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* AchillesHeel: [[spoiler: Attacks that hit [[TheHero Alex]] and enter the keyhole on [[WeaponOfChoice the Lockshield]] deal direct damage to his heart, and are far more damaging than other attacks. Except that one from [[EldritchAbomination La]][[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger vos]] that [[OurHeroIsDead killed him]] in the third story, [[CaptainObvious of course]].]]
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* AchillesHeel: [[spoiler: Attacks that hit [[TheHero Alex]] and enter the keyhole on [[WeaponOfChoice the Lockshield]] deal direct damage to his heart, and are far more damaging than other attacks. Except that one from [[EldritchAbomination La]][[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger vos]] that [[OurHeroIsDead killed him]] in the third story, [[CaptainObvious of course]].story.]]
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* LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe: Alex's main weapon is called the Lockshield. [[CaptainObvious Because it's opposite to the Keyblade.]]
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* LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe: Alex's main weapon is called the Lockshield. [[CaptainObvious Because it's opposite to the Keyblade.]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes green eyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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* [[spoiler:CainAndAbel: [[TheCorruptible Erica]] and [[TheHero Alex]] respectively when the former becomes one of TheHeartless. Abel wins, but becomes TheStoic about the entire affair as a result.]]
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* [[spoiler:CainAndAbel: [[TheCorruptible CainAndAbel: [[spoiler:[[TheCorruptible Erica]] and [[TheHero Alex]] respectively when the former becomes one of TheHeartless. Abel wins, but becomes TheStoic about the entire affair as a result.]]
* CastingAShadow: Alexander's [[SuperpoweredEvilSide AntiForm]] has these abilities. [[spoiler:Even more so after [[BreakTheCutie two straight years of]] [[ColdBloodedTorture Dark Eco exposure]] in the fourth story.]]
** Thus far, each of the [[BigBadDuumvirate Apprentices of Ansem the Wise]] seem to only use darkness based abilities as powers, rather than their [[TheSoulless Nobodies']] ElementalPowers.
*** Though Aeleus/Elaeus does end up sleeping in the earth for millions of years; Earth is his Nobody Lexaeus' element.
** Thus far, each of the [[BigBadDuumvirate Apprentices of Ansem the Wise]] seem to only use darkness based abilities as powers, rather than their [[TheSoulless Nobodies']] ElementalPowers.
*** Though Aeleus/Elaeus does end up sleeping in the earth for millions of years; Earth is his Nobody Lexaeus' element.
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* DarkIsEdgy: Alexander's [[SuperpoweredEvilSide AntiForm]] has these abilities. [[spoiler:Even more so after [[BreakTheCutie two straight years of]] [[ColdBloodedTorture Dark Eco exposure]] in the fourth story.]]
** Thus far, each of the [[BigBadDuumvirate Apprentices of Ansem the Wise]] seem to only use darkness based abilities as powers, rather than their [[TheSoulless Nobodies']] ElementalPowers.
*** Though Aeleus/Elaeus does end up sleeping in the earth for millions of years; Earth is his Nobody Lexaeus' element.
** Thus far, each of the [[BigBadDuumvirate Apprentices of Ansem the Wise]] seem to only use darkness based abilities as powers, rather than their [[TheSoulless Nobodies']] ElementalPowers.
*** Though Aeleus/Elaeus does end up sleeping in the earth for millions of years; Earth is his Nobody Lexaeus' element.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3055278/1/The_Interference_Final_Mix The Interference]] by Newbie-Spud of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/ Fanfiction.net]] is a series of {{FanFic}}s that centers around the exploits of the author's [[AuthorAvatar self insert]] 'Alexander Karsath' as he ventures through different video game worlds and making alterations to the expected storyline. The series started with the original story set in the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]] ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' universe and has such [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover moved through]] the game worlds of ''VideoGame/FullmetalAlchemist2CurseOfTheCrimsonElixir'', VideoGame/ChronoTrigger, and is currently in the game-verse of ''VideoGame/JakIIRenegade''.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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* BigBadDuumvirate: The [[DeceptiveDisciple Apprentices]] of [[KingdomHearts Ansem the Wise]] have served as this for the sequels. Only one has appearing in each of them as a main villain, though.
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* BigBadDuumvirate: The [[DeceptiveDisciple Apprentices]] of [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Ansem the Wise]] have served as this for the sequels. Only one has appearing in each of them as a main villain, though.
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* BoringButPractical: This is basically Jak's fighting style shell in a nutshell. He doesn't have any flashy KingdomHearts or VideoGame/ChronoTrigger magic or ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' UsefulNotes/{{Alchemy}}. But he can easily defeat high level Heartless with just a few punches and his Morph Gun can take down [[spoiler:[[TheDragon Joumae]]]].
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* BoringButPractical: This is basically Jak's fighting style shell in a nutshell. He doesn't have any flashy KingdomHearts ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' or VideoGame/ChronoTrigger ''VideoGame/ChronoTrigger'' magic or ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' UsefulNotes/{{Alchemy}}. But he can easily defeat high level Heartless with just a few punches and his Morph Gun can take down [[spoiler:[[TheDragon Joumae]]]].
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[VideoGame/JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[VideoGame/JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* FinalBossNewDimension: In addition to the battle with [[KingdomHearts Xemnas]] in [[VeryDefinitelyFinalDungeon the Realm of Nothingness]], [[spoiler:Elaeus is followed to his own personal pocket dimension that he had used to TimeTravel in [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Guardia]] using Alex's newly created [[EleventhHourSuperpower Time Fracture design]].]]
* FireIceLightning: The Fire series, Blizzard series, and Thunder series respectively, if the [[KingdomHearts Heartless Seal]] Lockshield design is active.
* FireIceLightning: The Fire series, Blizzard series, and Thunder series respectively, if the [[KingdomHearts Heartless Seal]] Lockshield design is active.
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* FinalBossNewDimension: In addition to the battle with [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xemnas]] in [[VeryDefinitelyFinalDungeon the Realm of Nothingness]], [[spoiler:Elaeus is followed to his own personal pocket dimension that he had used to TimeTravel in [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Guardia]] using Alex's newly created [[EleventhHourSuperpower Time Fracture design]].]]
* FireIceLightning: The Fire series, Blizzard series, and Thunder series respectively, if the[[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Heartless Seal]] Lockshield design is active.
* FireIceLightning: The Fire series, Blizzard series, and Thunder series respectively, if the
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** TheHeart ''and'' TheChick: Sora from KingdomHearts and Alphonse Elric from ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' are TheHeart and TheChick at the same time. Due to both being the nicest, kindest protagonists.
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** TheHeart ''and'' TheChick: Sora from KingdomHearts ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and Alphonse Elric from ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' are TheHeart and TheChick at the same time. Due to both being the nicest, kindest protagonists.
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* PunnyName: Any character who had one in the original games, but [[spoiler:Joumae counts somewhat.]] The Lockshield itself, of course, since it's the literal opposite of '[[KingdomHearts Keyblade]]'.
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* PunnyName: Any character who had one in the original games, but [[spoiler:Joumae counts somewhat.]] The Lockshield itself, of course, since it's the literal opposite of '[[KingdomHearts '[[Franchise/KingdomHearts Keyblade]]'.
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* StarterVillain: In the grand scheme of things Xemnas is this because of ''KingdomHearts'' KudzuPlot.
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* StarterVillain: In the grand scheme of things Xemnas is this because of ''KingdomHearts'' ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' KudzuPlot.
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* ThrowingYourShieldAlwaysWorks: Strike Raid for Alex, modified from [[KingdomHearts Sora's]] version.
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* ThrowingYourShieldAlwaysWorks: Strike Raid for Alex, modified from [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Sora's]] version.
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* Alchemy: From ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'', yes.
** AlchemyIsMagic: As in ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist''.
** AlchemyIsMagic: As in ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist''.
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* BoringButPractical: This is basically Jak's fighting style shell in a nutshell. He doesn't have any flashy KingdomHearts or VideoGame/ChronoTrigger magic or ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' {{Alchemy}}. But he can easily defeat high level Heartless with just a few punches and his Morph Gun can take down [[spoiler:[[TheDragon Joumae]]]].
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* BoringButPractical: This is basically Jak's fighting style shell in a nutshell. He doesn't have any flashy KingdomHearts or VideoGame/ChronoTrigger magic or ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' {{Alchemy}}.UsefulNotes/{{Alchemy}}. But he can easily defeat high level Heartless with just a few punches and his Morph Gun can take down [[spoiler:[[TheDragon Joumae]]]].
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter [[VideoGame/JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Alex goes through what he experiences as two years of constant bombardments with [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter Dark Eco]] in the first few chapters of the fourth story along with Jak.]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Alex goes through what he experiences as two years of constant bombardments with [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter [[VideoGame/JakAndDaxter Dark Eco]] in the first few chapters of the fourth story along with Jak.]]
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** TheLancer: Jak from ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter''. An AntiHero and the protagonist that doesn't hang onto Alex's every word and is most likely to question his orders.
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** TheLancer: Jak from ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter''.''VideoGame/JakAndDaxter''. An AntiHero and the protagonist that doesn't hang onto Alex's every word and is most likely to question his orders.
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** TeamPet: Daxter from ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'', DeadpanSnarker extraordinaire, the first to complain about ''anything'' and well... he's a talking animal, what other position would he have fit into?
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** TeamPet: Daxter from ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'', ''VideoGame/JakAndDaxter'', DeadpanSnarker extraordinaire, the first to complain about ''anything'' and well... he's a talking animal, what other position would he have fit into?
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* {{Mutant}}: Alex becomes one in ''Dark Renegade'' after his [[spoiler: Dark Eco Treatments]] he changes from a normal human into a ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'' elf gaining increased strength, speed, and agility to go with it.
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* {{Mutant}}: Alex becomes one in ''Dark Renegade'' after his [[spoiler: Dark Eco Treatments]] he changes from a normal human into a ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'' ''VideoGame/JakAndDaxter'' elf gaining increased strength, speed, and agility to go with it.
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The work has been on hiatus for a few years now, with Newbie-Spud having created the webcomic ''Webcomic/FriendshipIsDragons'' and the podcast ''WebOriginal/FalloutIsDragons'' in the meantime.
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The work has been on hiatus for a few years now, with Newbie-Spud having created the webcomic ''Webcomic/FriendshipIsDragons'' and the podcast ''WebOriginal/FalloutIsDragons'' ''Podcast/FalloutIsDragons'' in the meantime.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler:The [[JakAndDaxter [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Alex goes through what he experiences as two years of constant bombardments with [[JakAndDaxter Dark Eco]] in the first few chapters of the fourth story along with Jak.]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Alex goes through what he experiences as two years of constant bombardments with [[JakAndDaxter [[Franchise/JakAndDaxter Dark Eco]] in the first few chapters of the fourth story along with Jak.]]
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** TheLancer: Jak from JakAndDaxter. An AntiHero and the protagonist that doesn't hang onto Alex's every word and is most likely to question his orders.
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** TheLancer: Jak from JakAndDaxter.''Franchise/JakAndDaxter''. An AntiHero and the protagonist that doesn't hang onto Alex's every word and is most likely to question his orders.
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** TeamPet: Daxter from JakAndDaxter, DeadpanSnarker extraordinaire, the first to complain about ''anything'' and well... he's a talking animal, what other position would he have fit into?
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** TeamPet: Daxter from JakAndDaxter, ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'', DeadpanSnarker extraordinaire, the first to complain about ''anything'' and well... he's a talking animal, what other position would he have fit into?
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* {{Mutant}}: Alex becomes one in ''Dark Renegade'' after his [[spoiler: Dark Eco Treatments]] he changes from a normal human into a JakAndDaxter elf gaining increased strength, speed, and agility to go with it.
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* {{Mutant}}: Alex becomes one in ''Dark Renegade'' after his [[spoiler: Dark Eco Treatments]] he changes from a normal human into a JakAndDaxter ''Franchise/JakAndDaxter'' elf gaining increased strength, speed, and agility to go with it.
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* {{Badass}}: All of the protagonists, but Alex, as someone who has gone through every story, is probably the top in that respect.
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** A notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[VideoGame/JakIIRenegade Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
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** A notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[VideoGame/JakIIRenegade Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy savvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Baron Praxis compared to every other villain, he manipulates Alex into being his hitman and knows better than to trust the enigmatic man in a black coat that offers him unlimited power.
** A better example would be [[spoiler: Braig]] who realizes that TheGoodGuysAlwaysWin in ''KingdomHearts''.
** A better example would be [[spoiler: Braig]] who realizes that TheGoodGuysAlwaysWin in ''KingdomHearts''.
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* GenreSavvy: Alex is this, first and foremost. Other characters develop this knowledge over time, in varying degrees.
** WrongGenreSavvy: Alex completely misunderstood the rules of the DargerAndEdgier Haven City leading to some rather traumatic experiances, it takes him two years to become GenreSavvy again.
** WrongGenreSavvy: Alex completely misunderstood the rules of the DargerAndEdgier Haven City leading to some rather traumatic experiances, it takes him two years to become GenreSavvy again.
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There was a hiatus recently due to Newbie-Spud taking way too many extracurricular activities, but once they were over he got back to work.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3055278/1/The_Interference_Final_Mix The Interference]] by Newbie-Spud of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/ Fanfiction.net]] is a series of {{FanFic}}s that centers around the exploits of the author's [[AuthorAvatar self insert]] 'Alexander Karsath' as he ventures through different video game worlds and making alterations to the expected storyline. The series started with the original story set in the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]] universe and has such [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover moved through]] the game worlds of ''VideoGame/FullmetalAlchemist2CurseOfTheCrimsonElixir'', VideoGame/ChronoTrigger, and is currently in the game-verse of [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3055278/1/The_Interference_Final_Mix The Interference]] by Newbie-Spud of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/ Fanfiction.net]] is a series of {{FanFic}}s that centers around the exploits of the author's [[AuthorAvatar self insert]] 'Alexander Karsath' as he ventures through different video game worlds and making alterations to the expected storyline. The series started with the original story set in the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]] universe and has such [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover moved through]] the game worlds of ''VideoGame/FullmetalAlchemist2CurseOfTheCrimsonElixir'', VideoGame/ChronoTrigger, and is currently in the game-verse of [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
''VideoGame/JakIIRenegade''.
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** A notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[JakII [[VideoGame/JakIIRenegade Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
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** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{Jak II}}'s DarkerAndEdgier plot.
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** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{Jak II}}'s ''VideoGame/JakIIRenegade''[='s=] DarkerAndEdgier plot.
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* EverythingFades: As per the original games, but ''not'' [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
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* AStormIsComing: The [[ChronoTrigger Black Wind]] howls for [[spoiler:Alex, not Crono]].
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* AStormIsComing: The [[ChronoTrigger [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Black Wind]] howls for [[spoiler:Alex, not Crono]].
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** Aeleus and [[ChronoTrigger Lavos]] form a literally symbiotic relationship in ''The Wings of Time''.
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** Aeleus and [[ChronoTrigger [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Lavos]] form a literally symbiotic relationship in ''The Wings of Time''.
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* CrutchCharacter: Alex, Edward, and Alphonse are this to the ChronoTrigger cast in ''The Wings of Time''. The ChronoTrigger characters all start at around level one while the three Interferences are in the fifties to eighties level wise and their existence allows them to avert the ArbitraryHeadcountLimit of the story making things much easier, [[TropesAreNotBad Although this doesn't affect the quality of the story.]]
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* CrutchCharacter: Alex, Edward, and Alphonse are this to the ChronoTrigger VideoGame/ChronoTrigger cast in ''The Wings of Time''. The ChronoTrigger VideoGame/ChronoTrigger characters all start at around level one while the three Interferences are in the fifties to eighties level wise and their existence allows them to avert the ArbitraryHeadcountLimit of the story making things much easier, [[TropesAreNotBad Although this doesn't affect the quality of the story.]]
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** Dilan and [[FullmetalAlchemist Jack Crowley]] for ''The Curse of the Crimson Elixir''. Though they break up when Crowley finds out he's fictional and doesn't take it well.
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** Dilan and [[FullmetalAlchemist Jack Crowley]] Crowley for ''The Curse of the Crimson Elixir''. Though they break up when Crowley finds out he's fictional and doesn't take it well.
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* {{Sidekick}}: Alex was this to Sora in the first story, but through hard work he got the SidekickGraduationStick in ''The Wings of Time'' and became his own hero.
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* {{Sidekick}}: Alex was this to Sora in the first story, but through hard work he got the SidekickGraduationStick SidekickGraduationsStick in ''The Wings of Time'' and became his own hero.
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** a notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[JakII Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
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* BiggerBad: The Titans have a connection to a person only known as 'Sister' who they all seem to worship and of course, Master Xehanort is waiting in his corner.
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* BiggerBad: The Titans have a connection to a person only known as 'Sister' who they all seem to worship worship, and of course, Master Xehanort is waiting in his corner.the wing.
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** A better example would be [[spoiler: Braig]] who realizes that The GoodGuysAlways win in ''KingdomHearts''.
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** A better example would be [[spoiler: Braig]] who realizes that The GoodGuysAlways win TheGoodGuysAlwaysWin in ''KingdomHearts''.
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* BigBad: Xemnas for the first story.
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** BigBadEnsemble: The Apprentices have recently encountered competition in the form of the enigmatic Hyperion and an unknown number of associates.
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* BiggerBad: The Titans have a connection to a person only known as 'Sister' who they all seem to worship.
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** Each Apprentice forms a BigBadDuumvirate with the BigBad of the game they interfere in.
** Dilan and [[FullmetalAlchemist Jack Crowley]] for ''The Curse of the Crimson Elixir''. Though they break up when Crowley finds out he's fictional and doesn't take it well.
** Aeleus and [[ChronoTrigger Lavos]] form a literally symbiotic relationship in ''The Wings of Time''.
** a notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[JakII Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
* BigBadEnsemble: The Apprentices have recently encountered competition in the form of the enigmatic Hyperion and an unknown number of associates.
** ''Dark Renegade'' noticeably has its own BigBadEnsemble due to its canon GambitPileup with Baron Praxis, Even, Metal Kor, and Veger all competing to be the BigBad and due to Even destroying the plot the title of the BigBad is anyone's to grab.
* BiggerBad: The Titans have a connection to a person only known as 'Sister' who they all seem toworship.worship and of course, Master Xehanort is waiting in his corner.
** Dilan and [[FullmetalAlchemist Jack Crowley]] for ''The Curse of the Crimson Elixir''. Though they break up when Crowley finds out he's fictional and doesn't take it well.
** Aeleus and [[ChronoTrigger Lavos]] form a literally symbiotic relationship in ''The Wings of Time''.
** a notable subversion happens in ''Dark Renegade'' with Even ''thinking'' he's in one with [[JakII Baron Praxis]] who is actually DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough to not trust him, and is planning to betray him.
* BigBadEnsemble: The Apprentices have recently encountered competition in the form of the enigmatic Hyperion and an unknown number of associates.
** ''Dark Renegade'' noticeably has its own BigBadEnsemble due to its canon GambitPileup with Baron Praxis, Even, Metal Kor, and Veger all competing to be the BigBad and due to Even destroying the plot the title of the BigBad is anyone's to grab.
* BiggerBad: The Titans have a connection to a person only known as 'Sister' who they all seem to
* CrapsackWorld: Haven City really sticks out in TheVerse a an A-Grade piece of crap with it going out of its way to ruin peoples' lives, is an all around nasty piece of work, and doesn't pretend to be what its not. [[TropesAreNotBad This actually makes the story better.]]
** A better example would be [[spoiler: Braig]] who realizes that The GoodGuysAlways win in ''KingdomHearts''.
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* {{Sidekick}]: alex was this to Sora in the first story, but through hard work he got the SidekicksGraduationStick in ''The Wings of Time'' and became his own hero.
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* {{Sidekick}]: alex {{Sidekick}}: Alex was this to Sora in the first story, but through hard work he got the SidekicksGraduationStick SidekickGraduationStick in ''The Wings of Time'' and became his own hero.
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: Aeleus noticeably admires and worships Lavos' parasitic evolutionary abilities and considers it the UltimateLifeform.
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* {{Sidekick}]: alex was this to Sora in the first story, but through hard work he got the SidekicksGraduationStick in ''The Wings of Time'' and became his own hero.
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* StarterVillain: In the grand scheme of things Xemnas is this because of ''KingdomHearts'' KudzuPlot.
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** Aeleus, ironically, becomes one during the end of ''The Wings of Time''.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Compare Alex in the first story to ''The Wings of Time'' and you'll wonder how he got so good.
** That's nothing compared to the levels he took in ''Dark Renegade'' where he has become a million times more awesome and hardcore.
** A villainous example is Aeleus, who went from a stereotypical DarkLord that Alex effortlessly curbstomped to a near omnipotent TimeMaster DimensionLord that almost erased Alex and friends from existence.
** That's nothing compared to the levels he took in ''Dark Renegade'' where he has become a million times more awesome and hardcore.
** A villainous example is Aeleus, who went from a stereotypical DarkLord that Alex effortlessly curbstomped to a near omnipotent TimeMaster DimensionLord that almost erased Alex and friends from existence.
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* WakeUpCallBoss: Aeleus in a nutshell. He was the first villainous Interference that really abused his powers and successfully used them to become an all powerful DimensionLord.
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** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{ Jak II}}'s DarkerAndEdgier plot.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physical equal, and curbstomped him.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physical equal, and curbstomped him.
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** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{ Jak {{Jak II}}'s DarkerAndEdgier plot.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physicalequal, equal,curbstomped him, and curbstomped him.has left him in a rather bad situation.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physical
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* ArchEnemy: Alex's relationship with Even is far more personal than with the other Apprentices.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ''Dark Renegade'' in comparison to every other story. This is justified given that Haven City is a CrapsackWorld and Alex himself has become DarkerAndEdgier due to his experiances in that world, now actively cursing, using guns, and has become a ManipulativeBastard.
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* KnightOfCerebus: ''Dark Renegade'' as ''three'' of them. In order:
** The first is Baron Praxis, who unlike Xemnas,[[spoiler: isn't trying to lose]], is more competent than Crowley, who was a canon FillerVillain, and doesn't play OrcusOnHisThrone like Lavos. His political position also makes him harder top defeat because if he's toppled at the wrong time...well, there goes the neighborhood.
** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{ Jak II}}'s DarkerAndEdgier plot.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physical equal, and curbstomped him.
** The first is Baron Praxis, who unlike Xemnas,[[spoiler: isn't trying to lose]], is more competent than Crowley, who was a canon FillerVillain, and doesn't play OrcusOnHisThrone like Lavos. His political position also makes him harder top defeat because if he's toppled at the wrong time...well, there goes the neighborhood.
** The second is Even, who actively tries to throw the plot OffTheRails, unlike Dilan and Aeleus who just teamed up with each games BigBad and is much more sadistic having fully embraced {{ Jak II}}'s DarkerAndEdgier plot.
** Finally there is [[spoiler: Joumae]], Alex's EvilCounterpart, physical equal, and curbstomped him.
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* {{Dueteragonist}}: Sora in the first story, Edward in the second and third story, and Jak in the fourth. Although, Edward shows signs of being the overall {{Deuteragonist}} being constantly portrayed as Alex's equal as an Interference and is [[spoiler: the second Lockshield Master.]]
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* {{Dueteragonist}}: {{Deuteragonist}}: Sora in the first story, Edward in the second and third story, and Jak in the fourth. Although, Edward shows signs of being the overall {{Deuteragonist}} being constantly portrayed as Alex's equal as an Interference and is [[spoiler: the second Lockshield Master.]]
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* {{Foil}}: By ''Dark Renegade'' Alex has become one to Sora. Sora is a MagneticHero while Alex isn't that charismatic and prefers to rule from behind the scenes, Sora is always honest and upfront, while Alex is a ManipulativeBastard, Sora enjoys his adventures while Alex is all business, Sora goes with the flow while Alex likes to manilpulate events to his advantage, Sora fights with a sword while Alex fights with a shield, Sora likes to fight upfront and honorably with a single fighting style while Alex relies on his ComboPlatterPowers to confuse his enemies, their leadership styles contrast with Sora being a Type IV while Alex is a Type I, and finally, Sora is and idealistic IdealHero while Alex is a cynical AntiHero.
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* {{Foil}}: By ''Dark Renegade'' Alex has become one to Sora. Alex uses the power of darkness (he's lost all of his light powers due to certain events) while Sora uses light, Sora is a MagneticHero while Alex isn't that charismatic and prefers to rule from behind the scenes, Sora is always honest and upfront, while Alex is a ManipulativeBastard, Sora enjoys his adventures while Alex is all business, Sora goes with the flow while Alex likes to manilpulate events to his advantage, Sora fights with a sword while Alex fights with a shield, Sora likes to fight upfront and honorably with a single fighting style while Alex relies on his ComboPlatterPowers to confuse his enemies, their leadership styles also contrast with Sora being a Type IV while Alex is a Type I, and finally, Sora is and idealistic a IdealHero while Alex is a cynical AntiHero.
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* CrutchCharacter: Alex, Edward, and Alphonse are this to the ChronoTrigger cast in ''The Wings of Time''. The ChronoTrigger characters all start at around level one while the three Interferences are in the fifties to eighties level wise and their existence allows them to avert the ArbitraryHeadcountLimit of the story making things much easier, [[TropesAreNotBad Although this doesn't affect the quality of the story.]]
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* [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie: The entire first few chapters of the fourth story are all about this.]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture: Alex goes through what he experiences as ''[[BreakTheCutie two years of constant bombardments with]] with [[JakAndDaxter Dark Eco]] in the first few chapters of the fourth story along with Jak.]]
**His DangerousSixteenthBirthday involves [[spoiler:an entire city sector being destroyed by Metal Heads and being re-arrested, then starting Dark Eco treatments.]]
*** Though Aeleus/Elaeus does end up sleeping in the earth for millions of years; Earth is his Nobody Lexaeus' element.
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* ShoutOut, possibly: Alex's parents are called [[PeterPan Wendi and Peter]]. [[spoiler:They are finally seen and named in the story where Alex is [[{{Irony}} forced to grow up]].]] [[WordOfGod Newbie-Spud has said that]] he did not realize this until it was brought up.
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* CerebusSyndrome: Starting from ''Dark Renegade'' the plot gets much darker and arc driven.
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** [[spoiler:Erica performed this during her only appearance so far.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:[[CainAndAbel Erica Karsath]] in the second story, [[EnemyWithout Joumae]] in the fourth.]]
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**The roleplay forums take this UpToEleven due to the number of contributors, but the official world sections are limited to ones appearing in the fanfics.
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: Kronos, Themis, and Hyperion need Keyblade Armor to exist and even with it, it's just slowing down whatevers killing them.
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**It's implied that they have [[spoiler:bound themselves to the armour using alchemy, and expect themselves to eventually be destroyed in some way, just not by the protagonists.]]
**It's implied that they have [[spoiler:bound themselves to the armour using alchemy, and expect themselves to eventually be destroyed in some way, just not by the protagonists.]]
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* GunsAreWorthless: Subverted. Alex originally ''thought'' that this trope was in full effect in ''Dark Renegade'' thinking that his Lockshield and magic made him superior to everyone else. Then he got the Morph Gun, fell in love with it, and now its practically a CargoShip.
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* FanNickename: The Titans. As a team name for Kronos, Themis, and Hyperion
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Alex unwittingly has this type of morality. Best shown when he creates Guardia and Haven City, this also creates Lavos and Kor. Two villains that kill ''billions of people'' that will not get better. [[WhatTheHellHero Alex never thinks about this or is called out on it.]]
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* BrickJoke: In the second fic, as in the original FMA game, there is a giant Golem spider boss. Ed remarks that if the boss turns out to have a twin brother, he's going to be pissed. One entire fic later, Ed is pissed.