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* BatmanGambit: Lucia pulls off an impressive one to make sure her son's team is focused for the finals. [[spoiler: [[{{Foreshadowing}} This, and the fact that her sister Cecile did say that Lucia has the potential to threaten Konoha itself, means that she's more than meets the eye.]]

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* BatmanGambit: Lucia pulls off an impressive one to make sure her son's team is focused for the finals. [[spoiler: [[{{Foreshadowing}} This, and the fact that her sister Cecile did say that Lucia has the potential to threaten Konoha itself, means that she's more than meets the eye.]]]]]]

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With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story as one might think upon reading through the first chapter, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening. As Itachi, his mother Lucia and his sister Rina make their way to Konoha for sanctuary from Gerhard's abuse, everything begins to spiral out of control... and people may not be who they seem to be.

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With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story as one might think upon reading through the first chapter, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening. As Itachi, his mother Lucia and his sister Rina make their way to Konoha for sanctuary to escape from Gerhard's abuse, an abusive situation, everything begins to spiral out of control... and people may not be who they seem to be.



* BatmanGambit: Lucia pulls off an impressive one to make sure her son's team is focused for the finals. [[spoiler: [[{{Foreshadowing}} This, and the fact that her sister Cecile did say that Lucia has the potential to threaten Konoha itself, means that she's more than meets the eye.]]



** You can see just how broken she is when she regards Ino and Sakura's friendship with curiosity.



* ItsPersonal: Naruto treats everyone in Konoha as part of a large family. [[spoiler: Kidnap one of them, and you will find out just how much of a PapaWolf he can be... if Sasuke doesn't get to you first.]]



* NotSoFastBucko: Holy crap, Itachi junior activated his Sharingan! He's beating his opponent up! He's gonna win! [[spoiler: Until the jutsu he wanted to use backfires on him terribly, and he gets a slash to an eye.]]

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* NotSoFastBucko: Holy crap, Itachi junior activated his Sharingan! He's beating his opponent up! He's gonna win! [[spoiler: Until Except the jutsu he wanted to use backfires on him terribly, and he gets a slash to an eye.eye for his trouble.]]



* ParentalNeglect: Amaya's father is wrapped up in his duties to the extent that the only quality time he spends with his daughter is when they're training.

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* ParentalNeglect: Amaya's father is wrapped up in his duties to the extent that the only quality time he spends with his daughter is when they're training. It's not his fault entirely - he has been a ninja for far too long that he never really asked for time off to raise his daughter.



* SnowMeansLove: Itachi (senior) and Lucia met for the last time when it was snowing. [[spoiler: The sight of the snow outside also inspired her to name her inheritance as ''White Rain''.]]

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* SnowMeansLove: Snow was falling when Itachi (senior) and made his proposal to Lucia met for the last time when it was snowing. [[spoiler: (to pretend that they were ordinary people who loved each other). The sight of the snow outside also inspired her to name her inheritance as ''White Rain''.]]
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** She does edge into Cloudcuckoolander territory, though.

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** She does edge into Cloudcuckoolander {{Cloudcuckoolander}} territory, though.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke. [[{{Understatement}} Even now, the dude has '''issues''']].

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke. [[{{Understatement}} Even now, the dude has '''issues''']].has]] '''[[{{Understatement}} issues]]'''.

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* BlindedByTheLight: Amaya's trademark White Star jutsu.



** She does edge into CloudCuckoolander territory, though.

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** She does edge into CloudCuckoolander Cloudcuckoolander territory, though.



* HeroicBSOD: Itachi goes into a brief one when his uncle Sasuke tells him exactly what his father (Itachi senior) really did.
** Lucia goes through the same when she found out [[spoiler: that the Grass had kidnapped Rina]].



* TheMedic: Two in Team 4 - Akamatsu Haro and their jonin-sensei Haruno Sakura.



* OriginalCharacter / OriginalGeneration: Lucia van Alstyne and her family.
* ParentalNeglect: Amaya's father is wrapped up in his duties to the extent that the only quality time he spends with his daughter is when they're training.



* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke.

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke. [[{{Understatement}} Even now, the dude has '''issues''']].



* WellDoneSonGuy: Itachi seems to be this for his mother Lucia at first (getting into trouble for punching out a classmate who badmouthed her), but gradually grows out of it.

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* WellDoneSonGuy: Itachi seems to be this for his mother Lucia at first (getting into trouble for punching out a classmate who badmouthed her), but is gradually grows growing out of it.
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* BetaCouple: Oddly enough, it's Naruto and Hinata.

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* BetaCouple: Oddly enough, it's Naruto and Hinata.
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** In Team 4, Haro is the Red Oni to Itachi's Blue.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly, '''Naruto''' is the Red to Sasuke's blue. Their respective relationships also have the same distinction - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's are tempestuous and overt.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly, Oddly enough, '''Naruto''' is the Red Blue Oni to Sasuke's blue. Red. Their respective relationships also have share the same distinction dichotomy - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's are relationship is tempestuous and overt.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly, '''Naruto''' is the Red to Sasuke's blue. Their respective relationships also have the same distinction - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's are tempestuous and overt.
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* NotSoFastBucko: Holy crap, Itachi junior activated his Sharingan! He's beating his opponent up! He's gonna win! [[spoiler: Until the jutsu he wanted to use backfires on him terribly, and he gets a slash to an eye.]]
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* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her use it.

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* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
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--->[[spoiler: '''Ibiki:''' He wanted you to pretend that you were ordinary people who loved each other.]]

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--->[[spoiler: -->[[spoiler: '''Ibiki:''' He wanted you to pretend that you were ordinary people who loved each other.]]

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Naruto.

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Naruto.Demonstrated masterfully by Naruto in his exhibition bout versus Sasuke.



* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler: '''Ibiki:''' He wanted you to pretend that you were ordinary people who loved each other.]]
** And later: [[spoiler: '''Lucia:''' I learned that I may have been in love with your father.]]

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* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler: BecomingTheMask:
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'''Ibiki:''' He wanted you to pretend that you were ordinary people who loved each other.]]
** And later: [[spoiler: later:
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'''Lucia:''' I learned that I may have been in love with your father.]]



* BrokenBird: [[spoiler: Lucia]]

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** Sasuke himself finds it more difficult to deal with a concerned Naruto than an angry Naruto, too.
* BrokenBird: [[spoiler: Lucia]]Lucia - and she shatters completely when she finds out the Grass have taken Rina.]]



** Naruto uses the Flying Thunder God Technique.

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** Naruto uses the Fourth Hokage's trademark Flying Thunder God Technique.



* ObfuscatingStupidity: Naruto - most of the time.



* WhamLine: [[spoiler: '''Rina:''' I can show you how to do Chidori.]]

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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: '''Rina:''' I can show you how to do the Chidori.]]
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* {{Squick}}: YourMileageMayVary on this one, but a large part of the chapter where Ibiki explains the mechanics of a BDSM-based relationship probably qualifies.
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: '''Rina:''' I can show you how to do Chidori.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler: Itachi (senior) and Lucia.]]

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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler: Itachi (senior) and Lucia.]]Lucia, although the latter only finds this out long after he had died.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Itachi van Alstyne.
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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual. Unfortunately... ItGotWorse.]]
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* BatDeduction: Naruto sees some very slight changes in Sakura's behavior and [[spoiler: asks her if she is pregnant... and ends up being correct.]]

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* BatDeduction: Naruto sees some very slight changes in Sakura's behavior and behavior, [[spoiler: asks her if she is pregnant... and ends up being correct.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler: '''Ibiki:''' He wanted you to pretend that you were ordinary people who loved each other.]]
** And later: [[spoiler: '''Lucia:''' I learned that I may have been in love with your father.]]

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* ChildProdigy: Rina. What do you expect from an Academy student who [[spoiler: figured out how to perform the Chidori simply by watching it?]]

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* ChildProdigy: Rina. What do you expect from an Academy student who [[spoiler: not only has an instinctual grasp of genjutsu, but also figured out how to perform the Chidori simply by watching it?]]it?]]
** She does edge into CloudCuckoolander territory, though.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Naruto is a happy, friendly and goofy Hokage most of the time. [[spoiler: Kidnap one of the people he promised to protect, though, and you risk finding out why he was made Hokage in the first place.]]


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** Naruto uses the Flying Thunder God Technique.

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With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story as one might think at first glance, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening.

As Itachi, his mother Lucia and his sister Rina make their way to Konoha for sanctuary from Gerhard's abuse, everything begins to spiral out of control... and people may not be who they seem to be.

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With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story as one might think at upon reading through the first glance, chapter, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening.

happening. As Itachi, his mother Lucia and his sister Rina make their way to Konoha for sanctuary from Gerhard's abuse, everything begins to spiral out of control... and people may not be who they seem to be.



...and things go on from there. This trope page is chock full of spoilers, so it is probably for the best if you read it '''then''' come back here.

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...and things go on from there.

'''Troper's note:'''
This trope page is chock full of spoilers, so it is probably for the best if you read it '''then''' come back here.



* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Yukio, though he comes around after [[spoiler: nearly taking Itachi's eye in what was supposed to be a harmless bout; Naruto talks some sense into him.]]

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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Yukio, though he comes around after [[spoiler: nearly taking Itachi's eye in what was supposed to be a harmless bout; Naruto talks some sense into him. He actually tries to keep Rina from being kidnapped.]]
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* HowManyAllOfThem: Naruto, in a somewhat rare heroic example.


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* SnowMeansLove: Itachi (senior) and Lucia met for the last time when it was snowing. [[spoiler: The sight of the snow outside also inspired her to name her inheritance as ''White Rain''.]]


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** Again in Chapter 19.
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* AwLookTheyReallyLoveEachOther: [[spoiler: Itachi (senior) and Lucia.]]

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* AwLookTheyReallyLoveEachOther: AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler: Itachi (senior) and Lucia.]]

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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4237746/1/ White Rain]]''' is a {{Naruto}} ContinuationFic by Zapenstap that takes place some time after the series ends... but you wouldn't know it at first glance, because the first chapter is set in a very, very different environment.

With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening.

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'''[[http://www.[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4237746/1/ White Rain]]''' Rain]] is a {{Naruto}} ContinuationFic by Zapenstap that takes place some time after the series ends... but you wouldn't know it at first glance, because the first chapter is set in a very, very different environment.

With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story, story as one might think at first glance, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening.



* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Naruto.
* AwLookTheyReallyLoveEachOther: [[spoiler: Itachi (senior) and Lucia.]]



** Also, how Sasuke deals with the metaphorical bombs dropped onto his lap.
*** You could apply this trope to every character in this story, really.
* JustFriends: How the LoveTriangle below is resolved... so far.



* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen it.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: It's why Sasuke and Sakura break up.]]
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen it.her use it.
** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]



* TrainingFromHell: Itachi goes through it.

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* TrainingFromHell: Itachi goes through it in a month before his team's match.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Itachi seems to be this for his mother Lucia at first (getting into trouble for punching out a classmate who badmouthed her), but gradually grows out of
it.

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** Played straight with [[spoiler: Ino and Chouji]].
* BetaCouple: Oddly enough, it's Naruto and Hinata.



* CharacterDevelopment: in '''freaking spades'''.

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* CharacterDevelopment: in '''freaking spades'''.spades.'''



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---* TitleDrop: In Chapter 11 - ''Note White Rain''.
** And again in Chapter 20.
* TrainingFromHell: Itachi goes through it.
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'''White Rain contains the following tropes:'''

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'''White ----
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Rain contains the following tropes:'''
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* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler: Between Itachi, Amaya and Haro - funnily enough, it is '''Lucia''' who resolves the whole thing.]]

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** Sakura herself does this, as she pulls something similar to her old sensei's infamous bell test for her genin team.
* HiddenDepths: Naruto has taken to the responsibilities of being the Hokage very well.
* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler: Between Itachi, Amaya and Haro - funnily enough, it is '''Lucia''' who resolves the whole thing.]]]]
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen it.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke.
* {{Squick}}: YourMileageMayVary on this one, but a large part of the chapter where Ibiki explains the mechanics of a BDSM-based relationship probably qualifies.
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4237746/1/ White Rain]]''' is a {{Naruto}} ContinuationFic by Zapenstap that takes place some time after the series ends... but you wouldn't know it at first glance, because the first chapter is set in a very, very different environment.

With a young man named Itachi, no less... but this isn't an AlternateUniverse story, because as soon as the plot gets rolling, things start happening.

As Itachi, his mother Lucia and his sister Rina make their way to Konoha for sanctuary from Gerhard's abuse, everything begins to spiral out of control... and people may not be who they seem to be.

Back in Konoha, Naruto is the Hokage, Sasuke [[spoiler: has reconciled with the village and is together with Sakura]], and the next generation of shinobi are being trained with the defense of the Will of Fire in their hearts...

...and things go on from there. This trope page is chock full of spoilers, so it is probably for the best if you read it '''then''' come back here.

'''White Rain contains the following tropes:'''

* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Yukio, though he comes around after [[spoiler: nearly taking Itachi's eye in what was supposed to be a harmless bout; Naruto talks some sense into him.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: Subverted, as [[spoiler: Sasuke's actually scared witless of the fact that Sakura is carrying their child.]]
* BrokenBird: [[spoiler: Lucia]]
* CharacterDevelopment: in '''freaking spades'''.
* ChildProdigy: Rina. What do you expect from an Academy student who [[spoiler: figured out how to perform the Chidori simply by watching it?]]
* ContinuationFic
* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler: While he was named after his father, Itachi takes more after Sasuke. '''Rina''', on the other hand...]]
* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler: Between Itachi, Amaya and Haro - funnily enough, it is '''Lucia''' who resolves the whole thing.]]

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