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* GratuitousGerman: Incantations for magecraft are said in German.
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* ElementalHair: Mikoto has red hair and wields fire.

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* ElementalHair: ElementalHairColors: Mikoto has red hair and wields fire.
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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her C-rank Magic Resistance[[labelnote:note]] Any spell below three verses (a verse is two lines of incantation) is negated. Any spell higher has their effects reduced. Does not apply to High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals[[/labelnote]], one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.

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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her C-rank Magic Resistance[[labelnote:note]] Any spell below three two verses (a verse is two lines of incantation) or lower is negated. Any spell higher has their effects reduced. Does not apply to High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals[[/labelnote]], one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.

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* SmokingIsCool: Izumo, a smoker, has shown to be a badass in battle.

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Izumo, a smoker, has shown to be a badass in battle.battle. He's able to use his cigarette or lighter to create fireballs.
** A member of the Red Clan, Yō Chitose, has been a smoker since he was 16.
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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her C-rank Magic Resistance, one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.

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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her C-rank Magic Resistance, Resistance[[labelnote:note]] Any spell below three verses (a verse is two lines of incantation) is negated. Any spell higher has their effects reduced. Does not apply to High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals[[/labelnote]], one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: King are giant threats due to the [[PersonOfMassDestruction immense power they have]]. This induced an OhCrap reaction first from the mages who recognized Mikoto, and then from the others when they were told his magecraft can reach Age of the Gods strength.

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: King Kings are giant threats due to the [[PersonOfMassDestruction immense power they have]]. This induced an OhCrap reaction first from the mages who recognized Mikoto, and then from the others when they were told his magecraft can reach Age of the Gods strength.



* DeflectorShield: Mikoto is able to create a shield of his aura to protect his Clansmen from attacks, whether they be from the enemy or even himself.



* SwordOfDamocles: A literal giant sword hangs in the air above each king when they activate their Sanctum. It falls if the king it belongs to goes over their limit. It's even called "Sword of Damocles".

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* SwordOfDamocles: A literal giant sword hangs in the air above each king when they activate their Sanctum. [[DeathFromAbove It falls if the king it belongs to goes over their limit.limit, resulting in the death of that king]]. It's even called "Sword of Damocles".
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* SleepCute: Akiko is sitting next to Mikoto. The heat from the sun causes her to go to sleep...right on Mikoto's shoulder. Izumo sees this and uses it as teasing ammunition.
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** Akiko can get hostile to the others in an effort to hide the fact she has feelings for Mikoto when she gets teased about it, often telling them to shut up and even punching Masaomi out cold for the aforementioned reason. She calls Mikoto an idiot while trying to conceal the fact she's blushing while he's carrying her on his back. Also during this time, Mikoto asks if he makes her feel safe since she's holding his shoulders tightly and she, blushing really hard now, tries to change the subject without answering the question. Months later, when she asks Mikoto if he wants to stay in the room that she's doing martial arts training in, she immediately tells him to forget what she just said and she becomes angry at herself, venting on a standing target.

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** Akiko can get hostile to the others in an effort to hide the fact she has feelings for Mikoto when she gets teased about it, often telling them to shut up and even punching Masaomi out cold for the aforementioned reason. She calls Mikoto an idiot while trying to conceal the fact she's blushing while he's carrying her on his back. Also during this time, Mikoto asks if he makes her feel safe since she's holding his shoulders tightly and she, blushing really hard now, tries to change the subject without answering the question. Months later, when she asks Mikoto if he wants to stay in the room that she's doing martial arts training in, she immediately tells him to forget what she just said and she becomes angry at herself, venting on a standing target. Also, she would apparently scold the others if they return all scratched up. But she would be treating the injuries at the same time.
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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]]. It contains references to Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.

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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and Fanfiction]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]].Own]], and [[https://www.quotev.com/story/13438340/The-Dark-Queen Quotev]]. It contains references to Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.
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* AbusiveParents: One in this case. After Mikoto's mother died, his father took to drinking and beating his son several times a week.

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* AbusiveParents: One in this case. AbusiveDad: After Mikoto's mother died, his father took to drinking and beating his son several times a week.
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* AbusiveParents: One in this case. After Mikoto's mother died, his father took to drinking and beating his son several times a week.
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* SignatureScent: Mages are typically able to be identified due to having the smell of blood on them.
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* SwordOfDamocles: A literal giant sword hangs in the air above each king when they activate their Sanctum. It falls if the king it belongs to goes over their limit.

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* SwordOfDamocles: A literal giant sword hangs in the air above each king when they activate their Sanctum. It falls if the king it belongs to goes over their limit. It's even called "Sword of Damocles".
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* WouldntHitAGirl: Mikoto says that he's not a fan of beating up women. But he also says he will if they attempt to fight him.

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* WouldntHitAGirl: Mikoto says that he's not a fan of beating up women. But he also says he will if they attempt to fight him. This gets {{Subverted}} when Mikoto punches Akiko. It was because he was having a flashback of [[spoiler:his mother's death]] and ended up punching her to prevent her from killing a mother.
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* {{Geas}}: Akiko has a geas put on her by the Mage's Association that forces her to carry out and job they send her. If she doesn't, the geas kills her.

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* {{Geas}}: Akiko has a geas put on her by the Mage's Association that forces her to carry out and any job they send her. If she doesn't, the geas kills her.

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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her some magecraft immunity, one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.

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* AntiMagic: Akiko's partially-awakened Origin grants her some magecraft immunity, C-rank Magic Resistance, one of the reasons the Mage's Association took an interest in her.


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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: King are giant threats due to the [[PersonOfMassDestruction immense power they have]]. This induced an OhCrap reaction first from the mages who recognized Mikoto, and then from the others when they were told his magecraft can reach Age of the Gods strength.


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* {{Geas}}: Akiko has a geas put on her by the Mage's Association that forces her to carry out and job they send her. If she doesn't, the geas kills her.


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* NiceGuy: Tatara doesn't fight, doesn't get mad at people, and tries to resolve conflicts without violence.


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* SwordOfDamocles: A literal giant sword hangs in the air above each king when they activate their Sanctum. It falls if the king it belongs to goes over their limit.
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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]]. It contains references to Franchise/Nasuverse terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.

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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]]. It contains references to Franchise/Nasuverse Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.
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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]]. It contains references to Nasuverse terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.

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''The Dark Queen'' is a ''Anime/{{K}}'' fan work created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4152434/ Archdemon Slayer]], found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13592367/1/The-Dark-Queen Fanfiction]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24316876/chapters/58623196 Archive Of Our Own]]. It contains references to Nasuverse Franchise/Nasuverse terms and it sometimes refers to ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', a Kinoko Nasu visual novel.
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* GamerChick: While this trait has yet to be show in the story, a flashback for Akiko states that she enjoys video games.


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* OneOfTheBoys: Akiko is the only female member of the Red Clan so far and seems to be perfectly fine with hanging around a bunch of dudes.
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* {{Tomboy}}: Akiko feels right at home with HOMRA, a street gang of which she's the [[OneOfTheBoys only female member of so far]]. She doesn't exactly have the cleanest language. Her flashback says she [[GamerChick enjoys video games]]. She has no qualms about [[ActionGirl getting her hands dirty while fighting]]. Izumo even says the reason she fits in with HOMRA is probably because she's very tomboyish.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: Akiko beats Yōo while sparring in martial arts. Masaomi makes sure to tease Yõ about this.

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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: Akiko beats Yōo while sparring in martial arts. Masaomi makes sure to tease about this.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: Akiko beats Yõ while sparring in martial arts. Masaomi makes sure to tease Yõ about this.

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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: Akiko beats Yōo while sparring in martial arts. Masaomi makes sure to tease Yõ about this.
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* CoolShades: Izumo wears a tinted pair of shades, including in the bar.
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* DashinglyDapperDerby: Masaomi commonly wears a derby hat.
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* ElementalPowers: Akiko uses magecraft of different elements such as fire, lightning, and earth.

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* ElementalPowers: Akiko uses magecraft of different elements such as fire, lightning, [[PlayingWithFire fire]], [[ShockAndAwe lightning]], and earth.[[DishingOutDirt earth]].
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** Mikoto shows shades of this, especially when Izumo teases him about the feelings for Akiko that he's trying to hide, typically with the excuse that Mikoto gives that he takes care of her only because she's his clansman. Normally, Mikoto keeps his emotions in check, with the exception of when he was a high school student. He had a short fuse then. But when Izumo teases him about Akiko, he sometimes just snaps at the guy.

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** Mikoto shows shades of this, especially when Izumo teases him about the feelings for Akiko that he's trying to hide, typically with the excuse that Mikoto gives that he takes care of her only because she's his clansman. Normally, Mikoto keeps his emotions in check, with the exception of when he was a high school student. He had a short fuse then. But when Izumo teases him about Akiko, he sometimes just snaps at the guy. As a bonus, Izumo outright calls him a tsundere, but behind the king's back.
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This follows Akiko Hashimoto, a woman originally from Fuyuki who joins HOMRA in order to be somewhere she feels that she belongs to and that it'll hopefully break the fact she doesn't feel confident enough to just chat with someone. While she may appear harmless at first glance, she is in fact a skilled mage who's not afraid to get violent when needed.

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This follows Akiko Hashimoto, a woman originally from Fuyuki who joins HOMRA in order to be somewhere she feels that she belongs to and that it'll hopefully break the fact she doesn't feel confident enough to just chat with someone. While she may appear harmless at first glance, she is in fact a skilled second-rate mage who's not afraid to get violent when needed.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Akiko is the red, easy to get worked up, while Mikoto is the blue, tends not to display emotions. In high school, he qualified to be the red since he had a short fuse and tended to beat people, including Tatara and Izumo, up.

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