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* Goombell's tattle on Goombas:
-->'''Goombell''': Ahem... It says: "Goomba is up." ... this is wonderful!
-->'''Goombell''': Ahem... It says: "Goomba is up." ... this is wonderful!
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* Peach talking to TEC:
-->'''Peach''': You're crazy. Like a cop who takes care of the bastards.
* Browser's big entrance: "Get your husband, boys!"
-->'''Peach''': You're crazy. Like a cop who takes care of the bastards.
* Browser's big entrance: "Get your husband, boys!"
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--> By clicking on this block, HP (Heartrate) ends completely.
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--> By clicking on this block, [[OhCrap HP (Heartrate) ends completely.completely]].
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* Somehow the Blue Station got translated to 'Green Song', meaning there's ''two'' Green Stations.
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* Somehow the Blue Station got translated to 'Green Song', [[MindScrew meaning there's ''two'' Green Stations.Stations]].
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* Common Man's pre-boss speech. He just tells you he doesn't like people and yells I WANT TO LOSE. The boss banter is also good.
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* Common Man's pre-boss speech. He just tells you he doesn't like people and yells I '''"I WANT TO LOSE. LOSE?"''' The boss banter is also good.good.
%%* When Fatguy703 started the Common Man boss fight, his game ended up crashing. The funny part is that the game said the Shame Boys were hackers earlier, giving the implication that the Shame Boys caused the game crash.
%%* When Fatguy703 started the Common Man boss fight, his game ended up crashing. The funny part is that the game said the Shame Boys were hackers earlier, giving the implication that the Shame Boys caused the game crash.
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* The Pirahna Plants apparently being mechanical considering their warnings and such. Also, Piranha's Life yells out "FUCKING FUN SET!"
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* The Pirahna Plants apparently being mechanical considering their warnings and such. Also, Piranha's Life yells out "FUCKING "[[PrecisionFStrike FUCKING]] [[UnusualEuphemism FUN SET!"SET]]!"
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* The exit Section narration this time: Mario and his party asked Huff to blow the sixth star. It can be very nice to see a Princess Axe, maybe. Wait... Kamopa and Browser are really worried... Save them.
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* The exit Section narration this time: Mario and his party asked Huff to blow the sixth star. It can be very nice to see a Princess Axe, maybe. Wait... Kamopa and Browser are really worried... [[WhamLine Save them.them]].
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** The final question itself: "How many people still believe in stars?" The correct answer is "Seven", but all three options are pitifully low numbers.
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** The final question itself: "How "[[WhamLine How many people still believe in stars?" stars?]]" The correct answer is "Seven", but all three options are pitifully low numbers.
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* Some of the item and badge names and descriptions. Gradual Syrup somehow became "[[ADegreeInUseless Unemployed Graduate]]".
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* Some of the item and badge (called medals in-game) names and descriptions. Gradual Syrup somehow became "[[ADegreeInUseless Unemployed Graduate]]".
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** The option for saying "NO" is even in CapsLock!
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* The Section 6 interlude reveals that Browser is a fake made out of glass, which completely shocks him.
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* The Section 6 interlude reveals that Browser is a fake made out of glass, which completely shocks him. This ends up making too much sense in 64 when it's implied [[spoiler:the real Browser is dead]].
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-->'''Goombell:''' Battle, Sir! Find a way to nut this week, right?
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-->'''Goombell:''' Battle, Sir! Find a way to nut [[ADateWithRosiePalms nut]] this week, right?
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-->WHAAAT??? Hummina hubicasta hipi hipi hoobida hammala...Nope.
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* Cortze sums up her problems:
-->'''Cortze:''' I'm dead, asshole!
-->'''Cortze:''' I'm dead, asshole!
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* The mayor of Bad Fortress just randomly admitting that he eats people while in the middle of telling Mario about Hoko Saba.
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* The mayor of Bad Fortress just randomly admitting that he eats people while in the middle of telling Mario about Hoko Saba. He also calls you an asshole without provocation.
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* Beldam's response to Viviana showing off the necklace she found is to ask if she was ''wasted''.
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* Some of the item and badge names and descriptions. Gradual Syrup somehow became "Unemployed Graduate".
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* Some of the item and badge names and descriptions. Gradual Syrup somehow became "Unemployed Graduate"."[[ADegreeInUseless Unemployed Graduate]]".
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* The enemy names. You know you're in for a treat when the starting tutorial goombas are called 'Fish', 'Fuckin' Goomba' and 'Paraboom'.
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* The enemy names. You know you're in for a treat when the starting tutorial goombas are called 'Fish', 'Fuckin' '[[PrecisionFStrike Fuckin']] Goomba' and 'Paraboom'.
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The whole idea of this hack is to see how crazy and funny it gets; therefore, there are a lot of funny moments.
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The whole idea of this hack these hacks is to see how crazy and funny it gets; they get; therefore, there are a lot of funny moments.
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* The shopkeeper of Afternoon City mentions something about a [[NoodleIncident Ninja Plague.]]
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* The shopkeeper of Afternoon City mentions something about a [[NoodleIncident Ninja Plague.]]Plague]].
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* The Yoshis also have new dialogue now that the volcano has exploded, and they are still not exactly there, especially the Yoshi Chief, whose assistant informs you he had a stroke and then laughs at him.
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* The Yoshis also have new dialogue now that the volcano has exploded, and they are still not exactly there, especially the Yoshi Chief, whose assistant informs you he had a stroke and then [[{{Jerkass}} laughs at him.him]].
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* The "Closed-Room Murder" scene. The Mayor's wife decides you're her man now that the mayor is dead, the investigation turns up the Market Penguin crime syndicate led by Lao Sin, and then there's the resolution to the case, where the president reveals he hit Herringvai's head, but Herringvai says he hit the president's head and kills Market Penguins on the side. In other words, unlike the vanilla game, there ''is'' a murder mystery going on.
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* The "Closed-Room Murder" scene. The Mayor's wife decides you're her man now that the mayor is dead, the investigation turns up the Market Penguin crime syndicate led by Lao Sin, and then there's the resolution to the case, where the president reveals he hit Herringvai's head, but Herringvai says he hit the president's head and [[VigilanteMan kills Market Penguins Penguins]] on the side. In other words, unlike the vanilla game, there ''is'' a murder mystery going on.
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** You are then instructed to [[MemeticMutation "Press A]] [[VideoGame/SuperMario64 Half!"]]
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** You are then instructed to [[MemeticMutation "Press A]] [[VideoGame/SuperMario64 [[WebVideo/Pannenkoek2012 Half!"]]
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-->'''Koopley''': [[WhamLine I want Petalburg back, Carbon.]]
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* The end of section narration says Grubba used the Star Crystal power to drive a car.
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* The end of section narration says Grubba used the Star Crystal power to [[MundaneUtility drive a car.car]].
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* Peach was apparently arrested before the game began.
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* [[NoodleIncident Peach was apparently arrested before the game began.]]
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** The quiz they give you is also great - Not only is it almost as random with questions and answers than Paul's quizzes, apparenty Browser uses Ecofuel.
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** The quiz they give you is also great - Not only is it almost as random with questions and answers than Paul's quizzes, apparenty apparently Browser uses Ecofuel.
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike the ''Book of Mario 64'' quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike the ''Book of Mario 64'' ''Paper Mario'' quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike Paper Mario quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike Paper the ''Book of Mario 64'' quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike the Book of Mario quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The quiz you get from the Thwomp is, unlike the Book of Paper Mario quizzes, a terrible trainwreck that is seemingly designed to be impossible. To put it into perspective, here's the very first question:
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* The talking key has a filter feature. Also, the full name of "Inappropriate" Tubbs is Saint Tony Tubbs Fat.
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* The talking key key, Yakuki, has a filter feature.feature for Tubbs Fat's chat section. Also, the full name of "Inappropriate" Tubbs is Saint Tony Tubbs Fat.
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* Vivanan's recruitment into the party.
-->'''Vivana:''' My God, you have a worse problem than me!
-->'''Vivana:''' My God, you have a worse problem than me!
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* Vivanan's Viviana's recruitment into the party.
-->'''Vivana:''' -->'''Viviana:''' My God, you have a worse problem than me!
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* Goombell seems to sense that "Mario" is acting out of character and wants him to go back to being a SilentProtagonist.
-->'''Goombell:''' You are a chatty boy, Mario... [[SuddenlyShouting DON'T TALK!]]
-->'''Goombell:''' You are a chatty boy, Mario... [[SuddenlyShouting DON'T TALK!]]
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* The various partner dialogues you get when caught by the UFO enemies in Tubbs Fat Fort, especially Corporate, who talks about wasting the court.
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* The various partner dialogues dialogue you get when caught by the UFO enemies in Tubbs Fat Fort, especially Corporate, who talks about wasting the court.
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--->'''Paul:''' KAAAAAAAA! Paul is the favorite of all!
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Cleanup.
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* Big Bob's [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext absolute mess of a backstory.]] His wife either died of illness, was a sailor herself and died on the sea, or was murdered by Bob for [[YourCheatingHeart being disloyal]]. If Goombell is with you she says it's the worst story she's heard in her life, while Carbon says it's the reason he's depressed.
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* Big Bob's [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext absolute mess of a backstory.]] His wife either died of illness, was a sailor herself and died on the sea, or was murdered by Bob for [[YourCheatingHeart being disloyal]].disloyal. If Goombell is with you she says it's the worst story she's heard in her life, while Carbon says it's the reason he's depressed.
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** When he joins you, he calls to witness the end of all things, and you apparently joins Corporate instead of the other way around. Press (down) to [[FastballSpecial throw yourself and go to the object]] or go away. You can use [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Wrestling Shell Dread]] or Power Force to attack the enemies of Earth. Also, when you check what Power Force actually DOES in the menu, it turns out Corporate just [[DramaticDrop drops the enemies' cup on the ground.]]
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** When he joins you, he calls to witness the end of all things, and you apparently joins join Corporate instead of the other way around. Press (down) to [[FastballSpecial throw yourself and go to the object]] or go away. You can use [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Wrestling Shell Dread]] or Power Force to attack the enemies of Earth. Also, when you check what Power Force actually DOES in the menu, it turns out Corporate just [[DramaticDrop drops the enemies' cup on the ground.]]
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* Going to the ancient koopa's house. When he asks you for help, BOTH of Mario's answers are "No". He rambles on anyway, and tells you that although women don't require treatment, if you ask the US state of Colorado women will be forced to borrow money. His entire quest line has the conversation follow this exact trend - of Mario saying no, but the old man rambling on about women anyway - over and over again.
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* Going to the ancient koopa's Koop Kotu's house. When he asks you for help, BOTH of Mario's answers are "No". He rambles on anyway, and tells you that although women don't require treatment, if you ask the US state of Colorado women will be forced to borrow money. His entire quest line has the conversation follow this exact trend - of Mario saying no, but the old man rambling on about women anyway - over and over again.
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** When he joins you, he calls to witness the end of all things, and you apparently joins Corporate instead of the other way around. Press (down) to [[FastballSpecial throw yourself and go to the object]] or go away. You can use [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Wrestling Shell Dread]] or Power Force to attack the enemies of Earth. Also, when you check what Power Force actually DOES in the menu, it turns out Corporate just [[DramaticDrop drops the enemies cup on the ground.]]
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** When he joins you, he calls to witness the end of all things, and you apparently joins Corporate instead of the other way around. Press (down) to [[FastballSpecial throw yourself and go to the object]] or go away. You can use [[WrestlerInAllOfUs Wrestling Shell Dread]] or Power Force to attack the enemies of Earth. Also, when you check what Power Force actually DOES in the menu, it turns out Corporate just [[DramaticDrop drops the enemies enemies' cup on the ground.]]
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** Speaking of Goombell, her introduction of what the overworld blah does has her tell you Goombe Goom always [[TheSociopath deceives]] and [[SerialKiller kills]] people.
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** Speaking of Goombell, her introduction of what the overworld blah does has her tell you Goombe Goom always [[TheSociopath Goombe Goom]] always [[ManipulativeBastard deceives]] and [[SerialKiller kills]] people.
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* Shortly after getting the "Enter Blimp" to gain access to Glitzville (with Carbon stating that he will take it), Mario receives an email from Carbon's father. It starts out normal (For Book of Mario standards), but then he says:
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* Shortly after getting the "Enter Blimp" to gain access to Glitzville (with Carbon stating that he will take it), Mario receives an email from Carbon's father. It starts out normal (For Book (for ''Book of Mario Mario'' standards), but then he says:
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* Big Bob's [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext absolute mess of a backstory.]] His wife either died of illness, was a sailor herself and died on the sea, or was murdered by Bob for being disloyal. If Goombell is with you she says it's the worst story she's heard in her life, while Carbon says it's the reason he's depressed.
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* Big Bob's [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext absolute mess of a backstory.]] His wife either died of illness, was a sailor herself and died on the sea, or was murdered by Bob for [[YourCheatingHeart being disloyal.disloyal]]. If Goombell is with you she says it's the worst story she's heard in her life, while Carbon says it's the reason he's depressed.
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* Just how rude the Detective is. Seriously, he is SUPER rude to you, even when you're supposed to be assisting him.
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* Just how rude the Detective Pennington is. Seriously, he is SUPER rude to you, even when you're supposed to be assisting him.
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* The Crests are worth a look, since you can get things like Racism Crest and Runs Well ("Mario calls his father to increase his force by 2"). Since Runs Well encourages a [[GlassCannon Danger Mario]] Crest build, you will constantly hear the low Heart Point beeping, so Mario REALLY might be calling his dad for power.
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* The Crests are worth a look, since you can get things like Racism Racist Crest and Runs Well ("Mario calls his father to increase his force by 2"). Since Runs Well encourages a [[GlassCannon Danger Mario]] Crest build, you will constantly hear the low Heart Point beeping, so Mario REALLY might be calling his dad for power.
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* The chapter title is hilarious if you're female-bodied.
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* Shortly after getting the "Enter Blimp" to gain access to Glitzville (with Carbon stating that he will take it), Mario receives an email from Carbon's father. It starts out normal (For Book of Mario standards), but then he says:
-->'''Koopley''': [[WhamLine I want Petalburg back, Carbon.]]
-->'''Koopley''': [[WhamLine I want Petalburg back, Carbon.]]
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* [[VideoGame/HotelMario Mario is a toaster]].
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* According to Goombell, [[VideoGame/HotelMario Mario is a toaster]].
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-->WHAAAT??? Hummina hubicasta hipi hipi hoobida hammala...Nope.
-->WHAAAT??? Hummina hubicasta hipi hipi hoobida hammala...Nope.
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-->WHAAAT??? Hummina hubicasta hipi hipi hoobida hammala...Nope.
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* The final Captain Jr. Battle is pretty great, since he's actively trying to stop the war at this point.
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* The final Captain Jr. Mr. Trooper Battle is pretty great, since he's actively trying to stop the war at this point.point, and Goverman reveals he's his spouse.