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* MeaningfulName: Cody is a name of English origin that comes from an Irish/Gaelic surname meaning "Helpful." It is rather fitting for a guy who helped his crush, Gwen, hook up with Trent back during TDI despite his feelings for her. This only increases while trapped in an underwater city full of drugged, insane, deformed mutants who first lived in the 1950s. For one thing, he's the one who is the most opposed to harvesting the Little Sisters. Despite needing more ADAM to survive, Cody wants to help the Little Sisters as much as himself. Cody is also determined to support Gwen, Courtney, and Noah when they're trapped and fighting for survival.
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There are 32 chapters as of yet and still ongoing.yet, but sadly, the fic has not been updated since 2017.
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There are 31 chapters as of yet and still ongoing.
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't been updated in two years.
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't been updated in two years.since July 2017.
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%%* ArchEnemy: Andrew Ryan and Atlas, just like in the game.
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* FanArt: Aside from the cover here are a few pictures:
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't been updated in two years.
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Cody is killed in chapter 31, but revived in chapter 32]].
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* DrowningMySorrows: Atlas is overheard pouring himself a stiff drink as he tells our protagonists the gorier details about life in Rapture.
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* ShoutOut: This story already has references to examples of many different mediums of entertainment ranging from novels to poems to films to history to video games (duh). The most meaningful in terms of the narrative are Noah's describing his situation by quoting the poems "To A Mouse" and "The City Under the Sea" and Gwen comparing the Little Sisters' mental conditioning to Dr. Pavlov's dog experiments.
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* ShoutOut: This story already has references to examples of many different mediums of entertainment ranging from novels to poems to films to history to video games (duh). The most meaningful in terms of the narrative are Noah's describing his situation by quoting the poems "To A Mouse" and "The City Under the Sea" and Gwen comparing the Little Sisters' mental conditioning to Dr. Pavlov's dog experiments. The author seems particularly fond of quoting ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged''.
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* TragicMonster: [[spoiler: Splicers in Canon are was 'Rapture Citizens' as Drug mutated them into today enemies, Cody may become this as he may or not be genetic related to Jack or Ryan, And Cody is started have some effects of splicing.]]
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* TragicMonster: [[spoiler: Splicers in Canon are was were 'Rapture Citizens' as Drug mutated them via ADAM into today enemies, Cody may become this as he may or not be genetic related to Jack or Ryan, And Cody is started have some effects of splicing.today's enemies.]]
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A [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9320584/1/Total-Drama-Raptured fanfic]] made by Rufus T. Serenity and a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' and ''[[VideoGame/BioShock1 BioShock]]''
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A [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9320584/1/Total-Drama-Raptured fanfic]] made by Rufus T. Serenity Creator/RufusTSerenity and a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' and ''[[VideoGame/BioShock1 BioShock]]''
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* NearDeathExperience: Gwen is fatally injuried in the first encounter against Steinmann. While in coma, she has horrifying nightmares tha, upoen being healed, affected her mind enough to leave her even more jaded and willing to do ''anything'' to sruvive.
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* NearDeathExperience: Gwen is fatally injuried in the first encounter against Steinmann. While in coma, she has horrifying nightmares tha, upoen that, upon being healed, affected her mind enough to leave her even more jaded and willing to do ''anything'' to sruvive.
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* FireForgedFriends: The four teens were hardly best friends, with Noah trying to avoid Cody's company to stop people thinking that he's gay, Gwen having to deal with Cody's incesant flirting and Courtney becomingsuspicious of Gwen having a crush of Duncan. However, facing the endless hardships of rapture made them grow closer to each other, since it's all what they have.
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* FireForgedFriends: The four teens were hardly best friends, with Noah trying to avoid Cody's company to stop people thinking that he's gay, Gwen having to deal with Cody's incesant flirting and Courtney becomingsuspicious becoming suspicious of Gwen having a crush of Duncan. However, facing the endless hardships of rapture made them grow closer to each other, since it's all what they have.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 30: [[spoiler: Cody is killed.]]
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*** Also, the moral choice moment involving the first Little Sister has removed the black and white simplicity of the game, adding ambiguous details like questioning if Tenenbaum's cure truly cures the Little Sisters.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cody unleashes a particularly brutal one to Courtney after finally reaching his [[RageBreakingPoint breaking point]] at the C.I.T.'s constant belittling of him.
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* DarkerAndEdgier:
** While the story of Bioshock is a very dark story, this story manages to do what almost seems impossible, making what was dark and edgy even more so. The best evidence is to be found in the victims of Dr. Steinman. While in the game you saw one or two disfigured bodies, in this story you see many more and their deformities are described in greater detail. The apex of added darkness is the first seen victim of Steinman. Not only is the image itself horrific enough to disturb all of the Total Drama contestants, but it is based on the gruesome death of Kay Amin, one of the wives of Idi Amin, the dictator of Uganda in the 1970s.
** Needless to say, the story is also much darker than its other half of the source material, Total Drama.
** While the story of Bioshock is a very dark story, this story manages to do what almost seems impossible, making what was dark and edgy even more so. The best evidence is to be found in the victims of Dr. Steinman. While in the game you saw one or two disfigured bodies, in this story you see many more and their deformities are described in greater detail. The apex of added darkness is the first seen victim of Steinman. Not only is the image itself horrific enough to disturb all of the Total Drama contestants, but it is based on the gruesome death of Kay Amin, one of the wives of Idi Amin, the dictator of Uganda in the 1970s.
** Needless to say, the story is also much darker than its other half of the source material, Total Drama.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Doctor Steinmann. While he's very easy boss in the game, the four teens barely survived fighting him. According to the author, he did this because he felt the doctor was something of an AntiClimaxBoss.
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* MindOverMatter: as of chapter 25, Telekinesis is part of the group's current plasmids.
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* MindOverMatter: as of chapter 25, Telekinesis is part of the group's current plasmids. [[spoiler: Unlike the game, Steinmann has this power as well]].
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* UseYourHead: How Gwen [[spoiler: defeats Steinmann]].
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* ItAmusedMe: Noah's reasons for not telling Courtney that the ball-shooting turret they're using for training was set at near max speed was that he found funny seeing Courtney getting clobbered by rubber balls. Of course, Courtney doesn't take this well. See AmusingInjueries above.
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* ItAmusedMe: Noah's reasons for not telling Courtney that the ball-shooting turret they're using for training was set at near max speed was that he found funny seeing Courtney getting clobbered by rubber balls. Of course, Courtney doesn't take this well. See AmusingInjueries AmusingInjuries above.
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* AmusingInjuries: Suffered by Noah and Courtney when testing their newly aquired telekinetic powers by trying to catch rubber balls shot by a modified turret.
* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 25, which is far more light and comedy-centric than any other chapter. According to WordOfGod, it was to relieve some tension since the following chapters are going to be very dark and dramatic.
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* FanArt: Aside from the cover another fan draw a couple pictures [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Breath-of-Life-394374660 here]] and [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Failed-Hacking-521171133 here]].
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** [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Breath-of-Life-394374660here]] and Gwen giving CPR to Courtney]]
** [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Failed-Hacking-521171133here]].Cody failing to hack a security bot]].
** [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Sweet-Charity-536157379?q=gallery%3AArias87%2F2181081&qo=9 Gwen's rampage]]
** [[http://vaultman.deviantart.com/art/Total-Drama-Raptured-Commission-427826314 Courtney kills a splicer]]
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** [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Failed-Hacking-521171133
** [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Sweet-Charity-536157379?q=gallery%3AArias87%2F2181081&qo=9 Gwen's rampage]]
** [[http://vaultman.deviantart.com/art/Total-Drama-Raptured-Commission-427826314 Courtney kills a splicer]]
* GroinAttack: One of the AmusingInjuries suffered by Noah when training with the ball-launching turret.
* HowDoIShotWeb: The teens have some trouble mastering the plasmids, especially Courtney, much to her frustration. In fact, this is the reason behind Noah's suggestion to train with Telekinesis before facing Steinmann.
* ItAmusedMe: Noah's reasons for not telling Courtney that the ball-shooting turret they're using for training was set at near max speed was that he found funny seeing Courtney getting clobbered by rubber balls. Of course, Courtney doesn't take this well. See AmusingInjueries above.
* MindOverMatter: as of chapter 25, Telekinesis is part of the group's current plasmids.
* NearDeathExperience: Gwen is fatally injuried in the first encounter against Steinmann. While in coma, she has horrifying nightmares tha, upoen being healed, affected her mind enough to leave her even more jaded and willing to do ''anything'' to sruvive.
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* PlayingWithFire As for chapter 22, Noah and Courtney have the incinerate plasmid. Noah puts him to good use when he burns alive a bunch of splicers that Ryan directed at them.
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* PlayingWithFire As for of chapter 22, 24, all four teenagers have the Incinerate Plasmid. So far only Noah and Courtney Gwen have used the incinerate plasmid. Noah puts him to good use when he burns alive a bunch of splicers that Ryan directed at them.fire plasmid on frozen pipes and splicers.
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* PurpleProse: The author goes into legnthy detail to describe both the scenery and the actions that take place, using a very wide range of vocabulary. While this sometimes can create a great effect, other times entire paragraphs are devoted to describe bits of scenery in full detail that have pretty much no impact nor importance on the overall story, which can distract from(and slow) the flow of the story.
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* PurpleProse: The author goes into legnthy lengthy detail to describe both the scenery and the actions that take place, using a very wide range of vocabulary. While More often than not, this sometimes can create a is used to great effect, particularly when describing the all the dark and dystopia parts of Rapture, and the horror that the characters are experiencing. But there are a few other times where entire paragraphs are devoted to describe bits of scenery in full detail that have pretty much no impact nor importance on the overall story, which can distract from(and from (and slow) the flow of the story.
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* PurpleProse: The author goes into legnthy detail to describe both the scenery and the actions that take place, using a very wide range of vocabulary. While this sometimes can create a great effect, other times entire paragraphs are devoted to describe bits of scenery in full detail that have pretty much no impact nor importance on the overall story, which can distract from(and slow) the flow of the story.
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* CrazyPrepared: Turns out that Gwen is very skilled with shotguns. The reason? She practiced with them just in case a zombie apocalypse (or an apocalypse of any kind) happens, so she has a way to defend herself. She got this due to watching a lot of movies, series and animes with that theme.
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* FanArt: Aside from the cover another fan draw a picture [[http://arias87.deviantart.com/art/Breath-of-Life-394374660 here]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Cody suffers a ''massive'' one that he's trying to hide from the others after [[spoiler: reading Gwen's diary, and finding out that the goth hates his guts for his behavior during World Tour.]]
* ICallItVera: Gwen's shotgun is named "Sweet Charity". She didn't name it herself, the name was already branded on the handle, but Gwen liked it.
* ICallItVera: Gwen's shotgun is named "Sweet Charity". She didn't name it herself, the name was already branded on the handle, but Gwen liked it.
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* OneManArmy: Gwen goes on an impressive (and terryfing) splicer killing spree shortly after being healed.
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* Tragic Monster: [[spoiler: Splicers in Canon are was 'Rapture Citizens' as Drug mutated them into today enemies, Cody may become this as he may or not be genetic related to Jack or Ryan, And Cody is started have some effects of splicing.]]
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* Tragic Monster: TragicMonster: [[spoiler: Splicers in Canon are was 'Rapture Citizens' as Drug mutated them into today enemies, Cody may become this as he may or not be genetic related to Jack or Ryan, And Cody is started have some effects of splicing.]]
