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''The Girls of My Life'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/209985/the-girls-of-my-life here]] and cross-posted to [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/802607/ChaosMagemon ChaosMagemon]] on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10985983/1/The-Girls-of-My-Life here]].
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''The Girls of My Life'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet Platform/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/209985/the-girls-of-my-life here]] and cross-posted to [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/802607/ChaosMagemon ChaosMagemon]] on Website/FanfictionDotNet Platform/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10985983/1/The-Girls-of-My-Life here]].
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Has a completed sequel [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370865/the-girls-of-my-life-2-old-flames-and-new-flames ''The Girls of My Life 2: Old and New Flames]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet that was released on April 21, 2017.
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Has a completed sequel [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370865/the-girls-of-my-life-2-old-flames-and-new-flames ''The Girls of My Life 2: Old and New Flames]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet Platform/FimfictionDotNet that was released on April 21, 2017.
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** Spike's OutsideRide moment in "A Dazzling Day" is a reference to the OutsideRide Marty [=McFly=] does in the beginning of Film/BackToTheFuture
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** Spike's OutsideRide moment in "A Dazzling Day" is a reference to the OutsideRide Marty [=McFly=] does in the beginning of Film/BackToTheFuture Film/BackToTheFuture1
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* DomesticAbuse: The {{Flashback}} in "Sleepover with Rarity" reveals that prior to the events of the story Rarity was in a relationship with Blueblood. He abused her emotionally and [[WouldHitAGirl physically.]]
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* DomesticAbuse: The {{Flashback}} in "Sleepover with Rarity" reveals that prior to the events of the story Rarity was in a relationship with Blueblood. He abused her emotionally and [[WouldHitAGirl physically.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: See DomesticAbuse.
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* BuxomIsBetter: This is still the case.
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* BuxomIsBetter: As the protagonist of a harem fic, Spike finds himself appreciative of the large breast sizes of his Girls.
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: As the protagonist of a harem fic, Spike finds himself appreciative of the large breast sizes of his Girls.
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* RantInducingSlight: During [[BeachEpisode "Beach Day 2,"]] Rarity gets a pearl stuck in her belly button that everyone else has trouble removing. Later it comes out with some soap when Rarity is taking a bath. The fact that everyone went through a lot of trouble for a problem that was easily resolved sets Twilight off on an angry rant.
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* ShutUpKiss: Spike stops Twilight's rant (mentioned under RantInducingSlight) by kissing her.
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* ShutUpKiss: Spike stops Twilight's rant (mentioned under RantInducingSlight) by kissing her.
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** In [[BeachEpisode "Beach Day 2,"]] Twilight stops her rant (mentioned under RantInducingSlight) while everyone eats dinner. Flutttershy suggests that this means Twilight will calm down. A few minutes later, Twilight is back on her rant.
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** In [[BeachEpisode "Beach Day 2,"]] Twilight stops her rant (mentioned under RantInducingSlight) while everyone eats dinner. Flutttershy Fluttershy suggests that this means Twilight will calm down. A few minutes later, Twilight is back on her rant.
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* YourCheatingHeart:
** At times, Spike shows some concerns that he may be becoming a cheater because of the mutual attraction between himself and his Ponyville friends. [[spoiler:He does sleep with them, but everybody forgives him and all the girls become part of his harem.]]
** [[spoiler:Stellar Flare]] is no longer married because their spouse cheated on them.
** Kenbrough Heathspike (see HistoryRepeats) in his philandering days managed to get the affection of married women.
** At times, Spike shows some concerns that he may be becoming a cheater because of the mutual attraction between himself and his Ponyville friends. [[spoiler:He does sleep with them, but everybody forgives him and all the girls become part of his harem.]]
** [[spoiler:Stellar Flare]] is no longer married because their spouse cheated on them.
** Kenbrough Heathspike (see HistoryRepeats) in his philandering days managed to get the affection of married women.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:SunBurst. He was killed in a car accident a few years prior.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:SunBurst.[[spoiler:Sunburst. He was killed in a car accident a few years prior.]]
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*DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:SunBurst. He was killed in a car accident a few years prior.]]
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* HistoryRepeats: Once again, Spike learns about a previous ladies' man in a position mirroring his own. In this case it was a guy named Kenbrough Heathspike who amassed a massive harem while he was in high school.
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* HistoryRepeats: Once again, Spike learns about a previous ladies' man in a position mirroring his own. In this case it was a guy named Kenbrough Heathspike who amassed a massive harem while he was in high school.school and had [[ReallyGetsAround a lot of sex with a lot of people]] either individually or [[APartyAlsoKnownAsAnOrgy simultaneously.]]
* SexGod: Spike. And Kenbrough Heathspike (see HistoryRepeats).
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* YourCheatingHeart: At times, Spike shows some concerns that he may be becoming a cheater because of the mutual attraction between himself and his Ponyville friends. [[spoiler:He does sleep with them, but everybody forgives him and all the girls become part of his harem.]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: YourCheatingHeart:
** At times, Spike shows some concerns that he may be becoming a cheater because of the mutual attraction between himself and his Ponyville friends. [[spoiler:He does sleep with them, but everybody forgives him and all the girls become part of his harem.]]
** At times, Spike shows some concerns that he may be becoming a cheater because of the mutual attraction between himself and his Ponyville friends. [[spoiler:He does sleep with them, but everybody forgives him and all the girls become part of his harem.]]
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** Kenbrough Heathspike (see HistoryRepeats) in his philandering days managed to get the affection of married women.
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* HistoryRepeats: Once again, Spike learns about a previous ladies' man in a position mirroring his own. In this case it was a guy named Kenbrough Heathspike who amassed a massive harem while he was in high school.
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* AlwaysAChildToParent: Torch's relationship with Ember. Ember claims that on the day she left for college he [[LegCling clung to her leg]] and begged her not to leave.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Sunshine Smiles claims to love children. She expresses interest in running a daycare and claims to have the know-how to handle them.
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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Discussed. When Spike is set to meet the girls from Ponyville, Thorax teases him by telling him to "keep [his] eyes above the neckline."
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Spike and Thorax. The two of them are close enough to the point that Spike trusts Thorax as a [[SecretKeeper confidant,]] yet they still have a tendency to tease one another.
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* HighSchoolDance: The Mane 6 have an end-of-semester dance at CHS. Each of them try using the opportunity to ask Spike out which leads to a lot of drama. [[spoiler:Spike ends up going with all of them.]]
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* InternalReveal: Near the end of "Friendship Broken," the Mane 6 end up in an argument where they all reveal that each of them believe that [[spoiler:they were Spike's FirstKiss]]. It's clarified by Spike that [[spoiler:his FirstKiss was with Twilight.]]
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** Spike getting bribed by the Mane 6 in "Friendship Broken" closely resembles how Twilight was bribed by the rest of the Mane 6 for the Gala ticket in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E3TheTicketMaster "The Ticket Master."]]
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* WorldOfBuxom: This is actually a staple of [=Wildcard25's=] fanworks. He often describes the women as having large breats.
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* WorldOfBuxom: This is actually a staple of [=Wildcard25's=] fanworks. He fanworks often describes describe the women as having large breats.breast sizes of the female cast with letter grading. More often than not, the breasts are on the larger side of the spectrum.
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* RantInducingSlight: During [[BeachEpisode "Beach Day 2,"]] Rarity gets a pearl stuck in her belly button that everyone else has trouble removing. Later it comes out with some soap when Rarity is taking a bath. The fact that everyone went through a lot of trouble for an easily resolved solution sets Twilight off on an angry rant.
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* RantInducingSlight: During [[BeachEpisode "Beach Day 2,"]] Rarity gets a pearl stuck in her belly button that everyone else has trouble removing. Later it comes out with some soap when Rarity is taking a bath. The fact that everyone went through a lot of trouble for an a problem that was easily resolved solution sets Twilight off on an angry rant.
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* TheAtoner: Sunset used to be merciless in teasing Spike. A big part of her interactions with him is trying to make up for it.
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* BiggerIsBetterInBed: In the sex scenes there is sometimes (but not always) a comment on Spike's erection being larger than average.
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* LovingBully: Sunset Shimmer was this to Spike in the past. Since then, she's grown out of it.
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* ReallyGetsAround: [[spoiler:The sex scenes have the Ponyville girls claiming to have slept with others in the past. There's also Spike who has sex with the Ponyville girls, his harem from Canterlot, Stellar Flare, and the SupportingHarem [[TheBusCameBack from the previous story]].]]
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* ShowerOfLove: Spike has one with [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]]. He later has a downplayed version [[spoiler:before the massive orgy when he showers with Twilight and Fleur De Lis, but they don't have sex until after the shower. He also showered with two more girls after the orgy but the only detail that gets specified is that it wasn't Fleur and Twilight again.]]
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* StargazingScene: Moondancer invites Spike out for a night of stargazing [[spoiler:and they end up having sex.]]
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* BuxomIsBetter: As the protagonist of a harem fic, Spike finds himself appreciative of the large breast sizes of his Girls.
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* HiddenBuxom: Moondancer has the largest breasts out the group in Ponyville. She is noted to hide this by wearing a sweater.
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* WorldOfBuxom: This is still the case.
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* BalancedHarem: Each of the Girls is given separate chapters so that all of them can have equal prominence in their relationship with Spike.
* MarryThemAll: [[spoiler:Yeah, Spike ends up with all of the Mane 6 Girls.]]
* SupportingHarem: Any girls that are also attracted to Spike that aren't part of the Mane 6. [[spoiler:These girls don't end up with Spike by the end of the story.]]
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* TheBusCameBack: The Dazzlings, Fleur De Lis, Trixie, Octavia, and Vinyl Scratch return to the story in the BeachEpisode. [[spoiler:And after having been denied a chance in the last story; they finally get a chance to have sex with Spike by joining his harem in an orgy.]]
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* TheBusCameBack: [[SupportingHarem The Dazzlings, Fleur De Lis, Trixie, Octavia, and Vinyl Scratch Scratch]] return to the story in the BeachEpisode. [[spoiler:And after having been denied a chance in the last story; they finally get a chance to have sex with Spike by joining his harem in an orgy.]]
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** Opal [[NamesTheSame (no, not Rarity's cat)]] is an OriginalCharacter introduced in the chapter "Comedy Cousin" as an older cousin of Twilight's who works as a Comedian.
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** Opal [[NamesTheSame [[OneSteveLimit (no, not Rarity's cat)]] is an OriginalCharacter introduced in the chapter "Comedy Cousin" as an older cousin of Twilight's who works as a Comedian.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Given the HotterAndSexier nature of this story, there are a couple of lesbian moments in sex scenes that Spike gets excited over seeing.
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* SexyDiscretionShot: [[spoiler:In the second-last chapter Spike has sex with the Girls. And while we are shown them disrobing the actual sex is something we don't see.]]
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* HotterAndSexier: Unlike the first story, this one ups the {{Fanservice}} by including sex scenes.
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* MythologyGag:
** Fluttershy admits to having a dream where [[WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls Spike is a dog.]]
*** Spike has that dream himself later on.
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike referring to himself as a "noble dragon" while helping out Applejack.]]
** Twilight makes a joke about how in another world she would be a pony princess and Spike would be a little dragon.
** Fluttershy admits to having a dream where [[WesternAnimation/EquestriaGirls Spike is a dog.]]
*** Spike has that dream himself later on.
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike referring to himself as a "noble dragon" while helping out Applejack.]]
** Twilight makes a joke about how in another world she would be a pony princess and Spike would be a little dragon.
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** Opal [[NamesTheSame (no, not Rarity cat)]] is an OriginalCharacter introduced in the chapter "Comedy Cousin" as an older cousin of Twilight's who works as a Comedian.
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* DoubleMeaningTitle: The chapter "Friendship Broken" is this. [[spoiler:Given how often the Girls argue over Spike and how harsh the argument is getting in this chapter it seems that they will break off their relationship with each other. However, the chapter title actually refers to Spike breaking his friendship with the Girls when he decides [[ItsAllMyFault he is to blame]] for this argument, and therefore must break his friendship with them to save the friendship they have with each other.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Rainbow Dash goes through some self-loathing due to feeling responsible for the IdentityAmnesia incident that Spike goes through. Fortunately, it doesn't last.
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** Rainbow Dash goes through some self-loathing due to feeling responsible for the IdentityAmnesia incident that Spike goes through. Fortunately, it doesn'tlast.last.
** [[spoiler:After the especially harsh argument between the Girls in "Friendship Broken" Spike blames himself for causing it and breaks off his friendship with the others so that the Girls won't break their friendship..]]
** Rainbow Dash goes through some self-loathing due to feeling responsible for the IdentityAmnesia incident that Spike goes through. Fortunately, it doesn't
** [[spoiler:After the especially harsh argument between the Girls in "Friendship Broken" Spike blames himself for causing it and breaks off his friendship with the others so that the Girls won't break their friendship..]]
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* BerserkButton: Don't mess with Spike around his girls.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Don't mess with Spike around hisgirls.girls.
** Diamond Tiara touches Spike's by suggesting he stands no chance with any of the Girls.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Albert "Prince" Blueblood.
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** Albert "Prince"Blueblood.Blueblood.
** Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
* LetMeAtHim: As mentioned under BerserkButton, Diamond Tiara taunts Spike by claiming he stands no chance with any of the Girls. This results in Snails, Pipsqueak, and Sweetie Belle restraining Spike so he doesn't attack Diamond Tiara.
** Albert "Prince"
** Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
* LetMeAtHim: As mentioned under BerserkButton, Diamond Tiara taunts Spike by claiming he stands no chance with any of the Girls. This results in Snails, Pipsqueak, and Sweetie Belle restraining Spike so he doesn't attack Diamond Tiara.
