives her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to find her a partner.
** Muko smiling nervously at Muko and telling her that she'll love Nyarai and that Nyarai will love her, pretty much TemptingFate as Muko is the opposite of a partner that Nyarai desires.
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* Muko offering to tag Adelgund when the latter is being overwhelmed by Nyarai's Leg Jet Burst, much to Cookie's comical horror. Considering Muko lost badly to Nyarai, who was holding back and wasn't even using her true fighting style, her reaction to Muko wanting to tag in to save Adelgund in a moment of heroism is as hilarious as it is realistic.
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[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Despite how badly it ended, Cookie's flashback with Nyarai has some funny moments, mainly due to the contrast with the former's relationship with Muko when compared with the latter's HairTriggerTemper and demanding personality.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
* Saniko mentions another NoodleIncident with Muko regarding her phases. There was a time when she wanted to be a BigEater champion, but ultimately lost. She entered a HeroicBSOD so we're treated to a flashback panel of a horrified Saniko finding anmocerweight Muko gorging herself on food.
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
*Muko and Nyarai's first meeting.
[[AC: Chapter 10: Shady Business]]
* Cookie bribes Dinedon, but since she's TheScrooge the process left her in tears.
[[AC: Chapter 11: Ding! Ding! Debut!]]
* Snuggly's CurbStompBattle against Tanka Talon turns on one of the commentators because he has a thing for strong women.
[[AC: Chapter 12: Selling]]
* Muko's fight against Adelgund is filled with moments like this, mainly because Muko is disgusted by Adelgund while Adel herself has a mild crush on Muko.
[[AC: Chapter 13: Judging]]
* Muko being DistractedByTheSexy at the sight of all of the Cyclone Crushers.
[[AC: Chapter 14: Unfolding]]
* Muko still being mesmerized by the BattleStrip that Nyarai and Peki did at the end of the previous chapter, not noticing that Adelgund volunteered her to be her replacement partner and that she's gonna fight Nyarai.
[[AC: Chapter 15: Cracking]]
[[AC: Chapter 16: Breaking]]
[[AC: Chapter 17: Unleashing]]
[[AC: Chapter 18: Falling]]
[[AC: Chapter 19: Despite Everything]]
[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Despite how badly it ended, Cookie's flashback with Nyarai has some funny moments, mainly due to the contrast with the former's relationship with Muko when compared with the latter's HairTriggerTemper and demanding personality.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
* Saniko mentions another NoodleIncident with Muko regarding her phases. There was a time when she wanted to be a BigEater champion, but ultimately lost. She entered a HeroicBSOD so we're treated to a flashback panel of a horrified Saniko finding anmocerweight Muko gorging herself on food.
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
*Muko and Nyarai's first meeting.
[[AC: Chapter 10: Shady Business]]
* Cookie bribes Dinedon, but since she's TheScrooge the process left her in tears.
[[AC: Chapter 11: Ding! Ding! Debut!]]
* Snuggly's CurbStompBattle against Tanka Talon turns on one of the commentators because he has a thing for strong women.
[[AC: Chapter 12: Selling]]
* Muko's fight against Adelgund is filled with moments like this, mainly because Muko is disgusted by Adelgund while Adel herself has a mild crush on Muko.
[[AC: Chapter 13: Judging]]
* Muko being DistractedByTheSexy at the sight of all of the Cyclone Crushers.
[[AC: Chapter 14: Unfolding]]
* Muko still being mesmerized by the BattleStrip that Nyarai and Peki did at the end of the previous chapter, not noticing that Adelgund volunteered her to be her replacement partner and that she's gonna fight Nyarai.
[[AC: Chapter 15: Cracking]]
[[AC: Chapter 16: Breaking]]
[[AC: Chapter 17: Unleashing]]
[[AC: Chapter 18: Falling]]
[[AC: Chapter 19: Despite Everything]]
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** Really how much of an ass the hippo was. Under normal circumstances he'd be a HateSink because of his riches and FanstasticRacism to Wilds, but since he's dealing with a professional fighter who's managed by the equivalent of a {{Yakuza,}} you can see that he's a VeryPunchableMan instead.
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** Really how much of an ass the hippo was. Under normal circumstances he'd be a HateSink because of his riches and FanstasticRacism FantasticRacism to Wilds, but since he's dealing with a professional fighter who's managed by the equivalent of a {{Yakuza,}} {{Yakuza}}, you can see that he's a VeryPunchableMan instead.
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** Really how much of an ass the hippo was. Under normal circumstances he'd be a HateSink because of his riches and FanstasticRacism to Wilds, but since he's dealing with a professional fighter who's managed by the equivalent of a {{Yakuza,}} you can see that he's a VeryPunchableMan instead.
** The fact that Nyarai literally kicked him out of the club is pretty much an example of him GettingTheBoot for bad behavior.
* Nyarai [[DoesNotLikeMen complaining about men after the hippo learned not tomess,]] mess with her,]] causing Shun to tell her not all men are like that. One can say that he took offense to Nyarai's comment.
** The fact that Nyarai literally kicked him out of the club is pretty much an example of him GettingTheBoot for bad behavior.
* Nyarai [[DoesNotLikeMen complaining about men after the hippo learned not to
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* Kalita's followers promoting Kalita as a OneWomanArmy as if she were a Combagal, much to her dismay. Cue to Cookie taking the chance to promote Muko by having her strike a cool pose and do a costume change.
* Muko throws a punch at Kalita, who dodges and throws her. However, it was a feint and Muko intended to distract her to unzip her suit to get a better view of her breasts. Cue to Kalita blushing, especially when she sees her followers blushing in embarrassment.
** She does it again when Kalita slams her head inside a bowl of soup and throws her to the ground, which causes Kalita to go into such an UnstoppableRage that she forgets to zip her suit.
* Muko's boss growing increasingly distressed as her fight with Kalita keeps destroying the shop. His facial reactions when each part of the shop is destroyed are priceless.
* Kalita wins the fight, but her fury was so great that she destroyed the shop, making her victory AllForNothing since the point of a ProtectionRacket is to maintain the shop intact.
* Muko throws a punch at Kalita, who dodges and throws her. However, it was a feint and Muko intended to distract her to unzip her suit to get a better view of her breasts. Cue to Kalita blushing, especially when she sees her followers blushing in embarrassment.
** She does it again when Kalita slams her head inside a bowl of soup and throws her to the ground, which causes Kalita to go into such an UnstoppableRage that she forgets to zip her suit.
* Muko's boss growing increasingly distressed as her fight with Kalita keeps destroying the shop. His facial reactions when each part of the shop is destroyed are priceless.
* Kalita wins the fight, but her fury was so great that she destroyed the shop, making her victory AllForNothing since the point of a ProtectionRacket is to maintain the shop intact.
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* Muko challenges Kalita to a fight. Her fan sees her courage but her fellow maids see her as suicidal.
* The first meeting between Muko and Kalita is pure gold. At first Muko is acting heroically, then MoodWhiplash kicks in as she fawns over Kalita's body, rating her a 10 out of 10. She starts to run to Kalita to fight, but she trips and grabs Kalita's breast. Cue to a MegatonPunch.
* Muko gives the TitleDrop of the chapter by citing a quote that Cookie said earlier, with her assumption that a match can take place anywhere. Cookie then yells at Muko, who's not paying attention, that she got what she said totally wrong.
* Muko tries to make peace with her former maids, but she asks for panties as payment, much to their disgust. Later, when Kalita demands Muko to fight her, Muko is close to the maids, who are hugging each other and crying, more terrified of Muko than the bikers themselves.
* The first meeting between Muko and Kalita is pure gold. At first Muko is acting heroically, then MoodWhiplash kicks in as she fawns over Kalita's body, rating her a 10 out of 10. She starts to run to Kalita to fight, but she trips and grabs Kalita's breast. Cue to a MegatonPunch.
* Muko gives the TitleDrop of the chapter by citing a quote that Cookie said earlier, with her assumption that a match can take place anywhere. Cookie then yells at Muko, who's not paying attention, that she got what she said totally wrong.
* Muko tries to make peace with her former maids, but she asks for panties as payment, much to their disgust. Later, when Kalita demands Muko to fight her, Muko is close to the maids, who are hugging each other and crying, more terrified of Muko than the bikers themselves.
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* The extra that shows Muko's idea of training to become a Combagal. [[IKnowMortalKombat She stops playing RPG videogames and replaces them with fighting videogames instead!]]
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* One of Muko's troubles was poor customer service. It's shown as her being [[DoesNotLikeMen socially awkward around men.]] To make matters worse, her former maids are pissed at Muko for her earlier perversions towards them and for trying to win a bet that will take their tips away. Cue to them acting extra nice to their customers and rubbing it on Cookie's face.
* Muko getting her first fan is awesome, funny, and heartwarming. First of all, he's a middle-aged fish, fired from his job, abandoned by his family, and one step from being DrivenToSuicide until Muko gives him customer service...by acting as an InnocentFanserviceGirl to him.
** While it's kind of dark, Muko's fan imagination of suicide is an ArtShift of a normal fish being hanged.
** Muko's fan getting all the patrons of the cafe interested on her. Despite that, he's the one who pays the most just to get serviced by her.
** The fact that part of Muko's service is her giving the fan some wrestling holds.
* Muko thanking Cookie for her advice pointing out that the key was being Muko, "the Combagal who plays as a maid," which causes Cookie to undergo an ArtShift that turns her into a realistic squirrel because that's the exact advice she gave Muko not too long ago.
* Muko getting her first fan is awesome, funny, and heartwarming. First of all, he's a middle-aged fish, fired from his job, abandoned by his family, and one step from being DrivenToSuicide until Muko gives him customer service...by acting as an InnocentFanserviceGirl to him.
** While it's kind of dark, Muko's fan imagination of suicide is an ArtShift of a normal fish being hanged.
** Muko's fan getting all the patrons of the cafe interested on her. Despite that, he's the one who pays the most just to get serviced by her.
** The fact that part of Muko's service is her giving the fan some wrestling holds.
* Muko thanking Cookie for her advice pointing out that the key was being Muko, "the Combagal who plays as a maid," which causes Cookie to undergo an ArtShift that turns her into a realistic squirrel because that's the exact advice she gave Muko not too long ago.
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** Dueinf the flashback, Saniko mentions that Muko had a phase regarding [[NoodleIncident urban guerrilla gardening prior to her desire to enter furry fighting.]]
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** Dueinf During the flashback, Saniko mentions that Muko had a phase regarding [[NoodleIncident urban guerrilla gardening prior to her desire to enter furry fighting.]]
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* The opening of the chapter introduces Muko's older sister Saniko, who disapproves of Muko entering into female furry fighting. She then tells Muko that she won't let her quit a good job for some fleeting passion, only for Muko to reveal she already quit, much to Saniko's shock. Muko brags that she won't come back. Cue to the next page showing a grumpy Muko while Cookie tries to convince her former boss to take her back.
**Dueinf the flashback, Saniko mentions that Muko had a phase regarding [[NoodleIncident urban guerrilla gardening prior to her desire to enter furry fighting.]]
**Dueinf the flashback, Saniko mentions that Muko had a phase regarding [[NoodleIncident urban guerrilla gardening prior to her desire to enter furry fighting.]]
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** Muko and Cookie giving each other an EstablishingCharacterMoment that would normally serve as a red flag for either of them.
*** Muko pretty much reveals that she has no education, training, or experience as a Combagal, having learned most of what she knows from magazine photos and only seeing one match, the one from the first chapter. She's also shamelessly admits that she wants to become a Combagal to grope cute girls and that the only reason she hired Cookie was that she was too lazy to enter a Combagal school to get training and education and she was too impatient to wait for her first match.
*** Cookie also shows signs of being TheScrooge as she's happy to have a client, mainly to get money again. She's also happy to hire Muko despite her lack of training and athleticism because she didn't read her bad reviews.
* The next day Cookie is worried about how good she'll fare, only to find a penny on the ground and greedily pounce on it, declaring it a good omen.
* Cookie got a job for Muko to promote her. The place where Muko will work? [[BookEnds Cafe Carrots! The cafe that Muko quit at the beginning of the chapter!]]
*** Muko pretty much reveals that she has no education, training, or experience as a Combagal, having learned most of what she knows from magazine photos and only seeing one match, the one from the first chapter. She's also shamelessly admits that she wants to become a Combagal to grope cute girls and that the only reason she hired Cookie was that she was too lazy to enter a Combagal school to get training and education and she was too impatient to wait for her first match.
*** Cookie also shows signs of being TheScrooge as she's happy to have a client, mainly to get money again. She's also happy to hire Muko despite her lack of training and athleticism because she didn't read her bad reviews.
* The next day Cookie is worried about how good she'll fare, only to find a penny on the ground and greedily pounce on it, declaring it a good omen.
* Cookie got a job for Muko to promote her. The place where Muko will work? [[BookEnds Cafe Carrots! The cafe that Muko quit at the beginning of the chapter!]]
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* The chapter begins with Muko quitting her job at Cafe Carrots, except the boss barely cares because Muko is such a poor worker and he considers her a good riddance. He even [[GettingTheBoot literally kicks her out of his cafe.]]
---->Muko: (happily soaring in the air) "I'm free!
** As Muko is quitting, her boss is talking with a scientist who wants him to sponsor a robo-maid, which [[FunnyBackgroundEvent malfunctions and attacks a patron,]] prompting Muko's boss to run him and the robo-maid off.
---->Muko: (happily soaring in the air) "I'm free!
** As Muko is quitting, her boss is talking with a scientist who wants him to sponsor a robo-maid, which [[FunnyBackgroundEvent malfunctions and attacks a patron,]] prompting Muko's boss to run him and the robo-maid off.
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* The fact that Fenny, the heroic artic vixen Combagal who just scored a comeback victory in this chapter was a DecoyProtagonist and the true protagonist was Muko, the rabbit fangirl who barely appeared in the chapter.
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* Roora breaking out on arm hold and then grabbing Fenny by the tail and spinning her around, which is an illegal move InUniverse according to Fenny's manager. The referee doesn't notice so Fenny's manager spends the panel trash talking Roora until she lets go off her Combagal.
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** On the first time, one of Kalita's underlings tries to [[BatterUp break open the register with a baseball bat]] but Cookie throws herself on top of the register and protects it with her body. Cue to the underlings making fun of Cookie and her once again yelling about her size.
** Kalita tries to go after the register so Cookie gives her a DeathGlare to scare her off. RealityEnsues when Kalita casually picks the squirrel off and throws her away.
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** Muko's NeverMyFault mentality pissing off her boss, believing that he had it against her because he hit on her and she rejected her, despite the fact that he pretty much explained that her poor work ethic is why he fired her.
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* One of Muko's co-workers gives Cookie the bet's money as payment for protecting the store, leaving the blank-faced Cookie with dollar eyes. Cue Muko's boss appearing [[RealityEnsues and pointing out that they still have to point out for the damages to the store.]]
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* Nyarai's introduction has her deal with an arrogant hippo customer. He's snobbish, rude, and racist towards Wilds (with Nyarai being one). The audience can very clearly see Nyarai faking a smile so the moment it breaks when he starts groping her, you can't help but smile once Nyarai kicks his face in.
* Nyarai [[DoesNotLikeMen complaining about men after the hippo learned not to mess,]] causing Shun to tell her not all men are like that. One can say that he took offense to Nyarai's comment.
* Nyarai [[DoesNotLikeMen complaining about men after the hippo learned not to mess,]] causing Shun to tell her not all men are like that. One can say that he took offense to Nyarai's comment.
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---->Roora: (seething) [[GetOut]] [[MegatonPunch Megaton "[[GetOut Get out!]]" ([[MegatonPunch Roora Kicks Muko and the guards out of the showers]]showers]])
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* The fact that Roora took a moment to give Fenny a wedgie.
wedgie as part of her NoHoldsBarredBeatdown borders on EvilIsPetty despite the seriousness of the situation.
** Muko blushing after seeing the wedgie, acting shy, but pretty much being turned on by it.
** Muko blushing after seeing the wedgie, acting shy, but pretty much being turned on by it.
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* Muko goes to meet Cookie, her new manager. There is just a few surprises she didn't think. One, Cookie's office is at Monyan, a soapland (a brothel with bathtubs). Two, Cookie's office is at the janitor's locker.
* Muko and Cookie's first meeting is filled with many gems.
** Muko speaks behind her, scaring Cookie, who has a funny outburst.
** Cookie realizes that Cookie is a squirrel and comments about her size, pushing her BerserkButton and announcing her {{Catchphrase}}
---->Cookie:"For a squirrel, I'm tall!"
* At an extra page, Muko tells Cookie how she found all the information she needed to become a Combagal. Turns out she broke into the showers, eluding security guards to personally talk to Fenny and Roora in the process!
** The fact that Fenny and Roora took a shower together after having such an intense match in the previous chapter.
** Fenny and Roora's reactions to Muko and the guards staring at her. Fenny is more than happy to give all the information she needs to fulfill her dream. Roora has a more realistic reaction.
---->Roora: (seething) [[GetOut]] [[MegatonPunch Megaton Kicks Muko and the guards out of the showers]]
*** Muko considering Roora's kick the equivalent of an autograph so she sees her ordeal as totally WorthIt
* Muko and Cookie's first meeting is filled with many gems.
** Muko speaks behind her, scaring Cookie, who has a funny outburst.
** Cookie realizes that Cookie is a squirrel and comments about her size, pushing her BerserkButton and announcing her {{Catchphrase}}
---->Cookie:"For a squirrel, I'm tall!"
* At an extra page, Muko tells Cookie how she found all the information she needed to become a Combagal. Turns out she broke into the showers, eluding security guards to personally talk to Fenny and Roora in the process!
** The fact that Fenny and Roora took a shower together after having such an intense match in the previous chapter.
** Fenny and Roora's reactions to Muko and the guards staring at her. Fenny is more than happy to give all the information she needs to fulfill her dream. Roora has a more realistic reaction.
---->Roora: (seething) [[GetOut]] [[MegatonPunch Megaton Kicks Muko and the guards out of the showers]]
*** Muko considering Roora's kick the equivalent of an autograph so she sees her ordeal as totally WorthIt
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Furry Fights Chronicles is a ProWrestling comic, but it also has a bit of {{Animesque}} side when the protagonist is a perverted bunny who wants to become a female pro-wrestler to grope other girls and her manager is a squirrel whose shady business practices left her unemployed for two years and so desperate for money that she'll hire a complete amateur to get a match.
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[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
* The fact that Roora took a moment to give Fenny a wedgie.
[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
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[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
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'''WARNING:''' All spoilers for the series are unmarked.
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[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
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[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
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[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
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