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''The Two Seers'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic by Toaverse that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35220277/chapters/87764989 here]].
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''The Two Seers'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic by Toaverse that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35220277/chapters/87764989 org/works/35220277 here]].
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** With her gift, Mirabel wound up seeing both Antonio's conception and birth. Since she was an adolescent at the time, she describes it as two adults "wrestling naked", leaving Bruno at a loss as to how to explain it to her.
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** With her gift, Mirabel wound up seeing both Antonio's conception and birth. Since she was an adolescent nine at the time, she describes it as two adults "wrestling naked", leaving Bruno at a loss as to how to explain it to her.
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* AbandonmentInducedAnimosity: Mirabel holds a pretty serious grudge against Alma and her birth parents for throwing her out when she got the same gift as Bruno, and for banning her and her papi ([[HappilyAdopted Bruno]]) from Casita, forcing them to live in the walls. [[spoiler: Even after they are reintroduced to the family, Mirabel needs a lot of time and a few sincere apologies before she's ready to start forgiving her family.]]
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Oscar's reaction to his gift initially reminds everyone of Dolores, the Madrigals wonder if they're dealing with another "doubled" gift, until they realise that Oscar's still having trouble even when they're all being quiet and he must be "hearing" something else.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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** While the movie only implied Bruno scavenging food, in this fic Bruno and Mirabel also have to go to a wall to urinate, wash themselves with a cloth to try to keep their hygiene, Mirabel has to stitch together a new dress after growing out of her toddler clothes, and her hair is in desperate need of grooming.
** Because she was only five when she was separated from her family, Mirabel has very little memory of them, if any. She doesn't even remember that Isabela and Luisa are her sisters. Most people cannot remember things that happened when they were very young, due to the brain not being able to form concrete, long-term memories until about age 7.
** Antonio says that Mirabel and Bruno can come back and they can be a family again, but Mirabel sadly says that it's not that easy.
** While the movie only implied Bruno scavenging food, in this fic Bruno and Mirabel also have to go to a wall to urinate, wash themselves with a cloth to try to keep their hygiene, Mirabel has to stitch together a new dress after growing out of her toddler clothes, and her hair is in desperate need of grooming.
** Because she was only five when she was separated from her family, Mirabel has very little memory of them, if any. She doesn't even remember that Isabela and Luisa are her sisters. Most people cannot remember things that happened when they were very young, due to the brain not being able to form concrete, long-term memories until about age 7.
** Antonio says that Mirabel and Bruno can come back and they can be a family again, but Mirabel sadly says that it's not that easy.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 22. [[spoiler:Mirabel steals the candle and blows it out, and its disappearance triggers an argument between Alma and Agustin that turns into the entire family’s RageBreakingPoint as they call out Alma for all the horrible things she has done in the name of preserving the miracle. Casita falls apart and almost everyone is able to get out, but Oscar is hiding with Mirabel at the time. The family thinks he’s been crushed to death in the collapse, and Isabela in her grief blames Alma for it.]]
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Isabela notices a conspicuous crack in Mirabel's door before realizing [[spoiler:that the candle is missing. This leads to a domino effect that leads to a mass PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage, the entire family CallingTheOldWomanOut to Alma and Casita's collapse.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: Dolores and Oscar's abilities are considered this by most of the family as they make privacy virtually impossible, to say nothing of the challenges for the Madrigals in question.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Dolores and Oscar's abilities are considered this by most of the family as they make privacy virtually impossible, to say nothing of the challenges for the Madrigals in question. [[spoiler:It's when she sees how much the miracle makes Oscar suffer does Mirabel decide to end it all and snuff the candle out.]]
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* TheLastStraw: [[spoiler:When Mirabel steals the candle and extinguishes it, everyone suffers from a PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage. It's when Alma pays no one else's feelings any mind and starts accusing the family of stealing it does her family have enough of her shit, each of them taking turns throwing her abuse back at her. This results in Casita's collapse.]]
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* NotHelpingYourCase: When Isabela snaps that she won't let Alma throw her son out of the house, Alma tries to calm her down by saying she won't do that again. The "again" doesn't reassure Isabela or Mariano, rather reminding them that she's done it twice before, and the second time she did it, it was to Isa's sister who was Oscar's age when she was exiled.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: When Isabela snaps that she won't let Alma throw her son out of the house, Alma tries to calm her down by saying she won't do that again. The "again" doesn't reassure Isabela or Mariano, rather reminding them that she's done it twice before, and the second time she did it, did, it was to Isa's sister who was Oscar's age when she was exiled.
