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** KnifeNut: Stone knives are also quite common. Also, Theta's signature weapon.
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* ActionGirl: Almost every female character.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Ms. Maia.
* BigBad: [[ShoutOut Excidium]]
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* FanSequel:[[http://fanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Twilight_Valley_2 here.]]
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* FanSequel:[[http://fanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Twilight_Valley_2 here.]]
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The link is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4044080/1/Land_Before_Time_Twilight_Valley here]]and it is still ongoing.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty: '''Everyone''' in ''Twilight Valley'' fights dirty.
** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
** ImprovisedWeapon: Some of the more memorable ones:
*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
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** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
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*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
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** Everything to ''Film/JurassicPark'' to ''VideoGame/MetalGearSolid'' to ''{{Pokemon}}'' and to other fan fics.
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* ClusterFBomb: Almost everyone in TwilightValley utters at least one profanity.
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* SpinOff: A fan has made a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' themed fan fiction based on TwilightValley. Twilight Valley. It is basically TwilightValley Twilight Valley characters and settings transplanted into a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' style setting.
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* WhatTheHellHero
** Who called who out?
*** Pterano to Littlefoot for beating another patrol member.
** Who called who out?
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* WhatTheHellHero
** Who called who out?
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** Who called who out?
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* [[FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler: Try Chapter Seven]].
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* [[FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath FamilyUnfriendlyViolence/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler: Try Chapter Seven]].
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* {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
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* {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath [[FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try [[spoiler: Try Chapter Seven]].
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* {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence}}/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Both Claw Valley and the Great Valley have no qualms about torturing or abusing prisoners of war.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Both Claw Valley and the Great Valley have no qualms about torturing or abusing prisoners of war.
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* {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence}}/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence]]/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Both Claw Valley and the Great Valley have no qualms about torturing or abusing prisoners ofwar. war.
* HarmfulToMinors: So, ''so'' much. One particularly nasty example involves Ducky being forced to watching a starving Chomper eat one of her siblings and then nearly eat her. They both break down.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Both Claw Valley and the Great Valley have no qualms about torturing or abusing prisoners of
* HarmfulToMinors: So, ''so'' much. One particularly nasty example involves Ducky being forced to watching a starving Chomper eat one of her siblings and then nearly eat her. They both break down.
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** BladeOnAStick - Obsidian tipped spears are quite a popular weapon with the dinosaurs.
** DropTheHammer - Saber, a predatory dinosaur, wields a stone war hammer. Wooden clubs (sometimes studded with rock flakes) haven been used by quite a number of dinosaurs as well.
** KnifeNut - Stone knives are also quite common. Also, Theta's signature weapon.
** SimpleStaff - Staves are also quite popular with the dinosaurs.
** DropTheHammer - Saber, a predatory dinosaur, wields a stone war hammer. Wooden clubs (sometimes studded with rock flakes) haven been used by quite a number of dinosaurs as well.
** KnifeNut - Stone knives are also quite common. Also, Theta's signature weapon.
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** BladeOnAStick - BladeOnAStick: Obsidian tipped spears are quite a popular weapon with the dinosaurs.
**DropTheHammer - DropTheHammer: Saber, a predatory dinosaur, wields a stone war hammer. Wooden clubs (sometimes studded with rock flakes) haven been used by quite a number of dinosaurs as well.
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* BadAss: Wow, where to begin?
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapter Seven]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: {{FamilyUnfriendlyViolence}}/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath Death]]: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapterSeven]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapter
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''Twilight Valley'' or ''Land Before Time: Twilight Valley'' is a war story written by [=DialgaX=] (Jakayrta) set in TheLandBeforeTime universe.
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The story is set several years after the actual movies and it explores the concept of war in the LandBeforeTime universe. The characters from the ''LandBeforeTime'' have matured quite a bit and they are now involved in a destructive war to take back the Great Valley and defeat the forces of Claw Valley. Joining and opposing them are a host of original characters
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''Twilight Valley'' or ''Land Before Time: Twilight Valley'' is a war story written by [=DialgaX=] (Jakayrta) set in TheLandBeforeTime WesternAnimation/TheLandBeforeTime universe.
The story is set several years after the actual movies and it explores the concept of war inthe LandBeforeTime WesternAnimation/TheLandBeforeTime universe. The characters from the ''LandBeforeTime'' ''WesternAnimation/TheLandBeforeTime'' have matured quite a bit and they are now involved in a destructive war to take back the Great Valley and defeat the forces of Claw Valley. Joining and opposing them are a host of original characters
The story is set several years after the actual movies and it explores the concept of war in
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''Twilight Valley'' or ''Land Before Time: Twilight Valley'' is a war story written by [=DialgaX=] (Jakayrta) set in the in TheLandBeforeTime universe.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - '''Everyone''' in ''Twilight Valley'' fights dirty.
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* ActionGirl - Almost every female character.
* AdaptationalVillainy - Ms. Maia.
* BadAss - Wow, where to begin?
* BigBad - [[ShoutOut Excidium]]
* ClusterFBomb - Almost everyone in TwilightValley utters at least one profanity.
* DarkActionGirl - There are female combatants on Claw Valley's side.
* AdaptationalVillainy - Ms. Maia.
* BadAss - Wow, where to begin?
* BigBad - [[ShoutOut Excidium]]
* ClusterFBomb - Almost everyone in TwilightValley utters at least one profanity.
* DarkActionGirl - There are female combatants on Claw Valley's side.
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* ActionGirl - ActionGirl: Almost every female character.
*AdaptationalVillainy - AdaptationalVillainy: Ms. Maia.
*BadAss - BadAss: Wow, where to begin?
*BigBad - BigBad: [[ShoutOut Excidium]]
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* DarkFic - A ''Land Before Time'' war story.
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* TheDragon - Styracus
* FanSequel - [[http://fanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Twilight_Valley_2 here.]]
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* DarkFic - DarkFic: A ''Land Before Time'' war story.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence - Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath - Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapter Seven]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath - Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapter Seven]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence - FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try Chapter Seven]].
*FamilyUnfriendlyDeath - FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Where to begin? [[spoiler:Try chapter Seven]].
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* SpinOff - A fan has made a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' themed fan fiction based on TwilightValley. It is basically TwilightValley characters and settings transplanted into a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' style setting.
* SociopathicSoldier - Some of the fighters seem to enjoy killing a ''little'' too much.
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* SpinOff - SpinOff: A fan has made a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' themed fan fiction based on TwilightValley. It is basically TwilightValley characters and settings transplanted into a ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' style setting.
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** [[BareFistedMonk Bare Fisted Dinosaur]] - Dromaeo (a predatory dinosaur) fights with his bare hands.
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* SpinOff - A fan has made a CommandAndConquer ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' themed fan fiction based on TwilightValley. It is basically TwilightValley characters and settings transplanted into a CommandAndConquer ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquer'' style setting.
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* AdaptationalVillainy - Ms. Maia.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - '''Everyone''' in ''Twilight Valley'' fights dirty.
** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
** ImprovisedWeapon - Some of the more memorable ones:
*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
** EyeScream
** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
** ImprovisedWeapon - Some of the more memorable ones:
*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
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** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
** ImprovisedWeapon - Some of the more memorable ones:
*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
** EyeScream
** GroinAttack
** AHandfulForAnEye
** CombatPragmatist
** ImprovisedWeapon - Some of the more memorable ones:
*** A calabash of boiling juice.
*** A cave wall
*** ''An entire sapling'' (root and all)
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** Everything to ''Film/JurassicPark'' to ''MetalGearSolid'' to ''{{Pokemon}}'' and to other fan fics.
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** KnifeNut - stone knives are also quite common. Also, Theta's signature weapon.
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* WarFic - duh.Duh.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids - PG-13 rated with profanity and high levels of violence. Obviously not appropriate for the target audience of TheLandBeforeTime
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* YourMilageMayVary - [[CanonDefilement Canon Defiling]] fan fic or unique spin on LandBeforeTime?LandBeforeTime?
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