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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: At the end of the story, the gang are still sharpteeth, which means they can never live in the Great Valley again. They tearfully say goodbye to their families before departing to the Mysterious Beyond forever.
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* TyrannosaurusRex: Chomper, his family, and Red Claw all make appearances in the story.
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]. It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]].
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The story can be found [[https://www.spawned two sequels, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a sequel called ''Song net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters Song of the Hunters'' that can be found [[https://www.Hunters]]'' and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]. It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]].
Mender's Tale]]'', but only ''Song of the Hunters'' was ever completed.
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** The Rainbowface courtship ritual involves chewing up fruits and feeding them to one another. According to [[WordOfGod the Author's Notes]] this is a toned-down version of a real bird ritual where the food is actually [[Squick regurgitated.]] Due to Chronos not being an ordinary rainbowface he doesn't know this, and learns several incorrect (and embarrassing) courtship displays from Mr. Thicknose. Logos does know, because she actually read the briefing.
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** The Rainbowface courtship ritual involves chewing up fruits and feeding them to one another. According to [[WordOfGod the Author's Notes]] this is a toned-down version of a real bird ritual where the food is actually [[Squick regurgitated.]] regurgitated. Due to Chronos not being an ordinary rainbowface he doesn't know this, and learns several incorrect (and embarrassing) courtship displays from Mr. Thicknose. Logos does know, because she actually read the briefing.
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]].
It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]].
It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]].
It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]].
It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]].
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. \n It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', Hunters'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]. \n It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]].
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* ActionGirl: Terri, as implied by Dein's flashback. Volant to a lesser extent.
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* ActionGirl: ActionGirl:
** Terri, as implied by Dein's flashback. Volant to a lesser extent.
** Terri, as implied by Dein's flashback. Volant to a lesser extent.
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->"Littlefoot?" Chomper called softly.
->The fast biter looked up from his handiwork and noticed his sharptooth friend looking at him with an understanding expression. His face was not accusing, nor coddling, but rather seemed to convey a simple message.
->Now you know what it is like to be a sharptooth.
->Indeed he did. Littlefoot took a look at his clawed forelimbs and noted that they were drenched in the same still-warm blood which coated everything else in the vicinity. Slowly looking back down at his handiwork, he noted that he could see his own reflection in the pool of blood which had poured from the hapless longneck's body. The reflection which stared back at him was not one that he would have recognized several days ago. It was the reflection of a sharptooth after a hunt. It was the image of a killer.
->Because I am a killer now.
->The fast biter looked up from his handiwork and noticed his sharptooth friend looking at him with an understanding expression. His face was not accusing, nor coddling, but rather seemed to convey a simple message.
->Now you know what it is like to be a sharptooth.
->Indeed he did. Littlefoot took a look at his clawed forelimbs and noted that they were drenched in the same still-warm blood which coated everything else in the vicinity. Slowly looking back down at his handiwork, he noted that he could see his own reflection in the pool of blood which had poured from the hapless longneck's body. The reflection which stared back at him was not one that he would have recognized several days ago. It was the reflection of a sharptooth after a hunt. It was the image of a killer.
->Because I am a killer now.
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->"Littlefoot?" Chomper called softly.
->Thesoftly.\\
The fast biter looked up from his handiwork and noticed his sharptooth friend looking at him with an understanding expression. His face was not accusing, nor coddling, but rather seemed to convey a simplemessage.
->Nowmessage.\\
Now you know what it is like to be asharptooth.
->Indeedsharptooth.\\
Indeed he did. Littlefoot took a look at his clawed forelimbs and noted that they were drenched in the same still-warm blood which coated everything else in the vicinity. Slowly looking back down at his handiwork, he noted that he could see his own reflection in the pool of blood which had poured from the hapless longneck's body. The reflection which stared back at him was not one that he would have recognized several days ago. It was the reflection of a sharptooth after a hunt. It was the image of akiller.
->Becausekiller.\\
Because I am a killer now.
->The
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* Antimatter: The Rainbowfaces' [[RayGun Repressor]] is mentioned to be powered by a milligram of antimatter.
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* Antimatter: {{Antimatter}}: The Rainbowfaces' [[RayGun Repressor]] is mentioned to be powered by a milligram of antimatter.
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* GenreSavvy
** The rainbowfaces when responding to [[spoiler:Galek's order to kill the children]].
** The rainbowfaces when responding to [[spoiler:Galek's order to kill the children]].
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** Cera, of course, is just as much of an action girl as she is in canon, and even Ducky makes good use of her new body.
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** The Rainbowface courtship ritual involves chewing up fruits and feeding them to one another. According to [[WordOfGod the Author's Notes]] this is a toned-down version of a real bird ritual where the food is actually [[Squick regurgitated.]] Due to Chronos not being an ordinary rainbowface he doesn't know this, and learns several incorrect (and embarrassing) courtship displays from Mr. Thicknose. Logos does know, because she actually read the briefing.
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** [[spoiler:Dana and Dinah]]
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** Red Claw's army takes this UpToEleven. To join his pack, young fastbiters are forced to murder their own loved ones to destroy their sense of honor and morality.
** Calin takes it to [[MoralEventHorizon truly horrific extremes]] [[spoiler: in his slaughter of the Hidden Runners. One child was forced to ''eat his own younger brother'' before being killed himself.]]
** Calin takes it to [[MoralEventHorizon truly horrific extremes]] [[spoiler: in his slaughter of the Hidden Runners. One child was forced to ''eat his own younger brother'' before being killed himself.]]
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** [[spoiler:Mr. Thicknose stays behind to set off the Rainbowfaces' weapon.]]
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* FalseFriend: If only Zarc knew what Calin was really like...
* FauxAffablyEvil: Calin is clearly this. He puts on a smug, yet cordial demeanor. He even waves and talks in a conversational tone ''as he is discussing how his pack is going to kill the dinosaurs that he is conversing with''.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Calin is clearly this. He puts on a smug, yet cordial demeanor. He even waves and talks in a conversational tone ''as he is discussing how his pack is going to kill the dinosaurs that he is conversing with''.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Calin is clearly this. He puts on a smug, yet cordial demeanor. He even waves and talks in a conversational tone ''as he is discussing how his pack is going to kill the dinosaurs that he is conversing with''.
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* BadAss: Virtually all of the members of the gang have earned this title at one time or another.
** [[spoiler:Ruby]] convincing the valley to accept Chomper despite massive opposition by placing her life on the line.
** [[spoiler:Littlefoot]] makes the clubtails chase him in order to distract them from his friends.
** [[spoiler:Chomper]] helps the pack escape from Screech and Thud during their initial chase of the pack.
** [[spoiler:Ducky]] saves the pack again when Screech and Thud chase them for a second time.
** [[spoiler:Ducky]] comes to the rescue of Petrie in chapter 24.
** [[spoiler:Chronos tricks Logos into thinking that he killed the children, so that the Consortium Council would believe that the 'contamination' had been dealt with. Saving the entire pack (and the planet)]].
** [[spoiler:Both Skytail and Scarflank]] have heroic sacrifices in their final battles.
** Virtually everyone, without exception, has a crowning moment of badass in the final battle for the valley.
** [[spoiler:Ruby]] convincing the valley to accept Chomper despite massive opposition by placing her life on the line.
** [[spoiler:Littlefoot]] makes the clubtails chase him in order to distract them from his friends.
** [[spoiler:Chomper]] helps the pack escape from Screech and Thud during their initial chase of the pack.
** [[spoiler:Ducky]] saves the pack again when Screech and Thud chase them for a second time.
** [[spoiler:Ducky]] comes to the rescue of Petrie in chapter 24.
** [[spoiler:Chronos tricks Logos into thinking that he killed the children, so that the Consortium Council would believe that the 'contamination' had been dealt with. Saving the entire pack (and the planet)]].
** [[spoiler:Both Skytail and Scarflank]] have heroic sacrifices in their final battles.
** Virtually everyone, without exception, has a crowning moment of badass in the final battle for the valley.
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It is a story in which one poorly thought out wish leads to a change in destiny for all involved. In the days that follow, each of the seven dinosaurs has to adapt to a world that is outside of their understanding. The hunted have become the hunters and they must now learn to either accept their new predatory needs or to die horribly. In this story we follow them on their path to accepting their new lives. Along the way, they must survive not only the elements in the Mysterious Beyond, but also vengeful parents and the monstrous Red Claw. Is their new reality pointless or is there some meaning to their new lives?
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It is a story in which one poorly thought out wish leads to a change in destiny for all involved. In the days that follow, each of the seven dinosaurs has to adapt to a world that is outside of their understanding. The hunted have become the hunters and they must now learn to either accept their new predatory needs or to die horribly. In this story we follow them on their path to accepting their new lives. Along the way, they must survive not only the elements in the Mysterious Beyond, but also vengeful parents and the monstrous Red Claw. Is their new reality pointless or is there some meaning to their new lives?
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* Socially-AwkwardHero: This is Mender in spades. She is brave enough to [[spoiler: challenge Seeker's pack after she believes her friends have been captured or worse]] but yet [[spoiler: there mere thought of embarrassing herself in front of others is enough to make her shut down.]]
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* Socially-AwkwardHero: SociallyAwkwardHero: This is Mender in spades. She is brave enough to [[spoiler: challenge Seeker's pack after she believes her friends have been captured or worse]] but yet [[spoiler: there mere thought of embarrassing herself in front of others is enough to make her shut down.]]
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** [[spoiler:And then there is nearly any scene featuring Calin. His actions against the hidden runners were evil by the standards of even the most vile of sharpteeth]].
** [[spoiler:Grandma and Grandpa Longneck sacrifice themselves to shield the pack from falling rocks at the end of the Battle for the Valley]].
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** Red Claw turns it up a knotch. He [[spoiler: publically announces to everyone about Calin's injury and then offers him protection. This leaves the fast biter with nowhere to go or run, and knowing that death is just around the corner]]. Needless to say, this does ''wonders'' for Calin's already destructive personality.
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** Red Claw turns it up a knotch. He [[spoiler: publically publicly announces to everyone about Calin's injury and then offers him protection. This leaves the fast biter with nowhere to go or run, and knowing that death is just around the corner]]. Needless to say, this does ''wonders'' for Calin's already destructive personality.
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* Socially-AwkwardHero: This is Mender in spades. She is brave enough to [[spoiler: challenge Seeker's pack after she believes her friends have been captured or worse]] but yet [[spoiler: there mere thought of embarrassing herself in front of others is enough to make her shut down.]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]] It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]].
It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Huntershere]] here]].
It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Talehere]]
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It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a sequel called ''Song of the Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]here]] It also has a third story called ''Mender's Tale'' that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11964771/1/Mender-s-Tale here]]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Although he's tan, Calin's skin is pale enough to be considered this.
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a sequel called Song ''Song of the Hunters, Hunters'', that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a squeal called Song of the Hunters, that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]]. It now has a squeal sequel called Song of the Hunters, that can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10967589/1/Songs-of-the-Hunters here]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/1/The-Seven-Hunters here]].
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* PteroSoarer: Played with; while Petrie starts out as an outdated ''Pteranodon'', his carnivore form is a fairly accurate Azhdarchid.
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* PteroSoarer: Played with; while Petrie starts out as an outdated ''Pteranodon'', his carnivore form is a fairly accurate Azhdarchid.''Cearadactylus'' (which should be a fish-eater like ''Pteranodon'').
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* TheNeedsoftheMany - In one scene, Petrie is asked if given a chance, would he alter the way he handled things with Rinkus and Sierra to avoid [[spoiler: the torture and slaughter of an entire hidden runner pack]]. His response is no, with his reasoning that if he hadn't said what he did, then many countless more lives would have been lost when Redclaw attacked Haven Valley.
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* TheNeedsoftheMany TheNeedsOfTheMany - In one scene, Petrie is asked if given a chance, would he alter the way he handled things with Rinkus and Sierra to avoid [[spoiler: the torture and slaughter of an entire hidden runner pack]]. His response is no, with his reasoning that if he hadn't said what he did, then many countless more lives would have been lost when Redclaw attacked Haven Valley.
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* TheNeedsoftheMany - In one scene, Petrie is asked if given a chance, would he alter the way he handled things with Rinkus and Sierra to avoid [[spoiler: the torture and slaughter of an entire hidden runner pack]]. His response is no, with his reasoning that if he hadn't said what he did, then many countless more lives would have been lost when Redclaw attacked Haven Valley.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Calin's pack regularly consumes any pack member they kill.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Calin's pack regularly consumes any pack member they kill. They actually have to be told not to eat two of their own fallen comrades that died of poisoning.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The story is over 526,000 words long, excluding author's notes.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The story is over 526,000 words long, excluding author's notes. This makes it the longest Land Before Time story on fanfiction.net by over 140,000 words.