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* AManIsNotAVirgin: When Asuka tries to seduce Shinji she asks him if he does not want to be a man:
-->'''Asuka''':''"Don't tell me you're not a man. Or is it that you don't *want* to be a man?"''
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* {{Badass}}:
** In chapter 3 [[spoiler:Shinji and Rei]] are trying to hold an Angel back with their barriers but it is crushing them. Then Asuka shows up and stops it with one hand, breaking synch records.
** In chapter 7 Rei [[spoiler:fought an Angel alone and won.]] And in chapter 9 she made very clear that [[spoiler:''nobody'' threatened her niece.]]
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.

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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', ''Fanfic/GhostsOfEvangelion'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* ActionDad: Shinji to his daughter Teri. He can doubt himself, think he's unworthy or unfit to be her father... but he would protect her with his life, and he fought his own father when Gendo threatened her.
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* RedHeadedHero: Asuka, pilot of giant robots. In chapter 3 she was sick and pregnant and she still leapt from her hospital bed and went to fight an EldritchAbomination, helping to save the day. In chapter 7 she led their squad comrades and came up with a strategy to win the battle. And after giving birth she kept piloting war mechas and fighting giant alien monsters.
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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason), [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete), and [[http://leviathanltd.tripod.com/id44.htm here]]. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.

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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason), [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete), [[http://www.reocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/TCoL01.html here]] and [[http://leviathanltd.tripod.com/id44.htm here]]. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.

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* MeetTheInLaws: In the sequel, Asuka talked Shinji into meeting her parents while they were talking about their future wedding. Shinji wasn't really keen on it (her parents had abused her as much as his father abused him), but she convinced him.



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Despite of –''[[UnbuiltTrope or maybe because]]''- being one of the first major Eva fics, it plays with the timeline very loosely. The story starts out some while after Shinji and Asuka's SacredFirstKiss. However it introduces two new Angels after Ireul. The sequel ignores –possibly- Leliel, Bardiel and Zeruel entirely and skips straight to Arael. Touji never becomes the Fourth Children and Unit-03 never shows up.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Despite of –''[[UnbuiltTrope or maybe because]]''- being one of the first major Eva fics, it plays with the timeline very loosely. The story starts out some while after Shinji and Asuka's SacredFirstKiss. However it introduces two new Angels after Ireul. The sequel ignores –possibly- –possibly- Leliel, Bardiel and Zeruel entirely and skips straight to Arael. Touji never becomes the Fourth Children and Unit-03 never shows up.


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* WhatIf: This story is an AlternateUniverse where Asuka had sex with Shinji and got pregnant.
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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason), [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete), [[http://www.reocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/TCoL01.html here]] and [[http://leviathanltd.tripod.com/id44.htm here]]. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.

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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason), [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete), [[http://www.reocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/TCoL01.html here]] and [[http://leviathanltd.tripod.com/id44.htm here]]. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.
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* ValentinesDayEpisodes: The sixth episode is a Valentine's Day chapter. Asuka tries to give Shinji some home-made chocolates on Valentine's Day without everybody noticing.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.

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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.



* MandatoryMotherhood: When Shinji gets Asuka pregnant they decide to have the baby even though they’re socially inept teenagers because they don’t want that their child go through the same thing than them.

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* MandatoryMotherhood: When Shinji gets Asuka pregnant they decide to have the baby even though they’re socially inept teenagers -and Asuka never wanted to become a mother- because they don’t want that their child to go through the same thing than them.pain that they did.



* SorkinRelationshipMoment: In chapter 5 Misato feds up with Shinji and Asuka’s arguing and being at odds with each other, so she angrily tells them that they’ll go to the Obon Festival, they’ll have fun together, they’ll make up and they’ll stop behaving like idiots… ''or else''.

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* SorkinRelationshipMoment: In chapter 5 Misato feds is fed up with Shinji and Asuka’s arguing and being at odds with each other, so she angrily tells them that they’ll go to the Obon Festival, they’ll have fun together, they’ll make up and they’ll stop behaving like idiots… ''or else''.
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* BondingOverMissingParents: When Misato told Shinji how Asuka’s mother died, he felt he could understand Asuka better now because he was also an orphan. Later on, Shinji opens up to her and talks about his mother’s death, and Asuka says he’s the only one she can trust because he’s the only one can understand her.
-->'''Shinji:''' I saw her crying in her sleep once. Poor Asuka... I understand now how she feels.


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* HenpeckedHusband: Shinji is this to Asuka. Whatever she wanted, she eventually got it because he went along with everything. Touji lampshaded it in the fifth chapter:
-->'''Toji:''' (to Shinji) Not yet married, and she's already henpecking you…


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* HumongousMecha: The bio-mechanical Evangelions. In addition to the canon Evas, a new Unit-04 showed up in the sequel.


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* MandatoryMotherhood: When Shinji gets Asuka pregnant they decide to have the baby even though they’re socially inept teenagers because they don’t want that their child go through the same thing than them.


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* MoeCouplet: Rei and Teri. Teri helped her find her emotions and rebel against Gendo, and Rei calmed Teri down when her niece went hyper.


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* NotWorthKilling: In chapter eight’s omake, the author thinks that Asuka is going to kill him after he used the words “time of the month” to describe her mood. However Asuka says that he isn’t worth it… before kicking his groin.


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* OldFlame: Misato and Kaji got back together in the Obon Festival when she admitted that she never got over him.


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* OrphansOrdeal: In chapter 5, during the Obon Festival, Shinji and Asuka talk about their mothers deaths. Shinji says he shut himself up because he was frightened of other people, and Asuka explains that she pushed people away because she didn’t want to get hurt again.


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* SleepCute: In chapter 9, Shinji and Asuka are sleeping together, wearing pajamas and snuggled up under their bed's covers.
-->Misato's apartment, at the same time. A room. A bed. Two teens are tucked under the sheets, wearing pajamas, sleeping peacefully in each other's arms. One of the two awakens.
* SorkinRelationshipMoment: In chapter 5 Misato feds up with Shinji and Asuka’s arguing and being at odds with each other, so she angrily tells them that they’ll go to the Obon Festival, they’ll have fun together, they’ll make up and they’ll stop behaving like idiots… ''or else''.


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* WeddingDay: At the epilogue of the ninth chapter, Shinji and Asuka got married.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In chapter 9, Shinji carries an exhausted Asuka to their room and helps her strip her clothes. When she was down to her underwear he stared at her for several seconds, wondering at how cute she was.


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* EroticDream: This fic was inspired by a lemon fanfiction where Shinji had erotic dreams about Asuka.


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* FalseReassurance: In the omake of chapter 7, Axel thinks Asuka is going to hit him. However Asuka reassures him that he isn't worth a slap from her. Axel calms down... and Asuka proceeds to kick his groin.


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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: In an omake, Asuka kicks Axel in the groin after hearing him say that she was angry because it was her time of the month.


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* GamerChick: Asuka and Hikari like playing games and they often go to a video arcade to play fighting games and shooters. Eventually they get Rei into them, too.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.

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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* BedmateReveal: The morning after the Obon festival, Asuka wakes up and sees Shinji sleeping in her bed. Initially she thinks that she’s sleeping, but when Shinji mutters something, she realizes that he’s really sleeping in her bed, and screams.


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* BioAugmentation: [[spoiler:Gendo]] altered [[spoiler:Teri’s]] DNA in order to turn her into a kind of SuperSoldier. She’s telepathy, telekinesis, and some kind of precognition. She also can travel into other people’s dreams, and wields an AT Field.


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* ChildOfTwoWorlds: Asuka is half American, one quarter German and one quarter Japanese. She chose a Western name for her child and she gave Shinji chocolates in Valentine’s Day because it’s the tradition in Japan.
* ChildrenRaiseYou: Shinji and Asuka were a pair of introvert, mentally damaged teenagers. They were almost incapable of opening up to each other and getting along well. When Shinji got Asuka pregnant their relationship got worse initially, but since neither of them wanted to screw their daughter in the way their parents screwed them, they forced themselves to get their act together and mature.
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Thus a nine-months-long odyssey begins for Shinji and Asuka during which they must come to terms with their feelings, their relationship and their future parenthood… unaware what Gendo has designs of his own towards their baby. What is exactly planning Gendo? Did Asuka really have sex with Shinji because she was bored or the truth is more sinister than she and Shinji believe?

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Thus a nine-months-long odyssey begins for Shinji and Asuka during which they must come to terms with their feelings, their relationship and their future parenthood… unaware what Gendo has designs of his own towards their baby. What is Gendo exactly planning Gendo? planning? Did Asuka really have sex with Shinji because she was bored or the truth is more sinister than she and Shinji believe?
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: For most of the history the Children fought the Angels thinking they were stopping a bunch of {{Eldritch Abomination}}s from exterminating the humankind. After [[spoiler:Gendo got arrested]] his right hand Fuyutsuki came clean with Misato and Kaji, revealing that secret organization SEELE was using NERV to cause the end of the world. From that point the cast fights to stop both the Angels and SEELE and save the world.

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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: For most of the history story the Children fought the Angels thinking they were stopping a bunch of {{Eldritch Abomination}}s from exterminating the humankind. After [[spoiler:Gendo got arrested]] arrested]], his right hand Fuyutsuki came clean with Misato and Kaji, revealing that secret organization SEELE was using NERV to cause the end of the world. From that point the cast fights to stop both the Angels and SEELE and save the world.



* EveryoneHasStandards: Gendo had done ''plenty'' questionable or horrible things, but in this story he [[spoiler:mixes Asuka's LCL with hormone-boosters so that she has sex and gets pregnant -despite of being only thirteen-. Then he modifies her foetus genetically in order to create a new SuperSoldier lifeform he plans to use like a weapon as soon as Asuka gives birth... additionally, Asuka may die when she delivers her baby, who is accidentally his granddaughter, but Gendo does not care.]] ''Everyone'' is so disgusted and sickened with him -including his lover, his right hand and his puppet who had had helped him loyalty until then- that they turn against him. Even Rei -who had been absolutely and unconditionally faithful to him- said she rather obey Misato because she was "more human".

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* EveryoneHasStandards: Gendo had done ''plenty'' questionable or horrible things, but in this story he [[spoiler:mixes Asuka's LCL with hormone-boosters so that she has sex and gets pregnant -despite of being only thirteen-. Then he modifies her foetus genetically in order to create a new SuperSoldier lifeform he plans to use like a weapon as soon as Asuka gives birth... additionally, Asuka may die when she delivers her baby, who is accidentally his granddaughter, but Gendo does not care.]] ''Everyone'' is so disgusted and sickened with him -including his lover, his right hand and his puppet who had had helped him loyalty until then- that they turn against him. Even Rei -who had been absolutely and unconditionally faithful to him- said she she'd rather obey Misato Misato, because she was "more human".
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* ActionGirl: Asuka, Rei, Misato… they are soldiers and but the latter they pilot giant robots to fight alien monsters.

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* ActionGirl: Asuka, Rei, Misato… they are soldiers soldiers, and all but the latter they pilot giant robots to fight alien monsters.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Invoked. In this story Asuka gets pregnant with Shinji's baby after an one-night stand. When they are blaming each other Shinji argues she provoked him and Asuka replies he couldn't not want it since he is a guy and all guys are perverts.

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* AllMenArePerverts: Invoked. In this story Asuka gets pregnant with Shinji's baby after an a one-night stand. When they are blaming each other other, Shinji argues she provoked him and Asuka replies he couldn't not want it since he is a guy and all guys are perverts.



* AbusiveParents: Shinji’s mother chose get absorbed into Unit 01 and for whatever reason wanted her son watching as she dissolved. Right after his father abandoned him. Meanwhile Asuka’s mother got crazy, stopped recognizing her daughter and eventually killed herself together with a doll she thought was Asuka. As she was institutionalised, Asuka’s father cheated on his wife with her nurse where Asuka could hear them, and after his wife’s death he got married with his lover and stopped looking after Asuka. Shinji and Asuka are screwed up due to this. And that was before [[spoiler:Gendo used his son’s crush like a disposable pawn with no regard for his son’s feelings.]]

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* AbusiveParents: Shinji’s mother chose to get absorbed into Unit 01 01, and for whatever reason wanted her son watching as she dissolved. Right after after, his father abandoned him. Meanwhile Asuka’s Meanwhile, Asuka's mother got crazy, stopped recognizing her daughter and eventually killed herself together with a doll she thought was Asuka. As she was institutionalised, institutionalized, Asuka’s father cheated on his wife with her nurse where Asuka could hear them, and after his wife’s death wife's death, he got married with his lover and stopped looking after Asuka. Shinji and Asuka are screwed up due to this. And that was before [[spoiler:Gendo used his son’s son's crush like a disposable pawn with no regard for his son’s son's feelings.]]



* AdaptationalCurves: Due to her pregnancy, Asuka becomes bustier that she was in the proper series. In the sequel, Rei notes her breasts are now bigger and her bra size has increased by at least three sizes, much to Asuka's embarrassment and anger.
* AdultFear: Several times Shinji tells he is very scared that something bad will happen to his daughter Teri or she will grow up unhappy or lonely because he has not done his father job well. Asuka also fears Teri gets traumatized because her.
** Shinji being frightened of being unable to protect Asuka and their daughter was the reason of him [[spoiler:seeing himself like unworthy to be a father and running from his family for a month.]]
** During [[spoiler:her MindRape Arael exploited Asuka's fear to lose her child.]]

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* AdaptationalCurves: Due to her pregnancy, Asuka becomes bustier that than she was in the proper series. series proper. In the sequel, Rei notes her breasts are now bigger and that her bra size has increased by at least three sizes, much to Asuka's embarrassment and anger.
* AdultFear: Several times Shinji tells he is very scared that something bad will happen to his daughter Teri Teri, or that she will grow up unhappy or lonely because he has not done his job as a father job well. Asuka also fears Teri gets will get traumatized because of her.
** Shinji being frightened of being unable to protect Asuka and their daughter was the reason of for him [[spoiler:seeing himself like as unworthy to be of being a father father, and running from his family for a month.]]
** During [[spoiler:her MindRape MindRape, Arael exploited Asuka's fear to lose her child.]]



* AmazonChaser: Shinji loves and is drawn to Asuka’s bravery and fierceness when she battles.
* AngerBornOfWorry: In chapter 7 Shinji gets struck during a battle and Asuka loses her temper utterly.

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* AmazonChaser: Shinji loves and is drawn to Asuka’s Asuka's bravery and fierceness when she battles.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: In chapter 7 7, Shinji gets struck during a battle and Asuka loses her temper utterly.



** In chapter 5 Gendo is rambling about his plans furthering the human evolution:

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** In chapter 5 5, Gendo is rambling about his plans furthering the human evolution:



** In chapter 8 Asuka is furious with Shinji [[spoiler:because he has lost his nerve and he has broken up because he thinks he is unfit to be her boyfriend and their child’s father]] and she tells she does not love him anymore. Misato does not buy it, though:

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** In chapter 8 Asuka is furious with Shinji [[spoiler:because he has lost his nerve nerve, and he has broken up because he thinks he is unfit to be her boyfriend and their child’s father]] and she tells says she does not love him anymore. Misato does not buy it, though:



** Asuka gives a well-deserved one to Shinji when he [[spoiler:begins having doubts about himself and breaks up with Asuka because he thinks he is not fit to her boyfriend and Teri’s father since he thinks he can not protect them:]]

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** Asuka gives a well-deserved one to Shinji when he [[spoiler:begins having doubts about himself and breaks up with Asuka because he thinks he is not fit to be her boyfriend and Teri’s father father, since he thinks he can not protect them:]]



* AttentionWhore: Asuka yearns for and loves attention due to be abandoned when she was a child. She tries to be the best at everything and as loud and bold as possible because she thinks nobody will ever care about her otherwise.

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* AttentionWhore: Asuka yearns for for, and loves attention due to be being abandoned when she was a child. She tries to be the best at everything everything, and to be as loud and bold as possible possible, because she thinks nobody will ever care about her otherwise.



** When Asuka collapsed in front of Misato’s apartment Shinji remained the whole time by her side, keeping watch over her and gazing at her beautiful sleeping face.
** Asuka said Shinji’s birthday gift was the only gift meant something to her that day, and she cried when she saw it.

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** When Asuka collapsed in front of Misato’s apartment apartment, Shinji remained the whole time by her side, keeping watch over her and gazing at her beautiful sleeping face.
** Asuka said Shinji’s birthday gift was the only gift that meant something to her that day, and she cried when she saw it.



* EarnYourHappyEnding: Shinji and Asuka had to work hard to get their happy ending. First of all they had to learn to stop fighting and reach each other out. Then they had to go through Asuka’s pregnancy. Then they had to [[spoiler:stop Gendo’s plans which might mean Asuka’s death and Teri being turned into a living tool war.]] THEN they had to beat the remnant Angels AND SEELE and at the same time raising their baby.

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Shinji and Asuka had to work hard to get their happy ending. First of all they had to learn to stop fighting and reach each other out. Then they had to go through Asuka’s pregnancy. Then they had to [[spoiler:stop Gendo’s plans which might mean Asuka’s death and Teri being turned into a living tool of war.]] THEN they had to beat the remnant Angels AND SEELE and at the same time raising their baby.



* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Sigh. Gendo… You [[spoiler:used drugs to drive a thirteen-years-old girl to have sex with someone, planning using her ''freaking baby'', who coincidentally is your ''granddaughter'', as a war weapon.]] Were you seriously shocked when [[spoiler: ''everyone'']] turned against you?

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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Sigh. Gendo… Gendo… You [[spoiler:used drugs to drive a thirteen-years-old girl to have sex with someone, planning using her ''freaking baby'', who coincidentally is your ''granddaughter'', as a war weapon.]] Were you seriously shocked when [[spoiler: ''everyone'']] turned against you?
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* BrokenAce: Asuka is a brilliant girl and an excellent mecha pilot, but she's also an orphan with self-worth, self-confidence and trust issues. And then she got pregnant at the age of fourteen. And then she found out that his Commander used her like a doll.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: In chapter seventh's omake, Asuka berates the author because he is lazy and hasn't updated his website.
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* KidHeroAllGrownUp: The epilogue and sequels happen several years after the War. Shinji and Asuka have grown up and got married, and they live mostly peacefully while raising their two children, although they have to pilot war mechas occasionally.
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* LighterAndSofter: Althought this story got pretty dark sometimes, it is definitely and unapologetically waffier than the original series. Shinji and Asuka have a daughter, which pushes to try to figure their relationship out, [[spoiler:Gendo gets jailed, and Third Impact never happens.]]

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* LighterAndSofter: Althought Although this story got pretty dark sometimes, it is definitely and unapologetically waffier than the original series. Shinji and Asuka have a daughter, which pushes to try to figure their relationship out, [[spoiler:Gendo gets jailed, and Third Impact never happens.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: Althought this story got pretty dark sometimes, it is definitely and unapologetically waffier than the original series. Shinji and Asuka have a daughter, which pushes to try to figure their relationship out, [[spoiler:Gendo gets jailed, and Third Impact never happens.]]
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* PlayingSick: In chapter 6 Asuka does not want that Rei spends time with Shinji while they walk to the base, so she pretends to faint and fall sick again, hoping that Shinji stays in home with her.
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* CoolUncle: Rei was this to Teri. Even before her birth she was very protective of her niece (very ''violently'' protective). When Teri was born she helped to raise her, and Teri was very fond of her.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Asuka is the Red Oni and Rei the Blue one. Shinji compares them in the first chapter, saying Asuka is fierce and loud whereas Rei is calm and quiet.
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* NoSocialSkills: While they open up during the Obon festival, Asuka and Shinji talk about how she pushes people away and Shinji runs away from them because they are two lonely kids, frightened of getting hurt by other people.

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** In chapter 2 Hikari asks Shinji giving a stack of printouts to Asuka… right like she asked Touji giving a heap of printouts to Rei in canon.

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** In chapter 2 Hikari asks Shinji giving a stack of printouts to Asuka… Asuka… right like she asked Touji giving a heap of printouts to Rei in canon.


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* PeopleJars: In the sequel Rei spends a while floating inside a cylindrical transparent tube, wondering whether she should terminate the remaining Yui clones -and finally becoming her own person- or leave them alone in case her current body gets destroyed in battle. Later the remaining clones appear, floating in their liquid-filled tank.
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* ScriptFic: It is written in this format. Later Axel decided to rewrite it ditching the script format, but he did not go past the first chapter.
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* ShipTease:
** Tons of ship tease between Shinji and Asuka since the beginning since the story stars out when Shinji gets her pregnant. In the first chapters Shinji keeps watch over while she is sleeping, makes nice things for her... and Asuka tries to delude herself into thinking she is not drawn to him.
** A bit between Rei and Shinji when she admits that she is jealous of Asuka.

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