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** When Palmer says "We're giants" in chapter 4, Lasky shoots her a DeathGlare. Also counts as an InUniverse TakeThatUs.
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** When Palmer says "We're giants" in chapter 4, Lasky shoots her a DeathGlare. Also counts as an InUniverse TakeThatUs.
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* MythologyGag: Reapers being able to do StarKilling seems to be a reference to how ''Franchise/MassEffect2'' had an AbortedArc of a star dying prematurely, which was suggested to be due to artificial means out of reach to the Citadel races.
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* MythologyGag: Reapers being able to do StarKilling seems to be a reference to how ''Franchise/MassEffect2'' ''VideoGame/MassEffect2'' had an AbortedArc of a star dying prematurely, which was suggested to be due to artificial means out of reach to the Citadel races.
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Administrivia/NeedsABetterDescription. Also has not been updated since 2015 and is most likely DeadFic.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.The Onyx Stars to Fanfic.The Onyx Stars. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8781720/1/The-Onyx-Stars The Onyx Stars]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-onyx-stars-halo-mass-effect.243712/ discussion thread]], continued [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-onyx-stars-the-second-thread.274313/ here]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}[=/=]Franchise/MassEffect'' crossover fanfic by Sith/The Hidden Sith.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8781720/1/The-Onyx-Stars The Onyx Stars]]'' (SpaceBattles (Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-onyx-stars-halo-mass-effect.243712/ discussion thread]], continued [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-onyx-stars-the-second-thread.274313/ here]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}[=/=]Franchise/MassEffect'' crossover fanfic by Sith/The Hidden Sith.
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** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:The Illusive Man is Michael Sullivan. The Reapers have begun their attack on the new Reach.]]
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** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:The Illusive Man is Michael Sullivan. The "Full Mother" the Geth worship is ''some'' form of Cortana. The Reapers have begun their attack on the new Reach.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
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* WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:The Illusive Man is Michael Sullivan. The Reapers have begun their attack on the new Reach.]]
** Chapter 15. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
** Chapter 14. [[spoiler:The Illusive Man is Michael Sullivan. The Reapers have begun their attack on the new Reach.]]
** Chapter 15. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Chapter 16 reveals that [[spoiler:Offensive Bias has become obsessed with recreating the Forerunners at any cost.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Chapter 16 15 reveals that [[spoiler:Offensive Bias has become obsessed with recreating the Forerunners at any cost.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 16. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 16.15. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
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* WorfBarrage: In chapter 16, Infinity throws everything she has at [[spoiler:Offensive Bias' flagship]] and doesn't do anything more than dent the shields.
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* WorfBarrage: In chapter 16, 15, Infinity throws everything she has at [[spoiler:Offensive Bias' flagship]] and doesn't do anything more than dent the shields.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Chapter 16 reveals that [[spoiler:Offensive Bias has become obsessed with recreating the Forerunners at any cost.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 16. [[spoiler:Arcturus Station has fallen. The new Reach has fallen. The Reapers, with Offensive Bias at their head, are attacking Earth.]]
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--> "No sir, I am picking up [[spoiler:Forerunner alloys]] however on the largest vessel and zero organic life signs."
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--> "No sir, I am picking up [[spoiler:Forerunner alloys]] however on the largest vessel and zero organic life signs.""
* WorfBarrage: In chapter 16, Infinity throws everything she has at [[spoiler:Offensive Bias' flagship]] and doesn't do anything more than dent the shields.
* WorfBarrage: In chapter 16, Infinity throws everything she has at [[spoiler:Offensive Bias' flagship]] and doesn't do anything more than dent the shields.
