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that link goes to 'slave collar' these days
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** The ChainOfCommand that follows:
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** The ChainOfCommand chain of command that follows:
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-->'''Eric''':Minerals. Ores, you know.
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* The wizards perform The Rite of [=AshkEnte=] and summon Death, who appears outside the octogram and politely asks who they're waiting for.
-->"Er," said the Bursar “The fact is, in fact, that, er, you should be on the inside.”
-->I'M SO SORRY. Death stalked in a dignified way into the centre of the room and watched the Bursar expectantly.
* Rincewind waking up in the octogram and remembering to scream his head off.
-->"Er," said the Bursar “The fact is, in fact, that, er, you should be on the inside.”
-->I'M SO SORRY. Death stalked in a dignified way into the centre of the room and watched the Bursar expectantly.
* Rincewind waking up in the octogram and remembering to scream his head off.
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** The ChainOfCommand that follows:
-->“Sergeant?” “Sir?” “Guard this child.” “Yessir. Corporal?” “Sarge?” “Take care of the kid.” “Yes, sarge. Private Archeios?”
-->“Yes, corp,” said the soldier, his voice gloomy with prescience.
-->“See to the sprog.”
-->“Sergeant?” “Sir?” “Guard this child.” “Yessir. Corporal?” “Sarge?” “Take care of the kid.” “Yes, sarge. Private Archeios?”
-->“Yes, corp,” said the soldier, his voice gloomy with prescience.
-->“See to the sprog.”
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* Rincewind kicking Eric when he's about to say something stupid.
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-->'''Rincewind''': ''What?''What?
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* The entirety of Astfgl's promotion, with Vassenego as increasingly manic announcer.
--> '''Astfgl''': Will there be... potted plants?
--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome Jungles!]]''
--> '''Astfgl''': Will there be... potted plants?
--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome Jungles!]]''
* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straits might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straits might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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* While a bit The entirety of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straits might have something to do Astfgl's promotion, with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.Vassenego as increasingly manic announcer.
--> '''Astfgl''': Will there be... potted plants?
--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome Jungles!]]''
--> '''Astfgl''': Will there be... potted plants?
--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome Jungles!]]''
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* This early exchange between Rincewind and Eric:
-->'''Eric''': Are there any useful minerals?
-->'''Rincewind''': ''What?''
-->'''Eric''':Minerals. Ores, you know.
-->'''Rincewind''': I don't think a lad your age should be thinking of—
-->'''Eric''': Are there any useful minerals?
-->'''Rincewind''': ''What?''
-->'''Eric''':Minerals. Ores, you know.
-->'''Rincewind''': I don't think a lad your age should be thinking of—
* The parrot's justification for its VerbalTic.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in it.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Dictionary?
-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in it.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Dictionary?
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-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in it.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Dictionary?
-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in it.
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-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in it.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Dictionary?
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Making this quote less from-memory.
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-->'''Parrot:''' Because I have a very limited wossname! The thing with words in.
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-->'''Parrot:''' Because I have a very limited wossname! The thing with Limited wossname. Doo dah. Thingy. You know. It's got words in.in it.
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* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights straits might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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-->'''Parrot:''' Because I have a very limited wossname!wossname! The thing with words in.
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* The parrot's justification for its VerbalTic.
-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Because I have a very limited wossname!
-->'''Rincewind:''' Why do you keep saying "wossname"?
-->'''Parrot:''' Because I have a very limited wossname!
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* When Rincewind thinks Quezovercoatl is talking to him [[spoiler:actually, it's Ponce da Quirm trapped in a pit behind the statue]] and asking to be taken with him. Rincewind's response is that he can't do it: it's not his fault, it's just that people where he comes from are racist against people with talons and fangs and necklaces of skulls.
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* When Rincewind thinks Quezovercoatl is talking to him [[spoiler:actually, [[spoiler: (actually, it's Ponce da Quirm trapped in a pit behind the statue]] statue)]] and asking to be taken with him. Rincewind's response is that he can't do it: it's not his fault, it's just that people where he comes from are racist against people with talons and fangs and necklaces of skulls.
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* The entire send-up of ''Literature/TheIliad'', from a GenreSavvy Lavaeolus using the wooden horse as a ''diversion'' while the actual attack occurs elsewhere, and culminating with the discovery of the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman well past her prime, having moved on as a mother of several children.
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* The entire send-up of ''Literature/TheIliad'', from a GenreSavvy Lavaeolus using the wooden horse as a ''diversion'' while the actual attack occurs elsewhere, and culminating with the discovery of the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman well past her prime, having moved on as a mother of several children.
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--> "Mr. Beekle is a silly. Mr. Beekle is a poo."
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--> "Mr. Beekle is a silly. Mr. Beekle is a poo.""
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* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.properly.
* The entire send-up of ''Literature/TheIliad'', from a GenreSavvy Lavaeolus using the wooden horse as a ''diversion'' while the actual attack occurs elsewhere, and culminating with the discovery of the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman well past her prime, having moved on as a mother of several children.
--> "Mr. Beekle is a silly. Mr. Beekle is a poo."
* The entire send-up of ''Literature/TheIliad'', from a GenreSavvy Lavaeolus using the wooden horse as a ''diversion'' while the actual attack occurs elsewhere, and culminating with the discovery of the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman well past her prime, having moved on as a mother of several children.
--> "Mr. Beekle is a silly. Mr. Beekle is a poo."
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* The black comedy surrounding the circumstances of the Fountain Of Youth. ''Of course'' you had to [[CoolClearWater boil the water]] first.
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* The black comedy surrounding the circumstances of the Fountain Of Youth. ''Of course'' you had to [[CoolClearWater boil the water]] first.first.
* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
* While a bit of BlackComedy, the fact that an Aztec-like civilization spent a great deal of time and effort dreaming up what they would do to their creator if they ever met him, and whose prayers basically translate to extended complaints about just how dreadful their lives are, can't help but make one giggle. Of course, part of why they're in such dire straights might have something to do with the fact that, while they've succeeded in inventing the wheel, they're not bright enough to have worked out how to use it properly.
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* The black comedy surrounding the circumstances of the Fountain Of Immortality. ''Of course'' you had to [[CoolClearWater boil the water]] first.
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* The black comedy surrounding the circumstances of the Fountain Of Immortality.Youth. ''Of course'' you had to [[CoolClearWater boil the water]] first.
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trope renamed at TRS
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--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome Jungles!]]''
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--> '''Vassenego''': Hosts! Plantations! ''[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome ''[[MundaneMadeAwesome Jungles!]]''
