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** When Jack is getting thoroughly thrashed during the bar "fight". James actually asks if he would like some help. Jake politely refuses his sons' help, just as his opponent wallops him again.
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Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
* "No way, I ain't gettin' out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"
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* Sam's (admittedly understandable) reluctance to get out of the water after Michael accidentally misfires his fancy new-age gun.
--> "No way, I ain't gettin' out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"
--> "No way, I ain't gettin' out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"
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--> '''James:''' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
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--> '''James:''' *annoyed* ''[annoyed]'' Are you on the level?
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--> '''Jacob:''' *commandingly* Dog.
--> *Jacob's dog sits up and growls menacingly.*
--> *Jacob's dog sits up and growls menacingly.*
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--> '''Jacob:''' *commandingly* ''[commandingly]'' Dog.
-->*Jacob's ''[Jacob's dog sits up and growls menacingly.*]''
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** "Damit mister I believe you!"
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** "Damit mister "Dammit mister, I believe you!"
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* "No way, I ain't gettin out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"
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* "No way, I ain't gettin gettin' out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"
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** "Damit mister I believe you!"
Changed line(s) 5,9 (click to see context) from:
--> ''Jacob:'' Take down your pants.
--> ''James:'' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
--> ''Jacob:'' Are you going to take down your pants, or am I going to have to take them for you?
--> ''James:'' You and who else?
--> ''Jacob:'' *commandingly* Dog.
--> ''James:'' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
--> ''Jacob:'' Are you going to take down your pants, or am I going to have to take them for you?
--> ''James:'' You and who else?
--> ''Jacob:'' *commandingly* Dog.
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--> ''Jacob:'' '''Jacob:''' Take down your pants.
-->''James:'' '''James:''' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
-->''Jacob:'' '''Jacob:''' Are you going to take down your pants, or am I going to have to take them for you?
-->''James:'' '''James:''' You and who else?
-->''Jacob:'' '''Jacob:''' *commandingly* Dog.
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* The introduction of Michael's motorcicle, nough said.
* "No way, I ain't gettin out tell you say I can shoot back!"
* "No way, I ain't gettin out tell you say I can shoot back!"
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* The introduction of Michael's motorcicle, nough motorcycle, enough said.
* "No way, I ain't gettinout tell out... not 'til you say I can shoot back!"back!"
* This exchange, when Jacob learns that James was injured during an earlier shootout and needs to have said injury treated:
--> ''Jacob:'' Take down your pants.
--> ''James:'' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
--> ''Jacob:'' Are you going to take down your pants, or am I going to have to take them for you?
--> ''James:'' You and who else?
--> ''Jacob:'' *commandingly* Dog.
--> *Jacob's dog sits up and growls menacingly.*
* "No way, I ain't gettin
* This exchange, when Jacob learns that James was injured during an earlier shootout and needs to have said injury treated:
--> ''Jacob:'' Take down your pants.
--> ''James:'' *annoyed* Are you on the level?
--> ''Jacob:'' Are you going to take down your pants, or am I going to have to take them for you?
--> ''James:'' You and who else?
--> ''Jacob:'' *commandingly* Dog.
--> *Jacob's dog sits up and growls menacingly.*
