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* AscendedExtra: Tsune, Coeur's original character who works as a nurse at Beacon. She plays very small role In Coeur's previous stories,but here's she's one of rare people that knows Adam's secret and can give him advices that other characters can't.
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** Pointedly, over time Ozpin becomes the one human authority figure that Adam trusts, which leads to a [[TearJerker potent]] [[HeartwarmingMoments scene]] for the two of them: [[spoiler:with Adam’s outing creating a PR disaster, Ironwood and Winter (who would rather he be simply arrested for his past crimes) only concede to his being allowed to continue his studies if he’s heavily monitored... which includes the degrading demand he wear a shock collar (but all heavily protested by Qrow). Adam consents on the condition that Ozpin, not Winter, is the one to secure the collar, which the headmaster reluctantly agrees to do.]]

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** Pointedly, over time Ozpin becomes the one human authority figure that Adam trusts, which leads to a [[TearJerker potent]] [[HeartwarmingMoments [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments scene]] for the two of them: [[spoiler:with Adam’s outing creating a PR disaster, Ironwood and Winter (who would rather he be simply arrested for his past crimes) only concede to his being allowed to continue his studies if he’s heavily monitored... which includes the degrading demand he wear a shock collar (but all heavily protested by Qrow). Adam consents on the condition that Ozpin, not Winter, is the one to secure the collar, which the headmaster reluctantly agrees to do.]]

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* AlternateUniverseFic: After Blake's abandonment of him and the White Fang during the events of the Black trailer, Adam, instead of staying with the Fang and going insane with rage, follows Blake to Beacon and enrols himself to try and prove her disillusionment with him wrong.

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* AlternateUniverseFic: After Blake's abandonment of him and the White Fang during the events of the Black trailer, Adam, instead of staying with the Fang and going insane with rage, follows Blake to Beacon and enrols enrolls himself to try and prove her disillusionment with him wrong.



* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Played with. Adam has since lost any and all respect and affection he once had for Blake when she refused to do anything when he was assaulted by a bunch of racist students in the cafeteria (which she was responsible for starting in the first place) and Blake clearly wants nothing more to do with him. Her opinion has changed some over time, the most poignant events being when she sees him [[spoiler:willingly wear a shock collar, something the old Adam would rather die than allow happen to him]] and when [[spoiler:Cinder hijacks it during his match with Pyrrha]]. In the latter event, [[spoiler:she nearly goes to see him and is only stopped by Jaune saying it would be best to let Adam's team look after him]].

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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Played with. Adam has since lost any and all respect and affection he once had for Blake when she refused refuses to do anything when he was assaulted by a bunch of racist students in the cafeteria (which she was responsible for starting in the first place) and Blake clearly wants nothing more to do with him. Her opinion has changed some over time, the most poignant events being when she sees him [[spoiler:willingly wear a shock collar, something the old Adam would rather die than allow happen to him]] and when [[spoiler:Cinder hijacks it during his match with Pyrrha]]. In the latter event, [[spoiler:she nearly goes to see him and is only stopped by Jaune saying it would be best to let Adam's team look after him]].



* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is that the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch.]]
* BrokenPedestal: Atlas as a whole, but more personally Winter for Weiss. Every chapter seem to punch a new hole in Weiss' respect for her country and family. Since Ironwood put a literal collar on Adam, she's made her disappointment and anger perfectly clear to Winter.

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol parole or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is that the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale Vale under strict watch.]]
* BrokenPedestal: Atlas as a whole, but more personally Winter for Weiss. Every chapter seem to punch a new hole in Weiss' respect for her country and family. Since Ironwood put [[spoiler: puts a literal shock collar on Adam, Adam]], she's made her disappointment and anger perfectly clear to Winter.



** Weiss insists that the rumours about the Schnee Dust Company’s abuse of workers are, at best, exaggerated slander and libel (knowing her father’s corruption, but not it’s extent). She says this in refutation to [[MadeASlave Adam]] [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters Taurus]] when he alleges such.

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** Weiss insists that the rumours about the Schnee Dust Company’s abuse of workers are, at best, exaggerated slander and libel (knowing her father’s corruption, but not it’s its extent). She says this in refutation to [[MadeASlave Adam]] [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters Taurus]] when he alleges such.



* EtTuBrute: Its glaringly obvious that Adam is extremely hurt by Blake betraying him and abandoning the White Fang. Hell, one of the major reasons Adam is even trying to redeem himself is just to prove her wrong about him being a monster. This became even worse in chapter 17, where Adam gets beaten up by racist students in front of everyone, Blake (who, must be pointed out, has been responsible for this) just lets it happen. After the brawl, he finally lets out his pent-up, ''hurt'' feeling:

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* EtTuBrute: Its It's glaringly obvious that Adam is extremely hurt by Blake betraying him and abandoning the White Fang. Hell, one of the major reasons Adam is even trying to redeem himself is just to prove her wrong about him being a monster. This became even worse in chapter 17, where Adam gets beaten up by racist students in front of everyone, Blake (who, must be pointed out, has been responsible for this) just lets it happen. After the brawl, he finally lets out his pent-up, ''hurt'' feeling:



* ExplainExplainOhCrap: While playing a game, Team RYST (and [[SixthRanger Pyrrha]]) start griping about how all the Faunus cards and factions in the game are some of the worst, and its impossible to win while playing it with several of the cards having UnfortunateNames. The realization that it was designed like this makes them realize that the FantasticRacism against Faunus are run deeper and in more subtle ways then they were aware of.
* ExtremeDoormat: Adam's opinion of Velvet.
* FantasticRacism: Since the story is about Adam, it shows the racism that Faunus have to deal with everyday, and how Adam himself deals with it too.

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: While playing a game, Team RYST (and [[SixthRanger Pyrrha]]) start griping about how all the Faunus cards and factions in the game are some of the worst, and its how it's impossible to win while playing it with several of the cards having UnfortunateNames. The realization that it was designed like this and made it into a finished product makes them realize that the FantasticRacism against Faunus are run runs deeper and in more subtle ways then they were previously aware of.
* ExtremeDoormat: Adam's opinion of Velvet.
Velvet; a senior huntress student that could wipe the floor with her bullies, but doesn't have enough self respect to defend herself.
* FantasticRacism: Since the story is about Adam, it shows the racism that Faunus have to deal with everyday, every day, and how Adam himself deals with it too.



* ForWantOfANail: The plot is jump started by Adam going to Beacon, hoping to prove Blake is wrong about him, rather than staying with the White Fang. Things change as such:
** Adam almost immediately pursued Blake instead of returning to his terrorist operations. As such, he didn't stick around long enough to see Cinder return and threaten the White Fang into submission. He doesn't have any idea who she is or why the Fang is behaving so differently of late.

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* ForWantOfANail: The plot is jump started jumpstarted by Adam going to Beacon, hoping to prove Blake is wrong about him, rather than staying with the White Fang. Things change as such:
** Adam almost immediately pursued pursues Blake instead of returning to his terrorist operations. As such, he didn't doesn't stick around long enough to see Cinder return and threaten the White Fang into submission. He doesn't have any idea who she is or why the Fang is behaving so differently of late.



** Due to [[BrokenAce her]] [[FamedInStory fame]], Pyrrha doesn’t mesh well with a team that put her on a pedestal; she and Adam bond over their mutual prowess and shared respect, which sees her bond with Team RYST. Jaune, Nora and Ren don’t encounter them during Initiation (as Adam kills the Giant Nevermore), and because Blake avoids Adam their interactions are limited. Beyond Pyrrha, Team RYST hasn’t developed strong friendships in the student body owing to Adam’s presence, and how different people react to him and his personality.

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** Due to [[BrokenAce her]] [[FamedInStory fame]], Pyrrha doesn’t mesh well with a team that put puts her on a pedestal; she and Adam bond over their mutual prowess and shared respect, which sees her bond with Team RYST. Jaune, Nora and Ren don’t encounter them during Initiation (as Adam kills the Giant Nevermore), Nevermore too soon for them to intervene), and because Blake avoids Adam their interactions are limited. Beyond Pyrrha, Team RYST hasn’t developed strong friendships in the student body owing to Adam’s presence, and how different people react to him and his personality.



* GoodCannotComprehendEvil: While Adam isn't exactly evil anymore, you would be hard pressed to find those who actually believe his HeelFaceTurn is genuine. Blake especially doesn't believe it, claiming it's impossible for him to change in spite of the fact that the whole reason Adam came to Beacon was to prove her wrong. There are some who are willing to give him the benefit of a doubt, such as Ozpin and Qrow. [[spoiler:By far the worst offenders are Ironwood and Winter, the latter of which has serious problems with him being on the same team as her sister. When Adam is outed as a former White Fang member to the public, Ironwood demands either Adam be given over to Atlas or be placed under strict observation with a shock collar for good measure. The latter requirement disgusts Qrow and horrifies Weiss.]]

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* GoodCannotComprehendEvil: While Adam isn't exactly evil anymore, you would be hard pressed to find those who actually believe his HeelFaceTurn is genuine. Blake especially doesn't believe it, claiming it's impossible for him to change in spite of the fact that the whole reason Adam came to Beacon was is to prove her wrong. There are some who are willing to give him the benefit of a doubt, such as Ozpin and Qrow. [[spoiler:By far the worst offenders are Ironwood and Winter, the latter of which has serious problems with him being on the same team as her sister. When Adam is outed as a former White Fang member to the public, Ironwood demands either Adam be given over to Atlas or be placed under strict observation with a shock collar for good measure. The latter requirement disgusts Qrow and horrifies Weiss.]]



* InnocentlyInsensitive: Adam regards Weiss to be this, considering her naive and ignorant rather than actively malicious towards Faunus.

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** He is completely right when he says Glynda's treatment of him could be MistakenForRacist.

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** He is completely right when he says Glynda's treatment of him could be MistakenForRacist.MistakenForRacist; sure enough, she eventually catches an accusation of such from Ruby.



** While there are some productive lessons in collecting sap, Adam is completely justified in thinking it's a job not worth Huntsmen trainees. He correctly points out that a human settlement could be in the middle of a Grimm invasion and they, the future protectors of humanity, are out in Forever Fall taking sap from trees.
** Oobleck stating that he won't stand up for racism in his class falls flat on Adam, who thinks actions speak louder than words. He believes that Oobleck won't truely act on his word that he will stop any racism he sees in his class because that's what a lot of people say to feel good about themselves; talking about how anti-racist they are but won't do anything to actually stop it. That said, Oobleck ''is'' as much a man of action as he is a man of words, and will do something if he sees any prejudice.

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** While there are some productive lessons in collecting sap, Adam is completely justified in thinking it's a job not worth taking up the time of Huntsmen trainees. He correctly points out that a human settlement could be in the middle of a Grimm invasion and they, the future protectors of humanity, are out in Forever Fall taking sap from trees.
** Oobleck stating that he won't stand up for racism in his class falls flat on Adam, who thinks actions speak louder than words. He believes that Oobleck won't truely truly act on his word that he will stop any racism he sees in his class class... because that's what a lot of people say to feel good about themselves; talking about how anti-racist they are but won't do anything to actually stop it. That said, Oobleck ''is'' as much a man of action as he is a man of words, and will do something if he sees any prejudice.



** In Chapter 31 [[spoiler:Yang, who has just been subjected to pity from Coco over her team being “victims” of Adam, rips into both her for daring to judge Adam ''and'' into Velvet; she nastily, but not wholly-inaccurately, accuses the latter of being every bit the coward that Adam claimed she is, refusing to stand up for herself and taking abuse while having her human friends fight her battles for her, and claiming that Coco sees and treats Velvet as more of a pet than a friend.]]

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** In Chapter 31 [[spoiler:Yang, who has just been subjected to pity from Coco over her team being “victims” of Adam, rips into both her for daring to judge Adam ''and'' into Velvet; she nastily, but not wholly-inaccurately, accuses the latter of being every bit the coward that Adam claimed claims she is, refusing to stand up for herself and taking abuse while having her human friends fight her battles for her, and claiming that Coco sees and treats Velvet as more of a pet than a friend.friend because of it.]]



* KangarooCourt: [[spoiler:Adam]]'s trial is set up like this, with an entire human jury, their lawyer doing a half-assed job of protecting him, and the judge shutting down Pyrrha's attempts to correct the prosecutor when she's asked to answer questions about Adam's character. When the court reconvenes, it happens an hour later, hardly enough time for the jury to come to a decision. [[spoiler:In a surprising turn of events, while Adam ''will'' be be sentenced to jail, the next fourteen years of his life will be spent as a student of Beacon for the first four, and the remaining ten as a Huntsman.]]

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* KangarooCourt: [[spoiler:Adam]]'s trial is set up like this, with an entire entirely human jury, their lawyer doing a half-assed job of protecting him, and the judge shutting down Pyrrha's attempts to correct the prosecutor when she's asked to answer questions about Adam's character. When the court reconvenes, it happens an hour later, hardly enough time for the jury to come to a decision. [[spoiler:In a surprising turn of events, while Adam ''will'' be be sentenced to jail, the next fourteen years of his life will be spent as a student of Beacon for the first four, and the remaining ten as a Huntsman.]]



** Glynda Goodwitch ''is'' justified in her rough treatment of Adam, a confirmed terrorist who is only trying to reform to prove a point. She at best singles him out when trouble occurs, and at worst treats him as a ticking time bomb ready to kill anyone in range. The problem with this is that Adam's teammates (and pretty much every non-Faunus student) are completely oblivious to his criminal past, and [[EntertaininglyWrong have come to the conclusion that the only reason Glynda might be singling him out is for being a Faunus]]... At one point, when she walks in on a heated argument between him and Coco Adel, she immediately lays the fault on him for it, angering Yang when she won’t hear otherwise (as both Yang and Yatsuhashi bore witness); even Coco, who hates Adam well enough, [[EveryoneHasStandards is taken aback and baffled by Glynda’s active hostility towards him]].
** Ironically [[BoomerangBigot Blake herself]] is a downplayed example. When a few racist bullies prank Adam by knocking his sap over and saying he dropped it, Adam tells Ms. Goodwitch they knocked it out of his hands. She asks Blake what she saw, to which she denies seeing anything, leading to the bullies ''congratulating her'' for playing along with their prank.

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** Glynda Goodwitch ''is'' justified in her rough treatment of Adam, a confirmed terrorist who is only trying to reform to prove a point.point to an ex, not because he wants to make up for his past crimes. She at best singles him out when trouble occurs, and at worst treats him as a ticking time bomb ready to kill anyone in range. The problem with this is that Adam's teammates (and pretty much every non-Faunus student) are completely oblivious to his criminal past, and [[EntertaininglyWrong have come to the conclusion that the only reason Glynda might be singling him out [[EntertaininglyWrong is for being a Faunus]]... At at one point, when she walks in on a heated argument between him and Coco Adel, she immediately lays the fault on him for it, angering Yang when she won’t hear otherwise (as both Yang and Yatsuhashi bore witness); even Coco, who hates Adam well enough, [[EveryoneHasStandards is taken aback and baffled by Glynda’s active hostility towards him]].
** Ironically [[BoomerangBigot Blake herself]] is a downplayed example. When a few racist bullies prank Adam by knocking his sap over and saying he dropped it, Adam tells Ms. Goodwitch they knocked it out of his hands. She asks Blake what she saw, to which she denies seeing anything, leading to the bullies ''congratulating her'' for playing along with their prank.prank against a faunus.



** Same as Glynda, [[spoiler:Winter Schnee]] is entirely justified in her suspicion of Adam and her worrying over him being in the same team as Weiss. She fought him personally and is all too aware of his views on the Schnee family. To Weiss and Ruby however, her apparent suspicion comes over as thinly veiled racism.

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** Same as Glynda, [[spoiler:Winter Schnee]] is entirely justified in her suspicion of Adam and her worrying over him being in the same team as Weiss. She fought him personally in the past and is all too aware of his views on the Schnee family. To Weiss and Ruby however, her apparent suspicion comes over as thinly veiled racism.



** Blake’s attempts to remove Adam from Beacon - including turning a blind eye to Team CRMN harassing him and doctoring footage of him and Yang sparring - only cause tension in the student body and encourage the racists (who being unaware that she’s a disguised faunus think she’s one of them). Trying to warn Yang about him only convinces the other girl that she’s a passive-aggressive bitch with an unfounded chip against her own ex-boyfriend.

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** Blake’s attempts to remove Adam from Beacon - including turning a blind eye to Team CRMN harassing him and doctoring footage of him and Yang sparring - only cause tension in the student body and encourage the racists (who (who, being unaware that she’s a disguised faunus faunus, think she’s one of them). Trying to warn Yang about him only convinces the other girl that she’s a passive-aggressive bitch with an unfounded chip against her own ex-boyfriend.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: After Blake's abandonment of him and the White Fang during the events of the Black trailer, Adam, instead of staying with the Fang and going insane with rage, follows Blake to Beacon and enrols himself to try and prove her disillusionment with him wrong.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is that the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. It's subtly implied that if Adam remains on good behavior, his case might be dropped.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is that the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. It's subtly implied that if Adam remains on good behavior, his case might be dropped.]]
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* MeetTheParents: At the end of the story, when talking with Blake, [[spoiler:Adam says Taiyang wants to speak with him after his and Yang's BigDamnKiss was caught on camera]].

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* MeetTheParents: MeetTheInLaws: At the end of the story, when talking with Blake, [[spoiler:Adam says Taiyang wants to speak with him after his and Yang's BigDamnKiss was caught on camera]].
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** His criticism of Velvet's submissive nature is very much valid. Allowing bullies to push her around does absolutely nothing to deter them, and waiting for her teammates to interfere just drags more people into the conflict. Furthermore, Coco attacking the bullies doesn't eliminate the root of the problem; all it does is encourage them to try again when Velvet's alone since ''she'' wont fight back. That is, if they haven't moved on to bullying another Faunus.

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** His criticism of Velvet's submissive nature is very much valid. Allowing bullies to push her around does absolutely nothing to deter them, and waiting for her teammates to interfere just drags more people into the conflict. Furthermore, Coco attacking the bullies doesn't eliminate the root of the problem; all it does is encourage them to try again when Velvet's alone since ''she'' wont won't fight back. That is, if they haven't moved on to bullying another Faunus.
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* BigDamnKiss: In Chapter 41, [[spoiler:after Adam is able to leave the courthouse following the judge's ruling, Yang kisses him. She does it right as the reporters are leaving the courthouse, catching the two in the act and promptly photographing for all the world to see]].


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* MeetTheParents: At the end of the story, when talking with Blake, [[spoiler:Adam says Taiyang wants to speak with him after his and Yang's BigDamnKiss was caught on camera]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is because the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. However, it may be so bad because if Adam doesn't violate the conditions of this probation the sentence will be lifted.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is because that the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. However, it may be so bad because It's subtly implied that if Adam doesn't violate the conditions of this probation the sentence will remains on good behavior, his case might be lifted.dropped.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is because the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. While Adam will be carted off to prison and almost everyone in the kingdom hating his guts, he has fourteen years to spend with his team and friends and finally has the chance to mend his broken relationship with Blake.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is because the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. While However, it may be so bad because if Adam doesn't violate the conditions of this probation the sentence will be carted off to prison and almost everyone in the kingdom hating his guts, he has fourteen years to spend with his team and friends and finally has the chance to mend his broken relationship with Blake.lifted.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:While Adam is ruled innocent in Ozpin's murder, the court still finds him guilty of all his actions as a member of the White Fang and is sentenced to 65 years in a maximum security prison with no chance for parol or early release for good behavior. The reason this doesn't go into DownerEnding territory is because the judge in charge of his case suspends his sentence for fourteen years, having Adam spend four years in Beacon and the remaining ten as a Huntsman in vale under strict watch. While Adam will be carted off to prison and almost everyone in the kingdom hating his guts, he has fourteen years to spend with his team and friends and finally has the chance to mend his broken relationship with Blake.]]


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* KangarooCourt: [[spoiler:Adam]]'s trial is set up like this, with an entire human jury, their lawyer doing a half-assed job of protecting him, and the judge shutting down Pyrrha's attempts to correct the prosecutor when she's asked to answer questions about Adam's character. When the court reconvenes, it happens an hour later, hardly enough time for the jury to come to a decision. [[spoiler:In a surprising turn of events, while Adam ''will'' be be sentenced to jail, the next fourteen years of his life will be spent as a student of Beacon for the first four, and the remaining ten as a Huntsman.]]
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Currently ongoing. Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13504249/1/The-Beast-of-Beacon here.]]

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Currently ongoing.Complete as of October 5, 2021. Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13504249/1/The-Beast-of-Beacon here.]]

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* PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler: Cinder's VillainousBreakdown is basically a temper tantrum over not getting the Fall Maiden powers. Adam sees her as a brat whining over not getting the toy they want]].



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Ozpin gets a very balanced and (by [[AuthorAppeal Coeur]]'s standards [[AdaptationalJerkass especially]]) positive portrayal. He handles the Adam situation as best he can by containing the former terrorist, gives a fairer judgement than anyone else, and acts to correct what he sees as problems in the system. While some actions he takes are questionable he has the interests of everyone under his care at heart.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Ozpin gets a very balanced and (by [[AuthorAppeal Coeur]]'s standards [[AdaptationalJerkass especially]]) positive portrayal. He handles the Adam situation as best he can by containing the former terrorist, gives a fairer judgement judgment than anyone else, and acts to correct what he sees as problems in the system. While some actions he takes are questionable he has the interests of everyone under his care at heart.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Cinder dies at Yang and Adam's hands in Chapter 40.]]


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* VillainousBreakdown: Cinder ''really'' doesn't take it well when she sees [[spoiler:Yang with the Fall Maiden powers, turning into a raving madwoman, claiming she was owed that power and it's supposed to be hers]].
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Adam's combat sense and expertise are such that [[spoiler:he can hold his own against Cinder even while trapped in an illusion by Emerald, just by using tactical logic to counterattack and put himself in a position where seeing and hearing her are less vital]].

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 30. [[spoiler:Adam’s forced to come clean to his team due to the White Fang’s blackmailing him, with Ruby refusing to hear it and Yang socking him; after he violently rejects the Fang, his identity is leaked the next day in the news.]]

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** Chapter 38. While the Battle of Beacon is underway, [[spoiler:Yang is taken by Ozpin to the vault and made the Fall Maiden]].

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* ItsAllMyFault: Adam feels this way after [[spoiler:he learns the White Fang is attacking Vale. He believes that, if he had stayed instead of following Blake to Beacon, he would be the leading the attack, [[DramaticIrony but at the very least he could have made it less violent]]]].



** Adam is once again right in his confrontation with Coco Adel in Chapter 16. She's honestly baffled that Adam thinks it's possible for a Faunus to discriminate against other Faunus. The thing is, there's a reason the BoomerangBigot trope exists. It is entirely possible for a member of a race to either consciously or subconsciously discriminate against themselves. By either accepting, normalising and/or rationalising the prejudices of others, or actively putting others down because they don't want to be included in that group.
** In Chapter 31 [[spoiler:Yang, who has just been subjected to pity from Coco over her team being “victims” of Adam, rips into both her for daring to judge Adam AND into Velvet; she nastily, but not wholly-inaccurately, accuses the latter of being every bit the coward that Adam claimed she is, refusing to stand up for herself and taking abuse while having her human friends fight her battles for her, and claiming that Coco sees and treats Velvet as more of a pet than a friend.]]

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** Adam is He's once again right in his confrontation with Coco Adel in Chapter 16. She's honestly baffled that Adam thinks it's possible for a Faunus to discriminate against other Faunus. The thing is, there's a reason the BoomerangBigot trope exists. It is entirely possible for a member of a race to either consciously or subconsciously discriminate against themselves. By either accepting, normalising and/or rationalising the prejudices of others, or actively putting others down because they don't want to be included in that group.
** In Chapter 31 [[spoiler:Yang, who has just been subjected to pity from Coco over her team being “victims” of Adam, rips into both her for daring to judge Adam AND ''and'' into Velvet; she nastily, but not wholly-inaccurately, accuses the latter of being every bit the coward that Adam claimed she is, refusing to stand up for herself and taking abuse while having her human friends fight her battles for her, and claiming that Coco sees and treats Velvet as more of a pet than a friend.]]


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* VitriolicBestBuds: Played with regarding the broken relationship between Blake and Adam. After the incident in the cafeteria, Adam's lost respect he had for his former partner while Blake wants absolutely nothing to do with him, still believing he's a monster, although her opinion does get slightly better after she sees him wearing a shock collar. [[spoiler:Despite the broken state of their friendship, it does not stop them from working incredibly well in Chapter 37.]]
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* BrokenPedestal: Atlas as a whole, but more personally Winter for Weiss. Every chapter seem to punch a new hole in Weiss' respect for her country and family. Since Ironwood put a literal collar on Adam, she's made her disappointment and anger perfectly clear to Winter.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Pyrrha in Chapter 35. [[spoiler:She uses her Semblance to tear Adam's shock collar apart when Cinder hijacks it, causing him to nearly die.]]

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* BigDamnHeroes: Pyrrha in Chapter 35. [[spoiler:She uses her Semblance to tear Adam's shock collar apart when it causes him a great deal of pain, if not threaten to kill him.]]

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* BigDamnHeroes: Pyrrha in Chapter 35. [[spoiler:She uses her Semblance to tear Adam's shock collar apart when it causes Cinder hijacks it, causing him a great deal of pain, if not threaten to kill him.nearly die.]]



** In Chapter 35, [[spoiler:despite the vast majority of the public being apprehensive about Adam participating in the Vytal Festival, a good majority of the crowd is very quick to blow into a near riot against Atlas and Ironwood when Adam's shock collar activates in the middle of his match with Pyrrha in spite of the two clearly having fun]].

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** In Chapter 35, [[spoiler:despite the vast majority of the public being apprehensive about Adam participating in the Vytal Festival, a good majority of the crowd is very quick to blow into a near riot against Atlas and Ironwood when Adam's shock collar activates in the middle of his match with Pyrrha in spite of the two clearly having fun]].fun, and Adam being no threat to anyone present]].

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* AdaptationalHeroism: The premise of the story has this as a basis; instead of continuing his life of terrorism, Adam joins Beacon Academy as a Huntsman-in-training. His motive for doing so isn't exactly heroic, but it's still leagues better than what his canon self devolved into.

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The premise of the story has this as a basis; instead of continuing his life of terrorism, Adam joins Beacon Academy as a Huntsman-in-training. His motive for doing so isn't exactly heroic, but it's still leagues better than what his canon self devolved into.



* AdaptationalJerkass: Downplayed with Glynda. She keeps very strict eyes on Adam and swiftly reacts whenever he so much as hints at using violence, even if it's for self-defense. It gets to the point that Ruby directly accuses Glynda of racism. [[DramaticIrony What Ruby doesn't know]] is that Adam is an ex-terrorist whose violent nature actually has a body count.[[note]] Though even ''that'' doesn't excuse a few of her later actions, some of which can come across as un-professional and others downright petty. Her actions are especially jarring when involving Adam's teammates, which honestly seems like she's projecting her anger onto them.[[/note]]
** Downplayed again with Coco. While Coeur has always characterised her with a bit of an abrasive and nasty attitude, that's usually overshadowed by her genuine bold, caring and almost sisterly nature. This story takes from Adam's perspective though, who leaves the impression of being an imposing and violent underclassman looking to bully Coco's partner. Because of this, she treats him very harshly, and their first meeting is her breaking his nose after thinking he was harassing Velvet. This unfortunately taints her view on his teammates as well.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Downplayed with Glynda. She in regards to certain characters, whose actions only come off as jerkish from the eyes of others unaware of Adam's past, and generally have good reasons to act hostile towards him.
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keeps very strict eyes on Adam and swiftly reacts whenever he so much as hints at using violence, even if it's for self-defense. It gets to the point that Ruby directly accuses Glynda of racism. [[DramaticIrony What Ruby doesn't know]] is that Adam is an ex-terrorist whose violent nature actually has a body count.[[note]] Though even ''that'' doesn't excuse a few of her later actions, some of which can come across as un-professional and others downright petty. Her actions are especially jarring when involving Adam's teammates, which honestly seems like she's projecting her anger onto them.[[/note]]
** Downplayed again with Coco. While Coeur has always characterised her characterized Coco with a bit of an abrasive and nasty attitude, that's usually overshadowed by her genuine bold, caring and almost sisterly nature. This story takes from Adam's perspective though, who leaves the impression of being an imposing and violent underclassman looking to bully Coco's partner. Because of this, she treats him very harshly, and their first meeting is her breaking his nose after thinking he was harassing Velvet. This unfortunately taints her view on his teammates as well.



* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Played with. Adam has since lost any and all respect and affection he once had for Blake when she refused to do anything when he was assaulted by a bunch of racist students in the cafeteria (which she was responsible for starting in the first place) and Blake clearly wants nothing more to do with him. Her opinion has changed some over time, the most poignant events being when she sees him [[spoiler:willingly wear a shock collar, something the old Adam would rather die than allow happen to him]] and when [[spoiler:Cinder hijacks it during his match with Pyrrha]]. In the latter event, [[spoiler:she nearly goes to see him and is only stopped by Jaune saying it would be best to let Adam's team look after him]].



* BigDamnHeroes: Pyrrha in Chapter 35. [[spoiler:She uses her Semblance to tear Adam's shock collar apart when it causes him a great deal of pain, if not threaten to kill him.]]



** In Chapter 35, [[spoiler:despite the vast majority of the public being apprehensive about Adam participating in the Vytal Festival, a good majority of the crowd is very quick to blow into a near riot against Atlas and Ironwood when Adam's shock collar activates in the middle of his match with Pyrrha in spite of the two clearly having fun]].



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** Exploited. Adam intentionally pushes Team CRMN's members to their breaking point so that one of them would spout racist drivel and brutally assault him in front of everyone resulting in public humiliation and potential suspension. It works exactly as he intended: Glynda calls the match, Adam throws down his sword, and the last remaining member attacks him anyway.

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RageBreakingPoint: Exploited. Adam intentionally pushes Team CRMN's members to their breaking point so that one of them would spout racist drivel and brutally assault him in front of everyone resulting in public humiliation and potential suspension. It works exactly as he intended: Glynda calls the match, Adam throws down his sword, and the last remaining member attacks him anyway.


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* YankTheDogsChain: During his match with Pyrrha in Chapter 35, when [[spoiler:Yang is found safe and sound by Weiss and Winter]], the two decide to indulge themselves and fight for real, something Pyrrha is very happy to do with the challenge Adam gives her. [[spoiler:That joy quickly turns to horror when his shock collar gets hijacked by Cinder in the middle of the match.]]
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** Pointedly, over time Ozpin becomes the one human authority figure that Adam truats, which leads to a [[TearJerker potent]] [[HeartwarmingMoments scene]] for the two of them: [[spoiler:with Adam’s outing creating a PR disaster, Ironwood and Winter (who would rather he be simply arrested for his past crimes) only concede to his being allowed to continue his studies if he’s heavily monitored... which includes the degrading demand he wear a shock collar (but all heavily protested by Qrow). Adam consents on the condition that Ozpin, not Winter, is the one to secure the collar, which the headmaster reluctantly agrees to do.]]

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** Pointedly, over time Ozpin becomes the one human authority figure that Adam truats, trusts, which leads to a [[TearJerker potent]] [[HeartwarmingMoments scene]] for the two of them: [[spoiler:with Adam’s outing creating a PR disaster, Ironwood and Winter (who would rather he be simply arrested for his past crimes) only concede to his being allowed to continue his studies if he’s heavily monitored... which includes the degrading demand he wear a shock collar (but all heavily protested by Qrow). Adam consents on the condition that Ozpin, not Winter, is the one to secure the collar, which the headmaster reluctantly agrees to do.]]
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** As apprehensive as Qrow is about trusting Adam, given his bloody history with the White Fang, even he [[spoiler:is disgusted by Ironwood slapping a shock collar to his neck, claiming Adam does not deserve such treatment after his actions against his former allies]].


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* GoodCannotComprehendEvil: While Adam isn't exactly evil anymore, you would be hard pressed to find those who actually believe his HeelFaceTurn is genuine. Blake especially doesn't believe it, claiming it's impossible for him to change in spite of the fact that the whole reason Adam came to Beacon was to prove her wrong. There are some who are willing to give him the benefit of a doubt, such as Ozpin and Qrow. [[spoiler:By far the worst offenders are Ironwood and Winter, the latter of which has serious problems with him being on the same team as her sister. When Adam is outed as a former White Fang member to the public, Ironwood demands either Adam be given over to Atlas or be placed under strict observation with a shock collar for good measure. The latter requirement disgusts Qrow and horrifies Weiss.]]

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* CondescendingCompassion: [[spoiler:Following Adam’s outing in the news, Coco tells Yang and Ruby that CFVY never had an issue with them as a whole, just Adam, and that they know Team RYST were “victims” of that “bastard” as well... along with upsetting Ruby further, her words aggravate Yang until she snaps back at Coco, livid at her presumptions on the team’s nature.]]



** In Chapter 31 [[spoiler:Yang, who has just been subjected to pity from Coco over her team being “victims” of Adam, rips into both her for daring to judge Adam AND into Velvet; she nastily, but not wholly-inaccurately, accuses the latter of being every bit the coward that Adam claimed she is, refusing to stand up for herself and taking abuse while having her human friends fight her battles for her, and claiming that Coco sees and treats Velvet as more of a pet than a friend.]]



* RageBreakingPoint: Exploited. Adam intentionally pushes Team CRMN's members to their breaking point so that one of them would spout racist drivel and brutally assault him in front of everyone resulting in public humiliation and potential suspension. It works exactly as he intended: Glynda calls the match, Adam throws down his sword, and the last remaining member attacks him anyway.

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** Pointedly, over time Ozpin becomes the one human authority figure that Adam truats, which leads to a [[TearJerker potent]] [[HeartwarmingMoments scene]] for the two of them: [[spoiler:with Adam’s outing creating a PR disaster, Ironwood and Winter (who would rather he be simply arrested for his past crimes) only concede to his being allowed to continue his studies if he’s heavily monitored... which includes the degrading demand he wear a shock collar (but all heavily protested by Qrow). Adam consents on the condition that Ozpin, not Winter, is the one to secure the collar, which the headmaster reluctantly agrees to do.]]


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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 30. [[spoiler:Adam’s forced to come clean to his team due to the White Fang’s blackmailing him, with Ruby refusing to hear it and Yang socking him; after he violently rejects the Fang, his identity is leaked the next day in the news.]]

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